The reviewer and critic of the extra species girls in equestria.

"What are you going to do what!!!?" Flaming asked, all shocked.

"What you heard, Flaming, I'm taking a 'vacation' for a few weeks," I told her calmly while we were having margarita sandwiches for lunch.

"But... what is our boss going to think about this action that you're going to do?, It's very sudden from one day to the next", she said, still all surprised.

"Don't worry, Flaming, I already talked to him and I understand, everything is okay, don't worry", I said to her all relaxed while eating.

(30 minutes before)

"Let me see if I understood correctly Luke, you want to take a "vacation" according to you so you can write a book on how to fuck all the races of Equestria and know which one best suits the tastes of ponies or other races, tell me that is What did you say in a few words?", Kingpin asked me while sitting in front of me.

"That's right, sir, that in a few words, in addition to clearly doing everything with an honest review and a rating of how good the experience was, so tell me what you think of my idea?", I asked him calmly, although inside you wanted to run away for saying these things in front of my boss.

"The truth sounds very interesting, there are no such books around anywhere, very well I authorize your "vacation" I hope that book is good Luke I have high expectations", said Kingpin.

"Don't worry boss I will do it with all my effort and if I fail, you can fire me", I said very confident while giving a smile at the end while in my mind I was telling myself why I had to say that.

(present)

"Very well Luke, if the boss says it's fine, well for me the same, the only bad thing is that I won't see you around here and I won't be able to have lunch with you either", Flaming said somewhat sadly.

"Don't worry Flaming, I promise that when I get back I'll make it up to you with something, besides I'll miss you too", I said with a smile.

"Hahaha you're a fool", she said with a smile while her face was blushing.

"Hahaha I know, now let's have lunch together this last day and have a good time", I told her all happily.

"If we do that", she said Flaming as we finished eating our sandwiches.

(Later that same day at night)

"Okay, let's see where I can start this "sexual adventure", where is the best place to start?", I asked while I had an equestria map on my table, "I'll leave the dragons along with the griffons and the zebras for later. Being on the other side of the world, the yaks together with the crystal ponies can wait since it's very cold in that area, the alicorns for last if I can even touch one of the princesses", I told me at the same time time that marked on the map the places where I will not go for the moment.

"Ok, if we put all that aside and just focus on going for the basics being pegasi, unicorns and earth ponies that leaves me a place to go and that would be Ponyville, perfect to start and more knowing that the 3 races are there", I told me as I circled Ponyville on the map.

"Ponyville will be very good, now to prepare my travel things", he told me as I went to my room and while I grabbed a large suitcase with my magic I took some clothes from my closet both simple and elegant clothes just in case, I also put my toothbrush with my comb, but in addition to all that I put the most important thing being a small notebook, a completely blank book and several pens.

Once I finished preparing everything for my trip, I just closed my suitcase and left it on the table, "Ok, I've prepared everything, I have enough money for all this adventure, now I just have to rest and see what clothes I wear tomorrow", I said to myself. as I went to sleep but anxious and nervous for not knowing what this trip would hold for me.

(The next day)

RINGH!!!!!

My alarm went off telling me that it was 6 A.M., when I turned it off, I got out of bed and quickly went to wash my face all anxious and in less than 5 minutes I was more than awake, "Very well let's see what clothes I will wear", I said before quickly deciding on a white t-shirt, black pants, black sneakers and a red jacket to finish, once I changed and grabbed my suitcase I took a last look at my room, "(deep breath) ok I'm ready" , I said firmly before leaving.

While I was walking through the streets of Manehattam, I was heading towards the train station to take one bound for Ponyville, it didn't take much more than 15 minutes to get to the train station, "That was easy, really, I thought it would happen something bad", I said all positive before seeing a huge line in front of me to get tickets that was as long as a giraffe scarf, "I had to talk", I said in response as now I had to wait.

(1 hour and 30 later)

"ATTENTION!!! IN BREBES WE ARRIVED AT PONY VILLE!!!", The conductor said aloud through some speakers placed on the train, when I heard that my heart did not stop pumping blood quickly, then I looked out the window and saw a totally different town from Manehattam just a few meters away as the train arrived very quickly at the town, I could even say that queuing took me longer than getting here.

