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Tempest Tossed

by AugieDog
Rainbow Dash has only ever been in love once. So when that love's threatened, she'll smash her way through the entire universe if she has to in order to set things right.

Rainbow Dash has only ever been in love once. So when that love's threatened, she'll smash her way through the entire universe if she has to in order to set things right.

An entry in the Poetry Group's 2024 Pony Poetry Contest, this story gained an Honorable Mention.


On a technical note, the rhythm here is supposed to be iambic pentameter from stem to stern. The rhyme scheme traces its roots back to the terza rima Dante Alighieri first used five hundred years ago in the Divine Comedy, but I'm using the English-language variation that Percy Shelley came up with a little over two hundred years ago for his "Ode to the West Wind." This variation inserts couplets after four stanzas of terza rima to break the narrative into something kind of like a series of Shakespearean sonnets.

Because, I mean, why wouldn't a person do that? :twilightblush:

Mike

Everyone
Complete
Adventure
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Romance
 
DAR

4605 words: Estimated 23 minutes to read

11 Chapters:

  1. Canto I 2024-10-11 18:13:02 UTC
    403
  2. Canto II 2024-10-11 18:18:03 UTC
    426
  3. Canto III 2024-10-11 18:21:59 UTC
    411
  4. Canto IV 2024-10-13 20:44:17 UTC
    410
  5. Canto V 2024-10-14 14:05:34 UTC
    410
  6. Canto VI 2024-10-15 14:14:09 UTC
    417
  7. Canto VII 2024-10-16 16:15:40 UTC
    448
  8. Canto VIII 2024-10-17 01:24:39 UTC
    418
  9. Canto IX 2024-10-17 14:07:24 UTC
    441
  10. Canto X 2024-10-18 13:58:28 UTC
    427
  11. Canto XI 2024-10-18 13:58:38 UTC
    394