Chasing Stardust
A Nightmare Night Redux
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Beside you, Princess Luna sits ramrod straight—an equine statue hewn from midnight and star-stuff. Her wings remain nestled at her sides, the strands of her mane and tail drifting and swirling in slow cosmic eddies. Each time you steal a sidelong glance, those sapphire eyes remain fixed forward with implacable focus.
Neither of you has spoken a single word since departing Canterlot Castle's hallowed halls. The silence feels thick, almost palpable in its fraught weight. You swallow hard against the tightness gripping your throat, idly wondering if the Princess can sense your rising inner trepidation.
On the horizon, the rolling thatched rooftops and quaint edifices of Ponyville's rustic hamlet resolve themselves through gloaming haze. Twinkling lights wink on in warm shafts amidst the winding lanes and pastures as evening settles her gentle mantle over the autumn landscape.
A tremor of unease shivers up your spine; you can't help but remember last night when you graced this sleepy little village's environs… It certainly didn't go smoothly then, resulting in the very hurts you now seek to mend.
A half-mile out, the thestrals begin their descent into a long spiraling bank. Through gaps in the wispy cloud cover, you spy a steadily growing cluster of townsponies gathering around a pavilion hastily erected near the village square.
The festive decorations of pumpkins and bats adorning the dais strike a familiar chord of recollection. Luna mentioned you'd be atoning for disrupting Ponyville's annual Nightmare Night celebrations, but seeing the remnants of that cherished festival laid out below only solidifies the lump lodged in your throat.
"We approach the village," the Princess intones at last, breaking the silence in her customary formal diction. "Brace yourself, for our reception shan't be universally amiable, We suspect."
Luna shifts her regal weight, extending one wing in an unconscious sweep of grandeur. Those cobalt irises remain locked forward, yet you cannot shake the feeling of her gaze weighing down upon you regardless.
"Still thou intend to prostrate before our subjects?" she inquires with maddening evenness. "A millennium past, thou might well have balked at such… indignities. So We must confess curiosity over what hath changed within thy soul."
"A thousand years can do wonders for teaching a soul… perspective, I suppose is the best word for it." You breathe in deep and let out a sigh to soothe your nerves… for what little good it does. "I'd like to believe I'm not the same man who left you at the altar all those centuries ago. And that maybe… given time, I can prove myself worthy of your trust once more."
You glance out towards the rapidly approaching town. "Tonight is the first step on that journey. I've resolved to make it a strong step."
The subtle twitch of Luna's ear is the only indication she's heard your words. Her lips purse ever so lightly beneath her elegant muzzle, a gesture you instantly recognize even after a millennium's span. The Princess is weighing your sincerity, parsing each syllable for hidden deceptions she once fell prey to so long ago.
"Indeed. And a journey of ten thousand miles begins with but a single step, does it not?" She arches one delicate brow, the inky pools of her eyes revealing nothing. "Thy contrition tonight shall determine if this path leads towards redemption or ruin. Choose thy words wisely when addressing our subjects."
With that ominous sentiment hanging between you, the chariot angles into its final approach. The loamy scent of freshly harvested fields mingles with crisp notes of woodsmoke on the air. Muted chatter from the assembled townsfolk below drifts up to you—snippets of curious speculation interspersed with occasional apprehensive mutters.
A noticeable hush descends as the chariot touches down at the edge of the waiting throng with a soft whinny from the batpony pilots. Scores of eyes in every shade of the rainbow affix upon the two of you as Princess Luna rises to her hooves in one fluid motion, her star-shimmered mane swaying hypnotically.
"Citizens of Ponyville, we bid you good evening," she calls out to the crowd, her Royal Canterlot Voice echoing across the square. "As you are no doubt aware, last night's festivities were marred by an unfortunate… disruption."
Her gaze flicks almost imperceptibly sideways to you. "The creature responsible for causing such unrest now comes before you to make amends. It is our wish that you hear his words and judge the merit of his character for yourselves."
