Chained Hearts - A Love Story

by CasualBrony84

Chapter 1: Generosity

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To her friends, Rarity was many things: elegant, creative, generous and, occasionally, a drama queen. From humble roots, she had founded the Carousel Boutique in her hometown of Ponyville and made it the cornerstone of a thriving fashion empire, with branch stores in Manehattan and Canterlot.

Many entrepreneurs, particularly successful ones, let the pressures of running one’s own business make them tight-hooved and stingy. Not Rarity. As fabulous as she was, her greatest joy came from helping others feel good about themselves. This core of empathy had eventually led to her embodying Generosity as an Element of Harmony, and when Twilight Sparkle founded the School of Friendship, Rarity was the natural choice to teach about that Element.

On this spring day, over a year after the School of Friendship’s founding, Rarity was wondering if she had bitten off more than she could chew. It wasn’t the first time such thoughts had crossed her mind…balancing her teaching duties with managing the Carousel Boutique, embarking on friendship quests for the Cutie Map, and making business trips to Manehattan and Canterlot left her with little time for herself.

The lack of downtime was taking its toll. Just the other day, she’d snapped at a student over a minor mistake when they truly didn’t deserve it. Though she’d apologized immediately, the guilt still lingered. Worse, while teaching different creatures at the school brought a wealth of inspiration, exhaustion made it harder and harder to bring her designs to life. Today, she’d barely managed a few rough sketches, and even those felt uninspired. Customers for her finished pieces had been few.

With no pressing tasks at hoof, Rarity busied herself with dusting the counter and glanced at the clock with a weary sigh. She had been so busy lately that she had missed her normal spa day several weeks in a row, a thing that would have been unheard-of just a few years before. After a furious internal debate between her need to recharge and her desire not to disappoint any potential customers, she gave a decisive nod. “There’s only one remedy for the overburdened fashionista,” she declared, dramatic as any actress onstage, “and that remedy is pampering! After all, proper self-care is the pattern on which good customer service is sewn.” Leaving a “Closed for Spa Emergency” sign posted on the boutique door, the elegant, purple-maned unicorn started down the road.

As Rarity trotted through the familiar streets, she looked around, shaking her head wistfully. Ponyville had changed so much in just a few short years. Though none of them knew it at the time, Twilight Sparkle’s arrival had turned the town into a hub of adventure, and the founding of the School of Friendship had completed its transformation into a thriving tourist destination, a process that started with Twilight’s ascension from unicorn scholar to alicorn princess. The extra bits flowing in brought new businesses, particularly franchises funded by Filthy Rich, and those job opportunities attracted a wave of new residents.

The growing population brought challenges as well, such as attracting con artists like the Flim-Flam Brothers. Despite their successful Las Pegasus casino, the duo had recently attempted yet another scam in Ponyville, only to be thwarted by Rarity and her friends. Still, for every major fraud they stopped, Rarity knew several smaller schemes slipped through unnoticed. Ponyville was no longer the bucolic little village Rarity had grown up in; it was evolving into a bustling town, perhaps even a small city.

A few blocks from the Ponyville Day Spa (not the only spa in town anymore, but still the best in Rarity’s opinion), Rarity’s attention was caught by an unfamiliar unicorn stallion standing on a street corner. His silvery-gray coat and metallic-blue mane, tail, and eyes formed an attractive contrast to her discerning eye, yet he looked down on his luck—unhealthily thin, with a shadow of stubble on his jaw and a shaggy, unkempt appearance. His cutie mark depicted five interlocking rings in a precise, intricate grid, four rings passing through a fifth in the center, and a battered set of saddlebags hung from his back, completing the picture of a pony in hard times.

Rarity sighed inwardly. That was another thing Ponyville never used to have—beggars. She reached into her saddlebag for a bit to offer the poor stallion. Before she could, though, his eye caught hers and his horn lit up, a few items floating out of his saddlebags in a metallic-silver cloud of telekinetic magic. “Hornmade jewelry for a lovely mare?” he offered with a shy, hopeful smile. “Only thirty bits.” His voice, a rough-edged baritone, carried the weariness of too many sleepless nights, or perhaps a long day of speaking.