After waiting for the train to stop, the conductor said through those speakers "EVERYONE DOWN!!!", when I heard him say that, I took my suitcase and got off the train with many other passengers and without turning around I went out to see the town, when I arrived I began to notice how the houses had thatched roofs and how each house was almost the same as the previous one but with only slight changes.

"I have never seen anything like this", I said aloud to see this difference from a huge city like Manehatam to a simple humble town, while walking through the streets free of cement I noticed several stores like a SPA, a very colorful candy store within sight called Sugarcube Corner for its sign and also a little further on a clothing store called Boutique Carrusel.

But even though I was surprised to see all these shops, all my attention went away when I saw all the ponies here, there were ponies of all breeds and they all looked happy without complaints to see pegasus fly or unicorns use magic, it was the ideal town to anyone, "THIS PLACE IS AMAZING!!!" I said almost screaming when I saw all this what they have to offer, "Ok Luke calm down, take a deep breath and concentrate", I said to myself as I relaxed for a few moments, "Ok now first go find an inn to spend the night, and then the rest", I said aloud as I went to look for a place to sleep.

After walking a bit I found an inn which consisted of only 2 floors, when I entered and rang the bell an earth pony came out from some curtains, "Good morning sir, what is offered to you?", she asked all friendly, "I-I -I" I was nervous when I saw that this pony had huge cup H breasts.

"Do all earth ponies have them like this?", I asked mentally all impressed. After all, my last girlfriend I had in high school was barely a D cup.

"Hello, is there anyone inside?", asked this pony when she saw me, I was nervous.

"Sorry, I wanted to ask you for a room, how much would it cost per night?", i said.

“It would be 15 bits, nothing more", she said all kindly.

“Nothing more than 15 bits?, Isn't it a bit cheap?" I asked, all impressed.

"Many say that but it's because it doesn't include breakfast, that's why the price, so tell me, do you want a room?", she asked one Once again.

"Yes please", I told her now more relaxed.

"Ok give me a second sir", said this girl as she turned around to look for my key and when she did she can see the huge ass this girl had, it was huge that only those shorts she was wearing covered her huge buttocks hard as steel, when I saw this I can't help but get a little blood from my nose but I wiped it quickly before he knew it.

"Okay, here you are sir, hope your stay in Ponyville is to your liking, any problem with your room let me know", she said with a smile.

"Thank you very much", I said before going to see my new room, after going upstairs The stairs with the key I opened room 5 as marked, upon entering I could see how simple it was, it had a bed for one, a window to let in fresh air and a small bathroom to relieve yourself and bathe.

After seeing everything that this place offered, I left my suitcase on the bed and took my toothbrush and comb out of it to leave them in the bathroom, I was presentable and honestly I don't look bad at all, after that I took out my notebook and one of the many pens, "Okay let's start writing down what the girls here have to offer," I said before taking my key and heading out to see more of this great town.

When I left the inn I started walking through the streets to see where they were taking me, to my surprise I ended up arriving at a park where there was only fresh air and sounds of birds singing, "Ahhh there is no pollution here, it is so relaxing" , I said everything relaxed before seeing how a white rabbit came running at full speed ahead, when this rabbit passed between my legs I asked if this was normal here, but then when I looked forward again something collided with me, throwing me to the ground with force.

While I was lying on the ground I couldn't see anything but I felt 2 huge things on my face, they were extremely soft so much that my face sank into these things, "ANGEL WAIT!!!", I heard the cry of a pony very close to me curiously as if it was next to me, "Eh......AHHHH!!!!", again I heard this girl scream before realizing that what was blocking my view was this pony that was on top of me.

When she got up I heard her say, "Sorry, sorry, I didn't mean to," said this pony, as she cleaned me up.

"Don't worry, these things happen.... HOLY CELESTIA!!!!", I said screaming when I saw this girl now, she was a yellow pegasus, her tail and mane were light pink but what made me scream was see the huge breasts that this girl had, they were bigger than those of the land pony of the inn, this girl having an I cup, this pegasus wore a white blouse which is noticeably tailored to hold those huge tits, she also wore a green skirt that reached her knees and it had butterflies on its sides, to finish she had pink stockings and green shoes.

"Sorry sir....I didn't mean to...throw it to the ground", said this pony but extremely low I could hardly hear her, while she said this I could see how she covered her face with her long hair at the same time time that I could notice that she is shy.

