(167 votes - 71%) Utilize the dangerous stamina boosting vitality spell!!

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Shining pushed himself up onto one hoof with a wry grin. He was still buried in his daughter, his cockhead pressing against the entrance to her womb - apparently more than enough to sate the little filly.

But he knew he could give her more.

“It was amazing, baby… but I’m not done yet.” He summoned up all of the magical energy he could muster, a blue aura of considerable energy pulsing up from his cutie-mark, wrapping around his horn in a field of considerable thaumic energy.

“D-dad?” Flurry groaned, feeling the magic pulsing around her. She shifted, her insides coiling around her father as she did so.

Shining felt the spell - completely ready to cast… it felt even more powerful, more potent than the last time he had dared to use it, all those years ago. There was a small moment of doubt in his mind about whether he should release the pent up spell… but it quickly passed when he felt his little filly clench on his still-hard member.

He cast it. Starswirl’s Vanquishing Vanguard of Vaunted Virile Vastness.

The blue glow rushed under his chest, swirling around his lower abdomen and then into his groin. He felt a warmth building there - then a heat… a burning fiery flame.

It pulsed into his shaft, making his veins pop out and become more vascular, throbbing with menacing thickness as they pumped potent magic-laden stallion blood into his shaft causing it to swell and lengthen inside his little girl.

“D-d-daddy...!?” Flurry groaned her body stiffening with alarm as the penis inside her thickened and lengthened beyond its already monstrous state - expanding a full inch and cramming itself against the entrance to her womb.

“F-fuck! F-flurry!” Shining groaned through clenched teeth. “H-hang on!” Shining resumed his position from moments earlier, his two hooves on either side of his daughter’s sweaty mane, dug into the bed… as the expansion of his cock pushed him into Flurry’s cervix.

Even crazier - he felt his balls sag, falling away from his body… felt the warmth sending the factories inside them into overdrive, felt the prostatic glands inside him refilling and swelling. Within mere moments the heavy black sack was back in its former glory - as full and swinging as they had been at the beginning of the evening.

Starswirl was a horny old genius - he had to remember to send the guy a thank you card.

Fuck Flurry felt amazing right now - what had already seemed like an indescribable experience mere moments before seemed like a dull reflection of what he currently felt. And it wasn’t just the additional tightness from his size - every nerve ending, every pleasure spot, every twitch and motion was heightened in his perception. His mind was blurring with the sensation of pleasure. Thoughts were becoming hazy… sapient and rational decisions evaporating in clouds of magical-dopamine… burning away and leaving only the raw instinct of his more ancient, feral stallion-mind.

‘I’vE gOt to… be carefuLllL tO fUcK my litTle broOdMare - daughter, she’s so smAlL and tIgHT…” His chain of thoughts flipped between concerned father and desperate stud… but it seemed suddenly extremely necessary to cram more of his newfound girth into the struggling, moaning girl.

His hips agreed - happy that the halting nervousness was giving way to the lustful instinct… and they drove forward.

“Oh - OH, D-DAD!!!” Flurry’s body pushed up off the bed in shock as the huge, flared cock started to press into her needy cervix, magical blue tendrils assisting the tiny aperture in sliding open and permitting her father to slide into her deepest of sanctuaries. “W-wait!”

She leaned forward, instinctively moving away from the huge force threatening to batter into her very soul. She wanted him there - badly… but it was so sudden, so forceful.

Shining felt his brood-filly moving away from him, and his feral reaction was instant. She needed to be bred. It was for her own good. She needed this! His hooves slid to Flurry’s upper back, right over the spot between her outstretched wings, the middle of her shoulder blades… and he pressed down with force, pinning her into the bed and sticking her ass up in the air… with full leverage to take his thrusts.

And for the first time that night… he pulled his hips back and then drove them forward.

The passionate kisses between Flurry’s womb and Shining’s cockslit were no more. He wasn’t just touching the essence of her femininity… he was entering it… capturing it...

