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The Witless

by Reviewfilly
After illegally harvesting apples at her own farm and meeting a sketchy benefactor, Applejack must try her hardest to keep her morals as she stumbles up the rungs of the social ladder.

Decades passed after the banishment of the Sun Tyrant and the return of the rightful Sovereign of the Moon. Life resumed its course, even if not exactly in the same fashion, despite the hushed whispers of Solar rebels in plain sight and dark carriages stopping at ponies' homes at night.

Applejack herself knew or cared little about this, however. As long as she had her farm, her family, and—most importantly—her apples, all was well.

At least until she harvested the wrong tree, and met the wrong pony at the worst possible time...


Now with a review from /mlp/ and one from PaulAsaran!

A ponyfic adaptation of the 1969 Hungarian cult-classic, a Tanú (The Witness). No prior knowledge is assumed or necessary. For more details, please see the blogpost.

Proof- and preread by Equimorto and Jessi.

Teen
Complete
Crossover
Alternate Universe
Drama
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Comedy
 
MNAP

51086 words: Estimated about 4 hours to read

17 Chapters:

  1. 1. The Apples Must Fall! 2023-03-27 19:26:01 UTC
    2299
  2. 2. Have You the Slightest Clue Who Miss Applejack Even Is? 2023-03-27 19:26:09 UTC
    2854
  3. 3. There Were No Apples, There Were Never Any Apples 2023-04-03 07:06:39 UTC
    3138
  4. 4. We’re Here to See Twilight Sparkle. She's a Good Friend of Mine. 2023-04-10 12:10:14 UTC
    2574
  5. 5. The Intercreatural Situation Is Intensifying 2023-04-17 08:35:04 UTC
    3046
  6. 6. We Will Ask Something Of You... 2023-04-24 10:28:06 UTC
    2153
  7. 7. Those Bickering Crowds 2023-05-01 10:31:55 UTC
    2508
  8. 8. The Lunatic Ride 2023-05-08 09:37:48 UTC
    3329
  9. 9. Ahead for the Lunar Tomato! 2023-05-15 10:00:56 UTC
    3032
  10. 10. The Pony Who Isn't Suspicious Is Suspicious 2023-05-22 11:53:31 UTC
    2153
  11. 11. Life is no Marzipan Cake 2023-05-29 08:41:05 UTC
    2537
  12. 12. Maybe There Weren’t Real Books, but Actually Changelings 2023-06-05 07:17:09 UTC
    3066
  13. 13. Miss Pie, Why Is It So Bright In Here? 2023-06-12 08:14:16 UTC
    3033
  14. 14. We Should Tell Them We’re Not Actual Apples! 2023-06-19 09:09:58 UTC
    2038
  15. 15. Pickle Berry Kumquat, Chimicherrychanga! 2023-06-26 09:04:39 UTC
    3686
  16. 16. Is Your Honour Deaf Or Something? 2023-07-03 08:48:01 UTC
    5042
  17. 17. Should I Lend You My Fillyfriend Too or What? 2023-07-10 09:34:40 UTC
    4598