Chapters Fall of equestria: the darkness comes
Prologue 2
In a seaport town in equestria the Ponies were going about their business when all of a sudden, the sound of a horn came, a war horn, and charging up from the beach from viking like longboats were unusual creatures that would be known as the caribou, while some were normal colored others were white or grey.
The ponies panicked and screamed but tried to run but they couldn’t, the Caribou threw their spears at local resistant and butchered them, their shields held against any magic used by the Unicorns, the Pegasi that tried to flee or put up a fight were shot down by arrows. After victory was assured the warlocks, draped in their robes formed a magic circle upon and around the ponies encircled in the town centre.
During the conquest of the crystal empire two new allies joined the caribou to take down the ponies as they were enemies.
Boulders were flung by catapults from upon the hills around the crystal empire hitting the walls of the city or going beyond and hitting crystal ponies, the crystal heart was forming a protective crystal wall around the empire and an army of Royal guards were fighting outside, on the battlefield the caribou were chopping down the royal guards like they were nothing.
You had to hand it to them, they weren’t stupid and were prepared with magic resistant sheilds, not to mention better trained than the guards, the royal guards hadn’t had enough time to prepare when the caribou came, their swords were blunt and badly made, their armor was made of gold which was useless in a fight.
From their balcony shining armor and Cadence watched, a swarm of hideous bat like creatures circled the building hissing and snarling and baring their fangs, “damn it how did they even manage to get this far” Shining armor, “we have to do something, reinforcements will be too late to get here” Cadence agreed.
“Princess we need to get you out of here” one guard said, “are all the civilians evacuated?” Shining armor asked, “yes they are” the guard replied, “then let's go” Shining armor said, “wait maybe we can use the crystal heart to repel them” cadence suggested, Shining Armor pondered this, “it’s worth a try” he said as he grabbed his spear and head down with his guards. However what they failed to see as they passed an open door room was green insect-like cocoons and if you looked closely you could see the vague shape of royal guards.
Cadence and Shining armor continued to run down towards the crystal heart but once they exited into the castle courtyard they stopped dead as they saw the crystal heart missing, “the crystal heart!” Cadence exclaimed, then there came a maniacal laugh. They looked and found queen Chrysalis of the changelings herself with a small patrol of her changelings behind her.
The two guards next to Cadence changed into Changelings and seized her by the hands, Shining armor, held his spear at the ready, “you're helping the Caribou?” he asked stunned, he never thought that would happen, “of course they promised revenge on you ponies and all the love my Changelings could feed upon” Chrysalis chuckled, “release my wife” he ordered pointing his spear at Chrysalis.
“Oh but it’s not that simple, you see this is a challenge for the throne” she said, “you win and both you and your wife shall be taken in alive and not abused in any way, if you lose then you both go through different forms of torture, seperately. Not much of a deal but it’s better than nothing you have to admit”.
Shining armor gritted his teeth, “fine come” he demanded readying his spear, “oh i’m not the one challenging” Chrysalis said slyly, Shining armor heard something behind him, he just in time raised his spear and blocked a sword that had been coming at him, from the shadows a dark pony with a red curved horn stepped forward, his armor despite how clean it was seemed to diminish light instead of reflect it and his white fur rimmed red cape flapped in the arctic wind of the north.
Shining armor turned around expecting an attack from behind, Sombra reappeared but where he had been before he turned into shadow, he slashed his sword at Shining armor, Shining managed to block it with his spear, resulting in it shattering. Sombra then sent a magic blast at Shining armor, this sent shining armor flying into one of the four legs of the castle.
This resulted in his armor becoming badly damaged including losing his helmet, Shining armor drew the sword from his back while getting rid of his arm and leg armor plating, keeping his chest. “Let’s even things out a little bit” Sombra said, removing his own arm and leg armor and his metal crown.
Shining armor was a skilled swordsman which is more than i can say for the rest of the royal guards, but Sombra was better, as the swords clashed Sombra was fighting like this was an everyday sport for him, he was not quite done playing around indeed he wanted a fair fight for a proper claim to the throne of the crystal empire. Sombra battered away the incoming attacks and allowed Shining armor to tire himself out, “you won’t...get away...with this' ' Shining armor painted.
Sombra smirked as Shining armor gave one final swing, Sombra batted the sword out of hand then trapped Shining armor in black crystals only leaving his head and hands free, “well done highness” said Dainne who walked in at that moment carrying a guards head, “take him to a cell and take her to her bed” his caribou soldiers nodded and did as they were told, knocking out Shining armor and tearing Cadance’s clothes off while dragging her.
With the crystal empire under new management, Sombra, Chrysalis and Dainne continued their campaign surrounding the entire kingdom until Canterlot was surrounded by the caribou, the changelings continued to infiltrate the castle, replacing guards, killing the males and kidnapping the females for the caribou troops. However there weren’t just infiltrators but also traitors within canterlot
The day of final battle finally arrived, the elements of harmony were taken to Canterlot by their bearers and prepared themselves for this day, but things wouldn’t go as their plans hoped it would.
Celestia and Luna sat on their twin thrones, both in their battle armor, Celestia had an axe and Luna had a scepter with a crescent moon, both looking highly majestic and ready for war despite their efforts for peace. Messages back had been rather rude and to the point that no peace was possible, they were both actually kind of scared of Dainne and his Caribou, of how quickly they had taken over the land.
“Are we sure this will work sister?” Luna asked, “honestly i’m a little worried it might not, but if that happens then we shall fight” Celestia said, “that’s what i like to hear” Luna said smirking a little. “The filthy caribou forces will be here in two days time, we should prepare” said their nephew prince Blueblood, how he was related to either of them was a mystery considering his manner and arrogance, he wasn’t even properly dressed to fight, more like stay behind and flee when things get bad.
“Thank you Nephew you may leave now” Celestia said, “but aunty i want to suggest a battle plan” Blueblood argued, “you heard my sister Leave young nephew” Luna demanded, Blueblood reluctantly left fuming slightly. “I worry about him sometimes,” Luna admitted, “as do i” Celestia agreed, “what of Twilight and her friends?” Luna asked, “let them have one last night of fun before they need to be ready for war” Celestia said reassuringly.
In the cafeteria Just imaging twilight and spike with wings
“I know sugarcube we all worried, we don’t know what powers these caribou have” Applejack agreed, “whatever we can kick their asses anyday with the elements” Rainbow said confident(or rather arrogant) to the end, “it’s not about the elements being powerful enough to defeat anything it’s about their tactics as well, what they can do” Sunset pointed out, “i agree with sunset, we have no idea what this enemy can do” she then smiled, “but i believe we can defeat them together”.
“I believe too Darling” Rarity said “and afterwards we can have a superduperbigyeahthewarisoverparty” Pinkie blurted, “yeah” Spike said with a smile.
They all began to head to their dorms, they had their showers and went to sleep, Spike being Twilight's sister slept in Twilight's room on his own bed, Sunset remained awake though she could not get to sleep. She was wondering what to do if the elements fail and they lose.
However a figure creeped through the corridor on Rarity’s floor which was ground level luckily for him, the two guards recognised him and smiled sadistically at each other in glee.
When Rarity had arrived she had stripped off and if there had been anyone watching, revealed a pair of soft white breasts under a black bra and a black throng that was wedged into her soft ass, she entered the bathroom, closing and locking the door.
She took off her bra and thong, turned on the hot water in the shower and released a sigh of relief as she entered the hot water. Her purple mane sagged down due to it getting wet, eventually after 5 minutes she stepped out grabbing a towel and drying herself thoroughly.
She then styled her mane into its normal style once it was dry, brushing it as well before putting her bra and thong back on. She stepped out of her bathroom grabbing her night gown as she did so.
But before she could put it on, someone grabbed her and placed a cloth over her mouth. There was chloroform in it and within minutes of struggling she fell unconscious.
“Oh revenge is so sweet” said the intruder, Blueblood, as he took out some rope, tied her hands and legs together, blindfolded and gagged Rarity.
He opened the doors and outside there were some Changelings, a female one hopped down and took the form of Rarity including her thong and bra. “Make sure you act in character” Blueblood warned, as she handed Rarity to the leader of the group who nodded and flew off.
With one element unknowingly out of the picture the day of the battle was a disaster, fire reigned down on canterlot. The caribou used their sheilds to block the incoming arrows, compared to the caribou the Pegasi who flew in were incompetent fighters.
Very soon the elements began to prepare a spell, while Celestia and Luna opened the gates and met the caribou head on to by the elements' time. Diane, however informed by Blueblood, knew of this plan and so challenged Celestia to single combat.
While his high generals and Kaine the warlock infiltrated canterlot with the changelings, Thrain fought Luna in their own single combat challenge.
Instead of turning all the caribou to stone, the spell weakened all the mares physically making them unable to fight while making the males turn on their own and easier succumb to the caribou way.
Despite weakening themselves Celestia and Luna fought but Daine and Thrain won the single combat and in an act of humiliation tore the sisters Armor off and raped them publicly.
Spike was captured and was tortured in the dungeons of canterlot, the elements were separated so as to not be able to scene together, Celestia and Luna were kept as Daine and Thrains personal sex slaves in canterlot.
To keep themselves in further control all females had their wings and/or horns removed to be unable to use magic. The barrier around equestria was made permanent so outside help was unavailable, however hope was not lost.
Sunset had escaped the campaign and for a year had avoided the caribou and even if she was captured she had managed to escape before her horn was cut off. But to win a war sometimes unexpected circumstances have to be used.
Unknown P.O.VThe witchblade shall be mine ” I thought to myself as I was chained in a prison known as Tartarus, honestly though they call this a hell, I was never religious(hell I was a fucking mobster who sometimes had to burn priests) but I know what hell looks like.
The darkness practically pulled my first girlfriend down to hell, and then turned her soul into a hundred tiny bits unable to return. That was it for Jenny, shit I’m pathetic ain’t I, “we must escape” the voice of the darkness told me, no fucking kidding but with these chains no way old Jackie estacado is going anywhere.
Author's Note
Again sorry for any spelling mistakes, and yes sorry if the pictures aren’t as you imaging but they are the closest I could find to help visualise the story as I hope it does
Fall of equestria: the darkness comes
Chapter one
“So you're the Estacado i’ve heard about” said a voice somewhere, those monsters weren’t really real, they were illusions however he could still feel every strike they did to him, a little trick of the collar, even off it’s influence would remain for a little while. Jackie noticed bugs all around him, scurrying around, “i am sorry that i was early, if i had known i wouldn’t have done it” the voice continued, the bugs then scattered and in front of Jackie was a scorpion-man of sorts, it was not pleasant it even had two tails
“Well then come at me you big bastard” Jackie said mockingly, the scorpion man coiled both it tails back then shot them forward but Jackie sidestepped to the left and wrapped the right chain around the two tails and the chain snap, the Scorpion man stumbled stunned, while Jackie pulled on the other chain the scorpion recovered and readied for another strike.
“Time to die this time!” it yelled as it launches itself at Jackie, but the chain finally broke and a long bit of it was swung at it in the process and sent the scorpion falling of the podium and Jackie jumped down and with his strength punched a whole clear through the scorpions exoskeleton and chest, it turned to dust.
Jackie pried the torso collar with his bare hands, black mist began to immite from Jackies hands, as small craters formed on the floor and walls and darklings crawled from them, darklings were imp like creatures, stank something awful, often carried weapons and had rather casual outfits “ello their Monkey” said one holding an assault rifle which was in fairness slightly oversized, “good to see you all as well” Jackie said, “we kept these for ya monkey” said another pulling out twi steampunk like pistols.
“Thanks y’all now lets go kick ass” Jackie said, “we won’t be getting the witchblade by standing around here”, “indeed we won’t let’s go quickly” the voice of the darkness said, Jackie walked up the stairs, two stone creatures formed in front of him, one shot to the head each sent them crumbling back down.