"It's okay, don't worry, tell me what's your name?", I asked her as calmly as possible despite knowing that those huge tits were in my face for a few seconds.

"I am (can't hear anything)", she said her name but too softly to even hear her.

"Sorry, could you say it one more time but a little louder?", I asked kindly.

"I'm fluttershy", she said a little louder.

"Greetings, Fluttershy, I'm Luke and it's nice to meet you. Tell me, was that rabbit from a few moments ago yours?" I asked.

“Yes, it's my pet called angel, he ran off because of one of his many whims," Fluttershy said a little more openly.

"Oh I see, I know you don't know me and I don't know you either, but do you mind if I help you look for it?", I asked while giving her a smile.

"Would you really do it!!!?", she asked animated so much that her wings spread.

"Sure, after all it shows that you need help and I'd be happy to help you," I said with all sincere with a smile at the end.

"THANK YOU, THANK YOU" she said forcefully as she hugged me but while I felt her hug I blushed when I felt those 2 big boobs crush against me on my chest.

"Okay let's go look for him, he went this way", She said as she walks in front of me, after she hug me.

"If there is, I'll go”, I told her while blushing, while I wrote down in my notebook that the pegasus breasts are soft like cotton.

While looking for her rabbit with Fluttershy, "Tell me, Luke, are you new here?", she asked me, and I tell her as we walk but my eyes can't help but see that cleavage that she has thanks to her blouse, besides that every time she walks I see how her tits bounce with the softest step making a "boing" in my head every time time they bounce.

"You come from far away Luke, could I know what your job is?, Of course if you don't mind saying it", she asked, somewhat interested.

"Well, I'm a writer, I've written several books but none have ever been released, I'm here to see if I can fulfill my dream of being a great writer," i told her, all full of hope.

"Well, surely someone as... cute as you can do it," Fluttershy said as she blushed for saying that.

"Haha thanks but don't say those things you make me blush coming from such a beautiful pegasus", I answered while she blushed when I said that, Fluttershy turned red as a tomato and covered her face.

"Th-thank you," she said, all embarrassed, then I saw that an angel was hidden among some bushes.

"Look fluttershy there's this one," I said to her pointing in angel's direction.

When she saw it, she ran towards angel at full speed, "Come here angel, don't run away!!!", she yelled before throwing herself into the bushes, when she did I couldn't know if she caught him or not, but what I could see It's how her skirt rose, now in my view of Fluttershy's huge ass, I could see those huge yellow buttocks that she has while each one was adorned with butterflies on their sides, in addition to seeing that she was wearing pink pantyhose that are almost tucked between her buttocks completely.

"I GOT YOU!!!", fluttershy yelled in victory as she held angel in her hands, when she got up she looked in my direction and asked me "Tell me luke are you alright?" she asked, all curious when she saw me standing there, all sweaty and with a little blood coming out of my nose because she didn't know that her huge ass was exposed to my eyes.

"Yes, I'm fine, I only fell when I was about to follow you", I told her calmly while inside I wondered if those buttocks were hard or soft, "I see you have your pet, I don't understand how a rabbit can cause so many problems", I tell her while Angel had an angry face.

"I don't understand it either, but thanks to your help I have it", she said happily as she caressed Angel's ears.

"It was a pleasure helping you Fluttershy, well I guess my work here is done," she told her as she was about to leave.

"Wait Luke" Fluttershy said making me stop and look at her, "If you don't have anything else to do…you can…come to my house…and help me with my animals if you want" she said she all shy.

"Sure, let's go to your house", I told her without hesitation because maybe this is my chance to be with her and for something to happen if fate allows it. "Ok follow me, it's a bit far almost to the outside of Ponyville, I hope you don't mind," she said as she walked. "Of course not, it would be nice to see your house," I said in response as I followed Fluttershy to her house.

(10 minutes later)

After a little walk with Fluttershy I was able to see her house, "Tell me, do you like it?", she asked.

"I....love it!!!", I told her when I saw his beautiful cabin adorned with many houses for birds, while we crossed a small bridge where there was a small stream below it, I could begin to notice the number of animals that were here, from birds to rabbits to butterflies, there were a huge amount of wildlife.

"Never despite seeing something so beautiful", he said, all fascinated by this unique sight.

