Thorax is a reformed changeling who is a close friend of Shining Armor after Spike convinced him that he was never an evil changeling, he has also helped the captain of the royal guard out a lot with taking care of his daughter as well as playing with her. However, during the third day of his stay, Thorax has encountered a very cute and beautiful maid named Twilight Sparkle who is known as the younger sister of Shining Armor who is facing some pressure from her own brother. Would Thorax be able to persuade Shining Armor to be nicer to his sister?

New story! I hope you all will enjoy this one! This story is inspired by Cinderella a bit. Also, I do not own My Little Pony, it belongs to Hasbro. And the coverart I am using also belongs to it's rightful owner.