The reviewer and critic of the extra species girls in equestria.

"Ahhh!!!, it feels good to get some fresh air and to be able to jog calmly without having the precision of being hit by a car" I said calmly while I was walking through the park wearing sneakers, shorts and a sleeveless shirt , I also had a small bag where I had a bottle of water and of course my notebook and a pen. While jogging quietly through the park at my own pace without anyone rushing me, I begin to see how several ponies do the same as me in the distance, I also see how others do yoga or even lift weights, which for earth ponies is super easy.

"Uf... uf... ok... I jogged for 1 hour, I'd better take a little break", I said to myself as I sat on a park bench, while I caught my breath I watched how the others ponies in the distance did their exercises, while the studs dressed practically the same as me on the other hand the girls their sports tops stuck to their bodies making their tits or even their asses much more delightful to look at.

"This place seriously looks like paradise, why I never came to this place before?, it's the best place to live", I said to myself while wiping my nose from a small drop of blood seeing such a beautiful sight of many mares stretching being both earth ponies like pegasus and unicorns.

"Ok Luke, focus on what's important, until now that we know how to please a woman?", I asked in my head as I thought back, "Well let's see, yesterday as soon as a pegasus named Fluttershy arrived, it left me dry, I learned to begin with that even the I could be more timid than a sweet tooth who just wants to fuck" I said to myself as I took my book and pen out of my bag to write down the data I learned.

"I also discovered that the wings of a pegasus are its sensitive area but that is not confirmed yet, what is confirmed by Fluttershy herself is that very few pegasus have huge tits, just like their asses, very few have it big, the big Most of them have little or nothing and I can see that", I told me while I saw how the pegasi who train in the distance have tits from C to D cup, the most I see, as well as their asses, since they have decent buttocks where they can put your hands and squeeze them but that's the best.

"What else?, What else?, I've already put her breasts, her wings, the nymphomania that a shy girl has, I know! What remains to be put is if the pegasi are passive or dominant, good as Fluttershy She's the only one at the moment I won't say anything but she was neutral, well that would be all for now, just to add I'll put that Fluttershy is undoubtedly a 10 as a rating at the moment, now it's time to review 2 other pegasi", I said calmly while putting my book away in the bag.

"Well, that was enough rest, it's time to continue training", I said to myself as I then got up from the bench but while I was putting on my bag I heard a loud sound that left me deaf, it was some kind of explosion or something similar, when I looked up I saw how now in the sky there is a beautiful rainbow where it was not before and in the distance something flying at great speed.

"WHAT WAS THAT?!!!!" ask shouting without realizing being somewhat deaf.

"That sir is nothing more and nothing less than the fastest pegasus in all of Equestria, the great and only RAINBOW DASH!!!!", said a pony behind me and when I turned around it was a teenager of maybe 16 years old, She was a pegasus with orange fur and a soft purple mane and tail.

"Rainbow dash the fastest huh?", I said somewhat impressed knowing that someone could be that fast in this world.

"That's right sir, that rainbow was made by her with her special technique the Sonic Rainboom", said the pony all excited as if she was a fan of this Rainbow Dash.

"Scootaloo!!!", the voices of other girls said in the distance, when I looked better I saw how 2 more ponies of the same age as the pony in front of me were coming towards me.

“Oh, Apple Bloom, Sweetie Belle, sorry for running like that, I just wanted to see Rainbow Dash better" said the pony named Scootaloo.

"Calm down, we understand but remember that you said you would help me pick apples with Sweetie Belle", said a yellow earth pony with a red tail and mane with a red bow on her head and apparently her name is Apple Bloom .

"That's right Scootaloo the 3 of us are 1 so let's stop wasting time", said the other pony who was a unicorn with white fur with a tail and mane of 2 colors being a soft pink and a soft purple and this pony was called Sweetie Belle.

"Right sorry girls, well let's not waste time," Scootaloo said as she ran off after her 2 friends.

"Well that was interesting but it will be more interesting to meet that Rainbow Dash, let's see if I can find her and she went in that direction", I said as then without further ado I started to see if I can find Rainbow Dash and know what she is like and who she is.

