
Saved!!!
A human fell through one of Midnight's portals during her magical rampage; and now he's in a 7,000 foot free fall while slowing transforming into a horse. A lot to think about on the way down.
Doesn't help that this particular human/now pony is asocial, standoffish, zealous, borderline psychopathic, and in a state of violent mental frenzy. Not the best things to be when coming to a peaceful pastel pony world.
The only thing going for him is he wants to do better.
Will twilight and her friends try to reform such a being so antithetical to friendship? Give him the discord treatment and turn him to stone? Send him back and seal the portal?
Only time will tell. For now though, The amount of time our protagonist has to figure this out is exactly 12.32 seconds.
The series idea came to me when I thought:
" What if mlp tackled more mature themes? " And the meme " Quiet Kid gets Isekai'd into My Little Pony "
1st person narration is not only limited to that creature's knowledge, but will also take on their state of mind.
When in 3rd person, it is omniscient but will still sometimes take on a state of mind of a creature in the scene.
Want to test my writing with this one. Will try to write more and more challenging subjects as time goes on.
All criticism minus something that can only be seen as a nitpick will be appreciated.
Cover art by Mix-up
https://www.deviantart.com/amalgamzaku





29 Chapters:
- 1 - The Fall 2024-03-20 07:02:50 UTC2701
- 2 - It Takes 2 to Cooperate 2024-03-23 05:38:27 UTC2277
- 3 - Kindness Restored 2024-03-28 01:04:14 UTC3324
- 4 - Introductions 2024-04-17 08:51:39 UTC3823
- 5 - Pondering the Moon - Part 1 2024-04-19 20:45:16 UTC2968
- 6 - Honesty Restored - Part 1 2024-04-30 05:55:56 UTC2412
- 7 - Honesty Restored - Part 2 2024-05-01 08:22:04 UTC2533
- 8 - Honesty Restored - Part 3 2024-05-02 20:59:18 UTC2709
- 9 - Gauntlet of Espionage - Part 1 2024-05-06 22:02:23 UTC2835
- 10 - Gauntlet of Espionage - Part 2 2024-05-11 00:38:40 UTC2795
- 11 - Gauntlet of Espionage - Part 3 2024-05-15 07:01:13 UTC4078
- 12 - The Trial - Part 1 2024-05-26 04:35:54 UTC3039
- 13 - The Trial - Part 2 2024-05-29 10:48:03 UTC2966
- 14 - Trains and Trainwrecks 2024-06-17 00:58:21 UTC1814
- 15 - Change of Plans 2024-07-04 09:37:52 UTC3351
- 15.5 - Interlude - Stagnation from Liberation 2024-07-25 04:35:08 UTC1318
- 16 - Moving Into Choas - Part 1 2024-08-07 06:10:30 UTC4065
- 17 - Moving into Choas - Part 2 2024-08-23 08:33:16 UTC2189
- 18 - Ars Novellum 2024-08-29 05:49:55 UTC3593
- 19 - Enduring Crystal 2024-09-22 07:46:21 UTC3352
- 20 - Mirrors 2024-10-03 05:37:21 UTC3491
- 21 - Differences 2024-10-10 08:35:07 UTC4114
- 22 - Resolutions 2024-10-17 10:49:28 UTC2203
- 23 - ' Talk ' it out 2024-10-24 01:55:29 UTC3620
- 24 - The New Protectors of Earth 2024-11-14 11:40:35 UTC3271
- 25 - Judgement. 2024-11-14 11:40:39 UTC1768
- 26 - Empathy 2024-12-10 08:54:15 UTC3100
- 27 - Plans 2025-01-18 03:28:04 UTC2443
- 28 - Recollection 2025-01-24 10:19:19 UTC2915