Shining Armor is a Goddamn Moron
Flurry goes prompt critical
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Shining swallowed nervously, then pointed with his hoof toward the back of the class… right into the center of the pink-tinged black-hole-like vortex… right at Flurry Heart.
“Flurry - would you like to come up to the front of the class please?”
A chair squeaked loudly - its feet dragging against the crystal floor as Flurry Heart pushed herself backward.
Shining watched as the filly slowly walked forward, bringing her field along with her. As she passed the filly who had slammed her head against her desk earlier, she paused and reached out a hoof.
As soon as Flurry touched the small of the unicorn-teen’s hunched-over back, her muffled moans became a whining scream.
“Hnnnnmgggggh!”
Sparks flew from the teen’s horn, silvery showers of magical energy spurting in little gushes that sparked and fizzled as they twinkled down to the floor. At the same time, Shining could hear a sloshing spatter - liquid spilling over the edge of the filly’s seat.
Flurry Heart’s wings extended even further - reaching nearly full extension - and the field of pink grew dangerously deep. All around the young alicorn teen, her classmates began to writhe and groan in discomfort. Feather - the vocal colt from earlier - had a hoof under his desk, pumping furiously… there was no doubt as to what he was doing.
And other students were getting swept away too - many fillies either had their hooves jammed between their thighs or had their horns casting not-so-surreptitious telekinesis spells. Little grunts, moans, and squeaks punctuated the sounds of teenage flesh being played with.
As Flurry passed Silver Gust, the pegasus fell out of her chair, sticking her plot right up into the air and flagging her tail up. “Oh Gods… I-...I’m…” She squeaked and put her head down.
Shining could see the clear spatter of teen-filly nectar as it shot from the winking pegasus. One of the unicorn colts stood up from his seat, dipping his nose to the puddle of potent pussy-juice… even lapping some of it up.
He let out a nicker, stomping the ground and walking forward - his teenage erection bobbing underneath his chest. He mounted Silver without a word, humping wildly, the head of his cock bouncing against the groaning pega-filly’s belly.
“Hnnggg… y-yes!”
The pink field slammed against the walls of the classroom, knocking books and papers off the walls. ‘This is getting out of control!’
Shining lit up his horn, quickly separating the two nearly-rutting teens and returning them to their seats. “Settle down class! Hooves on desktops! Magic off!”
The drill sergeant bark was only partially successful. Near the edges of the lust-field, some students slowed their clopping, writhing masturbatory acts… but nopony put their hooves back in plain sight - their urges… their pleasures… were all far too strong.
Shining didn’t have time to repeat himself though: the pink field was upon him.
The edges of the field passed over him like a warm wave. At first, it was just a pleasant sensation - like a sensual back massage. Then it was a smell… a musk.
A rich aroma - as if his favorite meal was being prepared by a chef… except it wasn’t the smell of savory food: it was pure, dripping, sticky sex.
Flurry continued to approach him, passing the last of her classmates now.
The sensual back massage became something much more erotic - pleasurable touches and sensations sprouting all over his body - nerves were firing like he’d just been kissed, or like he’d just gotten a deft rub in a sensitive area, or like something had licked him…
The scent roiled over him and through him. Where it had been a musk before… now it was a stench. His every pore and strand of fur was saturated with the smell of ripe, fertile fillyhood. The sensation dripped from the roof of his mouth onto his tongue. He could taste dripping fillyhood in his mouth...
The fillyhood of the alicorn in front of him…
Gods she looked sexy. How had he never seen it before!? The way her sweaty mane tumbled over her face - those big innocent blue eyes, her cute little muzzle… those plump sexy lips!
And her tight little ass!
