Shining Armor is a Goddamn Moron

by Clopficsinthecomments

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(97 votes - 45%) Coach Flurry through her very first BJ - time to have her demonstrate what she can do… on her dear old daddy!


Shining pet his daughter gently as she mewled contentedly on the bed, huffing and gasping on her back as she rode out the little shivers of the end of her third orgasm. Fourth, if you counted the one on the dance floor earlier.

It felt like minutes before the filly sighed happily, wriggling her little bum and stretching her back. “Mmm… dad…” she glanced up at him with a smile.

“Welcome back, Flurry.”

“That was… wow… mom’s a lucky mare.”

Shining puffed his chest out a little bit. “Well, now I know Cadence wasn’t just blowing smoke up my tail hole…”

“She wasn’t! Wow… I guess I’m a lucky mare now, too!” Flurry chuckled.

“Mmmhmm… so… wanna repay the favor?” Shining arched his eyebrows invitingly, playfully. Cadence always liked sucking him off after he’d lavished her with oral attention - maybe… wait, this was Flurry, he couldn’t be selfish or pushy! “Uh… I mean… you don’t have to if”

“Hay yeah, I do!” Flurry’s wings spread out from under her and she rolled over onto her belly. “I’ve always wanted to know what your actual, real -...” Flurry noticed his grin and blushed, “...I mean… I wouldn’t mind doing that… for you… dad.”

“Uh-huh…” Shining chuckled, sliding up onto the bed and leaning back on his haunches. “Well as long as you’re up for it…”

“Y-yeah…” Flurry nodded, rolling around so that she was facing her father’s spread hips, her head still resting tiredly on her bed

Shining let his hips fall open, his big semi-erect stallionhood flopping forward, landing with a meaty *THWAP* across his little girl’s muzzle, completely covering her vision.

“W-woah…” Flurry pulled back, shaking her head and scrunching her nose. “That… uh… wow, that’s bigger when it’s right in your face.”

“S-sorry!” Shining chuckled, cringing, “Didn’t quite mean to, uh, flop it on you like that.”

“It’s… uh… b-big.”

“Heh, it gets bigger too.” Shining grinned. “Why don’t you try-”

Shining was cut off as Flurry dove forward, her mouth spread as wide as she could possibly manage, almost comically so. The filly’s forehooves scrambled forward to take her father’s big, black cock in their grasp, clenching the base so that she could steady the semi-tumescent head for engulfment.

“Flurry, wait!”

But the filly had already crammed part of his hoof-sized head into her mouth, scraping her teeth painfully against his flare, making him wince. With far too much speed, the teen began to try bobbing up and down on his shaft, mashing his spongy head against the sides of her mouth and the back of her throat.

Immediately, tears began to form in her eyes, and she began to cough and gag.

“Stop, stop!” Shining used a combination of his magic and his hooves to gently extract the teen-filly from her rigorous, choking assault. “What the hay were you trying to do?”

Flurry coughed, wiping her chin and her eyes. “Bleh… *huf*... that’s a lot harder than it looked on those pornStable.com videos…”

Ah, there was the problem. Shining rolled his eyes and shook his head. “Yeah, I’ve seen those… you know half of those mares use magic to relax their throat? And the other half use stand-in stallions with… uh… smaller equipment?”

“Seriously?” Flurry asked, her eyes darting from his cockhead to his face.

“Yeah, one of my sergeants did a little time in porn.” Shining chuckled. “She saw me in the showers and said I’d never cut it in the industry - way too big… I took it as a compliment.”

“B-but… Mom said that she was able to take you all the way down her thr-”

“Your mom’s a very special mare, Flurry. And it took us a lot of practice.” Shining chuckled, brushing Flurry’s mane out of her face.

“Pfft…” Flurry smirked, “But I practiced a bunch too!”

Shining arched an eyebrow.

“Not like that, dad. On that clone-a-willy replica mom made of your… uh…” she pointed her hoof at his groin, “... your dick.”