His cockhead slid deep into her womb, driving a further four inches into his little teen filly’s cunt… leaving only an inch of terrifyingly thick cock between her drooling plot and his abdomen.

Flurry’s pupils sparkled, rolling over and turning heart-shaped, her cutie-mark exploding in color and her whole being shaking and convulsing… she’d orgasmed several times that night already… but this wasn’t just an orgasm of the body or even of the mind… this was a climax of her very soul.

Shining felt little - there was only so much that his senses could process, and they had long since been overloaded. He dimly registered the wracking, vise-like contractions around his huge member as he finished his thrust, driving the bell-end of his cock all the way against the far wall of Flurry’s womb.

But he did notice her horn glowing a bright, throbbing pink - flashing with magical energy so powerfully that it almost hurt to look at. Even worse - a second stream of pink energy shot out from the direction of the entrance way.

His left ear flicked slightly toward a sound, which he could barely hear over the humming, throbbing power. “Shining! I’m using all my power to control her output, hurry up an-”

This glow was annoying - the animalistic instinct of Shining groaned. He just wanted to rut the hell out of his broodmare. This stupid thing was too bright.

Keeping one hoof planted firmly on his filly’s back to pin her in place, he used his other hoof to pull her mane back, making the orgasmically screaming mare tilt her head up… moving her horn right into range of his mouth.

*GULP*

“N-no! That’s my energy and hers!” The strange whinnies and nickers of unintelligible language shouted from the doorway.

But immediately the light was gone… in its place, the blue from his horn surged, sparkling and sending static-electricity dancing across the room. The blue glow around his balls throbbed and thrummed… and he felt his two fat orbs grow, sinking in their heavy pouch as they expanded from the size of large eggs to that of a grapefruit.

He felt the various plumbing and prostatic glands inside him swell, pressing uncomfortably against his internal organs.

He felt his massive cock strain and stretch - pulling at the very skin that surrounded it, tearing through the protective barrier he had cast earlier, as he grew another inch inside his brood-filly’s body.

But most of all he felt… the desire.

Releasing the pink horn, he whinnied loudly, snorting and stomping… then took a mouthful of the filly’s thrashing tail, yanking it to find every possible bit of purchase that he could… before he began to buck.

Hard.

He pulled back, as far as his hips could go, pulling the delicate and obscenely stretched filly-snatch backward as he did so until the lips were finally forced to let his length slide from her carnal furnace, her whole body prevented from sliding backward by his powerful, pinning muscles. He slid four, five, six inches out of her… before not being able to draw back any further…

Then he used all his strength to drive back into her…

His heavy, massive balls swung forward, slamming against the filly’s plot like two massive wrecking balls, the slick black skin sending juices splattering everywhere as it impacted the filly’s behind with an audible -

*PLAP*

He smashed into the far end of the filly’s womb, driving down with his weight into her, slamming her into the bed as she groaned out, air being driven from her lungs and making her squeak like a pet’s toy as he finished his first stroke, her head still thrown back, tongue rolling out of her mouth as her heart-shaped pupils flared with each impact.

“DAhD!”

But he wasn’t done. Not even close. With an increasing tempo, he began to repeat the motion. Pounding his daughter with heavy, rapid strokes, twice every second… filling the room with the sounds of an obscene metronome.

*PLAP* “DAhD!”

*PLAP* “DAhD!”

*PLAP* “DAhD!”

He’d driven her hips up into the edge of the bed now, her hooves fully off the floor, lifted by the force of his impacts, the two dripping wet hooves kicking idly in the air pathetically as she was dominated by the larger, bucking stud fucking her.

*PLAP* “DAhD!”

*PLAP* “DAhD!”

*PLAP* “DAhD!” DAhD!” “DAhDeeeeeee!”

Flurry groaned out a staccato moan, her clit throbbing and winking as she roiled suddenly, her pussy clenching and spreading - her body instinctively submitting to the alpha-stud… doing everything it could to take all of him in.

And then it happened.