Shining felt his stallionhood spill from his sheath as he ogled his daughter. That white rump, so small… so athletic… her flagging tail… the way she stared up at him… he wanted nothing more than to turn her around... press her up against the teacher’s desk… mount her… press her cute little head into the table-top… and…
‘N-no!’ Shining shook his head, trying to banish the thought of taking his beloved little girl from behind. What the hell was wrong with him!? This was Flurry! His Flurry! Not some… incredibly sexy… fertile… moaning… dripping…
Shining swallowed as he watched Flurry cross the last few steps toward him. She definitely was dripping. The small puddles she’d left behind her were proof of that. Her half-lidded eyes batted at him sensually, a moan was cut-off by the filly’s chewing of her lip… causing a trickle of drool to slip from the corner of Flurry’s mouth. Shining’s thoughts instantly imagined those little lips wrapped around his stallionhood - flaring and gushing spurt after spurt into her thr-
‘NO! RESIST! THIS IS FLURRY! YOU CHANGED HER DIAPERS! YOU BOUNCED HER ON YOUR KNEE!’
‘I wouldn’t mind bouncing her on something else right now!’
“I-I… t-told y-you…” Flurry pouted, staring right up at Shining Armor. The filly leaned in, nuzzling Shining’s neck playfully as she craned up to put her mouth near his left ear. “Mmnng… n-now… I’ve got it… sooo bad…”
Shining swallowed, trying to stand stock still. The only things moving were his pounding, racing heart - and his fat stallionhood spilling all the way down to the floor as it engorged with blood.
“And… I w-was saving myself for somepony special t-too…” Flurry whined, licking the lobe of Shining’s ear. “N-now… you’re going to have to… take…” She turned around bending forward and sticking her plot up in the air.
“Responsibility.”
Shining’s cock sprang up to his belly - immediately fully erect - all nineteen inches so filled with blood it felt like he would burst. A fat glob of pre-ejaculate shot from his tip: so much that he almost thought he’d popped prematurely….
Right in front of him was Flurry’s tight, teenage, plot.
Her well-toned athletic legs flowed up to her gorgeous, athletic rear. She definitely took after her mother - her butt looked like you could bounce a bit off of it, it was so tight. And nestled between those heavenly white buns was her dripping, winking, filly-cunt.
Two plump, juvenile lips framed the hint of her pink inner-lips, only interrupted by the fat bulb of her teen-lovebud. Steaming sticky strands of nectar dripped from the twitching clit, trailing gossamer threads to the floor below.
Sitting just above Flurry’s teen snatch was her tight little asshole: a puffy ponut pucker of delectable, quivering flesh - perched just beneath her upright dock, which wiggled left and right invitingly.
“Mmmnf!”
As he watched, Flurry gave out a little mewl, a shiver running through her body. She flexed her back, straining - then her pussy flexed - peeking open. All fifteen years of tender teenage flesh squeezed and flowered, displaying the hot, twisting filly flesh within - shooting her clit out in a small spasm… and sending a splash of her nectar flying backwards.
She winked at him.
The splash hit Shining right in his chin - flooding his nose with that rich vanilla-spice scent. His stallionhood bucked and jumped again, flexing involuntarily at the instinctive desire to RUT this hot little filly in front of him… to pump her full of his batter.
‘Flurry’s… cum is all over… my face… this is so… wrong… r-right?; Shining struggled with the thought - his mind was should a muddle: so fuzzy, everything seemed all mixed together. Those feelings of love that he held so deeply for his little girl, mixing with this overpowering… desire… he didn’t even know that this was in him! Looking at his special little girl's ass up in the air - his thoughts filled with nothing but fucking the horseapples out of her… until she cried out his name!
‘NO!’
Flurry backed toward him, her ass still stuck up in the air, her sweaty tail hairs up in his face. He could feel his heart pounding in his ears, could feel his cock bouncing against his belly - could feel the heat coming off his little-filly’s cunt. It would be so easy to simply step over her now, to mount her… to take her… how could he stop himself?
“What’s this?” Flurry picked up the condom wrapper off the floor. She brought the little piece of foil to her mouth, biting the edge and peeling open the package, exposing the disc of silicone. “Ribbed for her pleasure?” She giggled, turning to the thrumming shield outline of Shining Armor’s cock, still hovering in mid-air.