“Oh.” Shining opened his mouth. “Oh… that one. I think we made that before I first went to officer school… I was only like… well, I was your age: sixteen. I’ve, uh… grown a bit since then.”

“Seriously? You got even bigger?” Flurry looked like she was in disbelief. “I… that was the biggest toy I’ve ever seen! I actually checked some of the different stores.”

Shining blushed, scratching the back of his mane with embarrassed pride. “What can I say…?”

Flurry prodded his stiffening rod with her hoof and giggled. “So… what should I… do?

Shining smiled, sitting back so he got even more comfortable. “Well… I always love it when your mom licked me… lick she was licking a lollipop.”

Even as he said it, Flurry leaned forward and planted a long lick from right underneath his glans, dragging her cute pink tongue over the front of his head, slurping up a dollop of his juices as they leaked from his cockslit.

“Mmm! That’s it!”

Flurry giggled and swallowed, then looked up at him. “Kinda salty… and smelly…”

“Yeah… sorry.”

“No… I… like it.” Flurry took another lick of her stallion-flavored lollipop. “I really like it…” Another lick and swallow, then she took in a deep sniff of the tip of his dick. “And the way it smells… I love it… I want more…”

Shining shivered as his little girl’s tongue darted around under his fattening ridge. She wasn’t nearly as skilled as her mother, obviously, but something about her excited little laps was even more erotic, sending pulsing blood throbbing up through his shaft, bulging him wider and wider with each heartbeat, as he rose more and more erect.

Flurry giggled again, having to crane her neck upwards to stay at the level of his cockhead as he towered to full height. “You weren’t kidding… this is bigger!” Flurry’s moved her head back, her wide eyes sparkling as she took in the whole, towering nineteen inches of her father’s penis.

Shining gripped the top of his cock with a smile, pulling it back toward his belly and away from his daughter’s face, exposing the steely underside of his obsidian shaft, pulsing with throbbing veins, bisected by a terrifyingly thick medial ring, before descending and thickening to a fat base.

“You know, it’s not just my tip that needs attention.” Shining smiled. “The other parts feel good for me too.”

Flurry arched a naughty eyebrow at him. “Oh yeah?” She giggled, prodding his two, orange-sized black balls gently with a hoof-tip. “Like here?”

Shining’s smile turned a little bit, as he nervously replied. “Y-yes… but I haven’t uh, cleaned… I mean I just came and it dripped down there so it might be a little bit… musky…”

Flurry didn’t listen to him, leaning in and burying her cute little teen-filly nose right into the soft skin between the two bulges in his sack, before taking in a deep snuffle. “Mmmm… oh, dad…

Shining ran a hoof through his filly’s sweaty mane. He could see her eyes fluttering and rolling with happiness. That love of his smell must be genetic - Cadence would react the exact same way… actually… maybe not even as positively as this sexy little filly.

“Dad it smells…” Shining could see Flurry’s thighs grinding against one another, her tail flagging and wagging happily as she writhed on her belly, nose buried in his sack. “...so good!

Shining’s head tilted back as he felt the wet heat drag over his balls. His daughter was licking his testicles. The tongue slid under and around them, seeking out the dried juices and sweat from the night’s earlier encounter.

It wrapped around the base of his cock clockwise, only being able to make it about a third of the way around before she had to reposition herself to get the rest of the way around. She giggled and flashed her pretty eyes at him as she did so - clearly impressed by her father’s thickness.

Up and up she went, leaving a slick coating of saliva around his black flesh. That same little mouth that he had heard sing nursery rhymes, that he had played ‘here comes the airplane’ with to get her to eat her food, that had kissed him innocently on the cheek… was now slurping and wrapping around his stallionhood with a clear thirst for his essence.

Flurry pulled off him with a smacking of her lips once she reached the fat ring of his medial ridge. She paused, looking up at him with her big eyes, replacing her mouth with her right hoof, pumping the bottom part of his shaft slowly. “Am I… doing it right…”

“F-fuck!” Shining groaned, his hooves clenching the bedsheets. She was clumsy, inexperienced, innocent, eager. She was perfect. “It feels so bucking good, sweetie…” His tip throbbed and pumped. Already he could feel that tightness building up in his lower gut.