Rarity had encountered many street vendors before during her trips to Manehattan and Canterlot, but this unassuming stallion’s offer caught her off guard. The chain necklace, bracelet, and earrings gleamed with a high polish, their intricate, lacy weave exuding an exotic charm. Her practiced eye noted that the pieces were crafted from plain steel rather than precious metals, yet the quality of the work was undeniable. In her boutique, such craftsmanship could fetch far more than the modest price he’d named. “My dear stallion,” she said, tearing her gaze from the jewelry to meet his, “are you quite sure?”

The stallion blushed, his gaze dropping meekly as if eye contact made him uncomfortable. “Um… twenty-five?” he mumbled, his tone hesitant, clearly used to having his price haggled down.

Rarity shook her head quickly, raising a hoof to gently stop him. “No, no, no, that’s not what I meant, darling,” she said with a reassuring smile. “Quite the opposite, in fact—your craftsponyship is divine. Surely you should charge more?”

The stallion blinked, his blush deepening as he hesitantly met Rarity’s gaze before looking away again. He rubbed the back of his neck with a hoof, his voice barely above a murmur. “I’m just trying to give everypony a fair price…”

Rarity sighed softly, recognizing a familiar story. She’d seen it before, especially in the world of fashion—a talented craftspony undervaluing their work for fear of asking too much. “Darling, a fair price for everypony includes yourself,” she said with a gentle smile. “Listen, my name is Rarity, and I run—”

Rarity’s introduction was interrupted by the stallion’s gasp. His eyes widened as if truly seeing her for the first time, then darted to her cutie mark. “Y-you’re really her!” he stammered, his telekinesis faltering and the jewelry he’d been trying to sell falling to the ground as he bowed before her like royalty. “You’re one of the Heroes of Equestria! I-I’ve read your Friendship Journal, and I saw the ‘Most Beautiful Mane’ spread you did for Vanity Mare and I should have recognized you, but I’ve only seen pictures and they don’t do you justice and, and, and-oh, Celestia, Metal, shut up!“ He cut himself off by clapping a hoof over his own muzzle, his blush practically glowing by now. “Sorry,” he murmured, lowering his hoof. “I didn’t mean to fancolt out like that.”

Rarity chuckled, a delicate blush coloring her own cheeks. “Oh, that’s quite alright, Metal, dear,” she said with a warm smile, turning her head coyly and patting her mane. Using his name, she hoped, might help build a rapport. “It’s rather flattering, truly. At the end of the day, though, I’m just a fashion designer—albeit a rather fabulous one.”

Glancing at the fallen jewelry, Rarity picked it up with her telekinesis, holding it close to her face to examine the delicate-looking weave of the tiny steel rings. “But please, let us return to your beautiful creations,” she said, slipping naturally back into her friendly-professional demeanor. “Why do you charge so little for such exquisite work?”

“Um, Tested. Metal Tested, I mean. That’s my name, I mean.” If the poor stallion turned any redder, Rarity would be amazed if he didn’t burst into flame. “I’m…like I said, I’m only trying to give everypony a fair price. My materials don’t cost that much…” He trailed off, shaking himself and looking away in embarrassment. As he tried to regain his composure, Rarity took the opportunity to fully absorb just how woebegone his appearance was.

Rarity nodded thoughtfully, following Metal Tested’s reasoning. “But making your work affordable doesn’t mean depriving yourself of the just due for your labors, darling,” she said warmly. An idea struck her—discussing business over a spa treatment had always yielded excellent results. “I would love to feature your jewelry in my shop, the Carousel Boutique. I was just heading to the spa; why don’t you join me, and we can discuss the details there?” She gently tucked the jewelry back into his saddlebag with a bright, encouraging smile. “My treat, of course.”

Metal Tested’s blush deepened until it seemed to radiate through his entire body. Glancing down at his shabby appearance, he pawed nervously at the ground, his ears pinned back. “I don’t think they’d even let me through the door, Miss Rarity,” he murmured, his voice tinged with embarrassment.

