The Burning Light

by The Lurker

First published

Legend tells of an ancient Paladin, born and raised in the light, who lived to protect all creatures, pony or otherwise. While in service of the Princess of the sun, he fought against an overwhelming dark power. This battle changed him, and he became The Burning Light, an unstoppable force of holy justice. But over the millennium he grew weary of his endless battle with the Dark, and he slipped into hiding. This is one filly’s quest to restore the legend, and bring him back into the light.


My first posted story, be nice please. Also, it's okay if you don't like the story, just do me the courtesy of telling me what it is you don't like about it please.