Thank You Mistress, the Remake
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Previous ChapterNext ChapterIt had only been a few days, but it felt like 2 years had gone by in the blink of an eye. Starlight was broken out of her train of thought when Twilight cleared her throat.
"Yes Mistress?" Starlight asked, her tail wagging a bit in excitement.
"Now I hope you don't think that because of our new...positions regarding each other, that I'm going to stop teaching you about magic and friendship."
Starlight shook her head. "Of course Mistress! I know the lessons will never stop! I wouldn't have it any other way!" The mauve unicorn said happily.
"Good." Twilight said with a smile.
"Hey Mistress? Don't you think Rarity is taking a really long time with my Collar?" Starlight asked.
"Why? It's only been a few days. Rarity did say she'd have it finished within the week." Twilight pointed out.
Starlight nodded in agreement with her Mistress and sighed a little. "Yes, it has, but hasn't it also felt like it's been over 2 years?"
"Uh...well. I suppose so, but, let's just try not to think about that okay?"
"Yes Mistress." Starlight said.
Eventually, there was a knock on the palace door. Spike was walking over to it to open it when he was practically run over by Starlight in her eagerness.
She threw open the door with her magic and excitedly greeted Rarity.
"Why Hello Darling. I guess you are very excited, aren't you?" The alabaster mare chuckled.
Starlight bounced in place before she began to try and frisk Rarity for the box she was hiding.
"Now now Darling, don't you want Twilight to be the one who gives it to you?" Rarity said, stepping back a bit.
Starlight ceased her actions with a small blush. "Yeah, I-I suppose I shouldn't be so hasty, huh." The unicorn said with a nervous chuckle.
She let Rarity trot inside before she shut the door. Starlight galloped up to Spike who had just gotten to his feet. "Sorry for running into you." She said with a sheepish smile.
"Nn..s'okay Star." He said before shaking his head. "Gonna be dizzy for a few seconds. Hi Rarity."
"Hello Spikey Wikey~!" Rarity greeted the dragon as she trotted by.
Starlight apologized to Spike a second time before she followed Rarity. The pair of unicorns trotted through the Tree Castle together, headed for the room Twilight was in. She was laying on a large couch, going over some spells.
Once they arrived Starlight broke into a gallop and tackle hugged her Mistress, who wrapped her wings around her.
"Hello Rarity." Twilight greeted as Starlight squirmed and snuggled around under her wings.
"Greetings Darling. Terribly sorry for the wait. But I wanted to get it perfect!" Rarity said as she levitated a lavender box out of her saddlebags.
Starlight made grabby hooves at the box which Twilight took into her magic and levitated out of her reach. The unicorn pouted and crossed her hooves.
"Thank you Rarity. I'm sure your work is as spectacular and wonderful as it always is." Twilight chuckled. "Are you sure you don't want any payment for this?"
"Of course not Twilight! You're my friend, it was no trouble, I assure you." Rarity said.
Starlight slowly grew more and more impatient as the pair of friends chatted, with Twilight levitating the box above.
"Open open open open!" She chanted suddenly.
Twilight rolled her eyes before she set Starlight upright on the couch.
"I am eager to see how you two enjoy it." Rarity said.
The Alicorn of Magic nodded as she placed the box down on the coffee table. Starlight eagerly opened it with her magic.
She pulled the collar out of the box and grinned widely when she saw it. The band itself was the same shade of purple that Twilight's coat was, with white fur lining the inside of it to ensure that it was comfortable to wear. It had a charm of twilight's cutie mark that jingled pleasantly.
"I love it!" She cheered in joy.
Twilight chuckled as she took the collar in her magic. "It looks perfect, Rarity. Killer job as usual. You even got the enchantment I requested."
"This is the first piece Zecora and I worked on together technically." Rarity chuckled.
"It came out wonderfully." Starlight complimented. Twilight unlocked it with her magic and levitated it over to Starlight's neck.
