Chapter 24: Of Monster Bites and Sweet Appetites

written by TheCrimsonDM

Twilight sat there staring at Luna as she paced back and forth. Besides her sat Fluttershy who was busy looking into a mirror and examining her new fangs. This... was odd. Even her ears seemed slightly more fluffy than usual. The look in her eyes also was... stunning. There was something there, the usual kindness that one could expect in Fluttershy, but beneath it an almost feral animal lurking in those eyes. It sent shivers down Twilight's spine, shivers of desire.

Luna stopped and looked back at Fluttershy. “Okay, so, you have not been bitten by any strange ponies lately?”

“Oh my no... I hate biting.”

“You have a sudden craving for apples?”

“I love apples, they've never tasted so good before.”

Luna's ear twitched. “Do you have any ancestors that might be bat ponies?”

“My great great grandmother was one.”

Luna let out a sigh and smiled. “I see, that's a relief. That explains a bit more. One thing we might have forgotten to go over was the long-term effects of sleeping with a succubus so often.”

“I will become a succubus myself, I know.”

“Oh... and you... accepted that?”

“Yes. But... I don't think I'm a succubus.”

“That's because you're probably not. Based on what you said on your lineage, the way you look now, and your new cravings, I suspect that you are actually some kind of werepony. A werebat possibly.”

Twilight raised her hoof to ask a question, once Luna acknowledged her she asked, “Isn't that still weird though? I read some of Fluttershy's books, Monster-fillies should create others of their own kind right?”

Luna nodded. “Yes, in most cases. There are two major exceptions. An echidna is a monster that creates other monsters, they are called the mother of monsters so to speak. Then we have the possibility of ponies having latent monster genes that are dormant, but after exposure to enough essence from a succubus they become active and create a new monster.”

Luna looked at Fluttershy and met her eyes. “This is going to be an odd question, but... have you been bitten by any ponies, in the past few years? Anything you can remember at all?”

Fluttershy shook her head.

Then like lightning, Twilight stood up as a memory came back to her. “Discord!”

Fluttershy gasped. “Discord has never bitten me!”

“No, not him. But remember when you were all turned gray? Rarity went around biting all of us when she got angry. Each and every one of us was bitten by her, hard enough to bleed a little. Not much but it was shocking how sharp her teeth were. I thought it was just Discord's magic making her have a sharper bite, maybe he did, maybe he infected her or something.”

Luna sat down, a long shiver ran down from the top of her head, all the way to her tail. “Rarity... Rarity bit you... all of you?”

“Well except Spike, you know him, he's nearly indestructible. So she hit him with a chair.”

The look in Luna's eyes told Twilight that this was not actually comforting. Not in the slightest. “And my sister is currently on a date with... oh no!”

Her horn lit up and in a flash Luna teleported out of their room leaving a vacant space behind. Twilight sat there feeling awfully confused for a moment, but then looking back at Fluttershy who was bent over eating apples out of the basket, her confusion melted into a decision. “You just... keep eating those apples, I'm going to have a small snack myself if that's okay.”

“Mm-hmm.”

Twilight licked her lips, oh that delightful honey-butter rump was all hers.

***

Luna teleported into Applejack's room only to find the one scene she didn't want to see at that moment... though it was hot. Celestia was facing her, her face screwed up into a look of pure bliss. However, Applejack was no where to be seen. It looked too late though.

“Sister, we have a situation, it's worse than Twilight.”

“L-Luna, ah, d-don't talk to me when I'm ah, hah, AHN!”

Celestia threw her head back and cried out, the room almost shook from the volume of her orgasmic cry as her entire body shook and shivered. Before she fell over onto her side leaning against the wall. Revealing a sticky wet Applejack beneath her.

Celestia purred. “Entire... muzzle... in... ass... yeeesss.”

