Taking the Queen

by Kiernan

Chapter the Thirty-Third: Sluttershy

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With her hooves unbound, Fluttershy led Chrysalis over to the bed. "Careful, now, watch your step," she warned, "the platform is right in front of you, so don't hurt yourself."

"I wasn't planning on doing so," smiled Chrysalis. "Hop up in front of me." Fluttershy did as she was asked, and Chrysalis kneeled down, only to have a pair of knees close around her neck. "Something wrong?"

"I'm nervous," confessed Fluttershy. "I've never done this before, and I messed up the first one, an--"

Chrysalis placed a hoof against Fluttershy's lips gently. "Don't worry about it. I'm going to handle all of it. You just sit back and relax, and let me take care of you."

"But what do I do?"

"Just relax."

Fluttershy relaxed her legs slowly, and Chrysalis pushed her head forward, gently kissing the inside of Fluttershy's thighs. When she reached her crotch, Fluttershy let out a soft whimper. As this was more gentle, Chrysalis worked more slowly, more softly. She didn't want to overwhelm her guest, and as her guest was not overwhelming her, she no longer wanted to dive right in so it could be over faster.

"It's not b-bad, is it?" asked Fluttershy. "I try to clean down there regularly..."

"You taste just fine," answered Chrysalis, dragging her tongue up her slit. She lightly suckled her clitoris, releasing it with a small kiss. "Just tell me if I'm going too far, okay?"

Not hearing Fluttershy's nod, Chrysalis assumed she was understood and pushed her tongue back inside of her pussy. She could taste the fluid just starting to drip out. It was far sweeter than anypony else she'd ever eaten out, and she wanted more. Still, she had to go slowly.

She sniffed the air again, hoping the mood had changed. Much of it had remained, such as the fear and discomfort, but even that was slowly disappearing. Most notably, however, there was a clear enjoyment starting to blossom forth, and that marked a much-needed improvement.

She reached up and placed her hoof gently on one of her guest's breasts. Immediately, she felt the pegasus tense up and clamp down, having not expected the touch. After a moment, she relaxed once again and settled down. Chrysalis didn't do much with the breast, just rolling it around gently as she worked. She didn't want to startle Fluttershy, after all. She moved slowly, lightly rubbing her teat.

All was going well so far. In light of the better mood, and that Fluttershy was finally starting to rouse, Chrysalis made a bold move. The only thing that had lightened Fluttershy's heart in their first session had been when Chrysalis has gone up her arse. It was time to tease that once again, and see if it drew any kind of response. Sliding out her long tongue all the way, Chrysalis bent herself so that only the thickest parts were writhing around between Fluttershy's folds. The pointed tip, however, slipped back out the other way and drifted down, lightly poking at Fluttershy's sphincter.

Fluttershy pulled her thighs shut again, once more squeezing Chrysalis' head. "Not there," she whimpered.

"Ai ghot?" asked Chrysalis, unable to move her tongue or jaw. "Ooh cheeng goo enghoy ich erghier."

"I know, I know," she whined. "It's not that I don't enjoy it; I do. It's just, it feels like too much..."

"Ich ghot."

"Are you sure?"

"koghighigh."

With Chrysalis' assurance, Fluttershy let go of her head. Slowly, Chrysalis wriggled her tongue up Fluttershy's arse. The more she wiggled, the more her guest leaked into her mouth. All Chrysalis could smell was the slick drippings, as everything that came into her nose filtered through it. She couldn't even take a reading of her emotional state anymore, not that such a test was needed.

Just as she pushed the last of her tongue up Fluttershy's arse, she came hard, splattering Chrysalis' face. For the first time today, she was glad to be wearing the blindfold, as such a blast at such short notice would have likely sealed her eye shut, at least for a little while.

"How's that feel?" asked Chrysalis, licking her face clean. "Is that any better?"

Silence followed.

"No? Are you shaking your head? Do you want to do something else?"

"It was great," answered Fluttershy. "I almost don't want to ask for more."

"Almost?" She began licking at Fluttershy's thighs, cleaning them.

"Well... it's a bit unsettling, actually."

Chrysalis' grin, small as it was, disappeared. She really didn't want that sort of review going out. "What can I do to make you more comfortable? Do you want to tie my hooves behind my back again?"

"No, that's fine, it's not anything you did, it's just..."

Chrysalis held her breath. The next words out of Fluttershy's mouth would either doom her to spending the rest of her life in here, or all but guarantee her release.

Suddenly, the sound of rings scraping against a rod interrupted their thoughts as Starlight walked in, tossing the curtain aside. "Is everything alright?"

Fluttershy closed her legs so fast that she accidentally kicked Chrysalis in the face. "I'm sorry!" she called back as she bolted from the cell, leaving Chrysalis on the floor with a blindfold.

Starlight helped her up and took off the blindfold before repeating her question. "Did everything go well?"

Chrysalis shook her head. "I think she hated it."

"You think?"

Well, she came all over my face, so that was a good sign, but she said there was something wrong. When I asked how to make it right, I wasn't given an answer."

Starlight cleared her throat. "Wow. That doesn't sound like a good time."

"I'm doomed," Chrysalis sighed, sitting down on the bed. "It was the one thing I had to do right, and I fucked it up. Now I'm going to be stuck here forever..."

Starlight sat down next to her and placed a hoof on her shoulder. "Losing Fluttershy is a big loss. I'll not disagree with you that this is a big hit to our case. However, we still have Rarity. Four out of five is still good, so if you can just manage to impress her, I think we can pull through."

"But everypony's going to know that I upset Fluttershy, and I couldn't possibly say how."

Starlight patted her back and stood up. "Then let's make sure you didn't fuck up on purpose. Show me what happened."

Though Chrysalis nodded, she was going to skip the first part, as nopony would believe that Fluttershy actually hit her.

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