She steps aside with regal poise, the soft clip of her hooves lost beneath the susurrus of whispering voices. The full focus of Ponyville now rests squarely upon you, their expressions ranging from open curiosity to guarded suspicion.
You feel the weight of that combined regard settle like a yoke upon your shoulders as you slowly disembark the chariot, breath shallow in your chest. These next moments could very well determine the entire course of your attempted reconciliation with Luna.
A pink earth pony near the front of the crowd leans over to her creamy-orange neighbor, apparently struggling to keep her voice low: "Oooh, that's gotta be the mysterious creature from last night! The one who broke her heart and turned her into Nightmare Moon!" She lets out a dramatic gasp. "He's so… tall! And only two legs, can you believe it?"
The orange mare shushes her with a gentle hoof to the shoulder. "Hush now, Pinkie Pie. Let's just hear what he has to say for himself."
Slowly, steadily, your footfalls carry you across from the carriage to the central dais. Your arms are folded behind your back as you skip the small staircase in a single stride. When you reach the dais at long last, you realize that it's practically at waist-height for you; you'd need to kneel down just to get to the microphone.
Thus, you choose instead to use your own Royal Canterlot Voice, so to speak; it's not nearly as powerful as the princesses', but you've had your fair share of public speaking over the many years.
"Good evening, citizens of Ponyville." Your greeting rings out in a measured baritone, pitching your voice to carry across the hushed festival space. Your eyes sweep across the sea of faces to drive the weight of your contrition home. "I am called Anonymous, a human from faraway Farasi; and as the Night Princess said, I come before you all this night to…" You pause, attempting to find the right words; best go with the most direct ones, you figure. "To humbly beg your forgiveness. My choices and actions directly caused the events of last night, and for that I am truly, deeply sorry."
Your voice rings out with an earnest candor that seems to instill a hush across the festival grounds. Several ponies nearest the stage cease their suspicious fidgeting, their ears canting forward almost involuntarily as you deliver your entreaty.
At least you haven't been driven away by outright jeers and derision… yet.
"When I… arrived in your fair village, 'twas never my intent to disrupt or cause unease during your sacred Nightmare Night traditions," you continue, pitching your voice to carry to the furthest reaches of the crowd. "I meant only to appreciate the revelries from a respectful distance, nothing more."
A few ponies trade skeptical looks, but none seem inclined to interrupt your oratory—for now, at least. You press on, threading sincerity into every word.
"Yet through my foolish words and actions before the Night Princess herself, I became a harbinger of distress and woe upon this joyous occasion instead." Your shoulders slump a fraction beneath the weight of your remorse. "For that transgression, I beg not only for your forgiveness, but the chance to right the wrongs to you all."
Despite your words, you find yourself at a loss for where to go. Pausing for just a moment to not only let your words sink in, but also to consider your options, you decide to put your fate in their hooves this time. "So, I shall put the matter to you all here and now: What would you have of me to restore the sanctity of this Nightmare Night celebration? I am at your disposal, citizens of Ponyville; name your terms and I shall meet them head-on."
As your deeply contrite words wash over the assembled throng of ponies, you feel the atmosphere begin to shift and morph like a living thing. Subtle changes in body language and expressions ripple through the crowd—suspicion ebbing into piqued curiosity, apprehension giving way to intrigue.
A low sussuration of whispering voices fills the air, beyond which you can pick up isolated snippets:
"…awfully sorry for the trouble he caused…"
"Maybe we should give him a chance to make it up to us…"
"…could be fun seeing what kinda Nightmare Night tricks a tall fella like that has up his sleeve…"
For a long, tense moment, the crowd remains locked in indecisive muttering. Then, the same orange earth pony who'd shushed her pink companion earlier steps forward. Framed by a golden cascade of mane, her freckled face is creased in a thoughtful frown as she regards you.