Luna looked down at Applejack as she gasped for fresh air for the first time in what must have been minutes. The mare looked dazed and lost. Her eyes glazed over and her body covered in the sticky goo of Celestia's love. “Well.. I am likely far too late.”

Celestia looked at her. “F-far too late for... for what? AJ is mine, n-no sharing... yet.”

“Well that's rude... but not why I'm here.” Luna shook her head, and opened the window to help clear the air in this room. It smelled like sticky hot lesbian horse sex. Not the worst smell but it was messing with Luna's self-control a little. “Sister, Rarity bit every single one of these ponies.”

Celestia blinked, clearly dazed. “Heh, kinky.”

“No, sister. Rarity, bit, them.”

Celestia stared at her for a moment... then her eyes slowly widened. “N-no. When?”

“When discord made them all crazy.”

Celestia looked down at Applejack and gulped. “But... but I just... with her... five times!”

“Yes, and that cannot be helped.”

Applejack blinked and sat up. “L-Luna? What are you doing in mah room? Celly belly said Ah'm off limits.”

Luna let out a sigh of defeat. “Well you won't be for long now that this happened.”

Applejack licked her lips. An almost hungry gaze fell upon Luna's body. Then quickly left as she shook herself and she reached over for a towel to clean herself. “Ah am not just some toy t' play with. Go have fun with Twilight.”

Celestia pet the top of Applejack's head and spoke softly. “No, she's here for serious business. It would seem I made a mistake... and you might soon become a monster-filly like me...”

Applejack's jaw dropped. “What?”

Celestia nodded. “You have monster genes in you. It is more than likely our... extreme love making just activated them... I'm sorry. I didn't know...”

Applejack shook her head. “H-hold up, y'all did say the other day that love making might turn me into a uh... one of them Valkyries.”

“And that was true until now. Now, I'm not sure what you'll become. A werewolf, a vampire, a succubus?”

Luna giggled. “An apple tree version of an Alraune.”

“Luna that is not funny.”

“Sorry. Sorry.”

Celestia's horn lit up and Applejack was covered in a soft golden glow. Once the light vanished she let out a sigh of relief. “Okay, nothing as weird as that. Seems your... as stoic as ever. No physical changes, but I can sense mental ones starting. Your essence is changing as well. You might need to feed on more than just me next time.”

“Ah don't wanna make love t' feed.”

“Good, good. If you can say that honestly you'll be a good... what the tartarus?”

“Oh no, what is it, did Ah grow horns, or wings, or-”

“Your ears are so cute!”

Luna could see it now. Fluffy ears, one of them flopped over at the tip. Applejack's tail was likewise a bit more fluffy than before. She was positively adorable, and even her teeth had slightly more pronounced k-9s.

“Sister, how is that possible?”

Applejack looked down and saw that her chest floof was far more pronounced than before. “Ah'm so fluffy.”

Celestia purred. “Because I didn't ride Fluttershy nearly that hard. It must have exaggerated the transformation.”

Luna shook her head. “No, sister I mean this is not something ponies should be able to do.”

Celestia pet the top of Applejack's head. “It happens sometimes, but given the nature of the pony that bit her, this is very possible. Who's my good little cu sith? Who is it?”

Applejack nuzzled into that hoof. “Is it me? Am Ah a uh cute ith?”

“You sure are. My cute little cu sith... I love you so much.”

“I love you too!”

Celestia looked over at Luna. “This is literally the best possible outcome. Loyal, dependable, in control of themselves. She'll still be the best mom ever, and now she might even have more energy and be stronger too.”

Luna let out a sigh. “Well at least that's good... we need to stop Twilight from...”

“No... no we can't stop her now... but we do need to warn her.”

“But if she does this.”

“They were all going to become monsters anyway, sister. Succubi more than anything, but this is a much more fun idea. It'll make sure that everyone will be okay right?”

“Your right. They'll probably become easier to deal with, a coven of succubi might have been too much even for us.”

“Exactly. Now, lets get cleaned up, AJ.”