“I… can see that.” Flurry grinned, realization coming across her face that she could wield that much complete control over her father. “Though I don’t see how I’m gonna fit this…” Flurry leaned in and planted a sensual kiss on his medial ring, “...in my pussy.”

“Holy, fuck!” Shining groaned. He had to close his eyes now. That kiss combined with the steady pumping was driving him crazy.

He heard chuckling, then felt the filly’s tongue quickly go back to work, dancing and tracing its way up his sex, tracing the same path, in reverse, that the thick globules of cum likely followed when he’d popped under her dress earlier that night.

Then she reached his head. Instead of repeating the ice cream cone licks she’d done earlier, she blew over the top of his head, her hot breath washing over the top in a wave. He opened his eyes to see why she’d do such a thing, just in time to see the filly spreading her jaw wide again to slip his fat cockhead between her lips.

“F-flurry!”

Shining groaned out, as his flare disappeared into her muzzle. Unlike before, she wasn’t trying to jam it down her throat, instead letting it rest in her open mouth, his obscene girth puffing out the little filly’s cheeks.

The last thing he saw before he shut his eyes again in abject pleasure was his daughter’s big beautiful eyes staring at his cock as she fellated him, pumping him with both of her hooves as she suckled his head, thirsty for his release.


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“S-sweetie…!” Shining groaned, totally at the mercy of his little filly’s actions.

She might be a novice… but she seemed to be a natural bobbing ever so slightly in time with her pumping hooves, her tongue darting and exploring his dome-shaped head, never letting him get too deep into her mouth like before, instead perfectly in range of her playful tongue.

It felt like he was in a hot furnace of wet, sticky heaven. The pumping hooves and sucking draws of his filly’s eager mouth was almost as good as Cadence’s marehood. And then she found his sweet spot.

The filly-tongue found its way to the sensitive glans under his drooling, burbling cockslit. He let out an almost feminine squeak and stiffened, a throb recoiling through his whole being… the tremor making a squirt of pre splash out of him and down his filly’s gullet.

And once she’d found it, she didn’t stop playing with it.

Tickling, swirling, suckling, darting, thrusting.

That pink tongue teased and coaxed him, all while the filly’s clenching hooves raced up and down her father’s throbbing, jerking stallionhood.

Shining felt that knot growing tighter. Tighter. Tighter! Coiling!

His balls began to throb, clenching and tightening up to his belly.

His eyes shot open and he moaned out while reaching for his daughter’s head, hoping to dislodge her from his cock. “F-f-flurry! I’m… I’m c-cumming!!!”

But his dislodging hoof was easily swatted away by the teen, her fierce eyes glowing with determination as she looked back up at him: she knew what she wanted.

She kept looking at him as the first animalistic throb sent his haunches jerking upward, a pulse that rocketed through his black shaft, thickening his flare to the size of a saucer plate in his daughter’s muzzle, lodging it against the roof of her mouth, just before the first heavy pulse fired out of his cock.

Flurry shut her lips as tightly as she could, swallowing deeply with each pulse, each heavy rope of her father’s batter spilling into her in gush after gush of virile, masculine, stud-loads.

“F-f-fuck baby! Yes!” Shining’s moan escaped from deep inside him, his eyes rolling in his head, his hooves grasping wildly as he dumped load after load into his daughter’s mouth, her cheeks filling like an obscene chipmunk: she couldn’t swallow nearly fast enough.

Cum bubbled and spurted from the side of her face, peeping out from between her lips… Shining even heard her cough and gag slightly, a bubble of cum slipping out of her left nostril as he overloaded the girl’s capacity to ingest his thick, heavy seed.

But the cough let him finally withdraw from her suckling mouth.

With a loud, smacking, *POP* he came free, still firing heavy ropes of cum.