"Well now, sugarcube," she drawls in a distinct country twang, "seems to me like you're mighty sorry for all th'ruckus ya kicked up last night. And Ah reckon we ain't the type to turn away somepony—or someone—who's willin' to admit their mistakes and work to fix 'em."
She casts her gaze across the other villagers, receiving a smattering of nods and murmurs of assent. Bolstered, she turns back to you with a hint of a smile tugging at her muzzle.
"Tell ya what: if yer serious 'bout it, why don't ya lend a hoof with the Nightmare Night festival setup? We still got a bunch o' decorations and games to arrange 'fore the celebration can get back to normal."
Next to her, the exuberant pink pony practically vibrates in place, her irises shimmering. "Oooh, oooh! And maybe he can put on a super spooky magic show for us later! I bet he knows all kinds of creepy tricks from other lands to give us goosebumps!"
Other voices chime in with growing enthusiasm:
"I could use some help carving the last few jack-o-lanterns…"
"Wonder if he'd be willing to tell some spine-chilling ghost stories around the bonfire later on…"
"Bet those long legs of his would be perfect for hanging the high-up cobwebs and streamers!"
Slowly but surely, the spark catches and spreads through the crowd like wildfire. Trepidation transmutes into tentative acceptance; you're being given a chance, slim though it may be, to prove your sincerity.
Behind you, Princess Luna observes the unfolding spectacle in imperious silence, betraying nothing of her own thoughts. But you imagine you can feel the prickling heat of her gaze upon your neck, scrutinizing every move for the slightest hint of insincerity.
"So?" The orange mare arches an eyebrow at you expectantly. "Whaddya say, sugarcube? You up for pitchin' in and showin' us what yer made of?"
"I wholeheartedly accept," you reply earnestly to the orange mare, bowing deeply at the waist to the assembled ponies. "I would be more than honored to lend my abilities to restoring the spirit of this hallowed Nightmare Night celebration. Whatever tasks or roles you would have of me, I shall eagerly embrace as my penance."
Rising slowly, you cast your gaze across the festival grounds, a hint of showmanship entering your voice. "Carving jack-o-lanterns, hanging decorations, weaving spine-chilling tales beneath the stars… I pledge to undertake each and every duty with utmost dedication. This shall be a Nightmare Night celebration like no other!"
With a deep, centering breath, you descend from the dais, ready to throw yourself headlong into whatever tasks await.
As you step down from the dais, the crowd of ponies parts before you like a colorful sea, their eyes alight with cautious anticipation. The orange mare who first spoke up trots over to your side, her blonde tail swishing.
"Name's Applejack," she introduces herself with a tip of her cowboy hat. "Ah run Sweet Apple Acres just outside town. If you'll follow me, we can get started on them jack-o-lanterns right quick."
She leads you towards a corner of the festival grounds where several long trestle tables stand laden with pumpkins of every size and shape imaginable. A cluster of ponies, both young and old, are already hard at work carving, their faces scrunched in concentration.
"Plenty of pumpkins still need a creepy touch," Applejack remarks, gesturing to the uncarved gourds with a hoof. "Think you can handle a knife alright with them, err… 'hands' o' yours?"
A confident grin curls on your lips. "Not to worry. Years of alchemical studies have given me quite the… specialized touch, shall we say?"
You set to work selecting a particularly rotund pumpkin from the bunch. Its smooth orange surface beckons like a blank canvas awaiting your creative touch. Yes… this one will do nicely.
As you begin sawing into the pumpkin's top to create a removable lid, you can hear the sounds around you slowing down as the ponies slow their movements. The young foals around you watch with rapt fascination as your deft hands make quick work of the pumpkin's innards, scooping out glistening strands of seeds and pulp. You pause to flash them a conspiratorial grin.
"Did you know," you intone in a spooky murmur, "that where I come from, we carve faces into pumpkins to scare away the hungry spirits that roam the night? They say if your jack-o-lantern isn't scary enough… the spirits might just gobble you up instead!"