Jackie continued to kill anything that attacked him, finally he had reached ground level and a serpent like darkling coiled around the three headed dog Cerberus, trapping, binding it and making it unable to escape or stop him from escaping, “are you sure you want to go out?” Tirek, the former demon centaur warlord, asked, “I've been stuck in this shithole for long enough,” Jackie said.this’ll make it easier on my darklings, they’ll be less weak now” was what he thought as he closed the doors and walked off into the woods.
Ponyville a few weeks later
*WAHP* *SMACK*
Sunset’s eyes snapped back open and her thought process stopped as a riding crop hit her in the flank, she tried to scream but the ball gag in her mouth prevented her from doing so, she was naked, ball-gagged with her hands tied behind her backs, her horns had been removed and collars had been placed on her neck.
This was the humiliation that females had to go through every day, hell even the changeling females had to bow to this new order, after the fall Chrysalis had been betrayed by her kin and forced into the same thing. “Serves her right” Sunset thought bitterly, “yeah scream cunt, scream” mocked her capture, one of the treacherous males who was in one of the rooms in a now rather popular bar where the females were to serve their new masters.
Sometimes including being publicly or privately raped, Trixie was being a performer but not the way she liked it, a caribou was raping her, adding insult to injury by putting a highly revealing version of her outfit on.
“LUTH MPH GOTH” Sunset tried to say through the gag, “what’s that slut, your mumbling” said the Caribou rapist as he continued to smack her flank with the crop, he must have really liked the sound of the crop hitting the flesh.
After the day was done and the Caribou all went to bed, Sunset, Trixie and Starlight were all thrown into a cage with nothing but brown blankets to cover them up, “are you two okay?” Sunset asked the unicorns, “what about you, i could her you getting your flank smacked by one of those pervs” Starlight said, “trixie just wants out” Trixie said, “relax i may not have magic but i still have skill” Sunset said as she drew out a key.
The two smiled at their friends craftyness, Sunset hurriedly unlocked the cage and they sneaked through the bar being careful not to get spotted, they made their way to the crystal tree of the castle of friendship, “uh shouldn’t trixie and friends be going away from town” Trixie asked, “no we need to find the others, there is a resistance somewhere and we need to help” Sunset whispered back.
Sneaking around they entered castle and eavesdropped on any soldiers who spoke loud enough to be heard, they saw fellow mares being raped all around, and their was the smell of sex in the air. Some volunteered to fellow troops, those whose minds were dissolved by the caribous magic to be sluts, till finally they found a coordination room where the general, General Kaitle, lay out his battle plans and received information.
“Look around for anything useful” Starlight said, Trixie however had a better use for herself as she saw the general coming now, “Trixie will distract the general” Trixie said, “what!? No!” Sunset said, “you wanna be discovered and killed or worse punished?” Trixie asked in a furious whisper. Unable to raise complaints, the two let her sit down seductively at the entrance of the room.
“Well well what do we have here” Kaitle asked himself admiring the mare, “oh big bad general, may i do the pleasure of pleasuring you?” Trixie asked in a seductive voice, licking the spot where his dick would be, “oh of course but let’s do it somewhere more privately” Kailte said lustily as he picked her up and onto his shoulder, giving her ass a little smack as he carried her off.
This had given Starlight and Sunset enough time to find a message, apparently just as a casual chat between the generals, General Moriox had Pinkie in Fillidelphia he had even quipped, ‘looks like she can make anyone smile ’ in the letter as Moriox had never been one for smiling or cracking jokes. One was a complaint letter about Blue Bloods arrogance about his security in Manehattan, ‘don’t forget you are guarding the element of generosity. PS I bet she isn’t as generous now’ an obvious clue towards Rarity, but that was it and no one else.
“Alright we have what we need” Starlight said as she wrote on a piece of parchment that was made of a magical paper that wouldn’t be destroyed from wear or tear or natural elements, this was useful when delivering useful information. The two then snuck out successfully from the castle, and made their way to the edge of town, they had no will to abandon Trixie but they had no choice and they thought Trixie would understand.
“Hey you where the hell are you going” shouted a caribou who had spotted Starlight, the two ran for it, their breasts bobbing as they ran, the alarm had been sounded and Caribou were now on high alert, Starlight pulled down a stack of wooden boxes onto some caribou chasing them.
“Go!” Starlight called out to Sunset who trusted Starlight and didn’t want to get caught again, she continued to run into the forest.
Castle of friendship in the meantime
The General was livid, he ordered for Trixie to be sent back to the bar and to do extra ‘work’ hours and to send Starlight to the dungeons for ‘interrogation’, he also sent a letter to Daine, Daine wouldn’t be pleased at all so he also sent a patrol. He was so furious that he actually kicked one of the slaves in his castles.
Everfree forest
“Okay, tomorrow i’ll go find the resistance and my friends” she muttered to herself, finding an intact bed and using a curtain as a blanket, the faces of her friends being the last thing before she fell asleep.
Crystal empire
“That’s pain yes” Sombra hissed, “in the deep in the darkness where you sent me after taking my rightful throne”, “it was your throne but then it was mine” Shining armor spat back, “and now it’s mine again even if i have to serve under another to have it” Sombra shot back, “and what are you doing with my wife?” Shining armor demande furiously as he struggled against the bonds that held his hands and legs to the upright operating table.
“Oh she is satisfying the legions greatly thanks for asking” Sombra chuckled nastily, Shining armor lunged or tried to and tried to power up his horn but off course it had been cut off, low level unicorns had their horns snapped or broken off, or had a ring put around it to prevent magic higher level unicorns had to have their horns carefully cut.
Sombra chuckled in amusement, “nice try” he said as he exited and left Shining armor in the blackness, his mane a mess as his skin was, his pride destroyed and his wife in even worse chains.
Sombra however after leaving began to sense something, something from the crystal cock, he ran to the chamber of the artifact, calling for the warlock stationed there, when they saw it, it was somewhat flashing dimly a white light. “What is it warlock” Sombra demanded, “hhmm” the warlock mused, “i have no idea i’m afraid but i can study it for you” the warlock said, “alright but make it quick” SOmbra snapped not really believing anything bad would happen.
He was of course wrong, as the moment the warlock touched it he began screaming and clutching his head in absolute pain, his mouth began to foam and his eyes glowed white and leaked black smoke.
Canterlot castle
Perched upside down from the buildings of canterlot was the night guard that were now only loyal to daine and were now issued to guard the castle at night while the day guards slept. The night guards were actually a sub species of pony known as Threstals and of course they were all male and some were raping the females as the new customary.
There were also some small war bats stationed with the night guard. But that was bye bye.
Daine’s right hand shot up from its place on Celestia’s thigh and began groping her breasts roughly, molding and squeezing them before his eyes like a prize he had so rightfully earned, Celestia moaned in pain and ecstasy from Daine’s fondling. “You’re very lucky i didn’t have to show you your place with my bare hands like my brother did with your cunt sister slut” he whispered on an especially hard thrust, Celestia cried in pain as she felt Daine slam further into her.
There was a knock on the door to Celestia’s relief, “enter” Daine said slightly annoyed, a young caribou soldier burst in out of breath, at least he had remembered his manners with knocking on the door just incase the king had been busy, “my lord-t-the-the warlocks” he stammered, Daine wasted no time in pulling himself out of celestia painfully(for her) and rushed to get his clothes on as he rushed down to the warlocks study.
“AAAAAHHHHH!” came a cry as he entered the chamber, the warlocks were all clutching their heads in pain and on their knees, their mouths foaming and their eyes glowing white with black smoke leaking from them, “Kaine what is it?” he hurriedly asked his brother.
“THE DARKNESS IS COMING” he screamed. “HE HAS COME FOR THE GAUNTLET, DEATH, DESPAIR AND RUIN WILL FOLLOW HIM AND COME TO HIS ENEMIES, HIS MINIONS SHALL SHOW NO MERCY AND OUR WORLD WILL DROWN IN BLOOD AS HE...HEAAAAAAAAAAGGGGHHHH!” Kaine finished as all of the warlocks' heads exploded save for his and they all turned to ash, being the most powerful of the warlocks must have spared Thrain the death, which Daine was mightily relieved about he was his brother after all.
But his eyes were still smoking and he was still on his knees with his mouth still foaming, “brother” he said hurriedly aiding the warlock as his second brother Thrain and the honor guard rushed in, the honor guard wore only armor and not the flash jackets and trousers the high-generals wore and their helmets had visors.
“what has happened?” Thrain asked, “i honestly don’t know brother” Daine said then turned to the honor guard, “take him to the infirmary and make sure he recovers well, we have some questioning of the royal cunts to do” Thrain smiled amused as he figured out what his brother was planning.
Everfree forest
“By my count i’d say a lot monkey” the imp said as he began eating the cockatrice, “but one of the bats reported back saying that their is a town nearby old gunslinger style, cowfolk sort of place and with a tone of apple tree’s” “appleloosa” Jackie said putting it all together, “good to know that place is still standing, the cider their is brilliant”.
With that he walked to the edge of the forest where it dramatically changed to desert and he could see the town which seemed to have been a little bigger than when he last came, he then saw that there were multiple military tents stationed around the outside of the town and even some makeshift buildings.
“Is that a town or a military camp?” Jackie quipped, as he entered he noticed the townsfolk were acting rather strange. First of all inside building, sidealleys and even on sidewalks their were male ponies Caribou fucking female ponies publically, Jackie was not horrified by this he had seen rape before not that he had committed any form of it though he was confused and oddly curious. But first he went to a good salon to get a drink while he waited for the train.
The residence of the saloon gave him a slight glance but then returned to what they were doing, for some it was raping the waitress’, “hey what exactly is a creature like you doing here” a large Caribou asked, with a ginger male pony in black clothes with a cowboy hat and a dagger and whip on his hip.
“Just waiting for the next train to Canterlot” Jackie said, “why?” the pony named Braeburn asked, “want to speak with whoever’s in charge about something important” Jackie lied as he asked for a drink, he really intended to infiltrate the castle and steal the witch blade. The waitress who wore nothing but her apron passed him a beer, then a second caribou grabbed her and pulled her upstairs, “what exactly is it with that around here?” Jackie asked the caribou, gesturing around at all the sex, “oh you must be new around here, king Daine overthrew Celestia and Luna and now we are free to put these sluts in their place” the big Caribou said, “Daine is in Canterlot?” Jackie asked “what is it to you?” the caribou asked, “I wish to meet with him, it's important.” Jackie said as he stood up, the train to canterlot was arriving and he didn’t want to miss it.
“Hold it, why?” Braeburn demanded, “none of your business” Estacado snapped, “oh yes it is i am incharge of this town for Daine so fess up. you out for him” Braeburn spat back, “you with the princess sluts?”, “You don’t want to challenge me, I only wish to talk to the king,” Jackie said, starting to get annoyed.
But all the other caribou and indeed some of the male ponies were now looking at him suspiciously some even raising their weapons which were all bladed, Jackie himself formed his long barreled pistol in his right hand, “your coming with me” Braeburn said as he brought out his whip, “don’t resist” he added raising the whip to deliver a hard lash but quick as a wink Jackie brought the pistol up and shot a single bullet point black shot through Braeburns eye socket and skull.
There was now a large hole that went from the right eye through to the back of the head, it was so perfect that you could see right through to the other side, the Caribou looked at the dead Braeburn and then back to Jackie who lowered his weapons.
“Now if you will excuse me” he said as he left the bar and saw the train was about to leave, “Fuck ” he thought as he sprinted after it but then an arrow was shot into his leg Jackie stumbled to the ground face first. He was then grabbed by the arms by two caribou. The big one from the bar was there, “take him to the high general and let him deal with him” he ordered the two caribou soldiers.
“High general” Jackie thought, this could possible help him, he could easily break out of their grip but he needed to get to canterlot and maybe this high general could help him so he allowed himself to be grabbed and thrown into a cell with female pony, “oh hello big boy” the female said in a seductive manor “how’d a do” Jackie replied politely, “so what exactly did you do to get in here?” the female asked, she was a pegasus with vermilion skin, green eyes and green hair.
