loving him

by Shesawriter

Comet’s

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We trotted to the door and hitch breathed deep.

“Y/n.” He looked toward me.

“Yeah hitch?”

“Don’t be too upset if zipp thinks we shouldn’t be there, she still hasn’t gotten to know you.”

“Oh ..yeah, maybe I should just stay at the station, I don’t want to ruin your night.” I lower my head.

“Well I - I’m not gonna go back on what I said, we can atleast stay until zipp asks us to go but we will see.”

“Ok.” I nod as we open the doors.

“Just follow behind me.” He spoke softly as we trotted in and toward the group.

“Hey everyone!”
He said smiling wide.

They all smiled.

Sunny: “hitch you made it! We thought we would have to send zipp to get you.” She giggled.

Hitch: “oh no I couldn’t miss this, but I brought a -old friend, her names y/n.” He moves aside to reveal you.

Zipps ears perk up and she looks a bit flustered and angry.

Izzy,pipp,and sunny all gather around and introduce themselves.

After all the commotion zipp asked hitch to talk to her alone and they both went to the bedrooms so he could put sparky to sleep and talk.

Zipp: “hitch..why is she here?” She said her ears going back.

Hitch: “I know I know, but I’ve been watching her and she seems change-“

Zipp: “are you serious? I haven’t even gotten to train with her and you think she’s ‘changed’?” She cut him off in protest.

Hitch: “I know but I-“

Zipp: “do I need to take matters into my own hoof? I thought you were gonna help me with this!”

Hitch looked around in thought.

Hitch: “Ofcourse I am.. I was just….giving her a test, you know to see if she’s changing or if she’s still bad, to see if she will last through the night, couldn’t blow her cover right?”
He said nervous.

Zipp looked at him and relaxed.

Zipp: “your right, if she can pass this perhaps she is changing,… but sheriff I wouldn’t get too hasty.”

She poked her hoof at his chest.

Zipp: “ponies like that don’t just turn good easily, atleast not without a reason at hoof, if by some chance she passes today and your training works, then I’ll let her continue working with you , if not she’s coming with me.”

Hitch: “deal.”

Hitch finishes putting sparky to bed as Zipp walks out to see you listening to pipp talking about ponygram.

Zipp trotted up to you.

Zipp: “sooo y/n, how you been doing?” She slid next to me and smiled in a knowing way.

Me: “oh well you know just uh helping hitch out heh.”

Zipp: “ah well I’m sure you’ll do .. just fine…maybe..”

I gulped and hitch finally came back.

Hitch: “ready to have some fun? We have a half hour till the show starts.”

Pipp: “well I thought I’d make a short video before the show, A DANCE VIDEO!”

Izzy: “oooo do the izzzayy.”

Pipp turned on the music as Izzy started getting up and dancing wildly then she grabs sunny and they dance in sync, zipp rolls her eyes as pipp pulls her in and she smiles copying the dance.

Me: “woah.”

The four mares danced in sync as hitch grabbed me and smiled.

Hitch: “common let’s dance!”

Me: “but I - I can’t dan- oooof!”

He pulled me out and I started to follow his moves blushing, as the song went on we all free styled.

Pipp recorded her and Izzy free styling and posted it.

Pipp: “woooh- I’m definitely ready to sit down, relax and watch the light show.”

Sunny: “oh yeah uh that’s enough dancing for one day.”

Zipp watched me all night and peered with anger every so often.

Later that night they all went out on the top of the hill outside with there blankets and snacks.

The comets shot across the sky, it was a beautiful and amazing sight.

Sunny scooted close to hitch and leaned her head on him. I looked over and saw how they looked, I hated to admit it but I was getting jealous…. As the show stopped everyone began putting things up but not before zipp shuffled towards me.

Zipp: “hey, look y/n I want to apologize, I know I haven’t been the nicest but…your doing good y/n.”

She smiled and so did I.

Me: “I’m sorry for everything that happened I really am trying my best, it’s ok I would be suspicious first too.”

Both the mares smiled at eachother as hitch came over to us.

