Full metal pony
Chapter 1: One Hand, Two Hooves
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I groaned as my senses slowly came back to me. The world around me was blurry, the colors blending like wet paint on a canvas. my body felt… wrong. There was a strange heaviness in my chest and limbs, and a dull, metallic ache ran down my arm—wait, not my arm. my legs?
“What the hell?” I muttered, wincing at the high-pitched voice that didn’t sound like mine own at all.
Forcing my eyes open fully, I was met with an explosion of colors far too vibrant for Amestris. The sun was shining brightly, and the sky above was a perfect blue. I lay sprawled out in a grassy field, the sweet scent of flowers and the gentle breeze doing nothing to settle the confusion swirling in my mind.
“Where… am I?” I blinked, trying to move my arm, but my arm wasn’t there. Instead, I saw something far stranger.
A hoof.
A cold metallic hoof.
“What the—?!” I shot up—or at least tried to, but my body wasn’t responding like it normally would. I tumbled awkwardly, scrambling to stand, only to realize I wasn’t standing on two legs anymore. I had four. “Oh, you’ve got to be kidding me…”
my breath hitched as I looked down at Myself. My body was completely different. Instead of human limbs, I had hooves. His right foreleg was metal—my automail, but warped to fit this new form. The other three legs were covered in golden-brown fur. I felt a weight on his head, and when I reached up—slowly this time—I felt a horn. Not just any horn, but one that hummed with energy. my brain was struggling to catch up, each realization more ridiculous than the last.
I was a horse. Or rather… a pony?
“I must be hallucinating,” I muttered under my breath, but I knew better than to believe my own words. I'd seen too much to just dismiss this as a dream or illusion. Gritting my teeth, I tried to calm the storm of thoughts raging inside his mind. First things first—figure out where I was.
I took an unsteady step, then another, wobbling on four legs like a newborn foal. I cursed under my breath, finding this whole situation increasingly frustrating. my body didn’t respond the way it should, and every movement felt foreign. I hadn’t felt this weak since the early days after getting his automail surgery.
“Okay… this is fine. This is fine,” I said, more to convince himself than anything. I glanced around, taking in my surroundings. The field stretched out in all directions, bordered by a dense forest and a few hills in the distance. But what really caught my eye was the small town nestled near the horizon, its pastel-colored buildings and whimsical architecture standing out starkly against the natural landscape.
“There’s no way this is Amestris.”
With no other option but to investigate, I began to trudge forward. The sooner I got to the town, the sooner I could find answers—and hopefully figure out how the hell to get out of this pony body.
As I struggled to maintain a steady pace, a shadow passed overhead, followed by a burst of wind. I glanced up, squinting against the sunlight, and spotted something that made my heart skip a beat. Flying above me was a figure—no, not a figure. A pegasus. A blue pegasus with a rainbow-colored mane.
It zoomed through the air, circling back before landing gracefully in front of me. The pegasus folded its wings, eyeing me with suspicion.
“Well, you’re not from around here, are ya?” the pegasus said in a distinctly feminine voice.
I blinked. “Did… you just talk?”
“Uh, yeah? Why wouldn’t I?” The pegasus looked him up and down, tilting her head. “What’s with the metal leg? You a robot or something?”
I scowled. “No, I’m not a robot!” I snapped, my temper flaring. “And what the hell is going on here? Where am I?”
The pegasus raised an eyebrow. “Wow, someone’s grumpy. You’re in Equestria, if you really didn’t know.”
“Equestria?” I repeated, the word foreign on his tongue. “Never heard of it.”
“Yeah, figures. You look like you’ve been through some weird magic or something.” The pegasus hovered slightly above the ground, flapping her wings lazily. “Name’s Rainbow Dash, the fastest flier in all of Equestria.” She puffed out her chest proudly.
I narrowed my eyes, trying to make sense of it all. “Look, I don’t care who you are. I just need to know how to get back home.”
“Home? Where’s that?”
“Amestris.”
Rainbow Dash blinked. “Never heard of it.”
I sighed, already feeling the frustration building again. This was going to be a long day. Before I could say anything else, another voice cut in, much softer and more curious.
“Oh my goodness… you’re new here, aren’t you?”
I turned to see a yellow pegasus with a soft pink mane approaching cautiously. She looked far more concerned than Rainbow Dash, her eyes wide with a mix of curiosity and kindness.
“I’m Fluttershy,” she said gently. “Are you lost?”
I felt the tension in my shoulders ease just a bit. At least this one seemed calmer. “Yeah, you could say that,” I muttered. “I just woke up like this and—wait, hold on. You’re both talking. You’re both ponies. And I’m a pony.”
Fluttershy nodded sympathetically. “That must be very confusing for you.”
“You have no idea.”
Fluttershy exchanged a glance with Rainbow Dash. “Maybe we should take him to Twilight. She’s good with magic, and she might be able to help you.”
“Yeah, she can probably fix whatever’s going on with you,” Rainbow Dash added with a shrug. “You’re not the first weird thing to show up around here.”
I rubbed his forehead—or tried to. His hoof clanked awkwardly against my head, and I groaned. “Fine. Take me to this Twilight. Anything that’ll get me back to normal.”
With a flap of their wings, Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy motioned for me to follow, leading him toward the town in the distance. As I stumbled along, I couldn’t shake the nagging feeling that this world—Equestria—was about to throw him into something far bigger than he could have imagined.
Twilight's Point of View
I sat in the cozy confines of my library, surrounded by neatly stacked books and a few magical tomes open to various pages. I was deeply immersed in my studies when a sharp knock on the door broke my concentration.
