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Chapter 1: The Party

IF YOU PROMISE TO STAY, I PROMISE TO NEVER LEAVE

Rainstorm was staying in front of the mirror checking herself. Mane? Stylish! Eyelashes? Perfect! Her wings? Fabulous! Her body? Perfect. The almost daily hard workout is doing it's job nicely. She loved to look at herself in the mirror, not she was in love with herself, but she liked what she saw. Some stallions will definitely eye her like candy, like every other time. She made sure that she was looking absolutely perfect before leaving the house. Back in school, a lot of stallions ogled her. But that also meant it left mares to be envious of her.

"Are you ready Rainstorm?" Asked her sister, Sunrise, on the other side of the bathroom door.

"Yup, I'm ready. I just needed to check everything again." Rainstorm replied.

"For the tenth time already? Oh girl come on, we don't have much time left. Our friends are waiting." Said Sunrise.

Rainstorm slipped her favorite hoodie on and looked one more time into the mirror. "Perfect!"

"RAINSTORM!" Shouted her sister from downstairs.

"Yea, yea, I am coming!" She shouted. Doing a once over with her hair, she hurriedly left the bathroom.

Going down the steps, she spotted her sister and friends waiting by the front door.

"Hey girls!" She said, giving everyone a hug.

"Seems like your sister needed some extra time. . . again." Asked one of her earth pony friend.

"That's my sister." Said Sunrise with a chuckle.

"I always try to imagine, you having a coltfriend. He'd probably go crazy with you. I don't think even all of us take that much time in the bathroom." Said a yellow pegasus, waving her hoof. She then continued,

"I still wonder, why you don't have a coltfriend yet. I mean you are so pretty and gorgeous and-" Rainstorm interrupted her before she could continue any longer.

"Girls, please not that topic again. I'm single, and I'm happy. I'll wait for the right one." Explained Rainstorm.

"Mr. Perfect for Ms. Perfect." The earth pony laughed.

Rainstorm only stuck out her tongue in response.

"Let's go girls." Said Rainstorm.

They arrived on the party at 9pm. The music was loud and a lot of ponies were enjoying their time. Some were already drunk, some were dancing and 'couples' were already making out in some of the back booths.

"Ah yeah, this looks so cool!" Said the pegasus.

"Too bad my coltfriend can't join us." Said Sunrise.

"Where is he?" Asked the earth pony.

"He is still at work. He's been working a lot recently, even on the weekends. I'll be so happy once he gets his new job soon. That way I can spend more time with him." Explained Sunrise.

"No time for sad feelings or bad thoughts, let us have some fun girls!" Shouted the pegasus. Entering the party, Rainstorm caught two stallions eyeing her up.

"Sorry guys, I know, you like my body but. . .I have no interest!" She joyfully said.

"Are you sure you. . ." one of them tried to press on but was met with a sharp, "No!"

She was now separated from her friends, which she didn't mind. She enjoyed the space. Being all day with your older sister can be. . . tiring sometimes.

Rainstorm went to the bar and ordered a drink. While waiting for it, she looked around the club. Eyeing the dance floor, she noted It was to full. Man she loved to dance, but on a full dance floor, the constant bumping messed with her rhythm.

"Hello?" Said a female voice. Whipping her head around she was met with a dark blue unicorn.

"Lilly?" Asked Rainstorm.

"Rainstorm?" She asked.

"Hey! It is so nice to meet you again, I haven't seen you in years!" Rainstorm exclaimed.

"Huh, guess it has been a while since we saw each other, How have you been?" She asked.

"Oh Lilly, thank you, I'm fine. What about you?" Rainstorm asked.

"I'm fine too, thank you. You look. . . really good. I remember the last time I've seen you. You always made sure to look good but ... you look ... more adult." She said, scanning her formal school friend.

"Yea, I've been doing workouts in my free time. I really like myself you know. Not in the way you think, but I think it's important that you feel good in your own body, only then you cannot show the others your inner beauty." Rainstorm explained.

"Yea, I mean, as a mare, I have to say you look really good. My respect!" She said.

"Hey Rainstorm? What is going on, why aren't you dancing?" Asked Sunrise.

"I was catching up with my former school friend here." Rainstorm explained.