The last inch of Shining slipped into her. Whether the filly’s womb shifted forward… or some other magically-induced event occurred is a question for the historians… but Shining’s spear, his monstrous log of horsecock fully hilted in his daughter - her swollen labia finally kissing the base of her precious daddy’s dick.

But as soon as it touched… it was pulled back.

Shining wasn’t done.

*PLAP* “DAhD!”

*PLAP* “DAhD!”

*PLAP* “DAh!”

*PLAP* “Duh!”

*PLAP* “Unh!”

*PLAP* “Uh!”

*PLAP*

*PLAP*

Flurry had gone silent, unable to muster any spare air for her instinctive groans - her mind boiling as it struggled for oxygen, overheating in a sea of magical and hormonal pleasure.

The Flurry Meter… was broken.

*PLAP*

*PLAP*

As the spasming filly body finally began to relax around him, reaching a state of pure ecstatic release… Shining felt his own meter begin to break.

With his last ounce of strength before he was lost to the inevitable, crashing orgasm, he drove forward - slamming his hilt as deep as possible, sliding his broodfilly along the bedtop.

When he was younger, Shining’s first orgasm had been a powerful one - the sudden pounding fear… the painful, aching knot… the rush of excitement… and then the release. Like a kitchen faucethe’d burst forth - barely having enough time to enjoy his spurting fountain before his mother embarrassingly opened the door and interrupted him… but still… all other ejaculations were measured off of that event.

This.

This was not a faucet.

This was an emergency dam release.

The painful knot in his guts that had been driving his hips so insistently snapped. He could feel his flare spread to the bursting point, digging its knobby ridges into Flurry’s tender uterine wall, embedding itself firmly in preparation of the flood to come.

His heavy balls clenched and shot to his groin. A noticeable clenching bulge raced down his tremendous shaft squeezing past his Filly’s tight pink opening and down her love tunnel… deep into her body… before erupting out of his cockslit.

“Guhhhhh! Raaaaaaaagh!” Shining whinnied out as the first steaming blast pumped out of him.

Just the release of such a huge dollop of thick, glue-like batter from his urethra, shooting a cup’s worth of virile semen in the first jerking pump, would have been enough sensation to make any mere stallion pass out… let alone the ridiculous release of pleasure that fried his synapses.

But the next pump was even bigger - blasting from him like an unkinked garden hose, scarcely tapering before being followed by the next pump.

And the next.

His hips quivered and jerked with each pulse, as the tight knot in his body slowly unwound, the magical buildup of semen inside him emptying out into his filly.

Another blast. Sloshing and burbling inside his broodfilly’s sex-oven, boiling upwards as the thick, virile cream engulfed his member and filled her up.

All she could do was mewl and moan - her body still lost in a sea of pleasure, her filly-cunt calmly milking her daddy’s pulsing cock, coaxing it to unload entirely.

Another blast, and another.

Flurry’s womb was stuffed full now, the pressure of the expelled fluid having no place to escape - the fat flare had plugged her womb… and now the pressure of the thick ropes of his very fertile seed pushed her belly outwards

Another clenching shot - and another!

Shining’s ass-cheeks were aching from the clenching drives his orgasm was demanding of them. But there was nothing he could do - he kept filling Flurry, his tightness slowly unwinding inside him, melting away.

The filly’s belly was swollen now… a bulge having appeared in her lower abdomen as her father’s ridiculous amount of ejaculate throbbed into her.

More! More!

The filly’s belly strained outward, her belly-button popping from an innie to an outie, as she began to look like she was four months into a pregnancy…

Shining was unable to notice the pink strand of energy from the doorway slither out, touching Flurry’s expanding belly - but he did feel a warm, thaumic sensation over his aching, spurting flare, shrinking it - compressing it ever so slightly.

Again! Again!

Suddenly there was a rushing sensation. He popped out of the filly’s womb with a rush, his flare slipping past the milking confines of her cervix… and no clenching, coaxing grip could withstand the pressure that had built up inside her poor baby-factory.

Shining felt himself forced backward, slipping out as a rush of his own semen pushed his erect cock out of his daughter.

