The Theatrical Play
Mystery almost solved (Rewritten)
Previous ChapterNext ChapterWhen Luna and Twilight arrived in the living room, they saw that the room was white, with cookware on the stove, wooden spoons, pink kitchen aprons with flowers, white chef’s hat, three closed windows, a drawer. and a closet.
Twilight Sparkle looked at Luna. “Luna, I’ll go look in the closet”
“And me, I’ll look in the drawer, love,” said Luna.
“If you find the costumes just call me,” said Twilight Sparkle, “and if I do, I’ll do the same.”
Luna understood, went to the light brown drawer and opened it with her magic. She hoped the costumes were in one of the drawers. But unfortunately, it wasn’t.
Twilight Sparkle walked to the closet and opened it. But the clothes of the play weren’t there. Inside the cabinet, there were only glass plates. She closed the cabinet with the utmost care that the plates wouldn’t break. She went to Luna.
“So, Luna?” asked Twilight Sparkle. “You found?”
Luna looked at Twilight Sparkle. “No, ove. And you?”
“Me neither, Luna.”
Luna began to believe the clothes wouldn’t be here. “Come on, love. The costumes aren’t here.”
“Luna, we need to look everywhere.”
“But Twilight, I already looked here,” said Luna, “and I wasn’t”
“But they must be here. I’m sure.”
“How are you so sure?” asked Luna. “We already look in the most likely places to be and haven’t found it yet”
“Luna, you have to be patient,” said Twilight Sparkle. “I also want to find the costumes before the play starts and I don’t want to disappoint them”
“I’m sorry, love,” said Luna. “It’s just a few minutes to midnight and we haven’t even rehearsed the play yet.”
Twilight Sparkle tried to stay calm, despite starting to panic inside. “W-We’ll make it, Luna”
“I hope, love.”
Suddenly, something went very fast through the door. Luna and Twilight Sparkle looked back.
“What was that, love?” asked Luna.
“I don’t know, Luna,” replied Twilight Sparkle.
“Do you think we should check?”
“Yes, Luna”
Twilight Sparkle and Luna left the room they were in, and looked around for the figure that had just passed the hallway.
“Was it our imagination, Twilight?” asked Luna.
“Maybe, Luna,” replied Twilight Sparkle.
“I hope so, love.”
The two returned to the room looking for the costumes. What they didn’t know, was that the pony that was responsible for the figure hit his hoof on the ground. He was cursing to himself that it would be easy to catch the attention of the two mares.
The hooded pony tipped over its hooves so as not to make a sound, and upon arriving at the door, he saw Twilight Sparkle and Luna searching for the costumes. He started to think. How would he draw attention from both mares? Until, the pony had an idea. He entered the room quietly, opened the cabinet, took a plate and broke it to get attention.
Twilight and Luna heard crashing plate noise and looked where the sound was coming from and were surprised to see the hooded pony in front of them. Twilight Sparkle ran to him. “Stop!”
The pony began to run. He glanced back and saw Twilight and Luna run up to him. The pony looked forward and saw the door inside, it was very dark, he entered the darkness of the room.
Twilight Sparkle and Luna entered the room. Upon entering, they used the magic of their horns to illuminate. They began to walk calmly until they were pulled by a rope to the ceiling.
The lights came on. Twilight and Luna looked down and saw the mysterious pony staring at them before smiling.
Luna began to tap into the trap that she and Twilight were trapped in hopes of the Two being released, while the Unicorn looked around the room for something for them to break free.
“It’s no use,” said the pony.
The two mares stopped what they were doing and looked at the pony.
“There is no escape from this trap,” said the pony.
Twilight Sparkle was annoyed. “You won’t get away with this, mysterious pony!”
“I think I will, Twilight Sparkle,” said the pony.
Twilight Sparkle was surprised. “How do you know my name?”
“Twilight, since you arrived at the theater with Luna, I’ve been watching you.”
“Show me who you are!” shouted Luna.
“No,” said the pony. “I will not show my face. What would be the fun of revealing my identity?”
“Do you know who you’re talking to?” asked Luna. “You’re talking to the princess of the night”
“And you think I don’t know, Luna?” asked the pony.