“I guess I should do the demo… hmm, Mr. Shield?” Flurry grinned, still looking at Shining through half-lidded eyes. “Wouldn’t want the class to be left… unsatisfied?”
Shining couldn’t give two bucks about the rest of the class. He was only dimly aware of the sounds of wet slaps and splats coming from the background - but it was all outside of his focus - lost in the deepening haze of pink… as he continued to feed Flurry with lust energy.
The filly ignited her horn, sending a magical field stroking up and down the semi-transparent penis. Shining swallowed, imagining the field around his actual cock. He flexed the organ in question. Suddenly, Flurry squeezed her magical field incredibly tight, easily ripping through the forcefield spell… dissipating it and making the whole conjuration vanish into thin air.
“Ooops.” Flurry giggled naughtily, still wagging her ass in the air playfully. “I’ll have to be more delicate… if only there were something else I could practice on…” She stood up and turned around to face Shining.
A part of Shining was relieved that his daughter’s irresistible plot was out of his face. A part was sad to see it go. But another part quickly overrode any thoughts, as it was gripped by a tender, filly hoof.
“Ah! I found a replacement, Mr. Shield…”
‘FluRRy’s hOoF is oN mY DicK!’ The impossible thought raced through his mind.
His little girl’s hoof, the same one that had gripped his after she’d been handed to him by the midwife. The same one that had gripped his neck when he’d given her piggyback rides, had clenched his back when he wrapped her up in bearhugs… was now wrapped around the fat shaft of his jet-black cock.
“Mmm… it’s so much hotter than I thought it would be.” She smiled into his face sultrily. “But I guess we should put this thing on, hmm?” She held the condom up in front of Shining’s awestruck face.
“So quiet now, aren’t you, Mr. Shield?” Flurry giggled, squeezing the end of Shining’s dick playfully. She brought her hoof forward, dragging her frog over the drippingly-slick glans of his massive cockhead. “Hmm… I think this size won’t fit you, Mr. Shield. I think you’re as big as my… as the stallion I was waiting for…” She licked her lips, parting her mouth and leaning closer.
‘Oh bUck, wE’re goNNa kIsS!’ Shining’s mind was a complete mess. A well-timed squeeze from his daughter’s playfully squeezing hoof made him moan - parting his lips and providing the teen with a perfect target…
But she giggled and turned away, teasing him. “Well… I should watch what I’m doing to make sure I put this little thing on right, shouldn’t I?” Flurry giggled, ducking under his chest.
Shining lost sight of his daughter as she stepped to one side and ducked under his chest - getting what must have been a close-up view of his giant, nineteen-inch, fat, throbbing, meaty, stallioncock glory. His lust-disturbed mind wondered whether his little filly would be proud of her daddy’s size - what she would think when she saw hi-
“DAD!?”
***1200 KM SOUTH - JUST OUTSIDE PONYVILLE***
***NORAM HQ (North Equestria Anti-Magic HQ)***
A tired staff sergeant of the Royal Guard sat at her monitoring station. Her hooves kicked up on the desk. She wasn’t sure how she’d ended up here. A dead-end job in what had once been a promising career in the armed services, staring at a giant computerized map of Equestria… which would never change.
There was only ever a skeleton staff at the facility, and everypony knew that it was a one-way ticket to obscurity. Watching paint dry was more exciting - sometimes the paint would drip, or dry in a spotty way.
Her particular hobby was to see how many digits of pi she could memorize. Over the years she’d gotten up to three hundred. Might as well try to get that three hundred and one.
Three point one f-
*WAAAAAAAA WAAAAAAAAAA WAAAAAAAA*
A klaxon, which had never gone off, blared to life, shaking the dust from the ceiling.
“Sergeant!? Report!” The colonel, who had been napping in the back, shouted tugging his hat onto his head.