“Oh just killed some guy named Braeburn i believe” Jackie replied, “oh well he was the pony sheriff around these parts so not much of a surprise, i got a bit too drunk one night, not that anyone complained” Jackie’s cellmate said, “well i think i might need a favour of getting out of here” jackie said seductively, he was a well known womanizer back home among the gangs.
“Oh i think i like the sound of this” female said, “names Rose Rain by the way and what’s in it for me” she asked, “names Jackie and what you wanting” Jackie asked in reply, “well i’ve been wanting to go work at the local Saloon so can you get me a job their” she asked, “and what about you what do you get out of it?” Rose rain asked, “I gain the trust of these caribou and get an audience with the high general and talk about an audience with their king” “oh you got a deal” Rose rain chuckled putting her hand out to shake “deal” Jackie said shaking her hand.
“So do you want to start?” she asked as she pressed her exposed breasts to his chest, Jackie's response was despawning his mask to gently bite at the left breast as well as grope her rump, this made her gasp in ecstasy, this groping went on for a minute, the Caribou guard who was secretly watching him and had not heard a word they had said watched in interest to see how it would develop.
“Why don’t you bend over know and see how handle anal work” Jackie asked though inwardly he cringed he was not a vocal womanizer and perfered for the females to make the first move. “Oh of course anything for one of you male masters' ' Rose Rain replied even more seductively as she got up on her hands and knees and raised her rump in the air slightly, Jackie's armor retracted revealing his pale muscular body and handsome face.
His cock was also revealed as it hardened and he slide into Rose’s vigina, she moaned and groaned in delight as well as pain, the only armor remaining on Jackie was his silver legs and forearms metal shell, Jackie slide his members into Rose rains vigina resulting in both moaning in pleasure.
A little later the high general called Baldr, stormed in, “so where is this creature?” he asked the large caribou who had arrested Jackie, “he is here my lord” the big caribou said, “right you little-” Baldr said but then he saw that Jackie was having his dick sucked by Rose Rain as her head bobbed up and down, “oh i apologize i didn’t realize you were pleasuring yourself” Baldr said to Jackie, “no problem we’ve been at this for awhile now so no worries” Jackie said reassuringly.
“We can come back later-” Baldr suggested, “oh no man i was actually wanting to speak to you” Jackie said as he stood up, Rose stopped sucking his cock and Jackie's green body armor once again covered his body and his mask covered his face. “Oh well then come on then” the High general said opening the door, “remember our deal” Rose Rain said as he left.
“What Deal?” the large Caribou asked suspiciously, “oh she just wants to walk at the saloon i went to when you arrested me in return for pleasuring me” jackie said smoothly, “so can you sort something out?”, “uh get her to the Saloon,” Baldr said, he was generous in some ways. Rose waved Jackie goodbye as they went their separate ways. The little date Jackie had had with Rose seemed to have made him more trustworthy to the Caribou it seemed as the general.
“A little cruel but you cut off their horns and wings so they can’t use magic right?” Jackie asked as they walked into the camp, “only the very naughty ones, the rest get their wings strapped to their back and horns get a magic resistant ring around them” Baldr said, “clever move their, lot smarter than most of the villains i’ve met on my travels” Jackie said remembering the stories of all the defeats of the villains in Tartarus.
“Why thank you” Baldr said as they entered his room, it was luxurious with bondage equipment and nice artistry, “nice place you got here mr Baldr” Jackie said sitting down, “ thank you, now. what do you want? and what are you anyway?” Baldr asked, getting straight to business, “names Jackie, I'm human but with some extraordinary powers and I want to speak with Daine about something important” Jackie said then had a brain wave “it’s important to me and important to your king to know about”.
“Really well i doubt that” Baldr said unconvinced, “really?, you want to be the one blamed when everyone realizes you're the first one to hear about this and not inform the king?” Jackie asked in a crafty manner, “You're a smart one I'll give you that but why is it important to the great King Daine?” Baldr asked, “because the mares could use it to free themselves if it falls into their hands” Jackie said calmly, but Baldr jumped to his hooves.
“WHAT!``No you're lying,” Baldur exclaimed, “that’s why I want to talk to your king and, so what do I need to do to get an audience with the king?” Jackie replied standing up himself, “I'll see what I can do for ya shall i?” he said, “do what ya need to do to get me a fucking audience i don’t care if i have to suck his dick” Jackie said impatiently as he exited.
Baldr honestly couldn’t blame him for the impatience, he didn’t trust him but as i stated before he was more generous than the other high generals in a sense, he wrote a letter to king Daine himself, telling Diane about Jackie and politely asking politely(not to tick Daine off) what he can do to gain and audience with him.
He then lit a candle with a symbol on it, this burnt the script with green flames, the symbol on the candle made the flames magical and actually teleported the letter to whoever the sender wanted to send it to. It was inspired by the dragon, Spikes, magic, not that it does him any good where he was.
Jackie meanwhile was spending the next few hours just observing, he noticed that while some of the females were almost ecstatic with pleasure with the way the Caribou treated them, others were begging to be spared. “Wonder if some are brainwashed while others are not. Either that or their brains had degraded with being fucked so much” Jackie thought, “this seems enjoyable to me” the voice of the darkness said, “of course you would think that” Jackie shot back, sometime he really hated how the darkness acted.
Canterlot castle
He wore red Armor that was different from the other caribou as well as two glowing blue bulbs on his antlers that gave him some kind of magical power.
Over the many months she had been kept as a slave in the dungeons she had been allowed to move freely around but forced to crawl on her hands, what had been more humiliating was that a leather strap had been placed to keep her tail up to allow any guards down their to fuck her as they pleased.
“What’s the fucking darkness cunt” Gryttr demanded as he rammed into her bending over himself slightly to grope her melons, making Twilight groan even more in pleasure.
“I..I do-don’t know what the darkness is?” Twilight said with begging eyes, “you said it so many times now that I’m starting to believe it” Gryttr said as he forcefully removed his members from Twilight and left her on the floor of her cell.
“What is this Darkness the Caribou are talking about?” Twilight thought to herself, “oh I hope he can help us” that was her last hopeful thought of the day as two guards one pony the other caribou walked in and positioned themselves at both ends of twilight so that one may get his dick sucked while the other raped her from behind.
“Here have this” the Caribou guard chuckled as a ring but was forced into Twilights mouth, “no plearrrggghh” she said in an attempt to object.
Thrain was in his room, their in a huge steel cage was Luna, former princess of the moon, her limbs had been tied in intricate knots around four of the bars and put her limbs under stess, her legs spread wide to make her anus visible and more accessible to enter.
Her mouth had a metal bit in it that strained the sides of her mouth and was made of something far too foul to be metal. Asif she wasn’t under enough strain, her main and tail had been tried together by a short bit of rope that made even the slightest movement put them under strain, it also made her ass more accessible to enter.
she had done a very naughty thing to get herself into that position, however Thrain had decided that today he would lessen the punishment a little, after all it had been a month since that incident that put Luna in her predicament.
So he replaced the rope with a longer one and instead tied one end to her collar which marked her as a slave, while Luna’s eyes still held great hatred for the Caribou she was very relieved that the strain had been taken off. Thrain then removed the bit from Luna’s mouth.
“Are you going to at least try to be good” Kaine asked, “why should I to you Caribou scum” she spat Kaine shock his head, “you put yourself in this position by misbehaving a month ago but I ain’t here to tell you that” Thrain said.
“Then what are you here for Thrain?!” She asked harshly, “I want to know what the darkness is?” He said, “their are many great darknesses in equestria, and I thought you lot were smart” she said insultingly, Kaine growled in announce, “that warrior spirit is respectful but it won’t help you but I am talking about ‘THE’ fucking Darkness” Kaine said to her bending down to her eye level.
Both glared at each other for a good long while. then there was a pop sound and a letter dropped down onto Kaines dress, “we’ll discuss this another time” he said as he put her abit back into her mouth “mmmppphh mpph” she mumbled though it.
Thrain went over to his desk and opened the letter, from the steal on the front it was clear it was from Baldr, but when he opened it and red about this Jackie, he began to get a sneaking suspicion about their being a connection between this Jackie and the Darkness. “Daine may want to hear about this” he told himself.
Author's Note
Okay sorry for any bad grammer in this, hope this story is enjoyable for you all and can’t wait for this to continue.
Oh and in case your wondering i don’t own any pictures that I post in this story, and I don’t own MLP or The Darkness.
MLP is owned by hasbro and Darkness is owned by Image comics
Fall of equestria: the darkness comes
Chapter 2Canterlot Castle
That was when two new figures joined in, “finally they have arrived. What took you so long?” Daine demanded, it was Blueblood the traitor and Sombra of the Crystal empire, “so I hear there's a new creature in equestria” Sombra said, not answering the question of what took them so long. “Yes, high general Baldur says his name is Jackie,” Kaine informed, “and you believe that this is the darkness that Thrain prophesied?” Blueblood asked, “well-” Daine admitted, “then I suggest we kill him now before he destroys us” Blueblood then partially yelled.
“All he says is that he wants to talk to me” Daine said, “by the way how are the attacks on the zebra empire?”, “not good, if it weren’t for the barrier magic barrier Equestria might have been invaded my now” Blueblood said with a hint of fear in his voice, “well if you had me on the front line we might have actually gained some ground” Thrain said, “shut up i don’t need your aid” Blueblood snapped, “your arrogance will be your downfall young prince” Sombra warned, “speaking from experience are we well i am actually clever and not honorable like you, honor is a big weakness” Blueblood snapped back.
“AS much as i enjoy your BICKERING, we have more important matters” Daine said impatiently, then had a brain wave, they were having trouble with a small rebellion somewhere close to ponyville, they were trying to conquer the dragon lands to show their might, the griffons for their military skill and the Zebra’s for their resources, according to the letter Jackie had a weapon that could shot a hole through Breaburns head.
“I think he could help us” Daine said, Blueblood gasped, “But...But...but what about what Kaine said?” Blueblood demanded, “he said death will come to his enemies so we won’t be his enemies” Daine explained, “oh I see where this is heading” Thrain said, “clever move my king” Kaine added.
“I say we kill him!” Blueblood said, “you aren’t the king of equestria, Daine is and I am king of the Crystal empire so if he was in my kingdom I would make the choice whether to kill him or not” Sombra growled bearing his filed teeth at the former nephew of Celestia. Generally speaking even if the crystal empire was supposedly part of equestria, this was true, the moment you were a hoof over the boarding you were within Sombra’s authority.
“and i am not in my kingdom so it is Daine’s choice” this was also true, Sombra and Daine had agreed as part of the alliance contract that they had to respect the choice of the other in each other's lands of power. Blueblood however figured he would be the last laugh as he was building a castle in Manehattan, “he still killed a equestrian citizen so we have to charge him” Blueblood said.
Daine who had been smiling scowled and sighed, he did not want to pick favorites so he agreed, “alright let’s send him to the prison in Manehattan, he killed one pony and we can’t charge him for anything else” Daine sighed, they all bowed, Blueblood with a slight smirk of victory.
Castle of the two sisters
Zecora of course!
She might know where the resistance was and she was good at hiding, Sunset exitted the castle and ran in the direction of Zecora’s home, Zecora was a shaman from the zebra country, she was also a healer and expert in herbs. After a run in with three long timber wolf’s she came to the insight of Zecora home, well actually a totem that was supposed to keep timberwolves away by warding off all evil spirits.
Her face however fell when she saw that some of the totems were replaced with norse looking once, norse meant from Scandeernavia, the home of the caribou, he heart was in her mouth as she cautiously walked up to Zecora’s tree house and that was literal a house with its insides hollowed out and made into a house. Chimes hanging off the tree.