"Thanks jiji, follow me, come here", Fluttershy said as I went to the back of her house, when I followed her my eyes widened when I saw a kind of paradise behind her house where there were a huge number of animals, "Tell me, Luke, do you like my sanctuary?, I did it so that all the animals have a place to come to, tell me what you think?", she asked...

"If I said that it's horrible, I'd lie to you and if I told you that it's also beautiful, this is a paradise for my eyes", I said when I saw this that nobody would believe it, at least in the big city.

"Thanks, that someone who comes from far away says it makes me very happy" said fluttershy somewhat blushing, "Very well Angel don't do any more mischief", said fluttershy as she leaves Angel on the ground and then leaves all angry. "Well Luke, help me feed the animals, when we're done I'll buy you a margarita sandwich," said Fluttershy all kindly.

"Of course, let's make sure it won't take long," I said, all optimistic.

(3 hours later)

"Ahhhh ..... I can't take it anymore", I said tired, never thinking that it would take 3 hours, but while I was tired I could see how Fluttershy was normal with a smile on her face.

"Thanks Luke, come inside", she said as I then saw the interior of her house, when I entered I could see how she had a big green armchair with a smaller one next to it, a small tea table and several shelves full of books and to finish a basket next to the stairs that surely belonged to Angel.

"Take a seat Luke, I'll make the sandwiches in a few minutes" said fluttershy to which I went to sit on the couch, while I relaxed I saw how this sofa is comfortable and cozy with a fireplace and several family photos watching Fluttershy's family, While I was waiting, I was curious to know where those stairs lead, but most likely to his room.

"Ready, here you go, go ahead and eat without fear, I made them with love", Fluttershy said with a smile after putting a plate with 6 margarita sandwiches on the table, while she drank one and I did the same, she asked me "Tell me, Luke, do you have pets? ?" I ask all interested.

"Not really, I wanted to have a puppy but I couldn't, that doesn't change the fact that at some point I will have one", she told him kindly.

"How cute you are", she said all happy, while we ate.

"Tell me Fluttershy, what was the reason for doing all that animal reversal in the back of your house?", I asked.

"Since I was a child I have liked animals and one of my dreams was to make a reserve for them, after many years I achieved it thanks to my friends, for something my special talent is to be able to talk to animals and they talk to me," she said. all calm.

"Well, it makes me happy that you followed your dreams", I said with a smile, while she blushed, "Tell me Fluttershy where is the bathroom? I need to wash my face for a moment", I tell her all calm.

"There's one upstairs, it's the door on the right," she said.

"Ok, I'll be back in a few moments," I tell her before leaving my notebook on the coffee table and going up the stairs.

Once I'm upstairs I go where she told me and after washing my face I leave the bathroom, but then I see another door in front of me, "Should I do it?", I mentally wonder whether or not to enter her room but in the end I do. I did, when I entered I noticed how there is a bed with some butterfly sheets, a small nightstand with a lamp on it, a closet in a corner, some drawers for clothes and little else.

When I checked the whole room there was nothing special but when I checked under his bed out of curiosity I saw how he had huge dildos of all sizes underneath along with many porn magazines and a lot of lubricant, when I saw this I couldn't believe it, "What a fool I am, I just realized that the shy ones are the sweetest and worse than whores, how I didn't see it coming", I told myself before quickly going downstairs with Fluttershy as if nothing had happened.

When I went downstairs I could see Fluttershy reading my notebook and when I saw this I almost had a heart attack, "Fluttershy I can explain it", I told her all scared, but curiously she looked calm, "Tell me Luke can I know what this is?, I promise not get angry," she said calmly.

I then take a deep breath and tell him, "The reason for being here is to create a sex book in a few words, I couldn't help but write down what your breasts felt like in my notebook, seriously sorry", I told him all embarrassed.

"A sex book huh? Tell me, will you put the identity of the ponies that participate or is it all anonymous?" she asks as she puts my notebook down on the table and looks right at me.

"Everything will be anonymous, the only thing I would put would be the experience with that pony and nothing else, I would never put what it's called or what it looked like in detail", I told her, all surprised by the reaction she has.

"I see, come sit down Luke please, I have something to tell you," she said as she patted the sofa signaling me to sit down.

