Saten Twist Adventures

by AlphaDog21

Season 1, episode 5

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I'm sad this isn't as liked as I hoped, but I'll keep it going anyway. The characters do get more likable in later seasons.. And I'm still trying to make it more of an actual story, when that's not what it orginally was. More of a screenplay..


Saten Twist and Trixie Lulamoone are seen at a local resturant in ponyville. She secretly returned to town. The two of them are childhood friends, sudtly hinted by the way Saten was the only person besides Snips and Snails who didn't hate on Trixie. And it's even revealed she is a far kinder and less self absorbed person outside of her stage acts.

''I'm glad your finally over AppleJack.. Who needs her anyway. She didn't understand you.. You need someone who dose.. Who knows.. She might be sitting wait in front of you.'' Trixie sad, less than sudtle in her hints.

''I honestly have no idea what your going on about Trixie. But your voice is soothing, and strangely I feel better.'' Saten said happily.

''Sure.'' Trixie sighed.


Later on, Saten returned to a small apartment in ponyville that he shares with his cousin, Derpy Hooves. Who tells him about a new boyfriend, and that it's Master Sword.

''Your dating Master Sword!?'' Saten Twist cried.

''What's the big deal?'' Derpy asked.

'He's nuts. Don't you remember when I first met him.''


(a year or two ago Saten visits an office to get an interview from Master Sword. A green earth pony from a unknown town, with short blonde hair and light blue eyes. But Sword respondes goes to extreme lengths to avoid being interviewed, to the point he jumps himself out the window and is put in the hospital, the reasoning never revealed, but he does hint at being once involved with the pony mafia.)


''Look Saten, I know your protective, but I'm a grown pony, and I'm tired of being alone.'' Derpy explained.

''Fine, but just be careful.'' Saten insisted, and shortly after the doorbell rang. Master Sword waiting at other side of door, spraying something into his mouth to prevent bad breath. But it ends up going into his eye, due to bad aim, and he begins freaking out, and unfortantly Derpy sees him doing so. Who teases him, and he plays it off. And they leave to go on their date, leaving Saten alone in the house. Remembering how alone he is.