Their was Zecora alright when Sunset looked through the window, but her fears were confirmed when she saw that Zecora’s hands were tied above her head by a rope connected to the roof and a Caribou with black tattoo’s over his body(including his antlers) was doing what appeared to be a voodoo trance over the fireplace, with candles around him.
Zecora was gagged and her hooves barely touched the ground and many of her herbology equipment was replaced with caribou voodoo artifacts with the exception of some, possibly to heal caribou or other stuff. “Damn it, i got to save her” she muttered as she began looking around the tree house’s outside.
Inside the Caribou, who’s name was Throtr the druid from Scandeernavia, “ah it is ready” he finally said satisfied, he stood up and took the gag of Zecora’s mouth, “i must admit you did a good job at hiding from us all these months” Throtr said to Zecora, Zecora no longer bothered rhyming so she just asked, “what is ready?”.
(author note: i’m just not good at making rhymes up on the spot so sorry but unless i think of something Zecora won’t be rhyming but feel free to help me out in the comment section below)
“It is a special magic that will help look into the mind of a prisoner of general Kaitle, don’t ask me why” Throtr replied, he was willing to give information to someone he saw as a fellow druid even if she was a lowly female. “So all those herbs you threw into the fire and the symbols on your skin-” Zecora began. “The symbols are just what i use to do voodoo, the warlocks are the ones who use real caribou magic, as for the herbs well it’s the ingredients needed in the fire for the magic like the herbs in your cauldron” Throtr said.
Zecora was indeed fascinated by this even if she was a prisoner, there was a knocking at the door, Throtr gagged Zecora once more and opened the door, two caribou guards walked in dragging starlight glimmer with her hands tied behind her back and a bag over her head, “ah my friends the spell is ready” Throtr said hospitality, “good the Slut would not speak verbally so we need that, in order to find the whore who escaped us” one of the guards said.
They brought her to her knees on one side of the fire and Throtr sat in a cross legged position opposite, “wha-what is going-?” Starlight asked, confused, then spotted the zebra, “Zecora!?” Zecora nodded despite her situation. “Alright then student of princess Twilight” Throtr said, “you will tell us where your friend is and you shall be treated...a little better” the offer was tempting but Starlight wasn’t fooled, “no i won’t rat out Sunset'' she spat.
Throtr shugged “Fine we get the information either way” he said in a very creepy manner, he then stretched his arms wide, he then began chanting and moving his torso in a circle, the chanting grew in volume as his eyes began to glow bright yellow and a smoke of yellow rose from the flames, the smoke swirled around, slithering towards Starlight, she squirmed in the iron grip of her caribou captures.
The smoke shot up her nose, down her mouth and into her ears, her own eyes began to glow, she coughed and gagged for a second but then stopped in a trance seemingly the Caribou guards let her go and she didn’t do nothing, not that she could do much with her arms tied behind her back and her horn cut off.
Zecora watched in fascination as this happened, this kind of stuff was right up her alley, “so where is Sunset? let the fire show what your mind reveals” Throtr said, Starlight gasped as the fire grew and a vision of the events of ponyville appeared, the vision changed to that of the castle of the two sisters, then it died down, “is that it?” one of the caribou soldiers said in disappointment, “not much is it” his friend agreed, “no she believes Sunset is at the castle of the two sisters” Throtr explained “i agree it’s not much but it’s a start”.
With no other choice and no other options, the Caribou guards exitted the house, closed the door and went to get some backup in order to find Sunset, she was a personal friend of the element bearers after all and it wouldn’t do to underestimate any of them.
“Now my pet” Throtr said slyly as he stood up and pulled off her cloth bra, Zecora became suddenly terrified, “let’s have some fun” he began rubbing one of her tittes with his hands, he then began squeezing them and watched the zebra moan. But before the session could escalate there was the sound of a scuffle outside, Throtr grabbed his staff and cautiously made his way towards the door.
When the Caribou guards had left Sunset decided it was time to move, she drew both swords, silently as she could she crept up onto them, the two were two busy conversing to notice, Sunset then stabbed the first one in the back and slit the throat of the other when he turned in surprise. “Sunset!” Starlight exclaimed joyfully as her bonds were cut, “come on let’s go help Zecora” Sunset said as she handed the sword to Starlight.
When Throtr opened the door he had been stabbed by two swords in the stomach, he fell to his knees, “that was for interrogating me” Starlight said, Sunset cut the ropes binding Zecora who tore the gag off as Throtr bled out and shagged to the side and Starlight drew both swords out covered in blood.
“I thank you my friends, but we should flee unless you want more Caribou here to arrest us” she said as she began packing what remained of her things, mostly just herbs and spices and the occasional bandage. As they ran Sunset asked what she wanted to say, “do you know where the resistance is?” Zecora turned to her, “they had to flee Caribou patrols were getting to high in this area” Zecora said, “i stayed because i wanted to help anypony who came this way, but about a month ago i was captured by that Druid Throtr, though i will not lie his voodoo was fascinating”.
“Well, any idea where the resistance went?” she asked as rain began coming down and the wind picked up, “Ghastly gorge, if we had a map i could show you where” Zecora said, “well luckily we do have a map” Sunset said with a smile on her face as her hopes rose.
Appleloosa
“Why are you wasting your time Jackie?Why not kill them all?” the voice of the darkness said to him, “Because i don’t want to make any more enemies” Jackie said as he aimed down the sights of the shotgun pistol. The guard then walked up and opened the gate, “come on your being moved to a prison until further notice” the Caribou said, Jackie wanting to make friends and new he did just commit murder and so would have to face charges for it and he was just going to bit the bullet and do it.
Baldr was waiting for him at the prison train and he gave Jackie a piece of paper as he boarded the train, it was a prison train, a steam locomotive with carriages that was meant to hold prisoners, Jackie cuffed was put in a cell near the front of the train, their were three others and all four of them had their cuffs attached to chains attached to the floor and forced to sit down.
“Uh another new guy not impressed” Muttered the minotaur, “back off” said the other minotaur, “we’re all going to prison plus i hear this guy killed Breaburn straight raw” the first minotaur took a double take, “really huh must admit he had it coming” the first minotaur chuckled, “yup” the tough looking red pony, with green minotaur like armor and outfit said with slight sadness in his voice.
“Manehattan? Slumblood?” Jackie repeatedly confused, he could only assume that Manehattan was a new city in equestria as for slumblood, “why is it called Slumblood?” Jackie asked, baffled, “because the ruler of Manehattan built it and it’s basically an insult to people below the upper class” Heavy hand informed, “Prince blueblood?” Jackie said, flummoxed for a second, “the traitor prince, former nephew of Celestia and Luna(however that happened) and now ruler of Manehattan and capture of the element of generosity” Big Mac informed.
After a few hours Jackie asked another question, “so how did you three get arrested?” “Well after the fall I met these two and they trained me and gave me my armor” Big Mac said, “we’re raiders, well bandits away but we got caught when we tried to steal from a noble on his way to Appleloosa” Heavy hand added.
After a few more hours they arrived, Blueblood looked at the prisoner's who had been taken off the front carriage of the train, mostly male ponies but there was the occasional minotaur and diamond dog. There on a seat on a podium sat Blueblood scowling in disgust, he glared a particular set of sharpened daggers at Jackie who only scowled back not that you could tell with his mask on.
Around him(to Jackies surprise) were four armored male Changelins, the had small blade on the underside of their forearms and they all were standing to attention around blueblood, Blueblood then stood up and marched from one end of the line to the other “so you are the new peasants that are due for Slumblood prison” he said in disgust, he spat in Big Mac’s face, “and this new creature, i’ll be out for you remember that” Blueblood said in an attempt to be tough, “well then you better bury me deep” Jackie shot back.
“You heard him bury him deep” he ordered the changeling guard, the entire line was marched away but Jackie heard Blue Bloods new conversation to a changeling praetorian, “sir you will be leaving for the borders of Zebrican for the war in 3 hours” the praetorian said, “alright i’ll just have one final bit of fine ass before i leave” Blueblood said sniggering as he then entered his carriage that was pulled by multi horned armored rhino that were native to Scandeernavia that the caribou sometimes rode.
They were called thunderhorns due to them making a roaring sound like thunder when angry.
Jackie and the other three were put into one with some as were the other prisoners from the first carriage of the train, “stick together i’ve been in prisons before” Jackie said, “i know my way around”.
And within 6 hour they were all put into prison clothes and thrown into their cell for the night, Slumblood was built on a small artificial island built on the beach on the east end of Manehattan. Jackie told them what he had heard Blueblood say about a war with the Zebra empire, “oh that there's a three sided war going on” Heavy hand informed, “they are trying to conquer the Zebra empire because of its resources and trade routes” “the dragon lands are also under siege just so the caribou can show how tough they are” Steelroar added, “and finally the griffon nation because of its tactical position in the mountains and the military power of the griffons” Big Mac finished.
“Why don’t they invade Equestria?” Jackie asked, “because there's a barrier around equestria, ponies can’t leave without permission and no one can get in without permission” Jackie wasn’t going to ask what big Mac weant by permission and so he said good night and went to sleep with the others.
His dreams weren’t cheery ones, he had to relive the death of his aunt Sarah, his best friend Vinnie and his girlfriend Jenny, none of their deaths were pleasant and Jackie’s power’s he could have saved them if only he could have.
In the morning they all got up for dinner, Jackie’s armor could be seen under the short sleeved orange prison outfit, they all had to wear it with most of their original clothes, the four of course sat together. “So how are we planning on getting out of here?” Heavy hand asked, “I think i have an idea about that” Jackie said, showing them the paper Baldr gave them.
“Jackie once you get to prison cause trouble enough to get you to wildtomb prison” “i’m trying to gain an audience with Daine” he explained, “and i think Baldr is trying to help, i know you ain't going to like it but i honestly don’t like how the caribou treat the females” he said that was when he noticed that there were no females in the dining hall, he even said it aloud.
“Oh they have their own place in the prison” Steelroar said as he ate, Jackie could only guess about what the woman’s own place in the prison was like, “anyway trust me on this once i finish what i started i’ll make sure the caribou are dead meat” the other three liked the sound of this so they nodded.
“But to get transferred into WildTomb we need to make a complete riot” Heavy hand informed, that was when a group of 6 nasty looking folks joined the table, their leader was a greyish unicorn with a black mane and he had a scar on his right cheek. Jackie inwardly sighed he figured he was going to be the biggest target in the room since he was the only human in their, the rest were ponies, diamond dogs and minotaurs who generally didn’t have their own nation and just roamed about equestria sometimes aiding ponies or fighting them.
“Pyro over their burned down 8 building” he said pointing to a red pony with flaming orange hair, “please-” Jackie scoffed, “Razor over their caused a stampede and whipped out an entire village” Grey area added, “okay that’s impressive” Jackie thought, “and me well i turn people to stone, foals and all mostly in the north of Manehattan” Grey area finished, Jackie was not at all impressed by this in fact he was downright disappointed as he new that people could survive petrification and come out of it with barely a graze.
“We are all bad boys here but what makes you so special?” he asked, Jackie took action as he snapped the unicorn's horn off and stabbed in through his scared Cheek, Bug Mac then punched one of his buddies and within the second a brawl had started and everyone was punching everyone and it was now a full on punch up.
Meanwhile on the train to Zebrican
Blueblood sighed, his personal car however had ways of getting him off his mind, he decided to call one of his two personal sex slaves. Back at the manor the Famous Fleur-de-lis, a white unicorn with pink very long mane and red bikini like outfit which showed off her slim frame and large breasts, “oh hey babe” she said to the face of Blueblood that was being shown on in the crystal ball.
“How’s my favorite sex slaves?” Blue blood asked, Fluer was one of the few female ponies who accepted the new order, “oh she is great thanks, a little shocked but otherwise good” Fleur replied as she leaned on the table squishing her breasts into the wood. “See you both when I get back,” Blueblood said then hung up.