Hitch: “Hey guys everyone is in the bright house, zipp did you talk to y/n?”

Zipp: “yeah I did, glad to see you here.”

She blushed and trotted off.

Hitch: “huh what did you say to her?”
Hitch said looking suspicious.

Me: “what do you mean? All we did was apologize to eachother.”

Hitch: “seems like more than that to me hm.” His tail jolted as it swayed in a tense way and he peered at me.

Me: “it’s the truth, so the others are waiting for you?”

Hitch: “us and yes but I didn’t get to talk to you about the show.”

He sat next to me and smiled.

Hitch:”wasn’t it great?”

Me:”for sure! It was so bright and lovely.”

I felt him lean on my shoulder and I blushed hard.

Me:”uh um.”

Hitch: “just resting my head, it’s been a long day.” He closed his eyes relaxing.

Me: “heh yeah it has.”

We stayed that way for a few minutes until he lifted his head and we started talking about the comets.

As he spoke I looked down at his hoof, do I dare? I thought to myself then something caught my eye.

My eyes widened as I saw his genitals, I never knew how big a stallion could be, a bit of his shaft was poking out happily, he was talking up a storm as I kept looking.

His balls were plump and my already blushing face blushed harder, I felt a happy turned on feeling approach as I realized everything.

Hitch: “isn’t that nice, what do you think y/n?”

Hitch asked about the comets form.

Me: “you’ve no idea..”
I then looked up fast and nervously laughing.

Me: “really you’ve no idea I love comets and stars, we better get back though.

Hitch: “yeah your right let’s go.”

We both trotted in to see Izzy playing with sparky.

I looked around and noticed the time.

Me:“Woah two am.”

Hitch: “what? I have work tomorrow.”

He went to pick up sparky and he cried.

Hitch: “sparky sparkaroni! It’s time to go home.”

Izzy: “aww he’s so happy here, besides he just woke up, maybe he can spend the night with me?”

Hitch: “oh uh I don’t know um..”

Izzy and sparky looked with wide eyes doing the please face.

Hitch: “oh alright fine…just tonight.”

He trotted to the door.

Hitch: “y/n! We’re leaving!”
He hollared out as I followed behind him.

He trotted in front of me, he didn’t seem too happy.

As we got to the station he told me to clean the trash up, my ears went down actually remembering why I was here so I went around the station and picked up any cups or leftover trash.

Hitch sighed and sat down to work on some papers before he called it a night, meanwhile I grabbed the mop and decided to mop the floor.

Hitch: “y/n, I thought I said just pick up the trash?” He looked up slightly his ears flickering back and fourth.

Me: “well I just thought- I’d do the floors.”

Hitch: “oh great…” hitch dismissed my work.

I felt sorta bad he usually would be nice and atleast say thanks, he seemed like he was in a bad mood.

Me: “hitch? Is something wrong?”

Hitch: “y/n just let me finish my work.” his ears twitched in irritation then fell back.

Me: “why can’t you tell me?”
I said my ears falling back upset.

Hitch: “well you know maybe I don’t want to? Maybe I don’t want to talk to you about my life, I think you should just go to your cell for the night!” He said anger rising in his voice.

Me: “o-ok.” I said trying to fight the tears about to fall, I trotted to my cell and covered myself and cried under my blanket, I felt so much pain and sadness that everything felt hopeless.

About an hour later after I fell asleep through the tears, I felt something big slide in behind me, my body began to quiver as I felt a body spooning me and felt a hoof wrap around me.

Hitch: “m m m I’m sorry.~”

As he said that I felt a wet tongue lick my neck softly, at this point I was blushing big time, then I felt something poke on my thy as I squirmed it went between my legs and rested on my mare folds.

Me: “h-hitch?” I stuttered.

All I could hear was snoring, I was stuck like this! after the shock went away I finally fell asleep.


Author's Note

This chapter contains slight nsfw just be aware!

Sorry this took so long I’ve been writing it for days with lots of things In life bombarding me >< hope everyone enjoys!
The next will contain nsfw as well fair warning .

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