The amazing awesome mega super adventures of Black Soul the Almighty Alicorn King

Author’s Note - Hello, this is my son’s work. He has asked me to assist him in writing this story as he was told that people made fun of how he wrote. Might I first say, I am ashamed that there are such cruel people that would make fun of him. I had hoped that something as simple as a little site that accepted writing would be acceptable to him and his growing imagination. I have decided to help write this story alongside him so that you cannot use the excuse that he is a bad writer or has no imagination.

• Signed, Shadow Puppet, the horned Diamond Dog.

Chapter One - The Initial Fight with Discord and the World

Black Soul began to fly out to Discord after returning Equestria to its normal state. The once tortoise had realized his true potential after being with Luna that night and found new strength in the body he possessed. As he approached Discord, he noticed that something was not right, he saw Discord being picked on by multiple ponies.

One screamed, “Guess what? You’re a faggot!” It suspiciously looked like Lyra Heartstrings, but had an evil smile plastered on her face.

“Fuck this shit!” Another pony yelled out, putting a hoof on his chin and looking at Discord.

Black Soul went down to those ponies and promptly punched them, breaking their jaw so they would not speak again. He then turned towards Discord and gave his own smile, “You shouldn’t be listening to these hateful ponies, they’re all just angry that you’re out of your stone prison.”

Discord looked down at Black Soul and picked him up. “You are the kindest little pony I’ve ever met.” At that point, Discord’s heart grew three sizes that day and became a pony himself. Black Soul went down to the new pony.

“I can’t believe it!” She squeeled with glee. “You broke the curse!”

Black Soul was soon surrounded by the resident’s of Ponyville and was imbrased by Luna. He looked around him and didn’t see any of the Mane 6 in the crowd, if they had noticed Discord, they would’ve been here.

Suddenly, somepony screamed “The Mane 6 have been stolen!”

The crowd gasped as they magically hovered into the air, exploded into color.

Black Soul gasped as he found himself in a black void. He tried to summon his ultimate form, but found he couldn’t do it.

“You little foal! Having turned this world into your personal grounds, how dare you?” A godly voice called out.

Black Soul couldn’t understand why he couldn’t fight, this power must have been greater than his, such an impossibility! He started shrinking until he was a baby colt and was greeted with the face of Celestia.

“You must realize the trouble you have caused and redeem yourself once again in order to both save the universe and yourself.”

Black Soul looked into Celestia’s eyes and responded, “I will do this, because it is my destiny to do so.”

END CHAPTER ONE