“Oh, tosh!” Rarity said, tossing her mane and gently lifting Metal’s chin with a hoof, her smile warm and reassuring. “Everypony deserves the chance to look and feel their best. Besides, I’m a personal friend of the owners, and I promise they would welcome anypony with an appreciation for the finer things in life. Judging by the quality of your work, you more than qualify.” She gave a decisive nod, lowering her hoof to let him think. “Consider it an investment in your well-being and future. With a refreshed look and a relaxed mind, you’ll be able to present your creations with the confidence they deserve.”

Metal Tested hesitated a few more moments; he didn’t pull away from Rarity’s hoof when she touched his chin, but his eyes darted about, as if maintaining eye contact was uncomfortable for him. “A-alright, Ms. Rarity,” he finally stammered, “but only because you insist.” He glanced away quickly, but not before Rarity caught a slight shimmer of moisture in his eye.

Rarity nodded, allowing Metal Tested the salve to his pride. He might have received pity from others in recent times, but that was a poor substitute for the simple generosity and kindness she was offering. “Thank you ever so much,” she smiled, moving up next to Metal Tested to gently bump her shoulder against his. “I knew you weren’t the kind of stallion who would make a mare beg,” she teased, “and a spa day is SO much more enjoyable with a friend. If I am to insist on anything, though, it must be that you simply call me Rarity.” Batting her eyelashes, she tossed her mane and started toward the spa again. “Come along, now. The spa awaits, and I’m sure you’ll find their services nothing short of rejuvenating.”

Metal Tested nodded as he turned and fell into step next to Rarity. “I’m sure they will be, Ms.…um, Rarity,” he said, quickly correcting himself. “I know from reading about you that you always insist on the best.” He hesitated, walking in silence for a few steps before speaking again, his voice small. “Um…is there any chance you could sign this?” From his saddlebag, Metal Tested floated out a pen and a copy of the Friendship Journal that Rarity and her friends had written and that Twilight Sparkle had published. Unlike the souvenir-hunters from just after the initial publication, though, this one was a battered, dog-eared old paperback that had obviously been read multiple times.

Rarity’s heart warmed at the sight of the Journal. It was always a joy to meet somepony who had not only actually read the book but cherished it. “Of course, darling,” she said, taking the book and pen with her telekinesis. “It’s always a pleasure to share a bit of friendship.” In her elegant script, she wrote, Dear Metal Tested—May your days be filled with creativity and fabulousness! Remember, true beauty comes from the heart. -Your Friend, Rarity. She added a delicate monogram of her cutie mark before floating the book and pen back to him. “Here you are,” she said warmly. “I hope it continues to inspire you in all your dreams.”

“Thank you,” Metal Tested said as he accepted the book and tucked it back into his saddlebag almost reverently. “I…I really appreciate it.” The last few minutes of their walk to the spa was spent in companionable silence. As they reached the building, Metal Tested used his telekinesis to hold the door for Rarity, and she smiled in appreciation of his gentlecoltly manners.

“Rarity! My favorite customer!” Lotus Blossom gushed in her musical accent as the fashionista and her guest entered. The blue earth pony came out from behind the counter to greet Rarity with an embrace and a kiss on each cheek. “But you have been away from us far too long! Are you quite alright?” She stepped back to hold Rarity at hoof’s length, looking her over.

“Good afternoon, Lotus Blossom!” Rarity replied with a light laugh, returning the hug and kisses. Other than her fellow Heroes of Equestria, the spa pony was one of her closest friends. “You always know how to make a mare feel special. Work has kept me busier than I’d like," she added with a rueful shrug. "But that doesn't matter now-I’m here and ready to make up for lost pampering!” As they released their embrace, Rarity motioned to Metal Tested. “I met this charming fellow on the way. Lotus Blossom, I’d like you to meet Metal Tested, a jeweler of no small talent from what I’ve seen.”

“Of course!” Lotus Blossom smiled, stepping forward to offer Metal Tested a hug as well. “Any friend of Rarity is a friend of mine.”