"Oh Lilly, right?" Sunrise asked.

"You remember me?" Lilly asked confused.

"Yea, I haven't seen you before but Rainstorm mentioned you a few times. You both were good friends, right?" She asked.

"Yea but after school, we lost touch." Lilly said.

"But you found me again. Hey, if you want to hang out with me or my girls, feel free to join." Rainstorm said and gave her a wink.

"Oh sure. Thanks. Due to how busy I've been with work, it's hard to make any friends." She explained.

"That's what weekends are for. To wind down and have some fun!" Rainstorm explained.

"Hey, I'm gonna head back to dancing. Want to join me?" Asked Sunrise.

"Later, let me finish my chatting first." Rainstorm said.

"Ok. See you later little sis." Said Sunrise and moved back to the dancefloor.

"Your bound to have a coltfriend by now, so gossip with me. What's he like?" Lilly said.

"You might be surprised but. . . I don't have one." Rainstorm sheepishly said.

"What? You? No way!? I mean. . .look at you, you look amazing! I, uh, that is quite the suprise." She said.

"Too many 'mental' fillies. I like a real stallion not kids. And I know exactly what I want. I have time. I'm saving myself for the perfect one." Rainstorm explained.

"Wow, that is. . . unheard of." She said.

"What do you mean?" Rainstorm asked.

"A pony saving that all for her special somepony. I mean look at some of them, after this one night stand, they're probably never going to see each other again.." Explained Lilly. "I'm happy I found one. An earth pony. Handsome stallion." She said.

"Happy to hear that. But I don't think falling in love here would make good for future stories. Rainstorm said and looked into the crowd.

Something. . . no someone grasped her attention. 'What the buck?' She thought to herself.

He was tall furless creature. The only hair present was the brown hair on his head. He wore a nice shirt and nice jeans that pronounced his body perfectly. If she needed to give him a number from 1 to 10 it would be a 20.

Then the recognition set in. It was Kyle the human, the talk all over Equestria. She'd seen him before in the newspaper but didn't give it to much attention because he lived in the Canterlot palace. She would never see him anyways, or so she thought. He was beyond sexy. He was. . . Rainstorm found no words for him.

". . .ey, are you even listening to me?" Lilly's voice finally seem to reach her ears.

"Uh what?" Rainstorm asked, looking back at her.

"Are you daydreaming?" Lilly asked.

"Yea, I was just. . ." 'looking at that handsome candy over there- oh my gosh, stop it Rainstorm! He's an alien. An alien from another planet! What is going on with you? You don't normally let yourself get distracted by a stallion. . . but he's not a stallion- no! Stop it!'

Before her mind can argue anymore, Rainstorm's sister Sunrise appeared again. "Still sitting here? Are you sick? You love dancing." She asked worried.

"As I said before, I'm just talking to Lilly here." She explained but found herself looking into the crowd again.

"Your sister seems to daydream a lot today. Is she getting enough sleep?" Lilly asked.

"What are you looking at anyways?" Asked her sister.

She tried to defend herself. "Just into the crowd, nothing else!" 'Where is that boy again. He can't be. . .

"Hey, can you make room please, I want to order a drink." Said a husky, male voice. Rainstorm froze. It was him. The human himself.

"Oh ehm ... sorry, of course." She said, checking him from head to toe. 'What a handsome looking stallion.'

After checking Kyle, Sunrise and Lilly looked at each other and smiled. "I think I found out what she was looking at." Said Lilly.

"You gonna tell me, my sister has a crush on the human?" Asked Sunrise confused.

"I guess." Both giggled to each other. "Look how she is ogling him." Lilly said.

"Me and Lilly here are gonna dance, see you later little sis." Said Sunrise.

"Ehm ... yea ... sure!" Rainstorm said. Kyle was waiting for his drink. While he was waiting he looked at Rainstorm and smiled at her.

"Hey you, you also waiting?" He asked. 'Did he just really talk to me?' Rainstorm wondered.

"I ... uh ... well ... I already have something to drink." Said Rainstorm.

"Ah ok. . .hey by the way, you look pretty good, that hoodie fits perfect on you. Don't get me wrong but you look really pretty. I usually don't make compliments to ponies. But you? You seemed to be. . . different." He explained. Oh my gosh did he really ...' Rainstorm thought.