The Alicorn cleared her throat, gathering Starlight's attention. "Now Starlight, once this goes on, only I can remove it." Twilight warned.
"Good! I want it on me forever!" Starlight declared.
Twilight smiled at this and happily clicked it around Starlight's neck. The charm glowed blue as the collar sealed itself around Starlight.
The mare gave out a happy whinny before she once again tackle-hugged her Mistress.
"Thank you, Mistress!" Starlight cheered happily.
Starlight was happily staring at her collar, jingling it happily as she did.
"Starlight. Starlight? Starlight!" Twilight called.
Starlight squeaked in and shook her head. "S-Sorry!" She said, standing at attention. Twilight chuckled a little, rolling her eyes.
"Now that I've got your attention, I believe it's time for some practice." The Alicorn said.
"For Magic. Right?" Starlight said with a tilt of her head.
Twilight grinned as her horn began to glow. "I'd sure hope so. We're in the arena after all." The Alicorn said happily.
Starlight grinned back as she drew her hoof on the ground, her horn glowing as well. "Well I'm ready Mistress." Starlight said before firing a laser at Twilight.
Twilight created a shield, effortlessly blocking the laser. "Good Job Star. You're getting better every minute, let alone every day. Now, I want you to focus on the Multiplication Spell Today."
"Yes Mistress!" She cheered before she casted the spell in question.
She created three clones of herself, all four of them grinning at Twilight. "Are you sure you can deal with four of me?" They said in unison, grinning confidently.
"Of course! It'll be easy." Twilight taunted.
The four Starlights gasped in play shock before they fired lasers at all sides of her. Twilight spread her wings and floated up.
Starlight grinned, having expected this. The Lasers blasted together into a big explosion.
"Very Impressive!" Twilight said as she created a shield she gracefully stood on it, blocking the explosion.
The Four Starlights levitated themselves and created pikes to launch at Twilight, who calmly dodged them. "Good, you are doing very well."
Twilight blocked another pike with a shield, the construct absorbing the other. She then split it in four and launched it at all of the Starlights.
They teleported out of the way and levitated around Twilight. The Alicorn dodged each attack Starlight sent her way so gracefully it was as if she were dancing.
"Oh my Stars!"
"She's so hard to hit!"
"She's so amazing!"
"I want her babies!"
The Starlights said.
Twilight giggled a bit at this before she cleared her throat. "Focus, Starlight. Don't let your awe of me distract you."
The four Starlights blushed and shook their heads.
"Yes Mistress." They said in unison.
They proceeded to shoot four giant lasers that morphed together into one massive laser.
Twilight smiled as she blasted the laser with a smaller but denser one that split it. The two lasers sailed past her harmlessly.
She smirked at the Starlights, spreading her wings majestically. "You're really getting the hang of using this spell to its fullest. But now I want you to try to use four different attacks at once.
"Yes Mistress!" The Starlights said.
One of them used a lite super speed enchantment on her body and rushed Twilight, who was still able to calmly dodge each attack.
The second blasted her with lasers while the third charged a big magic bomb. The fourth created pikes with magic to blast at her.
Twilight used a harden spell on her wings and smacked the pikes away, dodged four attacks from the speeded Starlight, and blocked all the lasers.
"Very good! Very Very Good!" Twilight praised, making all four Unicorns blush brightly.
The distraction caused the fourth's magic bomb to overload and explode. Twilight cocooned herself in a shield while the three clones unfortunately evaporated.
Starlight panted as she stood on wobbly legs. "How...was that?"
Twilight landed before her gracefully. "You did very well Starlight. Such a good girl." The Mare praised.
Starlight beamed at her Mistress's praise and wagged her tail, panting excitedly. Twilight walked up to her and petted her head.
The unicorn purred and nuzzled her hoof happily as her tail wagged. Twilight chuckled and hugged her.
"Such a good girl. Now, let's have a rest. Spike made nachos."