To Rarity’s surprise, Metal Tested drew back from Lotus Blossom, his ears flicking nervously and his expression tense. Few stallions would have refused the embrace of such an attractive mare. “Um…pleased to meet you,” he murmured, offering his hoof hesitantly.

If Lotus Blossom noticed Metal Tested’s ragged appearance or shy demeanor, she gave no sign, her smile remaining warm and inviting. “And a very great pleasure to meet you as well, Metal Tested,” she said, transitioning smoothly from an offered hug to a polite hoofshake. As she moved back behind the counter, she turned her attention back to Rarity. “Now, Rarity, what shall it be today? A Pampered Pony Hooficure? Or perhaps our Sauna Massage Special?”

Putting aside the question of Metal’s odd reaction to Lotus Blossom, Rarity stepped up to the counter with her usual grace. “Metal Tested and I will have his-and-hers ‘New You Specials’, please, on my tab.” Lowering her voice, she murmured to her old friend, “The poor dear looks as though he hasn’t had the chance to be taken care of in quite some time.”

“But of course,” Lotus Blossom said with a warm smile, picking up her pen in her teeth to mark down Rarity’s request. “Ah, and you are in luck!” she added as she set the pen aside. “Another pair of customers canceled, so we can take care of you right away.”

“Excellent!” Rarity said brightly as a spa attendant appeared with robes for her and Metal Tested. “Why, with just a little polish, Metal Tested, I do believe we’ll uncover the diamond in your rough. Just relax and let the attendants work their magic.” Still looking somewhat bewildered, Metal Tested followed Rarity and the spa attendant to begin their treatments.

The New You Special began with a manecut, and Rarity and Metal Tested were seated side by side in the salon chairs. “Now, tell me, darling,” Rarity said as her beautician draped a cape over her and began to touch up her flowing locks. “Wherever did you learn to create such intricate jewelry?”

Metal Tested shrugged modestly as his barber started taming his own overgrown mane. “I taught myself, really,” he said. “It’s not that hard; you just need pliers and patience.”

Rarity laughed softly, her voice like a tinkling bell. “Oh, darling, that last is likely the rarest resource in all of Equestria,” she said, a playful smile gracing her lips.. “But do you mean that you came up with your designs all by yourself?”

Metal Tested shook his head carefully to avoid disrupting the barber’s work. “Not exactly,” he said. “I’m a nerd, really. ‘Star Trot’, ‘Ogres and Oubliettes’, ‘Power Ponies’, ‘Daring Do’, myths and legends of Old Equestria…you name it, I nerd it.” He gave a small, self-deprecating chuckle.

Rarity smiled at Metal Tested’s modest description of himself. “With such interests, I do believe you’ll get along famously with my friends,” she said. “Spike runs an ‘Ogres and Oubliettes’ game; he’s just recently started teaching me to play, in fact.” She shook her head in self-reprimand. “But I’m interrupting. Please, do go on.”

Metal Tested winced slightly as his barber worked through a particularly stubborn tangle in his mane. “Sorry, I…I’m still trying to process all of this,” he admitted. “You and your friends are my heroes and…” He trailed off, his cheeks reddening again as he looked away, clearing his throat awkwardly. “A-anyway, I was a pretty shy foal. Sew Sweet…my first marefriend…she introduced me to things like O&O conventions and Olde Equestria Faires—things I never even knew existed before I met her.”

As Metal Tested’s voice lowered and turned rougher when speaking of his first love, Rarity could sense a deep-seated pain. “She must have been very special,” she said softly, her voice full of sympathy, “to have captured the heart of somepony so creative.”

Metal Tested gave Rarity a small, bashful smile. “I…I’ve never been good at making friends,” he said. “I had a couple when I met her, but they were mainly just ponies I shared hobbies with, not anything really close like you and your friends. She…well, she was special because she started bringing me out of my shell, at least a little.” He took a deep, bracing breath. “Anyway, I picked up a book on chainmail at a convention and just went from there. It’s even how I got my cutie mark,” he explained, motioning to his flank. “I was a late bloomer. It shows a single section of Canterlot four-in-one weave.”

