Reversed Paradise

by Dice Warwick

Reversed Paradise, Ch 1

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Journal Log 000

This journal will stand as a record to my time on the world of Aphrodite, and my experience as the other gender.

I shouldn't have said anything, but after helping the Doctor stop the army of the cyber ponies empire from “Upgrading” a whole world, we all needed a vacation, and it needed to be something different. The Doctor then got excited about visiting a planet called Aphrodite. He told us it is one of the most peaceful places in the galaxy and that they primarily focus on customer service as a paradise world. But it’s biggest draw, of which made me truly regret asking for a vacation.

This world naturally swaps your gender!

The girls all got excited about it, and the Doctor. Well, he is the Doctor. This is far from strange to him. I’m beginning to wonder if anything is considered strange to him anymore. I, for one, am not looking forward to this change, but I’m outvoted four to one, so off the Tardis goes.

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Journal Log 01

So it has happened. I went from being a very short and skinny stallion unicorn to a very short and skinny mare unicorn. What has happened to my life!

There was not much change to myself. My jaw had rounded, and my hips had become bigger, but most annoyingly was that my mane poofed out more than normal, getting in my eyes whenever I wasn’t paying attention.

We all had to get shots after our transformations, some being vaccinations, but one was for a contraceptive. It was something about preventing guests from trying to have children over their stay.

Stern Wing didn’t change much either. She went from the big strong mare pegasus to a just as big and strong stallion pegasus. I couldn’t help but feel… annoyed. She fit being a stallion far better than I did, and worse, she was now utterly unattractive.

The change didn’t affect our minds, so even though I was now a mare, I was still a stallion inside, and I was hating this!

The others took all this far better than I. Derpy looked a bit awkward as a stallion, though she just took it in stride as she always does. With Vision being blind, she couldn't see how she had changed, but she seemed to be taking things as well as I was. Then there’s the Doctor, who had clearly been here before, and took to it like a pegasus to the air.

I guess he must have done something for the locals, as they practically bent over backwards to help him and us as soon as his name was mentioned.

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Journal Log 02

So I was planning on just relaxing, enjoying the peace and quiet while staying in the bungalow the Doctor rented, but Sturn Wing kept bugging me until I gave in. Under that big tough stallion is still the mare I love. Unfortunately, I didn’t know what was waiting for me. Damn her!

We had gotten a native mare as our tour guide, a Columbi as they’re called, and she was absolutely stunning.

Well all the locals were beautiful. I could only assume that it was just the locals that were allowed near the guests, but still, they were remarkably beautiful looking ponies.

Well, not ponies. They all looked like pegasus, but they were all feathers and no fur, along with small and soft talons instead of hooves. If it was not for their pony-like face, I say they looked more like doves.

So my regret of the day came to be, and I had been taken to a clothing store for mares, and pushed inside to have a “Makeover.” Luckily for the new “girls”… the guys were told to wait outside. Our tour guide and the Doctor joined me into this new nightmare.

Our guide, Treron Vernans, as helpful as she was in giving me a makeover, the green and pink mare was also too touchy-feely. I could only be glad I still didn’t have my penis, as she would rub her cheek with mine whenever she got excited about how I looked. She practically felt me up while getting my measurements.

When it was all over, I couldn't help but see a cute mare in the mirror… I hated it! I didn’t want to be cute, I just wanted to relax, and now I can't stop thinking about myself in a sexual manner!

Well, as soon as the Doctor finds herself the right dress, we will at least do some more normal things at a fairground.

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Journal Log 03

I spoke too soon when I had said that dress up was my regret of the day.

Things had gotten better after we left for the fairground, and as uncomfortable as I was, I did have fun playing the games, going through a massive funhouse, and eating fantastic food. The place was about everything the Doctor had said it was, and seeing all the different aliens was a sight to behold. Though one thing most of us were having a hard time getting used to was all the open showing of affection all over the place.

The Doctor simply explained that ponies come to this world to experiment with… Well long story short, they find a partner to have a fling with. I don’t know why anypony would do that. I may be a mare right now, but the idea of hooking up with a stallion just didn’t sit right for me.

Then the incident happened. Some drunk pony, shark, things… pony sharks began to hit on the Doctor and I. I don’t know why, but the Doctor looked flattered. She did, however, manage to skillfully deflect his advances. Unfortunately, I didn’t have the same skills as the Doctor, so I clammed up. Somehow my silence came off as an invitation, and the next thing I knew, I had a rubber hoof stroking my genitals as the shark-pony was inviting me to go inside a privacy tent.