I then swallowing saliva and once I sat down on the sofa again I ask her, "What... what did you want to tell me Fluttershy?" I ask her being scared, then Fluttershy immediately gets up from her seat and sits on my legs, when she did this it took me by surprise but it took me more by surprise that she guided my hands to her big breasts.

As my hands were placed on Fluttershy's soft tits, my fingers sinking into those big melons, "Yeah, that's the thing Luke, take me, I need a real dick, if you please me I'll let you put whatever you want in your book but please give me your dick!!!", she said all horny.

Although my brain was still trying to process what was happening, my body already knew what to do. "It's a deal Fluttershy, but first let me see your huge breasts first hand", I said all eager to see her tits.

"Sure," she said as she then lifted up her white blouse, revealing her huge tits contained by her pink bra, but that was short-lived as she unbuttoned her bra to now expose her huge melons. When I saw those huge tits, a little blood came out of my nose at the sight of those 2 yellow melons adorned with pink nipples and areolas like their mane, "Come on, do it, tomato", she said all horny and then I now plunged my hands on those huge breasts making her moan at the same time that I touched her soft and silky fur while I sank my hands into her huge soft tits. After spending only a few minutes touching her huge breasts and feeling her moan, Fluttershy took my hands off her breasts and got up, "Well now I have to know how big your member is, Luke", she said, all excited as then when she went down my pants hit her face, Fluttershy's eyes widen at the sight of my 12-inch dick as thick as an arm with 2 pairs of balls as big as tennis balls.

"YOU HAVE A MONSTER HERE!!!", she screamed before starting to lick my cock, when she did this I could feel how her tongue moves agilely all over my glans while soaking it with saliva, while she was taking little by little My dick in her mouth was a little more exciting to feel those big soft tits on my legs.

"You're... very good, how I didn't realize... I realized that you were shy... with a great addiction to sex", I said to her between moans while I saw how she put my whole cock in her mouth, filling it with sage while moaning on my cock and that tongue won't stop licking the entire length of my cock, then Fluttershy seamlessly deepthroats my whole cock into her mouth before pulling it out with a contented moan.

While my cock is full of saliva and all hard as a rock fluttershy says, "I can say the same about you Luke, unicorns don't have it that big only earth ponies, you are also full of surprise", she said before giving my cock a tender kiss, "But let's stop talking and let's get on with it," Fluttershy said as she stood up and then she took off her skirt leaving it on the floor letting me see her in her pink pantyhose, "Do you like what you see?, If you don't like it then there's more," Fluttershy said as she turned around letting you see her huge yellow ass again but then with a smile she pulled down her panties letting you now see her bare ass with nothing in between.

While I had Fluttershy's completely naked ass in my view she started to shake it from side to side moving those huge buttocks, then she told me, "Come here and analyze this ass for your book, feel free to do what you want", she said all horny while looking at me, I then got up from the chair and knelt down to have that yellow ass just inches from my face.

"Okay, here we go", I said before starting to touch those big buttocks with my hands, when I started to touch her buttocks Fluttershy started to moan as she felt like this ass was soft and greasy because my hands were sinking into these buttocks that were as soft as her tits, after playing a little with those buttocks I noticed how barely her wet pussy was visible since those buttocks monopolize everything in sight, then using my hands I opened that pair of yellow buttocks to reveal the pussy fluttershy wet and her anus.

While I was listening to how Fluttershy moaned, I didn't hesitate to lick her pussy, when I did this I heard her moan loudly, while I licked this juicy pussy full of fluids with my tongue, I licked her insides, savoring everything to the bottom, making her moan more. After giving her pussy one last lick, now I concentrated on licking her big buttocks, leaving them all covered in saliva while Fluttershy's pussy kept dripping on the floor.

"YES LUKE....DON'T STOP!!!", Fluttershy said between moans, all excited, so after licking her pussy and leaving those buttocks wet to finish off, I decided to spank Fluttershy hard, making her scream with pleasure at the same time as I didn't feel pain at all in my hand being a greasy ass and I could see how that buttock bounced like a jelly in full tremor, after spanking Fluttershy's ass and leaving it barely red.

"Very good dear, are you dominant or passive?" I ask her as she then stands in front of me.