“Chainmail?” Rarity raised a curious brow. “Do you mean armor, like the Royal Guard wears?”

Metal Tested nodded slightly. “The Royal Guard uses special metals to make their armor lighter and stronger,” he explained, “but the same techniques have been used for chainmail armor and chain jewelry for centuries. I’ve made some armor pieces too, but that’s more of a niche market for LARPers and cosplayers, since the Royal Guard has its own armorers.” He sighed softly, a touch of resignation in his voice. “I haven’t had much luck with the hoofmade jewelry and accessories either. I guess I’m just not much of a salespony.”

Rarity’s heart went out to the sad, lonely stallion, moved by both the love he had lost and the challenges he still faced. “Well, I, for one, find your dedication to your craft truly inspiring,” she said, her voice gentle and sincere. “From the pieces you showed me, it’s clear you pour your heart into every link and ring. Self-promotion is a daunting challenge for anypony, but your talent speaks for itself.”

“I wish it would speak a little louder,” Metal Tested murmured wryly as the barber began spreading shave gel over his face. “Maybe then I’d make more sales.” Despite his words, he seemed to relax slightly, Rarity’s praise soothing some of his tension, though the weight of years of self-doubt and disappointment still lingered.

Rarity nodded appreciatively as her beautician massaged shampoo into her mane, the soothing touch helping to ease any lingering tension of the day. “I completely understand, darling. Building a brand and establishing a loyal clientele takes time.” She paused, her voice softening with genuine concern. “I hope you’ll forgive my candor, but it seems you’ve been operating without a strong foundation to support you.” Offering him a warm, encouraging smile, she continued, “Nevertheless, your work has captured my attention, and I’m certain it will enchant others as well. With a touch of guidance and the right exposure, I have every confidence your business will flourish.”

Metal Tested’s breath hitched, his eyes shimmering with unshed tears. Rarity’s heart ached as she imagined how long it had been since anypony offered him genuine encouragement instead of trying to haggle him down to a pittance. “Thank you,” he murmured, his voice hoarse with emotion. He took a steadying breath, his shoulders visibly loosening as the barber’s blade began clearing away the rough stubble from his face. “Something I noticed when I read your Friendship Journal,” he added quietly, his lips barely moving so as not to disrupt the barber’s work. “Your friends talk a lot about how generous you are, but a lot of times you don’t seem to realize it yourself—or at least, you don’t write about it that way.”

Rarity chuckled kindly, touched by his observation. “Well, I suppose it can be easier to recognize virtues in others than in ourselves,” she said. “That’s part of why friendship is so precious…it lets us see ourselves through the eyes of those who care about us. In doing so, we discover qualities about ourselves that we might otherwise overlook.”

“Like I said, I’ve never been good at making friends,” Metal Tested said, a flicker of regret shadowing his expression. “I…oh, never mind. It’s a long story.”

Rarity leaned over slightly, her expression soft with understanding as she gently clasped Metal’s hoof in her fetlock. “Metal, darling, you don’t have to share your story unless you feel ready,” she reassured him, her voice steady and warm. “But always remember: the magic of friendship lies in the depth of our connections, not their number. More friends may add merriment, but I’ve always believed that quality far outweighs quantity.” Her gentle squeeze lingered for a moment before she withdrew her hoof. “And for what it’s worth, I have no doubt we’re going to be good friends. After all, we share a passion for bringing beauty into the world—that’s a bond worth celebrating.”

Metal Tested inclined his head slowly, the faint glisten of unshed tears pooling in his eyes. This time, he made no effort to mask his emotions, though he held them carefully at bay. “Thank you,” he murmured, his voice barely above a whisper, the words laden with quiet sincerity.

The remainder of their mane treatments unfolded in a peaceful, companionable silence. As the attendants rinsed the last traces of shampoo and conditioner from their manes, Metal Tested exhaled deeply, his brow furrowed in thought. “You mentioned wanting to feature my work in your shop,” he began tentatively, rising from his chair as Rarity gestured for him to follow her toward the hot tub. “How would that even work? Like you said, I don’t have a proper workshop… just some pliers, my materials, and the dresser in my hotel room.”