“M-megaspell charge detected, sir!” Her hooves flew over the keys, bringing up the point in question on the map of Equestria. “Center of charge is in the Crystal Empire!”
“What!? Where’s the casting energy coming from? Stalliongrad? North Ponea? Tartarus?” The colonel jumped, as all of his phones began ringing and blaring.
“N-negative sir!! Looks like the cast is coming… from the same location as the spell destination! Center of the Crystal Empire!!!”
“A suicide attack!?” The colonel threw his hat down. “It must be the Saddle Arabians! What’s the yield?”
“Looks like a few kilothaums - a city-killer!”
The colonel’s face scrunched in confusion. “That’s… that’s impossible! That much casting power from one caster… it could only be someone of… the Princesses! Quick! Where are the Princesses located!?”
The sergeant slammed a few more keys, quickly showing the bright dots of the princesses’ thaumic signatures, two halfway between Canterlot and the Crystal Empire, one halfway between Ponyville and the empire… and two right in the middle of the alert signature… all of them racing toward the single dot.
“I-it’s a Princess, sir!” The sergeant turned and faced the colonel. “She’s… going critical!”
The colonel swallowed hard, watching the dots converge. “Let’s just pray they get there in time.”
“Oh… Dad…” Flurry’s voice groaned. Her face nuzzled against his cock.
Shining’s eyes shut, and he grit his teeth. His daughter was snuggling with his cock - and she knew it was his cock! This fact seemed very important to him - he could feel the lust and love absolutely coursing through the contact of the delicate, short-hairs of his daughter’s muzzle. He barely noticed the blown-out classroom windows… the lightning-like static electricity discharging through the completely pink energized air… the cracking floor-tiles and hovering objects all around them.
Flurry stopped her nuzzle, stepping back up to his chest - still keeping her hoof on his cock as she stared dreamily into his eyes. “I-is th-this a dream? Daddy… I’ve w-wanted this…. so bad…”
Flurry leaned in toward him, her eyes shut mouth opening, tongue parting to make way for a deep Prench-kiss her hoof pumping her daddy’s cock.
Shining could sense everything was wrong… that they were all in great danger… that he had to...screw it… why shouldn’t he just enjoy this… enjoy… rutting his daughter… fucking her… he’d never realized just how sexy the little filly truly was.
He leaned forward. Oblivion awaiting him… and a good portion of the Crystal Empire’s capital city.
Does Shining Armor manage to avoid catastrophe (50% chance of failure)? Shining Rolls… CRITICAL SUCCESS!
Shining’s mouth slipped over Flurry’s horn. Instantly all of the pink energy and swirling lust all around them dissipated.
All the books, paper, floor-tiles and other debris hanging in the air fell, clattering to the ground.
...
The students in the class, more than half of them involved in desperate group sex - with all three colts hilted deeply in one of their classmates… everypony’s uniforms torn and covered in splotchy stains… all paused and came to their senses. Awkward apologies and embarrassing, sticky withdrawals quickly following afterward.
Flurry blinked, staring up through her mane her father’s dopey, grinning face, currently latched around her horn.
“D-d… dad?” She blinked. “Wh-what? What’s in my h-hoof?”
Shining’s eyes rolled back as he groaned, releasing all of the built-up energy he’d just absorbed into his body. He felt his penis throb, flaring wide and releasing the mother of all orgasms.
Heavy splotches of ejaculate splattered out from him, coating Flurry’s hoof with thick rope after rope, some going so far as to land on her arm and chest. Great, steaming gouts of cum splattering against the crystal floor as he unloaded what felt like an ocean of his virile stallion batter, pooling around his front hooves.
“Flurry! Honey! Are you OK?” Shining could swear he heard Cadence’s voice from just outside the classroom. But the sound quickly faded as dark tunnels surrounded him, his vision fading out as the last of his orgasm emptied him, his rigid stallionhood still bucking and firing blanks as his muscles gave out.
The last thing he saw was Flurry staring at her cum-covered hoof with a look of confusion before he passed out in a puddle of his own juices on the classroom floor.