(3 hours later)

"Ugh....ugh....I've been looking for 3 hours and still nothing, it was 9 AM when I started this search and it's now 12 noon and my body knows it because I'm starting to get hungry", I said to myself while taking a breath after a search without traces of that Rainbow Dash, "I think... that I should stop this search, it's useless and also... why am I hearing snoring?", I ask myself now without understanding anything.

While I was looking for where these loud snores were coming from I could see how there was a cloud above me but it was not as high as the others, "Ok this is strange, could it be that this pegasus is Rainbow Dash?", I asked how then thinking that I just said "EXCUSE YOU, CAN YOU HEAR ME!!!!", I said out loud to wake up whatever is sleeping on this cloud.

"(Yawn)...mmm what's wrong?", asked a voice as I then saw a pegasus slowly coming down from the cloud, as she came down I could see how she was wearing black mini shorts with purple lines, she was wearing a colored sleeveless shirt white with the symbol of a cloud with a lightning bolt of many colors, also accompanied by that shirt she wore a small dark blue jacket with white lines, in the end she had red sneakers, that being all her clothing. Once the pegasus came down to where I was staying flying centimeters from the ground curiously, I could now see in detail what she was like, having light blue fur, her tail and mane were the color of the rainbow, that is, all the colors and she have a dark pink eyes, "Hey friend, are you there?, Were you the one who woke me up?", the pony asked sleepily.

"If it was me, I'm sorry if I woke up you, it's because I wanted to ask you something," I said respectfully to her.

"It must be very important, friend, if you wake me up from my dream, tell me, what did you want to ask me?" asked the pegasus while she rubbed her eyes with her hands to be more awake.

"Well I wanted to ask if you've seen a certain Rainbow Dash around here, I've been looking for her like 3 hours ago and still nothing, I want to know what she looks like now that I heard from a fan of hers that she's the fastest pegasus in Equestria", I told this girl.

"Haha, well, you're in luck, my friend, since I'm the fastest, the most intrepid and the only RAINBOW DASH!!!!" she said posing all manly while she smiled.

"Is it really you? Wow I thought you would look different but that doesn't matter, I can't believe you're the fastest pegasus in Equestria", he said fascinated while noticing 2 things, the first is that this pony has an ego through the clouds and the other one that of all the hits I saw Rainbow's breasts were cup At the bottom, even so I can notice how she has a muscular body because of how much she must exercise since not only her arms but also her legs they are well defined.

"Thanks for your compliments friend, well you know who I am but now I want to know who you are", Rainbow said calmly.

"I'm Luke and well, I just arrived in Ponyville yesterday so I'm new", I told her calmly.

"Makes sense after all I'm very famous around here haha, tell me do you want an autograph?", she asked with an inflated ego while she gave a smug smile.

"No thanks, what I wanted is to know how you do that ability of yours called Sonic Rainboom", I told her calmly, Rainbow at this she covers her mouth but doesn't avoid laughing non-stop.

"Hahaha do you really think I'll tell you my secret?, Haha you really make me laugh dude", she said as tears welled up in her eyes.

"Oh come on!!!, how about we make a bet", I said to her.

"Hmm interesting, ok but that's how it goes if I win you have to take me to lunch no excuses", she said with a confident smile at the end.

"For my sake, but if I win, you must not only tell me how you do that technique of yours, but you must also fulfill a request, it's fair since you're superior to me", I told her.

"Very well it seems fair to me Luke after all I am very fast for any pony in Equestria, ok since we decided our bet the competition will be a race" Rainbow said with a big smile all confident.

"I knew you would say that Rainbow even though I don't know you, so to be equal the race will only be on foot without your wings and without my magic", I said.

"WHAT!?, That's not fair, running bores me, I prefer flying, it's much easier and more comfortable", she said as she crossed her arms making a tender pout.

"It's only fair, Rainbow, after all if you're the fastest in Equestria, a foot race should be the easiest thing in the world for you, unless you depend on your wings", I said with an arrogant smile to make her angry.

"NO!, I'm the fastest and I can beat you on foot, I'll show you", she said now serious as she finally puts her feet on the ground and puts her wings away, "Now follow me I know the perfect place for a race without anything to interrupt us", she said as I then followed her and while I was doing it I could see how despite she practically had no tits, she did have a somewhat large ass with a pair of buttocks which you can put your hands on and there is still some space left over, at least what she lacks in her chest she makes up for with a hard ass that's contained by those shorts.

