Immortal Rest

by Moshipig

A cutthroat competition: Stage One

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"You WHAT?" They all shouted simultaneously. Each of them glared at each other, even Fluttershy (which is surprising, even though Iron Will had made a large impact on her life). Rainbow Dash crossed her front hooves.

"Don't even bother with the competition. Everypony in Equestria knows that I'm going to win, and become princess of the sun. Applejack turned her angry gaze towards Rainbow Dash.

"Being a princes, requires actual work, Rainbow. You can't fall asleep during work like you always do." She commented. Rainbow opened her mouth, but was cut off by Rarity.

"Applejack, you can forget becoming the Princess of Equestria. Equestria doesn't want to be represented by a hick. They need a pony that knows better than to track mud all over the floor." Rarity sneered.

Pinkie Pie chimed in with her own obnoxious remark. "Well, Equestria can't live under the rule of a stuffy 'oh so dignified' meany-pants!" Twilight rolled her eyes.

"Pinkie Pie, how do you think you can rule Equestria? Throw a few parties, spend the entire nation's budget, and let everypony starve? Not on my watch. I'm going to win, and become the Princess of the night, to make sure the sun princess doesn't screw up everything." Fluttershy Glared at twilight.

"Well, what is an Egghead shut-in supposed to contribute to this nation? We have plenty of smart ponies. There's not gonna be any need for one more, ever!" she yelled. There was a long, icy silence. Rarity tossed a few bits on the table, and Twilight teleported them all home.

"I don't want to see your faces again until after I win the competition!" Twilight yelled, and stomped back to her library. Once inside, she teleported into Rarity's workroom, took a mannequin, and left some bits on the ground, then teleported back home.

"Spike! I'm Home!" Twilight called. Spike came running into the room.

"Wow," he commented. "You're home way early. How was dinner?" Twilight scowled and crossed her front hooves.

"Terrible," she said shortly. "My friends entered the contest too, and now we're competitors. I'm going upstairs." She trotted up the stairs with Rarity's mannequin, and began to work on her dress.

A few incredibly boring hours later

"Finished!" Twilight and Rarity chorused at the same time, each unaware of the other's statement. Each were staring at their dresses with looks of absolute delight.

"This will definitely pass stage one!" They both exclaimed.

The day of the competition...

As it turns out, almost every mare in Equestria showed up for the competition. They all stood in the throne room, and even with every unicorn in the audience casting a space expansion spell, including the alicorn princesses, there was barely enough room for all the ponies.

Princess Celestia and Luna stood before the large crowd, looking stunned by the large mass of ponies gathered before them. Once again, Princess Celestia gave the opening line of the speech.

"Thank you so much for coming here today. I wasn't expecting to have so many entries, so we don't have enough rooms in the castle to house only two or three ponies in each room, as we'd planned. Fortunately, there were plenty of extra beds, so each castle Suite will have to house ten ponies. The groups have been Pre-chosen, and I'm afraid we can't have ponies moving rooms. So, look for your name on the room listings on your way out. Luna will explain the first competition."

Princess Luna stepped forward. "The first stage of the competition is fairly simple. On the entry form, one of your needed materials was an elegant dress. There will be a stage set upon the castle grounds, and one at a time, each mare will come forward and show off her dress. Now, since there are so many ponies here, we will have the first contest in groups of ten, with the same ponies as the ones you room with. Now, this is the contest where the most ponies are eliminated, so five ponies from each group will be removed from the rest of the competition in the first round. That is all, check your room number on your way out, and thank you."

Twilight smiled to herself and trotted over to the listings. She pushed through the crowd, and quickly scanned the papers. Suite eighteen, she thought to herself. I remember that room. She quickly teleported herself in, and looked around. There were five bunk beds in the room. Twilight chose the bed closest to the window, and climbed up to the top bunk. She cast a small force field spell on her duffel bag, and and flopped down on her bed.

Just then, she heard the crowd of ponies rushing towards the door, fighting to be first inside. the door burst open, and the other nine ponies trotted in. Twilight giggled to herself as she saw the looks of shock on the other mares' faces. A golden unicorn with a bright orange mane trotted over to twilight's bunk bed and took the bed below hers. She, too, used her magic to change the mattress and guard her belongings. Twilight's smile faded as she saw five of her roommates. Fluttershy, Rarity, Pinkie Pie, Rainbow Dash, and Applejack were all staying in the same room as she was. They were joined by a gray earth pony that twilight remembered as Octavia, a white unicorn with a blue mane known as DJ-PON3, or Vinyl Scratch, and a white pegasus with a mint green mane. They each chose their own bunks, and introduced themselves to their bunk mates.

Twilight's friends stayed silent and picked up a deck of cards or a book, while the other mares talked amongst themselves. The golden unicorn looked up at Twilight and smiled.

"Hi, I'm Sunny Daze. What's your name?" she asked. Twilight smiled at her and climbed down from her bed to sit by the golden mare.

"I'm Twilight Sparkle, Nice too meet you." She replied. Sunny smiled and gave a small gasp.

"You're THE Twilight Sparkle? Personal Student of Princess Celestia and wielder of the element of magic?" She asked. Twilight nodded.

