In a Dark Equestria, Once upon a time

by The Avalanche Post

Chapter 9: Starlight's Twisted Torture

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Author's Note

Warning: This chapter contains non-consensual sex between Starlight and her evil double Queen Starlight.
It is not meant to be complete pornography and so the scene has described only enough to get the point across. .


Chapter 9: Starlight's Twisted Torture

Once again Starlight found herself chained and captured. Her double in this world had her placed in a large castle chamber which at least had nicer walls than Twilight's dungeon had. The room was empty except a set of levers on the wall. Her hooves were locked inside the floor making it so she was unable to do anything but stand. A metal cap had been sealed on her horn again preventing her use of magic.

Queen Starlight entered the room and approached her double. They locked eyes for several seconds.

"What do you want?" snapped Starlight.

"Look at you," replied Queen Starlight. "You're beautiful."

"W-what?" asked Starlight confused.

"Without Twilight and Spike fighting me at every turn, I could have looked like you," said Queen Starlight as she removed her cloak and mask.

Starlight watched her double remove the items with interest; she wanted to know what her double really looked like. The Queen had many scars on her coat; along her arms and body, neck and face. Her hair was still messy and braided and her ear had been cut or torn in half. As Starlight observed her double she felt that she wasn't ugly from her scars -they showed her life was rough but there was a strong beauty about her that was only overshadowed by her evil behaviors, not the scars.

"You're not ugly if that's what you mean," said Starlight.

"Oh? So this version of me must be a liar. That's one thing we don't have in common," sneered Queen Starlight.

"Ugh!" groaned Starlight as she rolled her eyes at the Queen.

Queen Starlight circled her double, using her right hoof to stroke her smooth coat. Starlight didn't have a clue what was going through the Queen's mind but she knew she didn't like it. Queen Starlight stopped behind her double and paused.
Starlight craned her neck to see her double. She saw the Queen's forehoof swinging through the air, making hard contact with her rear.

"Ahhh!" yelled Starlight. "What do you think you're doing?" she demanded.

Queen Starlight struck her double again and watched with pleasure as her head rose and fell into the air while yelping. She walked back around in front of her double and moved in close to her. Starlight watched the Queen scared of her intent.

Queen Starlight grabbed her doubles mane and forced her to meet her lips. The Queen held her double in the forced kiss for a long time with Starlight wide-eyed and trying to pull away.

Starlight could feel her doubles tougne swirling around her's. Kissing her own doppelganger made her sick, almost to the point of throwing up. Starlight gagged and wiggled but the Queen never let up; she thought about biting the Queens's tongue but was afraid of the punishment that might follow. When the Queen let go she backed up and smirked at Starlight.

"Bleh! Sppt, Sthpttt," exclaimed Starlight as she spit on the floor.

"I think I'm having some fun for a change," replied Queen Starlight.

"You're crazy!" shouted Starlight angrily.

"Think of this simply as one of many tortures you will undergo until you tell me everything I want to know," explained Queen Starlight.

"You haven't asked me anything! And what you're doing is wrong," shouted Starlight in frustration

"I don't know about that. I mean, it's more or less masturbation," replied Queen Starlight.

"I mean you..." Starlight tried to say before being cut off by a sudden attack from her double.

Queen Starlight struck her double in the face with her left hoof cutting her off mid-sentence. Starlight looked back at her in shock and went to speak again. Queen Starlight rose her hoof and struck her double again, and again; a wide smile formed on her face as she felt her hoof sink into her doubles face repeatedly.

"Ow, Sto... Ah, Ahh!" Starlight tried to shout between the blows.

When the Queen stopped Starlight was bleeding from her nose and mouth, she had swollen red cheeks, and her right eye was slightly bruised. Queen Starlight delighted in her doubles pain.