What happened next surprised everypony. Derpy rushed in and knocked over the shark-pony, and began yelling at him. I had never seen her… him … so mad before, but then when the shark-pony began to bleed, Derpy’s anger had turned to fear, as she thought she had seriously hurt the pony.

Worse, Vision started to panic as well. Her psychic ability going out of control for some reason. We were all so scared.

Fortunately, the local authorities acted fast. They deescalated the situation. The shark pony was fine, and it turns out that he wasn't even mad. He was just dizzy from the alcohol.

Unfortunately Vision had to leave the main city. It turns out that those with psychic abilities have been having adverse reactions to the city lately, and Vision could not turn off her power. They had a safe quiet place for her so she would be fine, and Derpy went with her, both to give her company, but also because she scared herself there.

Now, the Doctor’s off making sure Vision and Derpy will have everything they need, and Stern and I have retired to our bungalow.

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“Do you need to talk with someone, Miss Feather?” Treron asked Feather in a sweet tone.

Closed her journal and put it into a small book bag the Doctor bought for Feather at a local store.

“It’s mister… never mind. No. I’ll be fine,” I replied.

The whole gender change was still so very alien to her. From trotting to her own voice, none of it was his. It felt like it was all some other mares.

The Columbi mare smiled. “Alright. Just let any of us know if you need any assistance. Our guests are our treasure, and that includes you.” She then trotted away.

Entering her room, Feather found Stern punching a pillow on their bed.

“Stupid, stupid, stupid,” Stern said with each strike of the pillow.

Feather just sighed as she trotted over. “It’s not your fault.”

“Is it,” Stern huffed. He flapped his wings before pushing the pillow under his legs before sitting down. “It should have never happened. I should have been the one to protect you.”

Stern’s head hung low. “Now Derpy can't be with us because I’m such a coward.”

Feather sighed. “I’m fine, and so is Derpy. Truthfully, I’m more worried about Vision.”

A nod came from Stern. “We should go visit them tomorrow.”

“Ya, and no dress up this time. I swear that I had so many stallion eyes on me that it was absolutely embarrassing. That, and this underwear keeps riding up my new lady parts. Ponies don’t normally wear clothes for crying out loud!” Feather grumbled.

Stern chuckled. “If it’s that bad, let me know. I wouldn't mind taking that dress off. It’s sort of like unwrapping a Heart’s Warming present.”

Stern then looked away, seemingly panicked.

“What’s the matter? Are you okay, Stern?” Feather lifted herself onto the bed, worried.

“I… I’m fine. Just give me… me a moment,” Stern stammered.

Concerned, Feather trotted right up to Stern as she said, “Nonsense. Now, tell me what's wr…”

When Feather stepped on the pillow, Stern gave a quiet yelp. During that time, Feather felt something hard under the pillow.

Cocking an eyebrow, Feather took a step back. With her magic, she removed the pillow and took a closer look.

Flopping up, Stern’s dick flopped up in front of Feather, it long, think and hard. The two sat there frozen, Stern covering his face with his hooves, and his large member standing upright in front of Feather’s face.

“S… sorry. It won’t listen to me. It just won't go away!” Stern stammered, and Feather knew that he was about to start crying.

Feather Wind passed Stern Wing a smirk as she said, “It’s okay, Stern. I used to have one of these too, so I know what it feels like to have it and what triggers them. Usually, you are the one who provokes this response from me, so I cannot decry you for having the same reaction towards me, except it does surprise me that you’d find me attractive as a mare.”

With a long sigh, Feather stepped up closer to Stern. “I’m only going to do this once, alright?”

Stern peeked from under his hooves as he felt a soft sensation on his dick, and saw Feather begin to stroke it. Her small hooves wrapped around the hard cock and slowly began pumping. The sensation was like nothing Stern had felt before. It was similar to how it was as a mare, but at the same time utterly different.

Then she felt like she was going to explode. Her dick twitched, then a release that felt too good.

Feather was caught by surprise as a stream of cum shot out of Stern’s dick which hit her in the face. She was stunned, and felt a little sick… and yet, quite aroused.

Looking at Stern, he had fallen into his back. He was breathing heavily. His dick had gone soft. Feather hadn't removed the cum from her face, finding herself more focused on Stern, and Stern’s dick.

“I… I really shouldn't,” Feather muttered to herself.

“You shouldn’t what?” Stern asked right before feeling a hoof once again wrap around his dick.

The stroking of her sensitive dick kept Stern still, unable to process the pleasure, but then something changed. Something warm and wet touched his member.