The foals let out a chorus of delighted shrieks and giggles, clustering closer to watch your knife flick and twist with practiced motions. Bit by bit, a ghoulish visage takes shape upon the pumpkin's surface—leering eyes, a gaping mouth lined with jagged teeth, even a wrinkly-looking witch nose to complete the eerie effect.
You set the finished lantern proudly amidst the others, its flickering candlelight casting dancing shadows across the ground. The foals 'ooh' and 'ahh' at your handiwork, their initial apprehension towards you seeming to warm up.
As you reach for the next pumpkin to begin anew, you catch a glimpse of Princess Luna from a distance, speaking with what looks to be a purple unicorn in a Star Swirl the Bearded costume. Her expression remains frustratingly unreadable, but you fancy you see the barest hint of a smile on her face as she speaks. A tiny spark of hope flickers in your chest; so far so good, it seems.
The hours blur together in a whirl of activity as you throw yourself into every task the ponies have for you. You assist the pegasi in hanging bundles of dried cornstalks and wreaths of autumn leaves to lend a festive air. The exuberant pink pony who you learn is named Pinkie Pie ropes you into a high-stakes game of apple bobbing—which your height gives you an undeniable advantage at, much to the crowd's amusement.
Even the elderly donkey named Cranky Doodle begrudgingly accepts your aid in arranging his antique wagon of curiosities, though he eyes you with deep suspicion the entire time and grumbles about "outsized varmints with grabby fingers".
As the night deepens and the festival reaches its zenith, you find yourself standing before the town library, its boughs strung with countless strands of glowworm lanterns. An expectant hush falls over the crowd of ponies gathered around, their faces limned with flickering light and shadow.
"I believe I promised some spine-chilling stories," you say with a theatrical bow. "Tales to make the blood run cold and send shivers down your withers. Gather close, friends, and lend an ear to the ghastly legend of… the Grootslang."
You sweep your gaze across the upturned faces, noting how even the older ponies lean forward with interest. Lowering your voice to a sepulchral whisper, you begin to spin your macabre tale, pouring every ounce of gravitas and suspense into the telling.
"In faraway lands of the desert of Farasi, on nights cold and dreary…"
As the story unfolds, you relish the gasps and shudders that ripple through your audience at every twist and turn. More than once, you catch a foal ducking behind their parent's legs with a squeak of fright, only to peek out again a moment later, unable to resist the lure of morbid curiosity.
Your grim tale unfolds in winding turns, each new detail pulling your audience deeper into the cloying darkness and cold nighttime deserts of Farasi. You paint the scene of a greedy zebra merchant carrying along a collection of diamonds, being hunted by the ravenous Grootslang - half-serpent, half-elephant monstrosity from Farasi's folklore. At the gory climax, several mares and stallions yelp aloud, a foal burrowing into his mother's side with a shiver…
But just as you reach the climactic moment, a new voice joins the chorus, reciting in tandem:
"Take heed, young ones, of the Grootslang's might, lest you be swallowed up in the dead of night!"
Startled, you glance over to discover a zebra making her way through the crowd, her gold hoop earrings glinting in the firelight. Zecora, your former protégé, looks just as you remember her—though perhaps with a few more lines of wisdom etched around her eyes from the intervening years.
"Teacher mine, what a welcome surprise," she greets you with a bow, her voice warm with fondness. "To see you here, I scarce believe my eyes!"
A wide grin splits your face as you return the bow. "Zecora, my star pupil from yesteryear! Your rhyming tongue remains as sharp as ever, I hear."
"From the master himself, I learned it well," she replies with a twinkle in her eye. "Now together the Grootslang's tale we must tell!"
To the ponies' evident delight, the two of you launch into tandem storytelling, your rich baritone interweaving with Zecora's lyrical cadence. Together, you spin the Grootslang's legend to new heights of spine-chilling suspense, playing off one another's cues like a well-rehearsed act.