A heavy waterfall of his white, jelly-like cum poured from her mouth - almost a whole half-pint of steaming batter that she had been unable to swallow fast enough. She drew a great breath of fresh air.

Without even thinking, he aimed his bouncing black cock at Flurry’s face, sending long, dense ribbons of stud-load over her mane, her ears, onto her back.

He was growling as he pumped his hips with his last few spasms. “Y-yeah! YEAH! F-FUCK!”

He wanted to coat her. Mark her. Make the little sex-filly his. Conquer her with the damn cum she wanted so much.

His last desperate thrusts sent a smaller trickle over her snout before a final drip slid down his shaft… and the euphoria and exhaustion caught up with him, he groaned and fell backward, bouncing with a heavy thump against the soft cushion of the bed, gasping and sweating.

He was there for a moment, his thoughts a jumble of chaos before they began to sort themselves out.

What had he just done!? He’d facefucked his little girl! Before spraying her down like she was some slutty mare in heat? Would she ever forgive him? What did she even think of him right n-”

His worries were instantly interrupted by the feel of a hoof on his tired, still-hard stallion hood, gently massaging him… before the soft bouncing fall of the filly as she fell down next to him, on his left arm, lying side by side and looking into his face with a smile.

“I guess I’m pretty amazing too, huh?” Flurry giggled, wiping some of his cum out of her bangs.

Shining stared dumbfounded for a second… before he laughed as well.

“Nope - you’re incredible, baby.”

Flurry’s eyes narrowed slightly, a naughty smile crossing her lips. “So… what are we gonna do on the bed, dad?”

Shining grinned back.


The FLURRY HEART METER goes up by 8 points!

Currently the meter is 34.2737 / 10

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1) Flip her over and rut her. Flurry’s looking a little naughty… time to show her who daddy is. She’s primed and ready to be mounted and dominated… pump a load into her with our big throbbing stallionhood like a true stud… once she’s plugged up with daddy-batter… maybe we can do things a bit more sensual..

2)Start slow with some passionate missionary style sex. Sure it’s not the norm for ponies, but maybe some slow face-to-face eye contact, while we make love to Flurry, will be sweet and lovely for the teen’s first time. After we’ve taken her to snuggle town for a bit if we have anything left we can try a different position.

3) Flurry was looking pretty confident. Maybe we should let HER ride? Get her to hop on top and see how far down daddy’s pole she can slide. Let’s let her ride us cow-girl style!

4) You know - that tight little tailhole looked pretty inviting. Sure it’s really only for more advanced sexual techniques… but maybe Flurry really likes butt-stuff? With a little tongue work and some magical stretching… we could probably even fit in there!

5)End the evening. This is good for now. Flurry’s happy. You can go rub one out later on your own. Let’s just tuck the filly in and let her sleep. You don’t want to take things too far! (THIS ENDS THE FIC)


Author's Note

STRAW POLL HERE

Vote for your choice! Unlike usual, these scenes are going to come rapid-fire so vote quickly! I'll announce in the comments once the poll is closed - it may only be 50 votes or it may be more or less!


The art in the intentionally broken link was from pokefound - an awesome artist! Not used with permission, hopefully he doesn't mind (if he does I'll remove).


A true CHOOSE YOUR OWN CLOPVENTURE! Just like in your hentai games!

Sorry for the really really late start. I've had family over for the past two days - no time to write AT ALL.

As it stands, it might be one or two scenes a day, max... not the rapid fire I'd hoped for... sorry!

I'm still thinking we'll probably get through three, or four scenes... otherwise poor Shining and Flurry will probably start to get sore! Don't think you're gonna get to do everything on the list... eventually, your only option will be to shut it down!

And feel free, as always, to suggest different ideas for what should happen next... now your comments may really get incorporated!

You guys are awesome and I hope this shows just how awesome I think you guys are: I'm trusting YOU with the ultimate clop-scene! The money-shots! They're yours!

You get to choose!

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