
A Great Surprise Gone Sour
Told from Doug's (me) point of view. What happens when a trip into Equestria goes horribly wrong?
I guess those Dubstep Raves are more insane than I had thought. Now I'm here in Equestria with my friend, Zach. What's awkward about this, you say? We're in Equestria. What's even more awkward is that Zach was in the UK when this happened. Want to know what makes it even MORE awkward? Read on to find out what kind of situation we were thrown into on our way here.
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This is a Duo collaboration between my friend, Jaiden and me. You can find his profile here:
http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Jaiden
Don't forget to check out his stories, too!
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... Some true wishes just never come easy, eh?





10659 words: Estimated about 1 hour to read
2 Chapters:
- Things I wish I had not Seen... (Doug's POV) 2012-08-23 22:37:23 UTC8516
- Attempting to Remember... (Zach's POV) 2012-08-24 05:00:54 UTC2143