Sunset's Special Detention
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As mentioned in my BLOG. I have a small list of stories I wish to rewrite and make improvements upon.
Each story haves their reason why they need the rewrite and here's this story reasons.
Like the others I am completely stuck on what I should do to even continue this story properly. It's not writer's block. I do have ideas but the mess up the pacing.
This is because I want to write prequel chapters, taking place before Sunset is given her punishment. Normally this isn't that big of a deal really, but that's just small problem.
The real issue haves to do with chapter 2, the start of Sunset's punishment.
I ended the first day too quickly and by that, I mean that I didn't give Celestia and Luna enough time to spend with Sunset before moving on to the second day. There is so much more the three can do before the first day ends and I want to put those scenes in the story.
This story is one the earliest I've written and back then my ideas weren't as expanded as they are now. Because of this, I been getting new ideas to really improve this story, but that would mean taking steps back just to do it and I don't want that.
As of now, I'm absolutely stuck on what to do in order to continue this story.
BUT!!!!!
That doesn't mean I given up on it. Like the rest of the stories on my list, I will cancel the old version and start again from scratch and give the story a fresh new coat of paint, make improvements, and do things the right way this time.