Coma-boy Adventures

by SmokeyStar

Ch.1 "Somepony in Trouble"

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    Opening his eyes, Austen had sudden flash-backs of his car accident; It was a bright morning and Austen was almost late for School. He quickly got dressed and rushed out to his car, turned it on, backed out of his driveway and sped away, He was one tardy away from being taken to court due to his high number of missed school days. He ran a stop sign and ran right into the side of a SUV which was turning at the intersection. That was all he remembered, his screams echoing, he had blacked out and woken up here, wherever "here" was. He stood up and looked around, "Hello?" he called, "Is anyone there?" he yelled, but there was no reply. "The wreck was nowhere near a forest..." he thought to himself. "Dammit!" he said quietly, flicking his watch which was stuck on 8:43, the time of the crash he assumed. "I'm freaking late." He though, "Moms gonna be pissed!". "HELLO???" he shouted, louder this time, but it was useless. There wasn't anybody within miles of where he was, so he walked...

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      Austen sat quietly around a little fire he had made of sticks, dry leaves, and a lighter he had always kept on him, he adopted the horrid addiction to smoking when he was only 14. Anyways, he had tried calling out to anyone that was around him while he walked for hours, but there was no hope, he was going to die and he had to make himself realize the truth....

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It was a bright and peaceful day in Ponyville, the sun was shining and the birds were chirping. Fluttershy was home doing her daily chores. Feeding the animals, watering the plants, and so on. She had just got done pouring some food for the dogs when this thunderous yell caused her to jump and quickly run inside for cover "Hello? Is anyone there??" the voice said. "Oh silly me." She thought to herself, "The yell was far from where here." she thought in relief, but got goosebumps when she realized that the yells were indeed far from her exact location, but were coming from the worst place imaginable, the Everfree forest! "Oh no!" she gulped, Somepony is in trouble! "Hellooo?!?" it boomed again. "Maybe I should help!" She said to herself, encouragingly. She stepped outside and gazed upon the edges of the forest, she had a quick flashback to all the horrible creatures that were out there, without any hesitation she zipped into her home, slamming the door behind her. "Oh no no no no!" She said, "Maybe I could just get somepony else to have a look.." she quietly said to herself. It was her final decision to ask one of the girls to go.

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   "Dag nabbit!" Applejack said observing the dead tree in front of her, "Thats the third one this week" she griped.

"Applejack, I need your help, If you're not too busy..." Fluttershy said lightly, but still loud enough for Applejack to clearly hear her.

"I'm sorry Fluttershy." Replied AJ, "But me n Macintoch have work ta do here at th' farm." she said.

"Oh it's okay, sorry for being a distraction.." Fluttershy apologized, quickly flying away.

"But you weren't a.." AJ tried to tell Fluttershy that she wasn't a distraction at all, but she was too far along to hear, so Applejack just went back to working.

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"Fluttershy!" yelled Rainbow Dash , she was glad to see Fluttershy. They hadn't talked in almost a week when they usualy talk every day.

"Hey Rainbow Dash!" Said Fluttershy, who didn't want any small talk, she wanted someone to find the pony that had released those horrid screams from the forest.

"How have ya been old pal?" asked Rainbow

"Well, good but-"

"Thats fantastic! Me to!" Rainbow Dash cut Fluttershy off in mid sentence without knowing. "I was just on my way to your house, but sense you're already here, i'll tell you now." Rainbow said. "I am competing in a race that the Thunderbolts will be attending today, and I have a ticket for you!!"

"Oh no thank you, I have stuff to do. I'm sorry Rainbow, but maybe if I'm done before the race starts I'll be able to make it." Said Fluttershy, knowing that Rainbow will take any chance she can at being in the Wonderbolts and wouldn't miss the race for anything in the world.

"Oh.. Yeah.. I guess.." Said Rainbow sadly.

"Well, I got to go to Raritys, I'll see you later." Said Fluttershy walking away. She was very upset about not being able to see Rainbow win the race, but she had to get help for that poor pony in the forest.

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Rarity said no. She was making a new hat like thing called a "Beanie" for a pony named Smokey Star that had wondered into Zecora's cabin with no recollections of how he had gotten there, she had never made one before so it was going to take a long time before she was going to be able to get it just right.

Pinkie was babysitting while Mr. and Mrs. Cake were out on a very big job, and Twilight was visiting Princess Celestia in Cantherlot, so she was miles away. Spike on the other hand was available till hearing the words "Everfree forest" so it looked like Fluttershy was going to have to go and do it herself. She gulped at the thought of being in the Everfree forest alone, she hated going there, even with her friends. She walked home, the screams had stopped, "Maybe they already got saved" Fluttershy thought in relief, "Or maybe they died!!" Fluttershy almost cried at the thought of the pony running into some dangerous creature and being swallowed alive. "I have to go!" she said bravely.

    "You're in charge.." Fluttershy said, face to face with her pet rabbit, Angel. "If I'm not back by tomorrow then alert the girls.." She said softly before kissing the rabbit softly on its cheek and opening the door hesitantly. "Well... Here goes nothing.." She said, galloping out of the house and into the forest, unknowing of who she'd find... Or WHAT she'd find.

TO BE CONTINUED.....

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