Starlight gasped to catch her breath and whimpered while watching her double. The Queen walked over to the levers and pulled two down. Slots in the floor and wall opened up revealing a variety of sex toys and torture tools. There was everything from whips, knives, and rods to dildos and lubes. Starlight could see how the fetishes she herself possessed in a very mild degree had grown into an extreme array of dark and kinky desires in her double.

"S-stop! Stop this please!" begged Starlight.

Queen Starlight grinned and retrieved three objects from the shelves and racks. She returned to her double with a devious look on her face. Starlight tried to plead with her double again but when she opened her mouth the Queen reached up and held it open. Starlight tried to pull away but the Queen pushed hard on her jaw and only seconds later had forced something inside her mouth. Starlight continued trying to struggle as her double clipped a strap around her head catching her mane in the process. When the Queen was done Starlight knew what she had strapped a ring gag in her mouth.

Queen Starlight held up the other two items for her double to see; one was a double-sided strap-on dildo and the other was a short leather whip. Starlight struggled with all her might but she was not able to break free of her holds.

"Mno! Mnoo!" cried Starlight, her words deformed by the gag.

"Ha, ha, ha!" laughed Queen Starlight.

Queen Starlight circled her double raising and striking her with her whip repeatedly. The whip strung and cut Starlight causing her to cry out in pain. The Queen laughed again each time her double tried to form words and beg her to stop.

When the Queen came full cricle she stopped and admired her work.

Starlight stood before the Queen with tears streaming down her face. The cuts now covering her body were bleeding slightly, staining the fur around them red. Starlight's legs were shaking from fear; she knew this was not over yet and there was nothing she could do or say to stop it. She wondered where Spike was and hoped in her thoughts that he would save her from this agony soon -even the torture from Twilight was nothing compared to what her double was about to do.

Queen Starlight moved on to her next plan. She smiled at her double as she slid the dildo inside herself and strapped it in place. Next, she walked back around to her doubles rear. Starlight winced and tried to pull away as the Queen began to explore her marehood.

Starlight could feel her doubles tongue on her parts; it grossed her out. It was like having sex with a sister to her mind. She tried desperately to pull away again even though she knew she could not move. The Queen showed no shame in exploring her doubles backside; Starlight could feel her tongue traveling from her marehood to her plot and back.

"Shnop Zush!" pleaded Starlight to the Queen again.

Queen Starlight licked her lips as she moved to mount her double. She had raped many Ponies in this chamber but this was by far the most thrilling experience she had since Twilight was her slave. She positioned herself in Starlight's marehood and thrust herself inside her double violently.

"Gahhh! Ahhh!" screamed Starlight through the ring gag.

Starlight could feel her muscles wanting to give out from the pain her body was receiving. She had never experienced anything like it aside from being electrocuted by the Twilight of this world. She was not used to such misery. Starlight's tears streamed down her face and puddled on the floor in small drops, her saliva was starting to drip from her forced open mouth and she could feel nothing but shame and pain from her doubles thrusts.

'Please Spike! Twilight! Anypony! Help me!' Starlight cried in her thoughts.


In the end, nopony came. For several hours the Queen continued to have her way with her double. She used whatever toy or tool tickled her fancy and held nothing back. By the end Starlight was left bleeding, trembling from the pain, and crying uncontrollably.

"Mno Mur! Ah, ghhh, ah, ha!" sobbed Starlight.

"No, I'm done for now," replied Queen Starlight. "But I promised my Commander and his squad a nice treat for taking down Fort Dawnwatch so easily," she added, clapping her forehooves together.

Starlight watched in terror as seven stallions entered to room and circled her. With wide eyes she examined them all, hoping they would decide they had better things to do than her.

"She's all your boys. Just don't rough her up too much, I need her alive," said Queen Starlight as she headed for the door.

Queen Starlight turned for one last look at her broken double from another world or time. She was completely satisfied.

'She'll be more than willing to talk after this,' thought Queen Starlight as she took her leave. 'Or I will make her life a living hell!'

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