*POP! SCHLORP!*

The sound filled the room as Shining fell backward onto his ass, a fire-hydrant stream of thick white cum flowing in an impossible waterfall from Flurry’s rapidly shrinking vaginal opening.

He weakly tried to steady himself, as his big black rod still fired off spurt after spurt, messily flying up into the air - like an obscene fountain… hanging there for a moment before raining down on his writhing daughter in thick splats, painting the whole bed.

Empty! Empty!

Shining felt his tension completely unwound, his balls completely emptied… his sexual glands shrinking and decreasing…

But still he kept firing.

Not done! Not done!

Gooey cream continued to rain down on Flurry, frosting her with good, dripping off her wings, her tail, her ass, her bed, her floor… her ceiling… in messy, thick strands of hanging batter.

Shining felt his eyes rolling back as his body started to sag - his muscles shrinking, his fat deposits converting, his body dehydrating… everything converting into reproductive fluids - still firing out of his cock, even as it shrank in size, blasting out in heavy streams of slinging white slime.

“SHINEY! Shiney you HAVE TO STOP! STOP!” A confused nickering pink horse had appeared in front of him. Shaking him - she didn’t seem to be concerned at all with the fat ropes landing across her face as she tried to hold his jerking cock, trying to plug it with her hoof with little success. “DAMMIT!”

The strange pink horse leaned forward and engulfed his horn in her mouth. A moment later a bright pink flash filled the room, and she fell backward, wings fully extended and her tongue hanging out of her mouth. She landed with a splash in the flood of his semen, which coated even pink’s body, now… as she drooled happily, a leg kicking and twitching in the air, her mare parts flashing and parting - winking pink through the white creaming frosting that covered it.

But it didn’t matter.

He’d stopped.

Finally.

With blissful and complete nirvana across his dopey face, Shining Armor fell backward… having completed the only known GIGA-NUT ever recorded in the history of Equestria.

Five Months Later…

“Hey, sweetie!” Shining smiled, nuzzling his daughter as she walked into the palace’s private living room. “Careful there!”

“I got it, daddy…” Flurry grinned, steadying her fairly large bump with one wing as she pressed through the doorway. “Skyla’s getting pretty big, but I can still manage her.” The sixteen-year-old contentedly patted her growing lower belly, nestled above her swollen teats. With a pacific smile, she looked up at her father… and her baby’s father… her entire face beaming with love.

“Skyla!?” Shining Armor’s eyes shot open in delight. “Does this mean that it’s a-”

“No. Or at least, I don’t know yet.” Flurry grinned as she looked down at her swell. “I’ve got a connection - but I can’t quite feel if the baby is a boy or a girl yet.”

“Ah…” Shining grinned. “So if you’re naming the girl Skyla… does that mean you’ll name a boy Stormageddo-”

“No.” Flurry deadpanned at her father. “Skyla is a beautiful name. Stormageddon is just… no.”

“Awww.”

“Still… I’m a little sad to be giving the baby up, though.” Flurry sighed, patting herself. “I really appreciate Aunt Twilight researching precision teleportation to the extent that she can move Skyla into mom… but - I can already feel the connection with the foal’s soul inside me.”

“Well…” Shining sighed giving his daughter another nuzzle. “You know it’s for the best… you’ve got to finish schooling… and you always loved your athletics so much… the bump is just going to get bigger and bigger now.” Shining hopped up and sat on the comfortable sofa that sat in the middle of the cozy room, stretching his legs out and sinking into the cushions.

Flurry sagged a bit. “I guess.” She grinned and hopped up onto her father’s lap, rolling over on her belly, not even having to ask her dad to give her belly rubs. She closed her eyes and happily cooed as Shining spoiled her, gently rubbing her fluffy floof before caressing her belly.

“Still - a part of me thinks that mom’s insisting on me doing the teleport-transplant just so she can have an excuse for that belly she’s getting.” Flurry quickly squeaked before chewing her lip and guiltily avoiding her father’s glaring eyes.