“Why do you love that brute!?” demanded the voice of the second sex slave of blueblood, Rarity herself, “oh well you know how it is” Fleur said waving her hips suggestively, “met at the ball, danced, bith have a rivalry against you, needed to kill my husband Fancy pants to get our way” she replied.
It was rarity she had a corset that showed her cleavage as well as a thong that nearly showed her rear, and the mini skirt she had been forced to wear was held up slightly by her tail making her ass even more exposed, her breasts were not covered by it and she had two clips attached to the tits, the clips had wires connected to a steampunk battery, it was a form of torture that had been invented in rescent years. “So you ready for some fun?” Fleur asked seductively as she placed a cloth as a gag in Rarities mouth so she couldn’t scream loudly and pressed the on switch on the small battery.
Back at slumblood prison
Big Mac had certainly become a great warrior in the time of the fall of equestria with the minotaur’s, he was not just a wild brute but also new basic combat adaption and brains, the other two just charged headlong, typical of minotaurs being half bull.
However eventually they had been ambushed when they got to the entrance of the prison, multiple changeling, caribou and pony guards surrounded them and cut the four off, “Sent these fucks to Wildtomb prison upon Blueblood orders” the Caribou warden said. Swiftly the company were knocked out with powder and were put on the next train there on a VIP prisoner train.
“So Wildtomb, what kind of prison is that?” Jackie asked, despawning his face mask and allowing them to see his face, “well it’s a gladiatorial prison, why we want to go there is beyond me”, Heavy Hand said, Jackie took a bit of the trip to think and think and think.
Canterlot castle
“Brilliant soon he will be under our control” and soon the griffons, dragons and zebra’s will fall and soon the rest of the world” he said chuckling evilly “and the tracking device on starlight is working well so we will be able to find the resistance when they find it” Thrain said, “i have the wonderbolts on standby”.
Daine nodded smiling well, “good soon we can take back the west of our homeland from them” Daine chuckled as he remembered ‘them’ and how he would whip them out and take the woman as slaves until the day they die, them and their ‘noble’ slave eradication, slaves were necessary for work, for entertainment and for pleasure.
However someone heard, that someone was a thestral maid, she was one of the few still loyal to Luna and Celestia, she found Luna in her cage and began sweeping and in between sections she whispered what she had heard to Luna, “so the Caribou do have an enemy” she said hope rising, “but if this Jackie becomes a friend of the caribou then who knows how long we or they will last” the maid pointed out.
“Thank you now go tell my sister when you can” Luna ordered her, she nodded and exited the room.
Back on the train
“So where at ponyville huh” Jackie said, “yup used to be my home, worked at sweet apple acres why?” Big Mac aske, Jackie wouldn’t tell him yet but there was a laboratory in Ponyville on the witchblade and it could give him clues to finding it, “just heard the princess of friendship used to live their” he said, “yup and her friends the guardians of the element of harmony” Heavy hand said, “they had a large influence in equestria and slightly beyond”.
“Okay scum out you come and no funny business ”called a guard who opened the carriage door, he and the others as well as a quatre ton of prisoners were walked into what one would consider a prison city built into the cave, cells lined the walls with stairs, bridges and walkways separating them, some prison cells were carved into the rock, others were natural formations.
Light sources came from tortes and some large holes in the ceiling, with pillars holding them up, this was probably more of a safety precaution than anything else, they were brought to an Amphithetre like structure at the end of the tunnel and standing on stage was a brute of a Caribou, his helmet covered his face completely and only his antlers showed, on his belt was a large axe and he held a spear in his hand.
This speech was getting rather long winded for Jackie but luckily it was almost finished, “HERE YOU DON’T GET THE LUXARY OF SEX WHENEVER YOU WANT, THE FEMALE PRISONEER HAVE THEIR OWN CAVERN, SO IF YOU WANT GOOD FOOD,GOOD WOMAN AND SO ONTHEN YOU HAVE TO WORK FOR IT.”
Their were a few groans from the other prisoners and Jackie figured no sex was the least of their worries since this will probably work like most other prisons, “Talk about loud” Jackie whispered to big make as they were marched away, “YOU WILL HAVE THE REST OF THE DAY OFF AND IF I THINK YOU ARE READY THEN YOU WILL HAVE SOMETHING MORE COMFORTABLE” T’under bellowed.
“See yah in the morning you three” Jackie said to his comrades as they were separated, “good luck Jackie” Big Mac called back, “see ya Jax” Heavy hand called as he went downstairs, “afternoon” all Steel Roar managed to get out.
That night
“Well this is our only lead so far so let’s be careful” Sunset said, that was when she was knocked by something, the thing turned around to face them, it was a manticore, but not one of familiarity to any of the three. It had scorpion pincers where it’s wings should be and it’s horns looked like those of antelopes, while very rare manticores such as Alpha male and female Manticores did have horns, no one had seen a manticore like this ever.
TWilight would have lost her mind from this discovery but as the creature stalked around them, all they felt was fear, it growled, it’s yellow eyes scanning them and relaying to strike, it’s scorpion tail rattled as it vibrated. Zecora carefully reached for her bag, Manticores while sometimes friendly did not always seem that way.
Manticores usually attacked ponies out of hunger or when Pony’s trespassed at the wrong moment, in this case it was both, the Manticore had a little tumble with a cragadile and while one had still got cut on it’s side, nothing major or fatal but it did piss it of and it had missed lunch because of the fight and now it was time for dinner.
“I’m going to use a flashbang potion to blind it then we run” Zecora whispered to Starlight and Sunset, Sunset drew her swords just in case and tossed one to Starlight, “NOW” Zecora said as she threw the bottle of red liquid that fizzed and bubbled and began to glow brightly. They ran before it hit the ground, the Manticore however watched the bottle curiously and was blinded and disoriented when the bottle shattered and flashed a blinding light in the area.
Once it had recovered it was mighty pissed and gave chase, it was more nimble then most Manticores, the three continued to run deeper and deeper into the forest, once the Manticore got close enough to the three it pounced, Starlight however who was at the back managed to bat it aside with the flat of the blade.
“What kind of Manticore is that?” Sunset asked out loud, “ask later to run now” Starlight yelled back in panic, the Manticore snapped it’s tail forward at the group, missing luckily as the three ran deeper and deeper. Zecora used a tree as a pole in order to spin around and kick the Manticore in the face then continue running.
Unfortunately they came to a dead end at a rock face, it was a very smoove and high rock face, “nice knowing you guys” Starlight said as the Manticore stalked up towards them and readied to pounce, but before it could, somepony flew down and slid under the manticores head and cut it with a sword.
The pony skidded to a halt not to far away, it was the former leader of the wonderbolts Spitfire herself, she was wielding a katana, “stay down guys” she called to the three, as she charged the almost recovered Mantore and delved the sword into its eye socket, she still had her wings so that meant she still had her speed and magic.
She pushed the sword deeper into the eye socket the Manticore growled and snarled trying to reacted but the sword had gone through it’s brain, it slumped and died where it stood, “how did you-” Zecora was about to ask but then saw that Spitfire still had her wings.
“Good to see you Spitfire” Sunset said as she hugged her, “good to see you two” Spitfire said, “you two can come out now” she called, two ponies they recognized came out of the bush’s. Vinyl was a white low level unicron, with DJ glasses that were resting on the top of her head and wore a very revealing dress that revealed her large bust. Octavia was an earth pony with blakc hair, a pink bow tie, had larger breasts than Vinyl and wore a purple skin tight dress, with a thing holding up her leggings.
“Guys!” Sunset exclaimed, “good to see you two” Starlight said as there were hugs all around, “you two gals” Vinyl said, “what happened to you three?” Octavia asked looking at the dead Manticore “come on we don’t want to get caught” Spitfire said gesturing for them to follow. They walked for about 20 minutes before arriving at their location, it was a hidden bunker like a WW2 one but it had seemed invisible, there was an invisibility barrier around it only seen when closely looked at.
But even then all you would see was a slight distortion in the air, the bunker was surrounded by a river and a drawbridge lowered to allow them access and then closed again, things got more roomier once they were inside. There were only about 20 members, some they recognized some they didn’t, three however caught their eye, Cheerilee the former school teacher of ponyville, Sugerbelle the girlfriend of Big Mac and Maud Pie the sister of pinkie pie.
Cheerilee was a dark pink pony with a long pink mane and wore extra short black shorts and short sleeved boxer top with a checkered blakc and white bandana around her neck, Sugar belle wore a rather puffed up outfit, she was a pink unicorn with her tail and main in a ponytail. Maud wore the strangest outfit out of them all, possible because she had been the slave to an extra perverting noble, she was a grey earth pony with a light purple mane and she wore a black bondage suit with bunny ears and white bows on the tits.
“Oh jeez what happened to you guys?” Starlight asked concerned, “same that happened to everyone after the fall” Maud replied in her usual demeanor, “do you guy’s know where Applejack or Big Mac are?” Sugar Belle asked concerned, “no but i have leads to them” Sunset said, “so that is why you wanted to find the resistance” Zecora said putting the pieces together.
“Yes i found letters and information” Sunset said, “Trixie got herself raped to help us we can’t let her throw that sacrifice away” Starlight agreed, “okay get to nurse redheart first and get patched up and then show us” Spitfire ordered, the two nodded and proceeded, thanks to the help of Vinyl and Octavia to Nurse Red Hearts infirmary.
Spitfire turned to the three closest resistance members, “you hear that we have hope” she said, the other two nodded. Later the same three met up in the dorm they had been sharing, their names were Omnes Pulchrae, Night light and her sister Nightstar dawn. Omnes was the pale pony with a black mane wearing a blue corset and black dress, Night light was the blue unicorn with a darker blue dress and blond hair, Nightstar had a black mane with a blond fringe and was the same color as her sisters chest
The three sat on their beds, the room had only one closet and bathroom but it was better than nothing, “so the sluts have found the locations to the element bearers” Omnes said sinisterly, “don’t use Slut or any word like it you’ll blow our cover” Night light hissed back, “oh don’t worry sister, but i agree that we should use our words more carefully” Nightstar said breaking up the argument.
The door was closed and they could reveal their true forms in there, they transformed into three changelings, specially bred changelings by Chrysalis to be elite warriors, their names were Mantis, Stag and Rhino.
Omnes turned into Mantis who had a mantis shaped helmet on his head, his armor was green mostly save for a few black spots, on his forearms were praying mantis Tibia that were large and very sharp. Night Light transformed into Stag, the leader of the three, he had a stag beetle mandibles on his helmet and two as blades on his forearms, his armor was brown and harder than Mantis’. Finally, Nightstar turned into Rhino, the strongest of the three who had rhino beetle horns on his helmet and was the most heavily armored of the three.
“We with the Tracker on Starlight reinforcements will be here soon, but let us tell them to hold off until we have more information” Stag said as he summoned a very small fly like changeling in his hand, “go mosquito and tell them” he whisper to the little guy as he tossed him out the window and watched him fly through the barrier.
“I’m tired as acting as a slut why don’t we just capture them and bring them to Wildtomb, the VIP could us some more whore’s to pleasure them” Rhino asked, “because it is always wise to let brains guide the brawn” Stag replied, “so let’s keep in act” Stag transformed back into Night Light and the other two transformed back into Omnes and Nightstar.
Cloudsdale
“Yeah suck it Rainbow cunt” Soarin mocked, “MUTHH FUPPH” Rainbow said in an attempt to say fuck you but Soarins dick got in the way, “oh you want me to Fuck you ass now?” Saorin asked mockingly, Rainbow’s eyes widened at this, not another Anal rape. She had gotten used to the pain, but it was very humiliating, her pride hadn’t remained intact at all during the year of Daine’s conquest, the residence they were in belonged to the three males of the Wonderbolts, and the two remaining females of the group had to do the same.
Soarin was a sky blue pegasus like Rainbow but with a dark blue mane and wore only the Wonderbolts spandex, these had small zippers near the cock area in order to shove their dicks into females easier. Next was Thunderlane who wore the same outfit, but he was a dark grey pegasus with a bluish white mane and he was more muscular than Soarin.