Shining’s eyes gently blinked open. He looked up at the ceiling - his ceiling… in his own bedroom.
‘Oh thank Celestia, it was just a crazy dream!’ Shining sighed, slowly trying to get up.
“Oh! Shhh shhh shh Shiney - don’t move too fast… you lost a lot of fluids.” Cadence’s voice from beside him soothed him, as she pressed him back softly, keeping him in bed.
Shining groaned, looking over to his left. His wife was sitting next to the bedside, carefully checking an IV drip, her horn humming with healing energy.
“C-cadie…” Shining croaked, letting out a little chuckle. “I… h-had the strangest dream…”
Cadence looked at him with a cocked eyebrow. “Uh-huh?”
“I went to Flurry’s school as a substitute teacher and tried to teach se-”
“Shiney, that wasn’t a dream. That was yesterday morning.” Cadence blinked.
Shining blinked back. “What?”
“Yes. Your crazy antics nearly resulted in half of the Empire being engulfed in a lust spell that probably would have overflowed all the maternity wards in Equestria.” Cadence chuckled, patting Shining’s hoof.
“What!?”
“Flurry got into a feedback-loop… quite a dangerous thing. She’s been struggling to control her newfound Princess Power and the class quickly proved to be too much for her abilities.” Cadence sighed, then adjusted the drip rate of the IV stand. “You’re fine, by the way… this is just for dehydration - when you clamped your big dumb mouth around her horn, it cut off the feedback loop… but you caught a good amount of the energy flying through that loop… and then uh… expelled it.” She giggled, covering her mouth.
“Huh?”
“Let’s just say it took about three mops to clean up the classroom floor.” Cadence giggled. “Though that was partially due to the other students’... reactions as well. The doctors said you lost almost a third of your body weight though… I’ve been refilling you bit by bit for almost a day now… how do you feel?”
“N-never mind me! How’s Flurry?” Shining groaned, trying to get up again - only for Cadence to pin him down. “Why didn’t you tell me that she was going through this with her princess abilities?”
“Because she asked me not to tell you.” Cadence sighed. “She didn’t want you to know she had… pure, unbridled lust magic flowing through her twenty-four seven.” Cadence grinned slightly. “It’s not exactly something a filly likes to admit.”
“B-but… she was in danger! This whole time!” Shining frowned at his wife. “She could have been hurt!”
“She was doing fine until you meddled, Shining.” Cadence frowned at her husband, scolding him. “Princesses learn how to deal with their abilities in different ways - you can go through a big catastrophic one-time event... like your sister did during the Tirek fiasco… or you can slowly learn to control your power safely… like I did through my high-school years.”
“But…”
“But…” Cadence interrupted, continuing. “That safe-choice was taken away from Flurry by a certain somepony… when he created a crisis situation for her… nearly blowing up half the Empire.”
“Is… is she OK?” Shining asked softly.
“She’s fine Shining.” Cadence smiled. “In a way, it’s probably better that she went through it like this… like peeling off a band-aid… according to Celestia, Luna, and Twilight, she’s got 100% control of her ability now - no more feedback loops.”
“That’s good… I’m glad she’s alright, at least.”
“Well…” Cadence sighed. “She’s still a bit… embarrassed.”
“Are the kids in her class teasing her!?” Shining pushed himself up, once again he was easily shoved back down by Cadence.
“Easy there, hero.” Cadence chuckled. “No. The kids in her class pretty enthusiastically proclaimed the event as the ‘best sex-ed class ever’... it was a minor miracle that none of the fillies got pregnant.”
“Then… why is she embarrassed?”
“Shining, honey… I love you…” Cadence shook her head. “But sometimes you can be a bit… of a moron, you know that?”
Shining shot his wife a look.
“She had your cock in her hooves. If any filly suddenly realized that she had her crush-... I mean her dad’s stallionhood in their hooves I think they might be a bit mortified…”
“B-but… It was all… the spell’s fault… there’s… nothing to be embarrassed about!” Shining protested.