“Flurry Heart.” Shining sternly scolded. “Your mom has been working extra hard in the gym and dieting really diligently to prepare for the procedure. She wants to be in the best shape possible.”

“I know.” Flurry rolled her eyes. “But you can’t deny she’s gotten a little pudgy daddy…” A naughty grin crossed her face. “...although maybe you like your mares a little pudgy? I noticed you gave mom extra attention at our weekly ‘special-time’ session last night… you almost knocked me off the bed!” She booped his testicles playfully.

“Flurry!” Shining blushed, coughing. He always tried to keep the usual father-daughter dynamic outside of the trio’s regular weekly sessions… but his daughter and wife loved teasing him to no end about his insistence on being a normal family out of the bedroom - apparently it was just ‘too much fun’ to goose him and grope him and see his reactions. “I… I only went… harder with your mom because of the baby, that’s all…”

“Uh-huh… if you s-”

*POP*

A flash of light blinded them both momentarily. When their vision cleared, Twilight Sparkle and Cadence stood across from them.

“Twily!” Shining smiled.

“Aunt-Twi!” Flurry tottered up from the couch, embracing her beloved aunt.

“Hey, you two!” Twilight grinned. “All rested up from last night’s fun? Cadence said that it was a pretty intense session.”

Shining blushed red and eyed his wife with a frown. “Y-you… you told Twilight!?”

Cadence looked at him deadpan. “Shiney… you told her, the day after it happened… when she had to use half her magic to re-inflate you.”

Shining stomped a hoof. “I mean… you told her that we’re still… having… family-time special-sessions!? She’s my little sister! What’s she gonna think!?”

“Oh, don’t worry, don’t worry!” Twilight laughed, blushing slightly. “I… uh… I’m… all in favor of these bonding sessions…” The alicorn stammered slightly, her usual poise and regality replaced with the awkward filly Shining had known in his youth, as she carefully inspected the circle her hoof was drawing on the floor.

“Uh-huh?” Shining tilted his head.

Cadence suddenly nudged Twilight with an elbow and coughed.

“Huh? Oh… yeah… actually… I was thinking it might be worth a research paper… confidential and anonymized of course.” Twilight looked up hopefully. “We’d need an observer to watch the sensual family bonds being established… up close.” Twilight meekly looked up at her brother, ears splayed back, eyes twinkling with hope.

Shining looked at his blushing sister, considering. “Sure… I guess… but you know my writing sucks - and I’ve never even written anything with a proper bibliography before… would I submit it to you?”

Flurry and Cadence smacked each smacked a hoof to their face in unison.

“Wh-what? N-no…” Twilight twitched. “I… meant… no… AUGH!”

Cadence sighed and took Twilight by her shoulders. “Next time, Twilight, we’ll get him next time.”

“Get who?” Shining chuckled, looking around him.

“Dad, you’re a goddamn moron.” Flurry blinked.

“What? No, I’m not!”

Cadence chuckled and nodded. “You are most definitely a goddamn moron.” Twilight nodded primly at the assertion.

“H-hey… why are you mares always bullying me?” Shining slumped. He felt a nuzzle come under his neck, pressing his head back up to an upright position. Flurry grinned at him.

“Hey daddy, if being a goddamn moron got you three of the most beautiful mares in Equestria… maybe being oblivious isn’t so bad a strategy after all.”

“Three? You mean two.”

“Anyway,” Twilight groaned, rolling her eyes. “I’m ready to do the transfer, and I’ve got to get back to day-court as quickly as possible.”

Shining tilted his head. “As quickly as possible? Won’t you need hours of charging up?”

“No.”

“Won’t you need to get Flurry and Cadence in a perfectly motionless, exactly calibrated position?”

“Nope.”

“Won’t they both need weeks of post-operative monitoring for complications?”

“Nuh-uh.”

“Won’t you need to insert a speculum into Cadence and inflate her uterus with a balloon or something so that the baby won’t appear inside her intestines and make her explode like that scene from Alien: Maresurrection?”