“Goodness she’s tight ain’t she '' Commented Thunderlane on a particularly hard thrust, “yeah she was for me as well” Lightning rider agreed, there was a knocking at the door, the three males groaned. In walked a Caribou general, Armor shining and face concealed beneath it’s metal mask.
“The resistance base has been discovered but we’ve been told to hold off to see what develops” the General said, “but why can we take them out easy” Thunderlane argued, “no arguing with Kaitl you know that” the General scolded, he was a few good ranks above them.
Author's Note
And that’s another chapter and in case you are wondering, characters are around 21 looking.
Fall of equestria: the darkness comes
Chapter 3
“Gorgust!” he was called, as a grey humanoid figure with a black mane, serpent tail, tattered bat wings, long ears dropped down from the ceiling, this was what was known as a gargoyle, gargoyles like Tirek's brother scorpan lived in a far away country. This one was an assassin that had come seeking the prophet from work in equestria and now he was a personal assassin for hire of King Sombra.oh i doubt it ” Gorgust thought but stayed bowed as to not anger Sombra. “In the meantime keep aiden the troops on the borders of griffonstone”, incase you are confused, the Zebra empire was in the east, Scandeernavia was in the far north west, Griffonstone was in the northeast nearly next door neighbours to the crystal empire and the dragon lands were in the south.
Confusing i know but thought i’d clear that up, “you wish is my command” Gorgust said as he stood up and walked out the door, Sombra stood up himself and looked out his window, the crystal Empire had forbad the public rape of females, but Sombra bet that it was happening in some side alleys or indeed in peoples homes.
In Sombra’s bedroom, there were two female ponies, one was Cadance and the other was Chrysalis herself, once her job was done the males of her group betrayed her and the other female changelings, Kaine the warlock cast a spell on them to weaken them. The changeling still had to keep their wings as it was like a vital organ and their horns did little magic, but they had collars that prevented them from shapeshifting, Chrysalis was the only one who had her horn cut off as she was a high level magic changeling.
Both were lying down on metal tables with restraints around their necks and arms and necks, both were blind folded and were sweaty and unclean from the rape sessions that Sombra did to them in private. Say what you wanted about Sombra but he wasn’t a hypocrite and stayed to the rules he insulated in his kingdom.
The doors opened, “is that you Sombra you snake” Chrysalis hissed, “who else” Sombra said Shadow’s flowing like a fire from his mane, and he licked his lips in anticipation, “your going to die you now, one day someone will come to kill you” Cadence said defiantly. Sombra rotated the table upright and used two fingers to open the slit of her vigina, then did the same with Chrysalis “i love your defiance you know” Sombra said as he undressed themselves, “and your cruelty i like” he added to Chrysalis, now he was fully undressed he had some fun.
“So who is going first” he said licking the sweat of Chrysalis breasts and neck, it was too much for her she moaned in pleasure as Sombra watched the orbs bounce, “have you guests it yet” he asked both of them as he positioned himself in front of Cadence. They both tried to stay quiet but Cadence was thwarted by Sombra ramming his length into her exposed marehood.
She screamed slightly as she wiggled and squirmed in her bonds, “yes scream for me” Sombra growled, Chrysalis began to shiver in fear as she knew that she was going to be next, Chrysalis may have gotten her revenge, but at the cost of her own freedom, pride and her kingdom.
Wildtomb prison
“But i do need to free these ponies” he added, “who gives a shit about them, we have godly powers we could rule them, but then again what fun is ruling over a weak race” the Darkness said, “we’ll you do what i say, i’m in control now, so that means shut it and do your job” Jackie said back his voice making the warning clear.
“Fine” the darkness grumbled, “good boy” Jackie quipped to the darkness chagrin, “hey up you get” said a guard, “the warden wants to speak to you”, Jackie got up from his lying down position and followed the guard. The Warden's office wasn’t as luxurious as one would think, but it was definitely comfortable, it even had its own training area, T’under was training now, “just because Daine wants to test you doesn’t mean you get luxury automatically” he said to Jackie, “you don’t know what i was before i got my powers do you?” Jackie asked rhetorically, “no enlighten me” T’under spat, “i was a hitman, crook, criminal, gangster you name it” Jackie said melodramatically, “i’ve been tested to get where i am know and i am here so you don’t need to worry about upsetting Daine because we all played by the rules”.
“Good because i only give Luxury to those who deserve it” T’under said, “oh T’under who is this?” asked a female voice, they both looked to see two female ponies one was a unicorn the other was an earth pony, both in Bikini outfits. The unicorn was a sky blue color with white mane, her bikini was black and yellow with star’s, the other was a butter color with a purple and pink main and wore a green and pink bikini.
“Oh this is the new guy the one the king is interested in” T’under explained to the two girls named Lyra and Bon Bon, “what’s with the mask?” Bon Bon asked, Jackie retracted his mask, these girls must have been brainwashed like many others, either that or mindfucked, “my isn’t he handsome for an unusual creature” Lyra said.
Jackie was getting a little uncomfortable but he had endured worse, “back to your rooms ladies remember he’s new” T’under barked, the two walked away swaying their hips a little as they did so, “we’ll that was a thing” Jackie said, “back to your cell just wanted to make my intentions clear” T’under barked.
“Geez uptight much” Jackie thought, the next morning all new prisoners were brought to a training arena after breakfast in a separate part of the gorge, “ALRIGHT YOU FUCKING AWEFUL LOT, THIS IS WHERE YOU WILL BE TRAINING” T’under bellowed, “IF I SEE ANYONE SLAKING OFF YOU WILL BE PUNISHED SEVERLY” he then gestured to the arena, their were magically moving targets, on one side. Weights and other boxing material on another side, training dummies on a third side and finally an area to spar.
“SO TAKE YOUR PICK WHAT YOU DO FIRST STARTING WITH YOU, YOU AND YOU” T’under continued pointing to Jackie, Big Mac and another pony, Jackie picked the obvious choice, the marksmen targets, Big Mac choice the boxing area and the other Pony choice the sparing area.
“Alright now, Jackie why don’t you start us off with your lacking of skills” T’under said as everyone else chuckled even the Praetorian changelings, Pony and Caribou guards, one of the floating targets opened up into a circle of four and rotated around slowly ,in response Jackie pulled out his pistol(the one he had killed Breaburn with) and fired at the hoving targets, four shots, dead centre never stood a chance.
The targets shattered like glass and everyone stood in astonishment, “how come he got to keep his weapons' ' Complained a diamond dog, “because i’m smart enough to hide them” Jackie replied calmly. For the rest of training Jackie showed to be very skilled, strong and well trained, Big Mac showed to be well skilled with the axe as well when fighting the training dummies. He was impressing people and not just T’under, “Okay Jackie you think you're such a big shot then fight a horde of my weaker gladiators' ' T’under said as a bunch of pony and caribou gladiators formed a circle around him, it was time for Jackie to release his power.
Jackie brought out out his dual pistols and shot at 2 of them, snake like creatures expelling black mist from their bodies extended from his back and attacked multiple gladiators, the gladiators themselves made good attempts at striking Jackie but he shot them dead and small Darklings tripped up some of them so Jackie could crush their skulls with his feet.
“Oh my god i just met an actual human” Lyra squealed as the two watched the entire thing in secret, the warden's office was more of a house carved into the cavern so the warden could watch go from the prison cavern, to the dining cavern and the training cavern. Lyra and Bon Bon took advantage of these. Lyra’s family had been studying the existence of humans for a long time with little results.
Bon Bon calmed her down, “we should let the resistance know when we have the chance” Bon Bon said, the two nodded, before running to their secret place, there was a small jackalope in the air vent that led to the surface. The Jackalope acted as a messenger and was frightfully loyal, he had learnt to write and wrote down on a parchment what the two said “their is a human here with unusual powers” Bon Bon said, “he is training for a gladiator and Big Mac is here as well” Lyra added.
“Thought it would be useful to know hope you get this” Bon Bon finished, the Jackalope nodded and sprinted up the tunnel to the surface and from there knew where it was going, it passed a small castle structure, this had more severe repercussions than you might think.
“Hey little guy” called a female voice, it was Omnes, the Jackalope was as fooled as the other members of the resistance and recognised her as a member so passed the parchment to her, “oh for me i’ll pass it on” she said reassuringly, the Jackalope passed the parchment two here and ran back to the prison airvent.
Meanwhile Omnes turned back into Mantis and marched inside the old ruins, “this will not be making it unfortunately” Mantis said sinisterly as he tore the parchment appart.
Back at Wildtomb
“Nice job but don’t think this will be easy for you just because you impressed me” he had concragulated, this was indeed good news for more people than one, T’under wrote a letter to Daine saying that Jackie was indeed impressive and moved up quicker than expected.
Canterlot
The traitor was of the dragons from the dragon lands, there was a strip club in canterlot, most of the shops have turned into sex, porn or bondage shops, except for the bakeries and resturants. Daine found the one he was looking for, he had a cloak so no one would recognise him, except the one he wanted to find, and he did find them.
It was a typical strip club, where a youngish red and black dragon with a black mane for a spin down his neck and back, he wore armor on him and there was a short sword on his belt, his name was Ferno and was a Traitor who wanted to rule the dragons himself instead of the dragon lord Ember. All very well as the Caribou did not want a female ruling the dragons and having a dragon ruler that accepted their ways.
“So we simply drive them to Wildtomb prison” Ferno said after Daine explained the plan, “yes some we shall keep others will be kept at the prison, the Gladiators need more slaves” Daine said while licking his lips, “you going to send the wonderbolts to follow?” Ferno asked, “yes and the elite triplets will help you as well” Daine replied, by the triplets he meant Mantis, Scarab and Rhino.
Daine left Ferno as he looked into the crowd and looked for a female he could fuck. Ditzi was the one Ferno chose, as at the moment she was being held rather possessively by a male pony, a grey mare with one lazy eye and butter colored hair.
“You're coming with me” he said in a honey tone, Ditzi did as she was told but the pony followed them not liking having his slave stolen, “oh the fucks your problem?” he asked bringing out a knife, in response Ferno sliced the guards hand off, the pony cried in pain.
Ferno’s apartment
The children were kept in small camps in secret locations in order to train them to be sluts once they reached a suitable age, the old people were also gathered in camps but not trained to be slut instead they stayed in those camps until the day they died.
Her thoughts were interrupted on a particular hard slam from the dragon traitor, while he was thinking of what he would do once he was king of the dragons and had a reason to pleasure himself, he may even get to fuck Dragon lord Ember herself.
Ponyville
Kaitl and Baldur were there along with prince Gryttur, the other high generals were named, Strom, Raskh, Loke, Ivangir, Hralf and Vestri, the only difference being their fur color between them ranging from white to grey to brown to black. But other than that they wore the same green uniform and wielded the same swords as it was traditional among the high Generals of the caribou king.
“My Generals” Daine began standing up, “you seven probably have heard about this Jackie and my first report on his skill, and that power of his to summon beasts” while most of them have heard of this and had received a report that they had read, but others were more or less clueless but didn’t interrupt.
“We are testing him in the Wildtomb arena, and if things go to plan we can use him to conquer the other lands we want”, Kaine took up from here, “Kaitl being the closest to Ponyville we want you to personally watch Jackie’s performance and report to me understood” Kaitl nodded, “but how can he help us?” Strom, the brute and least intelligent of the seven, asked.
“If you would trust our king then we would see you idiot” Loke shot back, “who are you calling Idiot?” Strom shot back enraged, “you of course” Rashk shot back aiding his friend from school, “shut up Raskk before i tear your antlers off” Hralf yelled, aiding his half brother Strom. The argument only grew from their, typical really, Daine Thrain, Kaine and Gryttur only watched in exasperation.