"I don't like to brag about it much, but yes, i am." Sunny let out a small squeal.

"Oh my gosh, Princess Celestia told me all about you!" Twilight tipped her head confusedly. "I'm one of the unicorns that assists with the changing of the seasons," she explained. "I help Princess Celestia change the season to summer." Twilight smiled as she realized she had something in common with the unicorn.

"Have you seen the redecorated canterlot library?" Twilight asked excitedly. Sunny nodded eagerly.

"I love the new chairs." she said. "They make it so much easier to focus." Twilight beamed. Sunny Daze is awesome!! she thought to herself.

"Yeah, i know, I-" Twilight was cut off by the doors being opened.

"The Princesses request this room's presence for the first stage of the competition! Be ready in five minutes! Her brother, Shining Armor, captain of the royal guard, called. Twilight opened her duffel bag and pulled out the plastic dry-cleaning bag she kept her dress in. Each of the other Ponies took out their dresses too, and followed Shining Armor down to the stage. He motioned for them to enter the dressing room area, and just as rarity was about to enter a room, twilight teleported inside and locked the door. Sunny copied the spell with applejack.

Soon, all the ponies were wearing their dresses, and they moved on to the makeup tables. Luckily, there were ten makeup tables, and each mare set to work on their hair and makeup. Twilight cast a spell on her mane to make it shimmer and glow, to mach her dress. Each mare was still wearing a cloak over her dress, so they had no way of knowing what the competition was. Twilight stood in line behind the curtain, behind Rarity and ahead of Sunny.

Suddenly, the music began to play, and Applejack removed her cloak, then walked out onto the stage. She was wearing her dress from the grand galloping gala, and had braided her mane into a beautiful twist, but it was still unoriginal. Applejack walked back into the waiting area, a confident smile on her face.

Next was Rainbow Dash. She had been first in line at the cloudsdale dressmaker's shop, so she had a new dress, a cyan slightly lighter than her coat color, with a magic effect that sent a cascade of rainbow glitter flying around Rainbow when she twirled. Her mane was shiny and flat against her head. Twilight nodded to herself. Not bad... she thought to herself. Twilight heard a round of applause from the stage. Rainbow walked back into the waiting area beaming.

Then, Vinyl Scratch was up. she removed her cloak, revealing a neon dress, enchanted to change colors. There was a gasp, then murmurs of approval, and Vinyl walked back in, looking unsure. Then, Octavia walked out, her mane unstyled, wearing an elegant black dress. There was some small applause, and Octavia walked back in, with the same look as Vinyl on her face.

Fluttershy gave a small squeak, and removed her cloak. She had hand-sewn a lovely yellow dress, with pink ribbons threaded in, and some small gems to give it a sparkly look. Twilight had never understood why she could sew so well, but she didn't question it. Fluttershy trotted back in, looking nervous, as always, but Twilight knew she had done well, from the cries of delight onstage. Twilight heard the voice of Photo Finish. "That, is da magics!"

Pinkie Pie bounced out onto the stage, wearing her grand galloping gala dress with cupcake scent all over it. a few seconds later, she bounced back into the waiting area, and Twilight knew Pinkie had forgotten what she was doing.

Just then, the white pegasus with the green mane walked out onto the stage, wearing a mint green dress with clouds at the hem of the skirt. There was some polite applause, but not much else, and the pegasus mare walked back out, a neutral expression on her face.

Rarity beamed, and removed her cloak. She was wearing a beautiful white dress with blue diamonds on the skirt, and her mane was styled with an intricate twist, and a silver tiara with blue diamonds on it. There was a gasp of delight, and the audience went wild. The whole time, Rarity kept her look of grace and poise as well, she walked back into the waiting area, beaming. She cast a smug look in twilight's direction.

Next, it was Twilight's Turn. She took a deep breath, and removed her cloak. She walked out onstage, with a perfect example of grace and poise. There was gasps of awe and delight, and a large round of applause. She was wearing a purple dress with gems that shimmered like the stars when the light caught them. it was a fairly simple dress, but the audience loved the stars projected into the sky by her dress. Twilight gracefully walked back into the waiting area, and smiled smugly at rarity, who was seething with rage.

Finally, Sunny Daze was up. She removed her cloak, and walked gracefully onto the stage. She was wearing an orange dress that faded to yellow, covered in golden gems, making her shine like the sun. Sunny was greeted with the same response as Twilight was when she was onstage. Sunny stood before them a few more seconds, then walked back into the waiting area. The lights dimmed and the music stopped.

Princess Luna's voice called to them. "Would each of the models please all step out onto the stage! All ten mares hesitantly stepped outside. Princess Celestia and Luna stood right in front of the stage.

"Princess Luna and I have discussed this matter carefully," Princess Celestia began. "And have decided which ponies will stay, and which will leave. Luna will call five names, and those are the ponies that will stay here in canterlot. The rest of you are welcomed to watch the rest of the contest, or may go home."

Princess Luna looked carefully at each of us. "Now, before I call the names, I want you to know that each and every one of you is special in her own way, no matter what happens today. The ponies that will be staying are: Rainbow Dash... Fluttershy... Rarity... Twilight Sparkle... and Sunny Daze. Congratulations to all of you, and good luck in the next competition.

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