Of Promises and Loss - Part 2

by hammil

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An intelligent but awkward colt moves to Ponyville for unexplained reasons, however his plans for a peaceful, simple life don't quite work out. Along with a varied group of ponies, he is drawn into a world of intrigue at the highest levels of power, in order to defeat possibly the greatest enemy Equestria has ever known.

This is essentially a prose version of a roleplay I am a part of, from the view of my character, Cobalt. A friend of mine, Kyukon, will be writing from the same timeline in his character's viewpoint. He, however, is starting from the very beginning, before I was introduced. Hence, he is writing Part 1 right now, while I am beginning Part 2.

This is very much a WIP and my first time writing, so criticism is welcome, but please be gentle :)

Concept by John - “Heart”, “Nightshadow”, “Sunny”
In collaboration with Kyukon/Dakota - “Prog”
Marcus - “BB”
Spencer - “Shatter”
Tolakamee - “SteelWing”
Gordon - “Wolf”
Wayne - “Ink”
Ollie - “Shot Glass”
Cody - “Spud”