“Okay... um... Luna...”

“yes?”

“Could y'all like... never ever teleport into mah room again. This is so embarrassing that Ah might die.”

“No promises.”

Luna's horn lit up and like that she popped out of existence, teleporting to a much more friendly area. Supposedly. Of course Rarity's bedroom wasn't actually any better. When she saw Rainbow Dash tied up with a gag on staring at her as Rarity held a spanking paddle dangerously near her rear end... well it was probably a far worse situation.

Rarity raised an eyebrow. “Luna? Did you wish to join us?”

“Oh how I wish I could, but no, I am here for serious business.”

“Mmmphh!”

“Oh, right, hello, Rainbow Dash, it is nice to see you again too.”

Rarity set the paddle down against Rainbow's side making her flinch. “Oh, do tell what's wrong, do you need the elements of harmony, I could get RD out of her punishment harness in a jiffy.”

“Oh no, no need for that.”

“Mmmph!”

Rarity pet the top of Rainbow's head. “Shhh, sweetie. The ponies who don't go around stealing other ponies panties are talking.”

Luna chuckled. “Speak for yourself.”

“Oh well I suppose I have done such things myself, the difference is I don't get caught with red laces in their hooves. Anyway, what did you need, darling?”

“Do you remember the event with Discord's revival? When you all became gray?”

“No, though I do know that Twilight keeps telling me about some stallion named Tom.”

“I see... and how is Sweetie Belle doing?”

“Very well, raising her is going according to plan.”

“Good, good...” Luna sucked in a deep breath than exhaled. “Did you know that when you went gray you actually bit ponies...”

“Oh no! Who was it? Are they okay?”

“It was... all five of your friends.”

Rarity blinked, then frowned, then looked over at Rainbow Dash. “That explains a lot.”

“Well, I thought you should know, because we found out the hard way with both Fluttershy and Applejack.”

“I... see... Hmm... and RD is already... broken in so to speak. What about Pinkie Pie?”

“No changes yet.”

“I did notice Rainbow Dash did have a much more fighty spirit when she fought the changelings. She was nearly unstoppable, and would have destroyed all of them if we hadn't stopped her ourselves.”

“MMMPHH!”

“I know sweetie but the plan changed, I'm sure you could have beaten up even Queen Chrysalis.”

Luna smiled hearing that. It was a good outcome. “I see, you suspect she may be like my sister then?”

“Very. Hopefully one day she will be just as wise as well. Your sister reminds me of Odin sometimes.”

“Oh, I know. We met Odin when we were younger, she took a real shine to him. I preferred his son, Loki.”

“I always wondered if you had met the old gods. Where did they go?”

“Away. Ragnarok was... brutal. We rebuilt what was destroyed. The few old gods left decided to seek new worlds to start a new. We stayed here.”

“Thank you for telling me that. You didn't have too.”

“I know the price for patience.”

Rarity let out a small giggle, it was musical and delightful. “Tell Twilight that me and Rainbow will be ready for our date tonight. She doesn't get to cancel on us so easily now. And tell her to come here please. I have a... surprise for her.”

“Don't break her.”

“I would never, if RD didn't like this, I wouldn't do this to her. But she loves being a naughty filly, and being humiliated, can you see how much she's leaked already?”

Luna took a look behind Rainbow Dash, by all that was holy, she was practically a waterfall of lust. That bed was going to need to be cleansed in holy fire after this event. “I see, well I'm glad your so excited Rainbow, be gentle with my Twilight will you. Until then, goodbye my soon to be lovers.”

“Mmm fairwell my moon.”

Luna teleported out of there, she needed somewhere calm to be. No more sex for now. She landed back at the Library and... saw Twilight having a meal of Fluttershy, while Fluttershy was busy trying to eat apples... this was getting out of hoof. She was going to need to ask Cadance how to calm things down soon.

Author's Note

another chapter, another answer, and probably more questions