After following her for about 10 minutes of walking we finally arrived at a small race track where there are some stands to sit and watch how the ponies run, "Ok here Luke will be the first to finish 3 complete laps wins", Rainbow said, serious like her is defending her pride now because of what I said before.

"Alright Rainbow I'm ready", I told her as I set my bag aside with my magic and went with her to get into position.

Once we're both ready to run away Rainbow counts down, "3....2....1....GO!!!" she said as then we both ran away, despite having a somewhat high resistance I could see how Rainbow without problems is much faster than me passing by 1 meter away, while Rainbow finishes the first lap, I speed up the pace making the veins in my body are noticeable surprising Rainbow which I manage to overcome and then the second round was now mine.

Now, in the last lap, we were both giving our all, running as far as our bodies allowed us, while Rainbow was sweating from not flying, while I was sweating more than I could with my veins about to burst from the effort of running. and not stop, everything was going well, I was looking at the finish line until I tripped because of a stone but far from falling and losing, what happened was that I rolled on the ground reaching the finish line for nothing, beating Rainbow for this accident, nothing more.

"I...win...", I said all dizzy from spinning around on the floor while I have no idea what happened and more because I'm all covered in dirt by my body rolling like a ball.

"SHIT!, I HATE LOSING AND MORE TO AN AMATEUR" Rainbow said angrily as her ego is so strong that it hurts to lose to someone.

While Rainbow was angry about losing, I now more focused and not as dizzy as before I told her, "Calm down Rainbow it's just a race it's not like your reputation was thrown away, for what it's worth I should tell you that I only won from luck since even without your wings you are fast as a leopard or even faster, now I know why you are the fastest in Equestria, also even if you lost I will pay you for lunch after all I am starving too", I said with a smile as our stomach growls.

After saying that to Rainbow, her anger disappeared while now she looked happier, "Thanks Luke, I still have to do my part and tell you how I do the sonic rainboom as well as something else you want to do", she said more calm and friendly.

"So tell me is there any request you want to make Luke with your free pass for beating me?", Rainbow asked.

"Well….there's something and it's kind of out of tune," I tell Rainbow as she blushes at me.

"Come on buddy, tell me, it shouldn't be that bad" Rainbow said as she looked at me.

"Well if you say it like that then let's have sex, that's what I ask for having won", I tell Rainbow while she was trembling inside with fear for saying something like that.

"Oh...you really want that", Rainbow said while now she is red as a tomato all over her face, after she said that I could see how Rainbow she took off her jacket throwing it aside, then she started to take off her white shirt to expose her small black bra and then while Rainbow looks away all embarrassed she hears a small "click" which came from her bra and immediately afterwards she took off her bra exposing her small cup A tits and the color of her nipples and areolas was a dark blue color to differentiate from her light blue fur.

"Wait!! are you really going to do it?", I ask her as not only a few drops of blood come out of my nose but also my friend below is starting to stand up.

"Yes we will, now shut up and take off your clothes, let's get this over with," Rainbow said all red as she now began to pull down her mini shorts exposing her black panties as she now got a better look at Rainbow's muscular thighs. After taking a look at those legs I could see how Rainbow lowered her panties, leaving them in the mud and now she was completely naked wearing only her red sneakers.

While Rainbow watched me take off my clothes it is obvious to know that she and I are embarrassed but even with this I could see her body in detail, she had an athletic body with not very large muscles in her arms and legs as well as remarkable abs and Shaped seeing how despite not being bulky like Fluttershy, if you have a fit figure with well-defined curves, once I took off my last piece of clothing Rainbow widens her eyes when she sees my huge 12-inch cock all hard and erect, "How can you walk with something this big?", she asked as she kneels in front of me and grabs my cock with one of her hands.

"Ok big boy let's get this over with quickly", Rainbow said as then using her 2 hands she began to masturbate the entire length of my cock with firmness and unparalleled speed, her hands were so fast that the feeling is as if I had penetrated a pussy, while her hands went up and down the entire length of my cock at a speed greater than anyone else, I saw how she bit her lips while she got wet from touching such a big cock.

