
Goodbye to a World
Rainbow Dash slips into a coma. Unbeknownst to her friends and family, she is completely conscious—just not in Ponyville.
After an unfortunate accident renders Rainbow Dash unconscious, she wakes in a strange new world filled with hostile pony-like creatures. Stuck in a booming metropolis with unrecognizable technology and a less-than-welcoming reception from its locals, she is desperate to find a way home.
However, she quickly learns that she has bigger concerns. Unrest spreads amongst the inhabitants of this city like wildfire, and Rainbow Dash finds herself in the midst of a society teetering on the brink of revolution.
Submission for the Science Fiction Contest II.
Cover art by Gusty.


37197 words: Estimated about 3 hours to read
5 Chapters:
- Preface 2023-03-27 05:53:45 UTC355
- Part 1: The In-Between 2023-03-27 05:53:51 UTC10042
- Part 2: The Resistance 2023-03-30 04:47:42 UTC11373
- Part 3: The Blood Moon 2023-04-02 02:17:42 UTC13120
- Epilogue 2023-04-02 04:07:47 UTC2307