"Yay Nachos!" Starlight cheered.
Starlight stood in front of her room with Twilight, her tail wagging a bit in excitement. "Mistress, are you sure you don't mind me moving into your room?"
"Not at all, Are you sure you don't want your own space?"
"Of course I do, but I want to be with you even more!" Starlight said happily.
Twilight smiled at this and ruffled her mane with a wing. "Okay, my pet. I can give you both, let's leave some things here, and take a few things into my room.
Starlight beamed up at Twilight and nuzzled the taller mare happily. "Thank you Mistress! You're so generous."
"I aim to be a Good Mistress after all~!" Twilight chuckled, scritching her chin with her wing.
"Now go on my pet, pick out what you would like to take into our room."
"Yes Mistress!" Starlight said as she trotted inside. She levitated all of her pictures of her and her Mistress up, grabbed a trunk she had full of magical artifacts and tomes, and took one of her favorite kites. "Ready!" She chirped.
Twilight smiled and took some of the load in her own magic. "Then let's get going."
Starlight joyously pranced beside Twilight as the alicorn walked briskly. The pair of mares eventually reached the Master Bedroom. Twilight opened the door and Starlight zoomed through. She carefully used her magic to place her pictures on the wall to compliment the pictures that were already there.
Twilight moved the trunk to the foot of the bed. "Hmm. Hey Starlight!"
"Yes Mistress?" Starlight asked as she trotted up to her.
"I have an idea with your kite. Would you like it if I put up the kite hung up on the ceiling, as if it's flying?" Twilight asked.
Starlight squeed in excitement as she bounced in place. "That sounds wonderful, Mistress!"
The unicorn helped her Mistress hang up the kite. She held the kite spread up against the ceiling as Twilight levitated staples, making sure not to pierce the craft itself.
"Thank you Mistress!" Starlight chirped, nuzzling the Alicorn.
"Of course." Twilight chuckled. "Now then. It's our first time sleeping together~." Twilight purred, gently pushing Starlight towards the bed.
Starlight shivered in excitement before she smiled widely.
"Have you been practicing like a good girl?" Twilight asked.
Starlight nodded, her smile growing even wider. "Oh yes Mistress!"
Twilight gave her a sultry grin before she gently pushed her down onto the large bed. The alicorn pinned the smaller mare and purred down at her.
"Such a good little pet."
"If you've really been practicing, then I think you're ready to worship your mistress~"
Starlight squealed in excitement and nodded furiously. "Yes Mistress! Please let me!"
The alicorn grinned at her before she switched their positions so she was reclining against pillows and Starlight was at her hooves.
"Now just let me drop this spell..." Twilight dropped her decency cloak, the sight making Starlight's mouth water.
The Unicorn shivered as she tried not to drool over herself. She crawled forward and nuzzled the massive shaft. It was positively perfect in every way possible.
Starlight breathed in her musk and moaned in satisfaction. She began licking the giant alicorn cock from base to flare, moaning at the taste. Once she was at full mast she began to make out with her flare for a couple of moments. Eventually she managed to fit the flare into her muzzle.
Twilight moaned as Starlight suckled on her flare.
"Mmm~. Such a good girl." Twilight praised, petting Starlight's head.
The unicorn moaned around Twilight's cock and began swirling her tongue around the flare.
"Good girl." Twilight praised once again, resting her hoof on her pet's head.
Starlight's tail wagged quickly as she began to push herself further down Twilight's cock. She didn't expect herself to get very far her first time sucking off her Magnificent Mistress.
She managed to force a third of her cock down before she started gagging. Twilight rubbed her head and gently calmed her.
"Don't go farther than you can handle my pet. You're doing wonderful with what you can fit." Twilight cooed.
"Mmmm~!" Starlight moaned.
The Mauve Unicorn's tail's wagging grew faster. She bobbed her head along the parts of Twilight's cock she could fit, and used magic to create a swirling soft and wet vortex around the parts she couldn't reach. Starlight wanted her to feel as good as possible, and once Twilight started to moan repeatedly, it would seem that the unicorn had succeeded.
