Full metal pony
Chapter 2: A Trip Around Ponyville
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I couldn’t help but feel out of place.
As Twilight Sparkle led me through this bright and overly cheerful town called Ponyville, I could feel my temper bubbling under the surface. Not only had I been turned into a pony, but everything around me was too... colorful. Pastel houses, ponies with their wide-eyed stares, and a strange energy that seemed to hum through the air. It all made my head hurt.
“So, this is Ponyville!” Twilight chirped with an enthusiasm I could only describe as irritating. “It’s a great place to get acquainted with Equestria. You’ll find it’s not as strange as you think once you get used to it.”
Used to it? I grunted in response, barely suppressing an eye roll. “Yeah, I doubt that.”
Twilight glanced at me, probably catching the sarcasm in my voice, but she didn’t press the issue. We walked past more of the town’s strange architecture, ponies waving at her as we passed. I noticed a lot of them stealing glances at me—at my metal leg, more specifically. It reminded me of how people back in Amestris would stare when they first saw my automail. Except here, the stares weren’t hostile. They were curious, even a little excited. Weirdos.
“Alright, the first thing I should do is introduce you to some of the locals. Don’t worry—they’re really nice,” Twilight said, her voice still dripping with that annoyingly cheerful tone. “You’ve already met Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy, but I want you to meet the rest of my friends.”
I sighed, feeling the weight of this weird situation pressing down on me even more. “Fine. Let’s get this over with.”
We hadn’t walked far before a bright pink blur zoomed out of nowhere and stopped inches in front of my face. “Hi! I’m Pinkie Pie! I haven’t seen you before, which means you must be new, which means we need to have a ‘Welcome to Ponyville’ party!”
I jumped back instinctively, nearly tripping over my hooves. Pinkie Pie, as she called herself, bounced around me like she was made of pure sugar. “What the hell—?”
Before I could finish my sentence, Pinkie was already talking a mile a minute. “Oh! You must be the new pony Twilight was talking about! What’s your name? Where are you from? Do you like cupcakes? What about balloons? Do you like parties? I *love* parties!”
I shot a desperate glance at Twilight, who smiled apologetically. “Pinkie, maybe let him breathe for a second.”
“Oh! Sorry!” Pinkie Pie stopped bouncing and stood still, but her wide grin never faltered.
“I’m Edward,” I muttered, rubbing my temple with my hoof—well, trying to. This new body still wasn’t cooperating with me.
“Edward! That’s a neat name! I’ll have to make a special cake just for you!” Pinkie said, clapping her hooves together. “A special cake for the special new pony!”
I blinked, still trying to process how this hyperactive pony was real. “Yeah, no thanks. I’m not really in the mood for... parties.”
Pinkie gasped, her eyes wide with exaggerated shock. “Not in the mood for parties? How can you not be in the mood for parties?!”
“Pinkie...” Twilight started, stepping between us.
“Okay, okay! I’ll save the party for later!” Pinkie finally backed off, but I didn’t miss the gleam in her eye. I had a feeling she wasn’t going to take no for an answer when it came to throwing some ridiculous celebration.
“Right,” I muttered, shaking my head. “Who else do I have to meet?”
Twilight seemed relieved that the encounter with Pinkie had passed without me snapping. “Come on, Rarity’s boutique is just around the corner. I think you’ll like her.”
I wasn’t sure I’d “like” anyone here, but at this point, I was just going along with it. Maybe I’d find something useful while meeting these ponies—anything that could help me figure out how to get back to Amestris.
As we continued, I took in more of Ponyville’s strange charm. The town was peaceful, and there was something unsettling about how... normal it all felt, despite how bizarre everything looked to me. Twilight kept talking, explaining bits and pieces about her friends and the town. I half-listened, my mind wandering back to what had brought me here.
Twilight's Pov:
We continued walking, the atmosphere a little less tense than before, but I could feel Edward’s eyes darting around like he was expecting something to go wrong at any moment. He was still on edge.
“So,” I began, hoping to lighten the mood, “who’s next? I know meeting everypony is probably overwhelming, but I think you’ll like Applejack. She’s not as... high-energy as Pinkie or Rarity. More down-to-earth.”
Edward let out a low grunt. “As long as she’s not as crazy as the others, I’ll manage.”
I smiled, glad he was at least willing to give it a try. “Trust me, she’s great. Let’s head over to Sweet Apple Acres.”
As we walked through Ponyville, the scenery began to change. The town’s buildings gave way to open fields and orchards. Rows upon rows of apple trees stretched out in every direction, and I could already smell the fresh, sweet scent of apples in the air.
Sweet Apple Acres was just ahead, and I spotted Applejack working in the field, bucking trees and gathering apples into baskets. She noticed us coming and waved, trotting over with a wide, friendly smile.
“Well, howdy, Twilight!” Applejack greeted me before turning to Edward. “And you must be the new fella in town. Heard about ya from Rainbow Dash.”
Edward gave a curt nod, clearly still on guard, but Applejack didn’t seem to notice. She looked him up and down, her gaze lingering on his metal leg for a moment before she smiled.
“Gotta say, partner, I ain’t ever seen a pony like you before. But I reckon you’re tough, with a leg like that.”
Edward blinked, caught off guard by her straightforward compliment. “I guess you could say that,” he mumbled, seeming unsure of how to respond.