"I see you like it, don't you?", I ask teasingly as those hands feel so good masturbating me.

"Shhh, shut up", she said red with embarrassment as her pussy slowly got wet from such a sensation in her hands, while Rainbow continued non-stop, She couldn't take it anymore and then using her tongue she began to lick my big balls, when she did this It gave me a tingle since his tongue really liked to lick my balls all over the place, wetting them at the same time that my huge cock got harder.

While she kept licking my balls and masturbating me at full speed I felt like this was very exciting even though this girl has very little body, while I was enjoying this Rainbow she stopped masturbating and then began to lick my cock without saying anything, when she started to lick my cock, I felt how her tongue was agile and fast, licking my glans at full speed before swallowing my cock, reaching only halfway into her mouth, while I felt how she deepthroated me with half of my cock she doesn't stop and then using her hands she started to play with my balls squeezing them.

"Rainbow...you do it very well", I said between moans as I felt my cock being swallowed by her mouth at the same time that her tongue licked my glans non-stop and that those hands squeezed my balls while being in unparalleled pleasure. then after she deep throated me a few more she finally took my dick out of her mouth.

"Easy big boy...if you're going to cum you will...into me," Rainbow said between gasps. After she said that, she proceeds to turn around, letting me see her little ass, which despite not being big at all if she has hard and firm buttocks to squeeze, then she puts herself in 4, giving me her little ass, "Come on, fuck me if You want that so much" she said, all red as she looks at how her pussy is dripping, as well as showing that her cutie mark is a cloud with a lightning bolt of many colors, the same one she wore on the print of her shirt.

"Of course I'll do it", I told her as I then placed myself behind her but before penetrating her I began to see those wings of hers unlike Fluttershy's, they look much more muscular and for some reason hard, I touched them gently, drawing a powerful moan from Rainbow.

"Silly....let me know before you touch...they're sensitive," she moaned as she delicately felt my fingers all over those hard wings.

While my fingers go through those feathers I say to myself in my head "The theory that the wings are the erogenous zones of the pegasus is true, this confirms it", I told me when she took the doubt out of my head.

"Stop...playing with my...wings and fuck me!!!" she said all despair.

"Of course I'm sorry, there you go!!!", I said as then without seeing my cock I entered one of her holes, when I entered with force I felt how my cock was squeezed with unparalleled force, the sensation being very rich, while I slowly moved my hips opening this hole.

"GET IT OUT....AHHH!, IT'S THE OTHER HOLE!", she said between moans of pleasure, then realizing I put it in hers super tight anus. Despite having put it in the wrong hole, I could see how her wings now remained raised and hard while static.

"Sorry, give me a few minutes to enjoy this little ass", I told her how I slowly entered that tight anus, while my cock slowly entered her ass. I pressed my cock against her anus, putting great pressure on me that tight anus. I kept moving my hips to fuck that anus and while I did it, I felt Rainbow's cum wetting my legs.

"Ok...enough of your ass, let's go to your pussy", I told her how I then take my cock out of her tight anus and then I play a little with her pussy passing my cock through it making her moan until finally I put it in, when I did it easily my cock reached the end of her pussy colliding with her uterus, entering it all without a problem.

"IT'S.....HUGE...AND...FEELS....INCREDIBLE!!!!", she said as she came non-stop from having such a huge thing inside her.
"This....pussy is just as tight as your anus", I said as I began to fuck that pussy now without further ado, while I moved my hips making our pelvises collide with those hard little buttocks making a soft "plap" when they collide I felt like my dick was being squeezed by that wet pussy that is pressed more and more every time I make my dick collide with her uterus.

"YES!, THIS IS BETTER... THAN THE LAST... FUCK I HAD!, SOARIAN IS NOTHING... NEXT TO YOU AHHH!", Rainbow screamed as she came non-stop about me all greedy and excited as even their wings do not show as they move non-stop as if trying to fly being their way of expressing how much fun they are having.