“Coming!” I called, hastily closing my books with a flick of my magic. I trotted over to the door, already wondering what the urgency was. I wasn't expecting any visitors, and My scheduled study time was rarely interrupted—at least unless there was some kind of trouble.
As the door swung open, I blinked in surprise to see Rainbow Dash hovering outside, her wings flapping impatiently. Fluttershy was there too, standing a few feet behind with a nervous smile.
"Twilight! You’ve gotta see this!" Rainbow Dash darted inside without waiting for permission, her hooves barely touching the ground as she zipped around the library. I stepped aside just as Fluttershy timidly walked in behind her.
“See what? What’s going on, Rainbow Dash?” I asked, closing the door behind them. Rainbow Dash was always full of energy, but her excitement usually meant something interesting—or potentially dangerous—was happening.
Rainbow Dash grinned and pointed her hoof toward the door. “We found this weird new pony out in the field. He says he’s not from here—and I mean, really not from here.”
I blinked, feeling a twinge of curiosity. “Not from Equestria?”
“Yup! And get this—he’s got some kind of metal leg and horn!” Rainbow added, hovering in mid-air as she spun in a loop.
"Metal leg?" I frowned, trying to make sense of what my friend was describing. That didn’t sound like any pony I'd ever heard of before.
“He also said his name is Edward,” Fluttershy added softly. “And... he seems really confused. Maybe he’s hurt.”
my curiosity quickly shifted to concern. "Where is he now?"
“He’s outside,” Rainbow Dash said with a dismissive wave. “Probably still trying to figure out how to walk with four legs.”
My eyes widened. "Rainbow Dash! You can’t just leave him out there if he’s lost and confused!"
Rainbow Dash shrugged. “He didn’t Want help.”
Shaking my head, I hurried toward the door, nudging it open with my magic as I stepped outside. Sure enough, standing awkwardly by the edge of the path leading to my library, was a pony unlike any she had ever seen.
He wasn’t just different because of his metal leg—although that alone would have caught her attention. His entire demeanor screamed discomfort, and the scowl on his face showed he wasn’t taking his new surroundings very well.
“Edward?” I called gently, stepping closer.
The strange pony—Edward, she assumed—looked up at her with a mixture of frustration and confusion. His eyes flicked to her horn, then her wings, and back to her face. He seemed to be sizing her up as if he wasn’t sure what to make of her.
“Yeah, that’s me,” he muttered. His voice sounded... irritated, but also tired.
I studied him for a moment. The metal leg—automail, maybe?—seemed expertly crafted, though she couldn’t figure out what kind of magic or technology could have created something like that. And his horn? There was something off about the way it shimmered like it wasn’t quite aligned with Equestrian magic.
“You must be feeling really lost right now,” I said kindly, hoping to ease some of the tension she could sense coming from him.
Edward scoffed. “You think?”
Rainbow Dash landed next to them, grinning widely. “I told you, Twilight! He’s super weird, right?”
I shot Rainbow a warning look but turned my attention back to Edward. “Let’s go inside. You can tell me everything that’s going on, and maybe I can help you figure this out.”
Edward hesitated, glancing between me and the open door. His expression was guarded like he didn’t fully trust what was happening around him. But after a long pause, he nodded.
“Fine. Lead the way.”
I led him inside the library, my mind already racing with questions. Who was he? Where had he come from? And what kind of magic or alchemy could have brought him here? His body was clearly altered by more than just the form of a pony—there was something else at work.
As we settled in, I used my magic to pull a chair closer for Edward. He struggled to sit in it properly, unused to the new shape of his body, and it didn’t take long for his scowl to return.
“So, uh, where exactly did you come from?” I began, using my friendliest tone to coax some answers from him.
Edward sighed heavily, rubbing his face with one of his hooves—a gesture that seemed unnatural and awkward. “Amestris. A place that clearly isn’t whatever this is.” He gestured vaguely to the colorful world outside.
I tilted my head. “Amestris? I’ve never heard of it. Is it another realm? Or dimension?”
“You could say that,” Edward muttered under his breath. He let out another frustrated sigh before glancing at my horn again. “You... do magic, right?”
“Yes,” i said, my curiosity piqued. “I can help with that if you’re dealing with some kind of magical displacement.”
“Magical displacement, huh?” Edward huffed. “I don’t think magic is really the problem here.” He shifted uncomfortably in his seat, tapping his metal hoof against the floor. “It’s alchemy. That’s what brought me here.”
My ears perked up. “Alchemy? Like transmutation?”
Edward’s eyes flicked toward her in surprise. “You know about alchemy?”
I nodded, her excitement building. “Yes! It’s an ancient form of magic, though it’s not really practiced in Equestria. Most ponies stick to spellcasting these days. But I’ve read about it! It’s fascinating stuff.”
Edward seemed to relax, if only slightly. “Then maybe you can help me get home.”
I hesitated. “I’ll do everything I can. But if it’s something as complex as alchemy, I might need to do a little research first.”
“Of course,” Edward muttered, sounding half-annoyed, half-resigned. “More research. Great.”
I stood up, already moving toward the shelves lined with books. “I’ll start looking right away! There has to be something here that can help.”
As I scanned the titles, I couldn’t help but feel a strange sense of excitement. I had never encountered anyone like Edward before—someone whose knowledge of alchemy could rival my own magic. Maybe together, we could figure this out.
But even as I grabbed her first stack of books, I couldn’t shake the feeling that Edward’s presence here was part of something much bigger. Something we were only just beginning to unravel.
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