Meanwhile Twilight, Pinkie pie, Fluttershy, Applejack and Trixie had heard the whole thing and Twilight was beginning to remember something from her studies about the unusual name Jackie. “Got anything yet twi?” Applejack asked, “oh no” Twilight said as she remembered, “yes during the reign of Faust there was a war between equestria, beings of light and one of darkness” Twilight said.
“Their names were the Angelus who took the form of 5 Angels, they came first and attacked Equestria, the equestrians managed to hold them off but their power was great” “but what were they fighting for?” Applejack asked, “cause i don’t see whopping great angels fighting over equestria for the sake of it”, “it was over the Witchblade” Twilight said, “an artifact discovered long before the Angelus came to equestria”
“What does it do?, it must be powerful if it sparked such a great war over it” Fluttershy said, “it is powerful, an otherworldly artifact, but the scary part is, when 5 almost failed, one broke the stalemate” Twilight said, “Trixie doesn’t like this story” Trixie admitted out loud, “it was the darkness and it’s hosts Jackie, it’s weapons could kill with sound, it could tear a hydra apart with its claws and it could summon an army of dark creatures straight from tartarus”.
“Gee nelly and he’s working with the Caribou? why?” Applejack asked, “maybe to throw a party?” Pinkie asked in a more desperate tone than the one she used to use, “my best guess is the witchblade, oh why didn’t i see it before, first they ask about the darkness and now this Jackie shows up, i should’ve seen it” Twilight scolded herself.
“Don’t blame yourself Twi, but i’m just scared for our friends outside equestria '' AJ said, “if only there's a way we can warn them” Trixie said also worried, that was when Twilight had an idea, “i think i have an idea” she said, in secret while the High Generals were still fighting, Twilight led the others the rooms that also belonged to high general Kaitle, Loke(who owned Applejack), Ivangir(who owned Fluttershy) and Hralf(who owned pinkie pie).
Trixie not willing to argue did as she told, sweat began pouring down her face as she focused, her horn glowed brighter and brighter until finally the the papers disappeared into green flames that turned into smoke as the letters were magically sent to their locations, Trixie nearly collapsed, this was not the performance magic she had grown used too, “nice job Trixie” Twilight said reassuringly.
However someone had been watching everything, ever since Jackie exited Tartarus, someone had been watching from his world, unable to enter Equestria thanks to the curse of the elements of harmony.
In another world
One of them reached their hands towards the orb, this was Jenny Romano, Jackie's girlfriend, before she died, until she was brought back and became a host of the Angelus, she wore white ragged dress from her time trapped in hell, golden horns extended from the sides of her head, her hair was long and black with glowing green eyes. Her wings were feathered and pure white and under her dress was golden angelus armor.
In her hand appeared the three letters to the kingdoms of Dragon, Zebra and Griffon she looked at the rolled up scrolls for a second “The Ponie’s think this would’ve gotten past the barrier” she scoffed, “they were lucky the spell even worked with a rookie like her”. Still she and the other Angelus thought it was disgusting and wanted rid of the Caribou as much as anyone but couldn’t go to equestria at all thanks to the foolish Faust and her spell with the elements of harmony.
“Maybe we should let Jackie have the Witchblade this round, it’ll come to us eventually anyway” suggested Finch, she wore full purple and golden armor with purple wings and held a spear, her horns were different from Jenny’s. “With nothing we can do directly the best we can do is nothing” she added slightly mournfully.
“Not A Chance” yelled Danielle Baptiste, she wore red and flaming gold armor with golden armor on her wings with red feathered and her hair was made of fire, “we can’t let the Darkness win no matter what, Ponies be damned”, “we can’t enter Equestria” Jenny said patiently.
“So you want me to help Jackie” the figure said, stepping forward, he was a completely white man with red pants and blood red markings on his skin, his black hair was long and in a ponytail. His hands were metal and cybernetic with sharp claws for fingers with red bandages around them, this was Robert Berreford also known as the super hero Ripclaw.
The irony was that he didn’t even like the Angelis so he got along great with Jackie Estacado, “all these months and this is what I hear of him” he added sarcastically, “stuck in a pony world conquered by rapists and trying to find the witchblade”. “Yes that is correct and we need you to help him” Jenny said, “fine wanting something to do around here anyway so i’m in” Ripclaw said.
“Good, we will be transporting you outside the borders of the griffon kingdoms so you will have to make your way southwest from there” Jenny warned, “yeah yeah i know my way around new area’s” he said. The Angelus gathered around in a circle around Ripclaw, linking arms with each other a magic circle appeared underneath him, he was absorbed by the circle and...that was it he was gone.
Jenny once again looked at the three letters in hand and teleported them to where they need to go, “now sister let our actions bare success” she said to the others, but in secret some time later, Celeste, Danielle and Sabine gathered in secret, “we can not let them have the Witchblade” Celeste said, the other two heartily agreed, “i say the Ponies get what they deserve for what they did to our might and majesticness” Danielle spat words with venom.
“Not that i care for their sake but that is harsh even for you” Sabine said sternly to her fiery sister, “enough the point is we need to get the witchblade not the Darkness or Ripclaw what happens to the Ponies is none of our concern, it wasn’t back then it isn’t now” Celeste interrupted before an argument could start.
“Okay sister what do you suggest?” Sabine sighed, Celestle whistled and coming around the corner came a huge man standing taller than any of them, his body was ice, his skin was ice blue with icle like shardes on his arm, legs and face, his torso was the only thing free of ice. This was Micheal Finnegan, a well known hunter of the Witchblade and the other 13 artifacts of the darkness and Angelus and the wielder of the glacier stone that gave him his ice form and powers and on his back was the blood sword.
“So you want me to retrieve it for you” he said, “yes and we’ll share it with you once we have it in return” Celestle said, it had been a good offer, “trusting the word of the Angelus, i never thought that would happen” Micheal said, “well then let’s get it over with, where while i be ending up?” He asked, “Just outside the far south of equestria, make your way north to Canterlot, “we’re sure that’s where it is” Celeste said as the other two got into position around Micheal.
The same events that occurred happened in a slightly less dramatic way than what happened to Ripclaw but still the same process, a magic circle forms under Micheal and he gets absorbed by it and boom he’s there.
“Oh I love it when a plan comes together,” Danielle said with a hint of amusement in it.
Equestria in the far north east of Griffon the kingdom
“Just like home” Robert thought as memories of Chile in south america, his home.
Wildtomb prison
The crowd outside was wild hoping to get a good fight today, Kaitle was also their, Jackie didn’t really have butterflies in his Stomach at the moment, he was a cold blooded killer plain and simple, “don’t use my full power Jackie hold back for the audiences sake why spoil their fun” the voice of the Darkness chuckled.
Jackie stepped out into the light of the arena as he summoned his fathers Rifle and held it on his shoulder, “SLuts and gentlemen” the announcer said, it was the Flim Flam brothers, “please welcome Jackie estacado” Flim said “also known as the nickname he has given us the Darkness” Flam finished. The two were peach colored unicorns in black suits and nice hair, Flim had a mustache so it made it easier to tell between the twins.
“And Coming onto the stage are the combatants” Flim said as a horde of prisoners consisting of Changelings, Caribou and Pony guards walked on stage, flexing their muscles and gaining Attention, Jackie lowered his gun in a relaxed way, showing off in that way was for amateurs and inexperience people.
The tough look was for intimidation, but the thing about fear is that sometimes it fails and if it’s your only way of fighting someone, then what do you have if it fails? For Jackie he had his skills and gangster history.
“3....” Flim called getting ready for the fight ahead, “2…” Flam added as the Gladiators readied themselves to charge, Jackie tightened his grip on his rifle and narrowed his eyes, “1” the twins said simultaneously, “FIGHT”. The Gladiators charged, Jackie raised his rifle and opened fire.
Blue Bloods manor
Rarity only glared at her “but me and Blueblood both wanted to get you out of the way as our rival and being a member of the elements it was difficult, but now we can do what we want to you” Fleur grabbed one of Rarities breasts and slapped it against the other and watched the orbs bounce and wobble against each other. “Now I'm gonna go have a bath . I'm exhausted,” she said as she walked into the bathroom.
She sighed in blissfulness as she sank into the warm water, meanwhile Rarity knew that house keeping would be coming soon, and pretty soon she heard the guards talking to maid outside the door, then the sound of a scuffle occurred and the caribou guards girdled for some reason, the door opened, it was Vinyl and Octavia, both wielding knives, “Rarity” Octavia exclaimed as she undid her gag and began to unbind her.
“Octavia, Vinyl goodness what’s going on?” Rarity asked, “we’re busting you out of here” Octavia replied, “and getting something, do you know where your element is?” Vinyl asked, Rarity thought about it then remembered. “Oh yes here” Rarity said as she removed a painting from the wall and behind it was a safe, Vinyl put her ear to the door and began turning the knob. But then the door of the bathroom opened.
Fluer had enjoyed her bath, she had heard what she thought was house keeping, “oh well fun while it lasted” she sighed getting out of the pool while wondering how big the guards members were going on to be this time, she dried herself off and put on a bathrobe, but when she stepped out, their was Octavia, Rarity and Vinyl trying to open the safe, “your not housecleaning!” she exclaimed, stating the obvious, “crap” Vinyl cursed.
Fleur rushed to the door but Octavia managed to grab her and covered her mouth so she wouldn’t scream, Rarity grabbed bed covers and her own bonds, she tore the bed sheets into strips and stuffed a handkerchief into Fleurs mouth and secured it with one of the bed strips as a gag. Rarity and Octavia then got to work tying her arms and legs together with the remaining stripps and tied Fleurs hands and feet together.
Now Fleur couldn’t move or scream at all, Vinyl continued listening to the lock and with three clicks the vault opened and there...was nothing inside, “what it’s gone?” Rarity exclaimed, “oh dear where could it have gone?” Octavia exclaimed, “no time to worry about it now, but let’s grab Fleur she might know something” Vinyl suggested, it was a good suggestion and they stuck to it.
Fleur was unable to raise any objects or shoot any insults at them. She was carried by Vinyl all the way back to the base near ponyville, how they got there and back so quickly only god knows.
Back at the arena
The crowd was going wild and soon they we all dead, “bring them on” he said to himself, “wow that was bloody” Flim said through the speaker, “yup now let’s bring some former professionals on stage” Flam agreed. The doors opened again, and some more pony, caribou and changeling prisoners entered the arena, “bring it” Jackie said as he brought out his dual pistols, the gladiators banged their armor or shields with their swords.
Once again the battle was entertaining and violent, Jackie ducked, jumped and dodged the gladiators, and Jackie fired shots, the shotgun steampunk revolver which practically shot the heads off the gladiators as well as sent their guts spilling out while the other pistol shot hole straight through them. Once again the fight was over but not as quickly as the first. The crowd went wild.
Back in the prison
Back in arena
Jackie decided to us a bit more of his power this time, as the iguana charged at Jackie, Jackie jumped over it and landed on it’s back and began firing rounds into the beasts, the poor iguana ran this way and that trying to dislodge Jackie, if Jackie could just get through the skin he would be able to kill it from the inside.
But the iguana flipped itself over and squashed Jackie, Jackie groaned as the creature got off him the armor aiding in his protection, “damn it” Jackie cursed, then the lizard grabbed him by his leg with his mouth and thrashed around slamming him against the walls and floor. “Damn it” Jackie cursed as he was thrown against the floor.
The lizard went to bit on Jackie's torso, Jackie however the monsters top and lower jaws before they could clamp on and with his strength tossed the monster to one side, Jackie the slashed at it’s stomach with his clawed hands causing create gashe on it’s stomach, it howled in pain and swishes its Tail, Jackie however caught the Tail and swung the great beast around and into another wall, he then swung it overhead and slammed it down on its stomach.
In its dazed state Jackie got the time to finish his work, he clawed his way into the thick scales and into the actual beasts flesh, he then stabbed both claws into the creature and pried the wound open, the iguana began to thrash and skitter but Jackie’s powers went into the beast’s body, small darklings of different breeds formed around the innards and began eating their way out, and went up it’s throat and to the sides.