As I fucked that pussy non-stop moving my hips back and then forward to make them collide with those hard buttocks, "You can tell you love this Rainbow, I won't deny it, I also like fucking you", I said while grabbing her hips and then using one of my hands without saying anything I spank that ass even though it doesn't bounce if a loud "PLAP!!!" sounded that left both my hand red and that buttock hard, when doing this Rainbow moaned more forcefully cumming more while her tongue was out at the same time that her small tits bounce non-stop under her as they can with those hard nipples and erect.

"Rainbow.... now.... I can't take it much longer", she told him between moans as I fuck her non-stop, letting her cum stain my balls and legs.

"DO IT !, FILL ME NON-STOP !", she screamed as her wings are hard and trying to fly without success while her pussy is opened non-stop.

"So....TAKE IT ALL!!" , I said forcefully before burying my cock deep inside that pussy, filling it with a lot of cum causing Rainbow to scream in pleasure as she had a big orgasm from feeling her pussy all full of cum, plus her wings were hard and erect while being filled. Once I let everything inside her, I slowly took out my cock so that all that cum came out in heaps, while the cum came out of that pussy, Rainbow lay down on the ground, finally all tired, having residual orgasms from such a sensation.

"That...was...20% cooler", she said all satisfied while she doesn't mind being like this besides that her wings are finally calm.

"I say....it was 50% cooler", I told her between gasps as I also lay back to rest.

"Let's take a break...and then eat", she said between gasps.

"Ok", is the only thing I said when I was tired after this.

(A bit later)

"MMM THIS IS DELICIOUS!!!", I said all delighted to eat a pizza that besides being big the cheese melted and came out of it when I lifted a slice.

"What did I tell you Luke, this place has the best pizzas besides choosing what to put on it," Rainbow said with a smile as she sits in front of me eating the pizza which we share.

While we are both eating this delicious pizza quietly, I then stop and ask her "Well Rainbow, tell me now about your technique to do the sonic rainboom", I said while drinking some juice, Rainbow at this she looks at the sides so no one is around and says, "My secret technique to do the sonic rainboom is.....nothing," she said calmly.

"What!?", I said all in shock hearing that.

"I already told you nothing, there is no secret technique, it is only to fly fast past the speed of sound and nothing else comes out, it is something very difficult to do that I only did 4 times in my life, the first of all was when I was a child , I wanted to defend my best friend from some bullies and for that I decided to do a career and in the course of this it happened doing it for the first time and getting my cutie mark that you see on my shirt and the one I have below," she said mockingly. how she makes me spit my juice for saying that.

"Hahaha after that first time I did it again to save my friend Rarity in a competition to know who was the best pegasus, then the next one was at Cadence and Shinigh Armor's wedding that was the third and the fourth was the one you saw Today, if there are more, I don't remember them, I hope they served you there, Luke", Rainbow said calmly as she began to drink her juice.

"Thank you very much for this information, Rainbow, which is all simply curious, and also thanks for the above," I said with a smile, blushing, making her blush at these words, while she drinks her juice, I say to her, "Tell me, Rainbow, what are you going to do?, you dedicate yourself, what is your job?", I ask him curious.

"Well I'm a Wonderbolt and clearly the fastest, that's my profession and what I love the most since since I was a child I wanted to be one and now I finally am", she said proudly while her eyes shine full of joy.

"That's a beautiful thing to hear, I'm here because I want to be a great writer and I hope to achieve it", I told her full of determination.

"I know you'll make it Luke, after all guys like you make even a loss feel good," Rainbow said with a smile causing me to smile back.

"So tell me are you full or do we order another Rainbow pizza?", I ask her.

"You already know the answer big boy", Rainbow said with a smile making us both weigh the same, "WAITER ANOTHER PIZZA HERE!", We both said at the same time wanting more.

(30 minutes later)

"Ugh.... that was really tasty", he said to Rainbow as she couldn't take it anymore.

"I'm saying the same, a pizza like this fills you up too much", she said, being the same as me, "Well I have to go Luke, it was really fun spending time with you, I hope you achieve your goal, I wish you good luck", said Rainbow with a smile like It spreads its wings and just flies off at high speed.

"Well... there are 2 pegasi with her, 1 more to go and I'll have a review about these now the question is, which will be the last girl?", I asked myself while I was writing in my book what I learned today with Rainbow Dash later of all this adventure on my second day in Ponyville.