"BOTH!!!", she yell before throwing myself on the sofa, when I opened my eyes again I could see how Fluttershy was sitting on my lap with my cock being rubbed by her wet pussy, "Games over Luke, Fluttershy wants cock ", She said, all eager as she grabbed my cock and lined it up with her pussy to immediately shove it deep inside her pussy. When she did, we both moaned loudly at the same time as I felt that pussy pressing hard against my cock making a lot of pressure.

After spending just a minute getting both of us used to each other, Fluttershy put her hands on my chest and then without further, she began to mount me, when she did I felt like she was putting my cock all the way in and then almost pulling it out and repeating the process. While Fluttershy was riding me in the cowgirl position I could see her face all excited as she moaned but more than that my eyes went to her huge breasts which bounce non-stop inches from my face now seeing how huge they are and without anything in the middle.

"YES!!!! I HAVE NOT FEELED THIS SINCE A MONTH AGO WITH BIG MAC", she said all excited as she rode me faster, moving her hips faster to put my cock faster and faster in her pussy while wetting me with her juices , while I felt how her huge buttocks gently crushed my balls every time she went all the way down hitting my pelvis, I told her.

"I don't know who Big Mac is, but he sure loves your boobs," I'd say before burying myself between his tits and doing a "BRRRR" moving my head between those big soft, padded tits. After spending 10 minutes feeling Fluttershy's breasts on my dick and getting tired of playing with those tits using my face and licking them, "Does it look like Fluttershy to you...if we change?", I ask her while she was halfway through way to end.

"Of course, big guy, what position do you want me in?", she asked, all happy to continue.

"Put yourself in 4 in front of me using your little table as support", I said without further, wanting to try that ass a little more now.

Fluttershy then, after taking one last seat, she got up from me and then got on all fours in front of me with her ass in my sight, "Come here and take me like the whore I am", she said while shaking her ass, I then i get up and align my dick against fluttershy's pussy and once i feel it i stick my dick deep inside that pussy making Fluttershy moan loudly.

While she moans I didn't hesitate and started to fuck her greedy pussy non-stop, while my pelvis hits her huge yellow ass, making it bounce non-stop due to the thrusts I'm doing on it, making a "plap" sound every time I bumped into that ass, Fluttershy moaned loudly, "YEAH LUKE!!! GIVE ME HARDER!!! MAKE MY ASS BOUNCE LIKE MY TITS!!!", she said while her big tits are dangling and bouncing non-stop every time her pussy is penetrated to the bottom.

As I was getting closer to my orgasm, a doubt arose in my head and it was wondering what would happen if I touched her wings, so while I was bouncing her ass with my thrusts, using my hands I decided to touch her wings gently, "KYAAAA!!!", Fluttershy yelled when I touched her wings, "NO...SO HARD...LUKE", she said between more moans.

"Wings are the weak point of all pegasi?", I asked myself mentally while I kept fucking that pussy non-stop at the same time that I touched her wings delicately.

"LUKE...I CAN'T...NO MORE", Fluttershy said, being about to finish.

"Me too Fluttershy", I said between moans before I couldn't hold it anymore and then with one last thrust I let out all my semen inside her pussy at the same time that Fluttershy stains me with her powerful orgasm leaving both of us tired.

While we both sat on the sofa, all tired, regardless of being naked, "That...was...incredible...I didn't think pegasi had tits and asses as huge as yours," I told her between gasps.

"Hehehe... no Luke... only I have this body... normally pegasi don't have bulky bodies because we have to fly... so I'll be the only one you'll see so endowed, but in if all pegasi have our sensitive wings and we get turned on when touched properly like you did," said Fluttershy adding a great detail to my research.

"Thank you Fluttershy for letting me review you, I know what to put in my notebook so I can put everything in the book later," I said with a smile.

"You're welcome Luke, but this doesn't end here, it's still early and Fluttershy wants more", she said with a smile, not caring that her pussy is dripping semen non-stop while I swallowed knowing that this was just the first round.

(several hours later)

"Thanks for all the help Luke, I hope your book is successful," Fluttershy said as I went all dry with no fluids back to the inn after getting a lot of information after a long sex session that started around 12 AM. and finish 10PM.

After about 10 minutes of night walking I finally arrived at the inn and while he was rescuing me in bed after a great first day, "That was amazing, but I think I better catch 2 more pegasi before I get an official review." about the pegasi, the question is who will be the remaining 2?", I asked as I went to sleep after a long day.