Out the rear was out of the question, but it was brutal and the crowd loved it as the Darklings fell out of the creature that was still alive believe it or not, it wasn’t until 8 darklings had fallen out of the beast that it finally died. Darklings crawled out of its mouth and rolled onto the floor, the crowd cheered for Jackie, “Well now that was brutal” Flam said chuckling, “yup and the crowd loved it which is what counts after all” Film said, “might we know the name of this brutal pony?”.
“The Names Jackie estacado, but you can all call me ‘the Darkness’” Jackie shouted above the hub hub of noise, “well then that’s all from the darkness for now folks but be sure to come back this afternoon for his next match” Flam said to the audience as Jackie walked off stage.
T’under meet with Jackie once the doors to the arena were shut, “you’ve impressed the crowd Estacado'' he said, “and that means you’ve impressed me, you also prolonged the fight and made it brutal, that deserves getting bumped up two levels'', “alright thanks i aim to please” Jackie said. After his performance the other starters were about average, Big Mac managed to survive but with some serious injuries from the iguana so he was put to be a warm up gladiator which was the rank below Jackie’s, Jackie now got to fight the gladiators of higher levels.
The more levels he killed the higher he would get, most of the gladiators were killed but others managed to get up to Big Macs level, big mac was one of the lucky ones who could still walk. most of the rest were not as lucky.
Canterlot dungeons
“Not anymore someone broke her out and we were wondering if you know, blueblood asked us to” the Caribou replied “honestly though can’t see how you would know considering your position but worth a shot, so where is she?” “Hell if I knew” Spike replied, the Caribou shrugged, “we can stop torturing you if you tell if not well it continues as it does” the Caribou said as he walked out and closed the door.
However Spike had done a little bit of thieving, he had tried stealing stuff from the Caribou which was the reason he had been chained to the wall but they had neglected his tail, he had stolen one of the keys the guards used, guards always have two keys incase one got lost or stolen, more lost then stolen usually but this time Spike had stolen the key.
He used it to unlock his manacles and drop down, he put his purple jacket with a fur collar on and used the key to open the cell door, “now to find the resistance” he said, as he crawled along low like an actually lizard, “hey this cunt’s tight ain’t she” Spike heard a guard say as he witnessed a rape. Not wanting to be discovered he simply moved along but feeling very guilty about leaving.
Spike found his way out of the dungeons and stole a cloak to hide himself in the crowds of canterlot, every sight disgusted him of males dominating the females.
Horrific, once he found his way out of the city, everything would be easier and he had a good idea of where to search for Rarity and the resistance.
The evergreen forest.
Author's Note
And that’s another chapter sorry I was gone for a bit things have had me a bit tied up
Fall of equestria: the darkness comes
Prologue
In ancient equestria a shooting star landed in the everfree forest with a loud bang and sent tree’s flying, the ancient tribes of anthro ponies came to look, most wielding spears and shields all looking down into the crater that smoked. Faust, an anthro white alicorn with a crimson main, and very tall, she wore golden roman like armor complete with a golden laurel leaf crown.
She looked down into the crater, her most loyal, Deniada Cross, a blue unicorn with a red cross cutie mark and a very light pink main and tail wearing roman woman attire, stood beside her “what is it?” she asked in awe, “i don’t know but keep everyone else away, i will go down there myself and see” Faust said, “form a protective barrier and be ready for anything” she began to walk down the crater as her soldiers put up their shields and a magical bubble formed around the crater, her magic creating a barrier around her that protected her from the smoke and fumes.
Faust picked up the gauntlet, “careful goddess” came Deniada’s voice, “we don’t know what it can do”, Faust decided to heed this advice and so Faust returned to level ground, with her subjects waiting expectantly, “get our best mages to meet up in Ponyville and study this thing” Faust ordered.
And so in Ponyville a laboratory was built inside a tree and the best mages in the land of equestria, but none could figure out how and what it was and what it could do, and for a decade it was kept in a secret vault in the tree of Ponyville, but then one day an evil came to equestria and for the first time the gauntlet was used by Deniada Cross, and for the first time it’s powered was revealed in equestria.
The forest shook as the ponies of ponyville ran away and the Pegasus soldiers fell like stones to the ground holes in their hearts, literally, Deniada ran towards the tree and ran inside, she grabbed the gauntlet and put it in her hand bag before running out of the tree house, there was a roar above the town.
She looked up and saw the thing attacking them, it was wolf-like but wolves had been extinct for years ever since they were wiped out by Faust due to constant attacks upon ponies, but it was made of tree’s roots and other types of flora. “What’s going on?” she wondered if she saw Faust wielding her spear and firing at the thing with her horn’s magic. All unicorn magic came from their horns.
The monster roared and the ponies panicked more and started running vines and roots sprouted like tentacles form the creatures sides and back and came down onto the ponies, Deniada was knocked over by one of the running crowd, Faust put up a shield around ponyville as the Timber wolf? Roared once again it’s green eyes and throat glowing ever brighter.
The gauntlet had gotten knocked out of the bag and was lying some feet away, Denaida rushed and grabbed it, then there was a crash as Faust landed not too far away battered and bruised and unable to get up, the monster loomed over her, Instinctively Denaida put the gauntlet on and rushed over the wolf raised it’s massive paw ready to bring it down.
“NOOOOOO” Denaida cried reaching her hand out to the timber-wolf, and that was when it happened, the gauntlet seemingly clamped onto Denaida’s hand and a metallic substance went up her arm, tearing up her sleeve and formed around the rest of her body, tearing up the rest of her cloths forming around her chest, her arms, her legs. It left spaces for her elbows, knees, neck and shoulder.
From her outstretched arm and energy beam fired and struck the timberwolf in the eye sending it stumbling to one side, she did not know what happened, she had expected nothing to happen. But the guards arrived with 6 crystals each a different shape, one was a lighting bolt, another was a butterfly, another was an apple ect. “We have them your majesty” they said to Faust who nodded and used her magic to lift them up and form a halo around her.
She spread her wings out and flew into the air the gems giving her power and energy to move, she focused her magic the wolf watched almost curiously, after a moment her eyes glowed what and she sent a beam from her horn at the wolf who’s green glow turned rainbow colored and it began to crumble and turned to simple wood. Once Faust landed she looked at her new armored friend who looked very muchly nervous.
And after the defeat of the timber wolf, from which it’s smaller brood would roam the forest formed from its body, Faust and her friend Denaida studied Deniada’s new armor, and what it could do, it summoned weapons to do her bidding, it would protect its wearer depending on the level of threat. And as other threats came to conquer equestria Denaida would be there with an army to put them down.
The dragons had to live in the harsh and firey domain of their land, the griffons took refuge in the mountains and the changelings were banished to their domain outside equestria, but other nations joined with equestia, including the yaks and hippogriffs to form a better futures.
However over time she grew arrogant and jealous of Faust believing that she belonged on the throne, so she challenged Faust to combat and almost won.
“What makes you think you can beat me?” Denaida mocked as she swung a bladed whip at Faust who blocked it with her spear, she flew up into the air hoping to get an aerial advantage, but Denaida summoned bat-like wings on her back and flew above her with great speed and kicked her down her earth with a crash.
Faust rolled out of the way before Denaida crashed down stabbing the earth with a sword where Faust previously was, Faust got to her feet but then then Denaida’s whip extended around her neck and she was swung off her feet and was swung around 3 times before being flung into a wall of the arena. The crowd gasped in awe, admiration, fear and many other things.
Faust was down but not out yet but she couldn’t get up, Denaida with a mad glint in her eye formed a sword in her right hand, “now you dye” she said, she raised the sword above her head, still walking towards her with a mad smile on her face, she stopped just in front of Faust as she looked down on her, Faust looked up hopelessly at her.
The arm came down and blood showered Faust, but not her blood, she saw that Denaida’s arm had been cut off somehow, Denaida screamed in pain while clutching the stump of where the upper arm used to be, Faust looked at the gauntlet, blood poured from the gap and the remaining arm inside.
With the gauntlet severing itself from her, Denaida had no choice but to surrender, her plans failed because of the gauntlet, and so she was banished from equestria onto the open seas forever. And another was chosen to wield the gauntlet, overtime Faust hired the young sorcerer Starswirls the bearded to train her two daughters, Celestia and Luna.
However then came a new threat, an entity calling itself the Angelus, it wanted the gauntlet which it called the witchblade, it took over female warriors to be it’s host’s and built an army to conquer equestria to get it. War raged for an age until a new entity came to Equestria, it called itself the darkness, and it summoned monsters from tartarus and waged war against both Pony and the Angelus.
If it caught you in it’s sharp claws, shot you with its magical weapons of metal and fire or dragged you kicking and screaming into the mouths of the monsters in the shadows, none were ever seen again.
A patrol of guards walked spears raised around an abandoned town, “reports say he’s here remember when you see him find any lights you can” the commander said. They all were nervous but not scared, but when the commander turned around he saw 10 feet down the street.
In the shadows of the night it was hard to see but it’s armor seemed red with green glowing gems and spikes it’s main was long and it’s eyes were green, the guards all prepared their weapons and charged, then stopped in shock as a snake-like creature burst out of the ground and slithered around to face them behind the creature.
The guards recovered and charged once again pointing their flashlight beams from their horns hoping it would weaken him, they were wrong.
The serpent charged forward and went straight through first guards chest, swallowing her heart in the process, then bit into another guards face before tearing it off, “alright guys let's show them” the creatures said and from the shadows small yellow eyes appeared, then the imps that they belonged to jumped onto the guards sending them flailing, kicking and screaming to the ground while they were pounded by the imps or in some cases stabbed by the knives that were wielded by them.
Finally there was one left; he was crawling away from them and hiding in the light of a nearby street lamp while the leader of these beasts circled him pounding the ground excitedly while the serpent slithered and coiled in the air around hissing and gnashing it’s teeth.
“You-you can’t touch me in the light” he said with a cocky and confident smile, the creature didn’t stop but instead actually stepped into the light, now that the guard could see him he wasn’t any less terrifying.
“But how?” the guard asked, fearfully “creatures of evil and darkness can’t come into the light, no creatures can” “ya now shit stain that’s what i heard from the last patrol and the patrol before that and you know what” the creature said, “that’s just typical who said that creatures born in the darkness can’t become strong enough to enter the light” as if to emphasis this point and imp jumped into the light above.
“Yeah why can’t we” the imp asked mockingly, “i want information on the witchblade so this is how it’s going to work” the creature said, “i know it’s probably gonna be with someone of high authority something that valuable would never be allowed to be in the hands of a simple lower class by the higher ups, that’s how all gangs work, regardless of weather its street or well i think you get the idea”.
“I-i’ll never talk” the guard said defiantly, “respect to that man, Amen” the creatures said mocking a salute as he walked of, part way from turning it took out it’s weapon, the guard heard stories about it, a harmless little weapon that could destroy stuff with simple sound seemingly.
He pointed it up at the street lamp and pushed a button on the hilt. The sound was a loud bang and the lightbulb shattered and the light disappeared leaving the guard at the mercy of the imps.
As this war raged throughout equestria for many years the angelus and the darkness became formidable threats, so faust used the elements of harmony, out of fear for it’s subjects the Angelus retreated but the darkness was subdued, wrapped in chains the darkness’s host was sent and chained in tartarus a prison created as a hell for the punished and so the darkness was chained and tortured by the sentinels that guarded it. The witchblade was sent to a secret location and vaulted in secret forever
But the two entities left their influence in equestria and ancestral memories reminded all in the form of a fear for the dark.
Author's Note
Right okay so this is the first chapter, sorry if the pictures aren’t enough to visualise the characters easier but their the best I have.
Also this prologue is playing out sort of like a god of war assension Prologue when the words are bold and Italic.
Though with some scenes that are a bit more in depth when the words are normal
I really hope you are enjoying this story and sorry for any spelling mistakes I’m not an expert writer after all.