Feather felt queasy at what the both of them just did. Stern’s dick was covered in precum and also had some of his actual cum on it. To Feather’s own suprise, she licked it. The bitter taste was disgusting, and the smell that filled her nose was just as bad, but Feather couldn't think straight. She was too aroused, and was now rubbing her pussy as she stroked Stern's dick. With her mouth salivating from the pleasure, Feather licked the dick again, and again a bitter taste was on her tongue.

Stern’s dick again became hard. It throbbed from the attention. Unable to turn back, Feather began sucking on the tip. With her every breath, she went a little deeper until Stern’s dick filled her mouth.

Unable to hold back, Stern again orgasmed, thus shooting her hot seed into Feather’s mouth which caused her to fall back.

Pushing himself up, Stern finally got a good look as Feather in concern. Feather looked like a mess. Her dress was disheveled and spotted with cum, and her face… Feather’s face was covered in Stern’s milky cum. It even was coming out of her nose and some gurgled out of her mouth as Feather panted heavily.

Stern was first shocked, but the longer she looked, the harder her dick became. Still aroused, his eyes lowered, falling on a soaked pair of panties covering Feathers' pussy. He hit himself to calm down, trying to regain control of himself.

“Do it,” Feather mutters with a breath aflutter

“W… what?” Stern stammered in suprise.

Feather opened up her legs. “I can’t take it anymore. Fuck me, Stern.”

What restrained Stern had faded. With a devilish grin, he reached out and with his teeth ripped off the panties which exposed Feather’s pussy.

Standing over Feather, it dawned on Stern Wing more fully how small and delicate Feather Wind was. Stern would have worried about hurting her if he was thinking straight.

Slowly, Stern pushed himself into Feather. His cock touched the entrance of her pussy. With one thrust, Stern was in, and Feather whimpered.

Stern snapped out of her lust-fueled trance in concern as he asked, “Are… are you okay Feather?!”

“It… it hurts,” she whimpered.

“I’m so sorry! I’ll pull out.” Stern apologized.

“NO!” Feather breathed insistently which further surprised Stern Wing. “Please... keep going.”

Stern grew a daring grin as he asked, “Are you really that determined to know what it feels like to be a mare?”

Feather Wind pounded the top side of the bed with a hoof in hysterical frustration as she frantically cried out instantly, “NOW, Stern Wing! Thrust it in me! I must have more!”

Stern sighed, then said, “Alright, but remember ... you asked for it.”

Slowly, Sturn again pushed forward. At first he only did it half way to test if he could see the indent of his cock on Feather’s belly. Pulling back, a trickle of blood followed, causing Stern to sigh in amusement. “I popped your cherry, Feather. I guess I’m your first.”

Gazing back at Stern Wing with a gaze which melted with pleasure, Feather admitted, “Well, it’s only fair. You were my first. I did not expect to get the opportunity to return the favor, but here we are.”

Stern began pumping harder. Both of them panted loudly. Feather’s cute moans of pleasure like music to his ears.

It finally came again. Stern blew her third load into Feather who then let out the loudest moan yet. Now finally spent, Stern pulled out, almost making a pop sound before Feather started leaking cum on top of Feather’s twitching legs.

Laying next to each other, they both spent a minute catching their breath.

Feather then spoke. “You’re… too… big.”

Ster sighed. “Sorry. I was kind of born that way.”

“Don’t be,” Feather expressed while her breath was still aflutter, trying to catch up. “Let’s … let's do it again,” Feather said with an adorable, soft, loving smile on her face

“Alright, but remember, you asked for it.” Stern reminded.

They kissed. Stern tasted his own cum on her tongue.

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Journal Log 04

This morning was awkward to say the least. I could barely look at Stern after what we did. It’s not like it was our first time together, but we were our normal genders back then. I don’t know what came over me. Maybe it’s the planet, or the gender change, but right now I know I’m not attracted to Stern. Not when she is a he.

But, when I think about last night, my nether feels warm.

Eh, I’m sure it was just a one-time thing. It’s probably just a temporary lapse in sanity that I’ve read about. I used to wonder if such a phenomenon actually existed, but then I met the Doctor and journeyed with him in the Tardis. As extraordinary as this journey has been, it brought my sanity into question on multiple occasions. I do not think I’m the only one who feels this way, either.

Well, we're going to go visit Derpy and Vision on the marrow. The Doctor should have secured us a ride by then. I sincerely hope that seeing them again will surely help me think straight.

Oh, and one more thing. If Stern Wing and I ever get any foals, then I pray to Celestia that our foal never discovers this journal! On the off chance such a naughty foal is reading it right now, then heed the words of a very angry father: PUT THE BOOK DOWN NOW!

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