“Just the spell’s fault? Well… I don’t know about that… but I agree… there’s nothing to be embarrassed about.” Cadence giggled. “Love is love!”
Shining paused. He looked at his wife. “...Cadence… I… I was going to… the thoughts in my head… I wanted to…” Shining sagged his head down, chin resting ashamedly against his chest. “I’m a horrible father…”
Cadence gripped her husband’s chin and lifted his head back up. “As I said, Shining. There is nothing to be embarrassed about. I know how much you love Flurry. Completely love her.” The alicorn princess’s eyes bore directly into his. “And I know what an amazing dad you can be… that you are… if you don’t let silly… things get in the way. Understand?”
Shining nodded. “I have to make things right with Flurry.”
“Shining you… goshdarn moron…” Cadence groaned. “You don’t understand.”
“I’ll go see her right now!” Shining started to get up, pulling the IV lines out of his arm, “I don’t want her feeling bad about this for a millisecond longer than she has to… I should be the one apologizing.”
This time, Cadence didn’t stop him. “Shining, my love. I won’t stop you… but I wish you would listen to my advice - just wait! Flurry’s birthday is only a couple of weeks away now! She’s a mature filly! Let her come to you!”
Shining grunted. “Cadie… you know… you know I can’t just sit back on these things! It’s just… not in my personality!”
Cadence sighed. “I know. How about… instead… how about this: wait until tomorrow… take her out on a nice walk - grab some lunch, see a show… try to bond naturally with her.” Cadence suggested, putting a hoof on her husband’s leg. “You can’t solve every problem right away!”
Shining shook his head, kicking his legs over the side of the bed with a snort. “But she’s feeling bad right now Cadie! I could just walk over there and at least try!”
The FLURRY HEART METER goes UP by 4!
Currently the meter is at 8 / 10 !
1) Low Risk / Low Reward: Sit back and recover. Let Flurry come to us! She’s just had pretty much the most mortifyingly embarrassing experience that it is possible for a teen to experience through the entirety of all universes and space-times ever… maybe it’s not too much to ask to let the filly have some space and clear her head? (10% chance of failure - low reward)[/color}
2) Medium Risk / Medium Reward: Let’s take Flurry out on a nice, relaxing, daddy-date tomorrow. Sure she’ll probably find it really annoying to spend a day with her dad… but maybe Cadence is right: this could be a good casual way to reconnect with the filly - talk to her and show her a good time… show her that we can be friends as well as family! (25% chance of something going wrong - medium reward)
3) High Risk / High Reward: We shouldn’t wait a single second longer than necessary. She’s miserable right now, moping in her room about something that was totally not her fault! And we have the ability to make her feel better about it… maybe. We have to at least try, right? What could go wrong!? (33% chance of something going wrong - medium reward)
Author's Note
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Holy crap.
I was fully ready to turn the Crystal Empire into a giant lake of lust-spell energy, with some kind of abomination of estrus gang-sex mega-orgy that would have been a complete game over (maybe).
I couldn't believe you guys were going to mess with that lust field! Admittedly, you didn't know just how powerful alicorn Flurry is... though the show does make note of how much power she has, even as an infant!
BUT
Shining rolled a CRITICAL high number! When I saw that, I knew that it had to be a sign - he had to take this right to the brink, then rescue Flurry (albeit by accident)!
Even better, the even ended up teaching her how to control that power! A full win!
A major hurdle is now out of the way... but another one has cropped up! We still need to reach Flurry Heart before the end of the month!
Now, somepony was being very naughty and likely using a bot or something else to spam up the poll. The vote jumped from about 180 to 400 over the course of only a few hours...
To avoid this I'm turning on the CAPTCHA function - apologies for the additional annoyance. Hopefully, it doesn't impact the numbers too much... I promise if we don't hit the vote count within a few days I'll either lower it or just write the next chapter.
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