Applejack chuckled. “Don’t be shy, sugarcube. We’re all friendly folk here. Any friend of Twilight’s is a friend of mine.”
I could see Edward relaxing just a little more, though he was still stiff. Applejack’s warm, no-nonsense attitude seemed to put him at ease, at least compared to Pinkie and Rarity. He even seemed a little curious as he glanced at the apple trees.
“So, you run this whole place?” Edward asked, gesturing toward the vast orchards.
“Sure do! Sweet Apple Acres has been in my family for generations. We grow the best apples in Equestria,” Applejack said proudly. “You like apples?”
Edward shrugged. “I guess.”
“Well, why don’t you try one of ours? I bet you’ll be a fan,” Applejack said, tossing him an apple from her basket.
Edward caught it with his hoof, staring at it for a moment before taking a cautious bite. I watched as his eyes widened slightly, clearly surprised by how good it was.
“Not bad,” he admitted, and I couldn’t help but smile.
Applejack grinned. “Knew you’d like it!”
Edward Pov:
As we left Sweet Apple Acres, I felt a heaviness settling in my limbs. It wasn’t the kind of tired you get from a long day of work or an exhausting fight—it was something else. My body was still all wrong, and even though I was getting better at walking on these stupid hooves, everything still felt... off.
I tried to shake the exhaustion creeping in, but it clung to me. My eyes drifted over the peaceful landscape as we made our way back toward Ponyville. Twilight was walking ahead, humming something under her breath, probably thinking everything had gone great today. I had to admit, Applejack wasn’t bad. Still, that didn’t change the fact that I was stuck here, far away from Amestris, and there was no telling how or when I’d get back.
The sun was starting to set, casting a warm glow over the fields. The temperature dropped slightly, and with it, I felt my eyes starting to droop. I shook my head, trying to keep myself awake.
“Stay awake,” I muttered to myself, hoping Twilight didn’t notice. The last thing I wanted was for her to think I couldn’t handle something as simple as a walk back to town.
I focused on the dirt road in front of me, willing my legs to keep moving. But each step felt heavier than the last. My eyelids flickered, and I felt myself sway slightly.
“Edward? You okay?” Twilight’s voice cut through my thoughts, and I glanced up to see her looking over her shoulder at me.
“Yeah, I’m fine,” I grumbled. “Just... tired.”
She frowned, slowing down to walk beside me. “It’s been a long day. You don’t have to push yourself, you know.”
“I’m not pushing myself,” I said stubbornly, even though I was clearly doing exactly that.
But the truth was, my legs were starting to feel like lead, and the exhaustion was getting harder to fight. I clenched my jaw, refusing to admit that I might not make it all the way back on my own. I was Edward Elric, damn it. I didn’t need help.
Except, apparently, my body had other plans. My hooves stumbled a bit, and I nearly tripped over nothing. Twilight’s concerned gaze lingered on me, and I could practically feel her thinking.
“Edward, I think you need a break,” she said gently.
I shot her a glare, but it was half-hearted. “I can walk.”
Twilight stopped, her horn glowing softly as she turned to face me. “Look, I know you’re tough, but it’s okay to ask for help sometimes. You’re still adjusting, and you’ve had a long day. Let me carry you the rest of the way.”
My pride flared up, ready to snap back at her, but before I could say anything, my body betrayed me. I swayed again, and this time my legs buckled slightly beneath me. I cursed under my breath, hating how weak I felt in this moment.
Twilight didn’t wait for me to argue. She lowered herself down in front of me, motioning for me to climb onto her back. “Come on, it’s not a big deal.”
I hesitated, staring at her with narrowed eyes. “I don’t need to be carried,” I muttered.
“I know,” she said with a small smile. “But I’m offering because you’re my friend, and friends help each other.”
Her words caught me off guard. Friend? I barely knew her, but somehow, she’d decided we were friends. I wanted to argue, to push her away like I always did when people got too close. But my body was already screaming at me to stop being stubborn.
With a frustrated sigh, I gave in. “Fine.”
I climbed onto Twilight’s back, careful not to put too much weight on her, but she seemed to handle it with ease. Her wings stretched out, and before I could question what she was doing, she took off into the air.
The sudden rush of wind surprised me, and I instinctively held on tighter. Twilight’s wings beat rhythmically, carrying us above Ponyville as the town began to shrink beneath us. Flying wasn’t something I had experienced often back in Amestris, but it was... strangely calming.
The exhaustion that had been gnawing at me before was starting to pull me under now, and the steady motion of Twilight’s flight didn’t help. The soft sounds of her wings cutting through the air, combined with the dimming light of the sunset, made it impossible to keep my eyes open any longer.
I fought it. I wasn’t some kid who needed to be carried home and tucked into bed. But no matter how much I tried to keep myself awake, the warmth of Twilight’s back and the soft breeze made me feel... safe.
“Edward?” Twilight’s voice drifted back to me, but it sounded far away now.
“Mhm?” I mumbled, barely keeping my head up.
“You don’t have to stay awake. Just rest. I’ll make sure you get home.”
Her words melted into the background as sleep finally won. My grip on her loosened, and my head rested against her soft mane as my eyelids fell shut. The last thing I remembered was the gentle rhythm of her wings, carrying me through the sky, and the strange comfort of knowing—for once—I wasn’t alone.
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