“Shining!”

“Dad!”

“Shiny!”

“But… how?” The nervous father and father-father to be asked.

“Magic, of course!” Twilight grinned. “I’ve perfected the spell-work… all I have to do is release the energy I’ve already charged up…” Twilight’s horn began to glow and pulse. “...and we’re done!”

The horn flashed and fizzled, little sparks tinkling down to the crystal floor and extinguishing with hissing squeaks.

Nopony moved.

Cadence and FLurry cautiously looked at their bellies, both unchanged, then looked back up at Twilight.

Shining coughed. “Should I… should I get a speculum?”

“I don’t understand!” Twilight’s wings extended in frustration. “The spell is literally foolproof - even you could cast it!” She pointed a hoof at her brother.

“Hey!” Shining stuck his tongue out at her. “Don’t get snarky just ‘cuz you messed up a spell.”

Twilight ignored him. “The only thing that could explain it is... “ She turned to Cadence her eyes opening wider, “...is if the womb… is already occupied.”

Cadence and Flurry’s jaws dropped open.

“The… the weight…” Cadence looked down at her belly, not as big as her daughter’s bump, but still noticeable.

“Mom!” Flurry squee’d, covering her mouth. “I’m so happy - I’ll get to carry daddy’s little Stormaggedon or Skyla to term!” She planted a big kiss on her father’s cheek. “I love this family!”

Cadence still looked like she was processing everything. “From… the… puddle? It was that potent?”

“Congratulations Cadence!” Twilight squeaked, engulfing her sister-in-law in a happy hug.

Flurry quickly crossed over, wrapping her mother in another big hug. “Mom! I love you so much!” The mess of limbs and alicorn wings wrapped the three happy mares together.

“Wait…” Shining tapped his chin, interrupting the little celebration. “...you’re saying that you three confused Cadence being pregnant with her getting fat?” He threw his head back and let out a laugh. “Hah! Now who’s the goddamn morons?”

Three angry mares turned on him, their faces glowing with anger, electricity sparking from their horns. Spells charging up from the aggrieved wife, the teased daughter, and the embarrassed little sister - primed to destroy the foolish stallion.

As one, they answered.

“You are.”

The scream could be heard from Canterlot’s throne room. Prompting Celestia and Luna to nod at one another over their tea-cups.

Just as planned.

~End~

Last poll and this one is just for me.

Last month I entered a fic into the Mother’s Day Incest Contest. I got really worked up over it and a bit disappointed when it didn’t do very well. After that experience, I was considering not entering into any contests ever again.

But I really trust you readers: do you I should enter this fic into the Father’s Incest Monthly Contest:?

1) Heck yeah, enter! I had a lot of fun reading your fic and think that it is good enough to be a contender!

2)Ehhh… probably best not to enter this one. It isn’t contest-grade, sorry!

I’ll honor the crowd’s decision as to whether to go in or not.

Author's Note

Is it good enough to enter into the contest? That's your call.

STRAW POLL HERE!

Well, guys, this has been an insane journey over the last month.

I started this thing thinking - hey, here's a fun concept from Starscribe's style, let's give it a whirl and write a few short poll-driven chapters... 8,000 words max.

Annnnnd... I have now written my longest story on fimfiction.

That's because of you. I loved hearing your comments, seeing your votes, and reading how excited and involved you all were.

Please, please please please please leave me a comment letting me know your experience. It really keeps me writing! I can't wait to read about your journey in the comments below!

That said, this is a dangerously addictive writing style. I'm switching back to a more conventional style for my next fic, slated for July (can you say, Trixie?)

This style is a double-edged sword... it is fantastic because of how much enjoyment I get from writing it, and how much interaction I get with all of you!

It sucks because the update system on Fimfic means fewer people see the story after the initial post, as updates get pushed out of featured very quickly. I don't care about stats or popularity in this case... I just care about more people seeing the story so that the community participating can be large!

Don't fret though... I'm definitely going to do this type of story again! (Probably with Space Ponyo!)