"Well, uh, th-thanks. " 'Why am I stuttering, what the hell Rainstorm?! Get your act together!'

"Kyle Luck. And you?" He asked.

"Rainstorm. Like the rainstorm." She explained. Celestia that sounded stupid.

"Yea, you all seem to have weird name's here. Not that they're bad but. . . it's interesting." He explained.

"Yea ... thank you." Rainstorm took a sip of her drink. 'Something is wrong with me.' She thought.

"Also cool haircut ... eh manecut? You know what I mean." Kyle said.

"N-n-n-no not at all. It's fine, you're a really handsome stallion too, to be honest." Rainstorm stuttered.

He laughed and Rainstorm was afraid for a moment she said something wrong.

"Stallion. You mean man, but I get it." He continued to laugh.

"So, you from here? I guess I don't have to explain my story, the entire planet knows it already. But the gist is," Kyle soon started to tell his story. How he popped into Ponyville, went to live with the princesses and all the magic baloogo he experienced in between. It was only recently did he come back to Ponyville.

'Just say something Rainstorm.' Rainstorm thought.

"Really? You're also from here? Oh that's great." Rainstorm explained. "So what are you doing here?"

"I try to enjoy my time here. I don't really have much to do, except from my job in Twilight's school. I do the paperwork. Nothing special but trust me, there is a lot to do. Seeing as your a pegasus, I assume you mess with the weather?" He asked.

"Used to. I canceled my job up in Cloudsdale, and moved here. I have a job as an cosmetician now." Rainstorm said.

"Oh, that's why you're so good looking. Seriously, that was my second guess, cosmetician or hair stylist. All of them look pretty!" He said.

"Ah, really?" She asked nervously.

"Girl, if I have to rate you from 0 to 10, you are definitely a 30." He said and winked. Rainstorm blushed.

"Nah, it is not like, hm, thank you, really, that means a lot to me." She said, her cheeks getting redder.

"Good to know. You're a funny girl. You look good, you smell good, you have great looking hair, a cool hoodie and ... I'll guess you are also a really nice per ... pony." He said.

'Is this guy really trying to flirt with me? Oh gosh.' Suddenly he starts yawning.

"Are you tired?" Rainstorm asked.

"Yea, it was a hard Friday. I guess I gonna go home now. Barkeeper?" 'Seems like he is going to pay and leave and he'll never talk to me again. Why do I care anyway?'

"Yes?" Asked the barkeeper.

"I want to pay for me and for that beautiful girl next to me." He said and winked again. 'What did he just. . .'

"No wait, let me-" But he interrupted me.

"No chance. I'm paying for you." He said.

"Thank you, you are. . . a true gentlecolt." She said.

"Gentleman, but yea, thank you. And thank you for that nice little chat with you. I mean every word I said to you. You're a really good looking pony. You are pretty and also the first one to really listen to me. So yeah, thank you again. I hope we'll see each other again." He said and left with a smile.

'So cute, so beautiful, so. . . so. . .'

"How was your little chat with the human?" A well known voice interrupted Rainstorms train of thought.

"What? Huh?" She asked.

"How was your chit chat with your little crush?" Asked her sister.

"Crush? No way! I just talked to him. It is not a crush." Rainstorm explained.

"Sure, sure. I've been watching you from the other side. You looked at him like you'd rut him the first chance you got." Her sister laughed.

"Oh pease. I just talked to a handsome po ... human, that's all." Rainstorm tried to explain.

"Uh huh? If you say so. Let's go home little sis, I'm tired. You can tell me about your wet dreams tomorrow at breakfast." She joked.

"Oh shush you. All we did was talk to him and-" Sunrise interrupted Rainstorm again.

"Looked at him like a little filly that had its first crush. Sounds better? Come on now, let's go home." Her sister said.

No way, she needed to see him again. No, she didn't! 'Why? You don't have a crush. Why do you care, he just ... ugh ... Celestia, his smell and his compliments. No! No! No! You are not gonna fall for an alien, that's stranded here Rainstorm!' I thought. Oh gosh was she wrong.