She kept sucking and sucking for what felt like hours of pleasurable worship to Starlight and Twilight. Eventually, Twilight's massive marecock began to twitch in Starlight's throat.
Starlight squeed in excitement, shooting pleasure ripples up and down Twilight's shaft. The Alicorn moaned and leaned back at this, her tail flicking against the bed as Starlight sped up.
Her cock twitched more and more. Starlight braced herself for the impending orgasm. Twilight grabbed her head with both hooves, and with a loud, guttural moan, came straight down Starlight's throat.
The submissive mare screamed in pleasure as her eyes rolled up. Her horn spurted some magic as her pussy leaked from her own orgasm.
Twilight's orgasm lasted for several minutes, being an alicorn and all. When it eventually died down, she let Starlight slide off her shaft.
Starlight laid against Twilight's hoof, breathing heavily.
"Thank you for letting me worship you, Mistress." She said tiredly.
Twilight chuckled and petted her head. "Of course my pet. Now why don't you clean up and we can snuggle."
"Yes Mistress!" Starlight said happily.
In the Morning,
An orange cream mare with white mane trotted towards the Tree Castle with a smile on her muzzle. "I wonder if she'll remember me!" The Unicorn said happily.
She looked around the town, having just moved to Ponyville. All the ponies here were so friendly!
The mare stopped in front of the tree castle's front gates. She took a deep breath and knocked on it. Spike opened the door and looked up.
"Hello!" The drake greeted.
"Hi Spike." The mare greeted with a wave.
Spike blinked in surprise and looked up at the mare, tilting his head. "Do I...know you?" He asked the mare.
"Well, Yes. But you may not remember me." The mare said, rubbing the back of her head. "I used to be the maid in you and Twilight's study-home."
Spike stared at her before recognition flashed. "Sunbeam Crush?!"
"You do remember me!" She cheered.
"Oh man, Mom's gonna freak when she sees you! Come in, come in!" Spike said, holding the doors open for Sunbeam.
The mare happily pranced inside after the little drake.
"Mom! Mom! You're never going to guess who showed up!" Spike said as he ran off.
Sunbeam was left in a sitting room, an apt name, as she sat down on one of the chairs to wait for Twilight to come down. She levitated a book out of her saddle bag and began to read it.
A few minutes later Twilight came trotting inside with Spike sprinting in right after her.
"Sunbeam! Oh my, it's been so long!" Twilight said, hugging her tightly.
Sunbeam smiled at this and gave her a bit of a nuzzle. "Stars, look how big you've grown! You've got wings now, Sparkle!" Sunbeam chuckled.
Twilight smiled as they separated from the hug. "It's so good to see you! What brings you all the way down to Ponyville?" The Alicorn asked.
"Well, I was in the area, and thought I'd visit. And uh...well. I was fired. And I missed working for you. You're about the only boss I had that didn't...well..." Sunbeam rubbed her foreleg where a black bruise was.
Twilight narrowed her eyes but didn't say anything else. "Well. My work is piling up. I could use an assistant." Twilight said to her.
Sunbeam smiled brightly and hugged the Alicorn once again. Twilight put her wings around her and nuzzled her. "Oh thank you Princess! I'll work harder than ever before!" The mare said happily.
"Now let me take you to your room, if you're gonna be my assistant, you should be able to live in the castle."
Sunbeam happily clapped her hooves together. Twilight smiled before she brought her to the stairs. Sunbeam was eager for her new life in Ponyville.
Author's Note
It's been so long! ITS BEEN SO FUCKING LONG! BUT IM FINALLY FUCKING BACK!
I like to think I'm better than ever at writing! I hope you liked my come back chapter.
It felt so good to write again. I'm so sorry for being gone for so long. But I'm back in the fandom, and I have returned to writing!
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