Lost in the thrill of performance, it takes you a moment to notice the ponies have fallen into rapt silence, their eyes wide as saucers. Even the ambient sounds of the festival seem to fade away, as if the words themselves were a spell, enrapturing all.
Well, all save one. At the very edge of the flickering lantern light, you spy Princess Luna standing in the shadows, her starry mane almost blending into the night sky. You try to catch her eye as you reach the story's end, wondering if your efforts tonight have begun to chip away at the glacier of her resentment. But at that moment, a burst of applause shatters the hush and your concentration.
"Whoowee, if that don't beat all!" Applejack declares, stomping her hooves approvingly. "We ain't never had a yarn-spinner quite like you 'round these parts!"
Other voices chime in:
"I'm gonna have nightmares for a week… and I loved every minute of it!"
"The way you two played off each other was pure magic! Like you'd been doing this for years!"
"I vote Anonymous and Zecora become the official Nightmare Night storytellers from now on!"
Amidst the clamor of praise, you steal another glance towards where Luna stood… but she's vanished, melting back into the shadows as silently as she arrived. Your heart sinks a notch; did none of this matter to her at all?
A gust of chill wind suddenly sweeps through the crowd, snuffing out the glowworm lanterns and plunging the square into darkness! Hideous cackles and moans fill the night air as luminous apparitions manifest above the gasping ponies' heads!
Shrieks of terror mingle with cries of confusion as the ghostly specters swoop and dive, their femoral hooves grasping at manes and tails! You whirl about, momentarily just as startled as the crowd, before a flash of comprehension hits you.
Squinting into the gloom, you can just barely make out a tall, dark silhouette at the edge of the herd, horn aglow with pale blue magic. Even at this distance, you'd recognize that proud lift of chin, that imperial bearing, anywhere.
Princess Luna's voice rings out over the pandemonium, echoing with mock-ominous inflection:
"Bwahaha! Didst thou really think to conjure a mere story could suffice to properly spook our ponies? Nay, only true illusory frights befit this Nightmare Night!"
With a grandiose sweep of her wings, the ghostly apparitions vanish in puffs of indigo smoke. The lanterns flicker back to life all at once, as if they'd never been extinguished at all. A few ponies are still shaking, eyes wide as saucers, but others have begun to titter and chuckle as realization sets in.
Still smirking wickedly, the Princess of the Night trots forward to join you before the bewildered audience. You find yourself giving her an incredulous look, one eyebrow raised in exasperated amusement.
"Mischief becomes you, Your Highness," you murmur so only she can hear. "I'd quite forgotten your penchant for dramatic entrances."
"But of course." Luna's grin is impish, her eyes dancing with moonlit mirth. "Thou hast monopolized the spotlight long enough this eve, We should think."
Before you can formulate a retort, she turns to face the crowd, her voice rising to a booming royal crescendo:
"Hark, citizens of Ponyville! Let it never be said that your Princess shirks her celebratory duties! We declare this Nightmare Night officially reinstated, with all the thrills and chills it rightly deserves!"
A resounding cheer goes up from the assembled ponies, their earlier unease sublimating into giddy excitement. You can't help but feel a swell of admiration as you watch Luna bask in her subjects' adoration. A thousand years clearly haven't dulled her regal charisma one bit.
Caught up in the heady revelry now sweeping through the crowd, you don't even protest as Pinkie Pie bounces over and plops a garish helmet topped with a fake arrow on your head.
"C'mon, Nonny! Princess Luna's gonna lead us in some spooOOoky party games, and then there's gonna be candy apples and pumpkin pie and hot cider, and you just gotta stick around for all of it!"
She's tugging at your sleeve before you can get a word in edgewise, drawing you into the swirling throngs of costumed ponies as the festival kicks into high gear.
And despite yourself, you feel a smile spreading across your face. The road back to Luna's good graces remains long and winding, but tonight?
Tonight feels like a promising start.
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