The Burning Light

by The Lurker
An ancient paladin in service of the Light has been in hiding for millennia. A certain purple pony wishes to end his self imposed exile.

Legend tells of an ancient Paladin, born and raised in the light, who lived to protect all creatures, pony or otherwise. While in service of the Princess of the sun, he fought against an overwhelming dark power. This battle changed him, and he became The Burning Light, an unstoppable force of holy justice. But over the millennium he grew weary of his endless battle with the Dark, and he slipped into hiding. This is one filly’s quest to restore the legend, and bring him back into the light.


My first posted story, be nice please. Also, it's okay if you don't like the story, just do me the courtesy of telling me what it is you don't like about it please.

Incomplete
Adventure
Profanity
Gore
Violence
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Dark
Death
Alternate Universe
 
TPOPS

3359 words: Estimated 17 minutes to read

3 Chapters:

  1. The Legend is Born 2020-05-20 00:44:24 UTC
    1279
  2. The Legend's Lineage Continues 2020-08-28 23:33:24 UTC
    941
  3. An Intresting Proposal 2021-01-23 07:47:14 UTC
    1139