Luna was confused. “How do you know our name?”
“Luna, I know everypony’s name,” answered the pony. “I know the names of everypony who goes to this theater”
Twilight Sparkle looked at Luna. “Luna, this is like playing detective. We need to find out who is to blame”
“You can try anything to catch me,” said the pony. “But you won’t be able to catch me. Never!”
The pony began to laugh before leaving and closing the door with his magic.
Luna could only glare at the door. She intended, after discovering this pony, to send him to the castle catacombs.
Twilight Sparkle looked around again as she did this, the Unicorn also tried to locate which part of the theater they were in. In the room there was an office, desks, computers, and phones. She could locate where they were. She smiled and looked at Luna. “Luna.”
Luna stopped glaring at the door and looked at Twilight with a calmer look. “Yes, love?”
“I think figuring out which room we’re in,” said Twilight Sparkle.
“Really, Twilight?” asked Luna. “What room are we in?”
“The administrative room,” answered Twilight Sparkle. “This is room we haven’t checked yet”
Luna smiled. “So could that mean maybe the costumes are here?”
“I’m sure, Luna,” replied Twilight Sparkle.
“Good,” said Luna. “But how do we get out of here?”
Twilight Sparkle looked around again and saw a red case with flower designs on the table. She had an idea. She took the case and brought it inside.
Luna was curious and raised an eyebrow. “Love, what are you looking for?”
Twilight Sparkle was still searching, but answered Luna. “I’m looking for a scissor, Luna”
“Why are you looking for a scissor, Twilight?” asked Luna.
“To cut the rope that is holding us up here, Luna,” said Twilight Sparkle.
Luna smiled. “You’re smart”
Twilight stopped searching and looked at Luna with a smile. “Thanks, Luna”
“You’re welcome, love,” said Luna.
Twilight Sparkle returned to search until she finally found the scissor. “I found!”
Twilight returned the case to where it was and carried the scissors to the rope that held them. Twilight just hoped the scissor cut the rope and luckily, she managed to cut it.
They began to fall. But Luna flapped her wings and grabbed Twilight Sparkle with her magic.
Twilight Sparkle smiled. “Thank you for saving me, Luna”
“You’re welcome, baby,” said Luna.
Luna landed on the floor and put Twilight on the floor. When she released the unicorn, Twilight went to Luna to hug her. Luna was surprised to be hugged, but soon returned the hug.
As they left the hug, Twilight Sparkle began to think. Who could this hooded pony be? Until she had an idea who it could be.
“Love, is everything ok?” asked Luna.
“Yes, Luna,” replied Twilight Sparkle. “I was just thinking”
“What were you thinking?”
“I was wondering who this hooded pony might be.”
“Do you know who it is?”
“I don’t know, Luna. But I’m sure I already know who it is. But for that, we need to find the costumes first”
“Let’s look here, Twilight,” said Luna.
“Yes, Luna,” said Twilight Sparkle. “After all, this was one of the places we haven’t been looking for yet”
Twilight and Luna started searching for costumes in the room. Luna was flying to see if she would locate the costumes. Twilight searched behind the furniture, but didn’t find it.
“Luna, I don’t think it’s here,” said Twilight Sparkle, still with her back and ears down.
“Love, I found it!” shouted Luna cheerfully.
Twilight Sparkle was confused, she looked back, her ears brightened and looked at Luna, who was looking up from a closet. “Did you find the costumes, Luna?”
Luna was still looking over the closet, but answered. “Yes, love. Would you like to ride in me to see?”
“Yes, Luna. Please,” replied Twilight Sparkle.
Luna landed on the floor so Twilight could ride in her. When Twilight succeeded, Luna flew carefully to the top of the closet.
Twilight smiled with what she saw. “The costumes! We found!”
Luna picked up both costumes with her magic and carried them to the ground before landing on the floor and Twilight dismounting from her.
“And now, love?” asked Luna.
“Let’s warn the theater ponies that we already found the clothes, now we just have to figure out who the thief is,” replied Twilight Sparkle.
Author's Note
I must confess, the chapter is much better than before. And I wanted to apologize to those who didn't like this chapter as it was written before.
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