Rarity’s ears perked up at his question, her smile widening as she eased herself onto the hot tub’s submerged bench, her professional instincts flaring to life. “Well, first and foremost, I’m delighted that you’re open to the idea,” she said warmly, her gaze flicking toward Metal as he took a seat at a courteous distance on the same bench. “To start, we can display a curated selection of your existing pieces. I believe your jewelry would complement some of my own designs exquisitely.” Her eyes sparkled with inspiration as she envisioned the creative possibilities.

“As for a workspace,” Rarity continued, her tone becoming thoughtful, “I have a storage room on the second floor that boasts a large window with excellent southern exposure—ideal for natural light. I’d planned to convert it into a secondary work area for myself, but I never quite got around to it. We can repurpose it into a studio for your craft.” She offered Metal a warm smile, her voice brimming with sincerity. “And once you run out of your current materials, or need something specific for a custom piece, I’ll be happy to provide what you need.

“Now, regarding profits from your work,” Rarity began, transitioning smoothly to the financial details of their budding partnership, “I propose an even fifty-fifty split. With my sales expertise, I’m confident your creations will command far higher prices than what you’ve been asking—especially once you’re working with premium materials.” She offered a gentle smile, her voice warm but firm. “Please don’t take this as criticism, darling, but I believe you’ve been drastically undervaluing both your craft and yourself. Success starts with recognizing your own worth.”

Metal Tested glanced away again, though if he blushed, it was disguised by the heat-flush the hot tub brought to his face. “I… I don’t know what to say,” he admitted at last, shaking his head slightly. His voice carried a mixture of disbelief and wonder. “Nothing like this has ever happened to me before. Honestly, a part of me keeps expecting a prank pony to jump out and slap a pie in my face.”

Rarity chuckled. “Be careful…saying such things may summon Pinkie Pie,” she teased. “But I can assure you, there’s no prank afoot. In fact, I believe this can be the beginning of a beautiful friendship and a wonderful partnership.”

Metal Tested paused, his hesitation palpable as he mulled over her words. Finally, he exhaled deeply, a tentative smile tugging at the corners of his mouth. “Well, if I can’t trust one of the Elements of Harmony, who can I?” he said softly. His smile widened slightly as he added, “I’ll do it. And… thank you, Rarity. For giving me a chance.”

Rarity’s heart swelled with delight. “You are most welcome, Metal Tested,” she said warmly. “Very welcome indeed.” Rising gracefully from the hot tub, she used her magic to float over a pair of towels, drying herself and wrapping one snugly around her mane in a neat turban. “But for now, I believe we’ve had our fill of business talk. Let’s take this time to relax and enjoy the rest of our treatments. We can discuss the finer details later.”


“You were right, Rarity,” Metal Tested remarked as they stepped out of the spa into the cool early-evening air. His voice carried a newfound lightness, and a small, genuine smile graced his face. “I feel like a new stallion.”

Rarity chuckled warmly. “You certainly look like a new stallion,” she said, her tone carrying a hint of admiration as she gave him an appraising glance. Metal Tested’s mane and tail had been expertly trimmed into a short, rakishly tousled style, and the clean shave accentuated the sharp, refined angles of his face. If he was still a little too thin, Rarity was confident that would soon change once his life settled into a healthier routine. “A very handsome one, I might add.”

Metal Tested’s cheeks flushed at the compliment, his bashful demeanor becoming increasingly familiar to Rarity. She noted with quiet amusement how easily he blushed, though she could hardly fault him—after all, she sometimes reacted much the same way when meeting her own idols. “Thank you,” he murmured softly, ducking his head as a shy smile tugged at his lips.

Just as the moment settled, Metal’s stomach betrayed him with a loud, unceremonious growl. His blush deepened, spreading to the tips of his ears, and he awkwardly rubbed his stomach with a forehoof. “I guess I should find something to eat,” he mumbled, his gaze dropping to the ground. “I’ll… see you in the morning, at your boutique?” He began to turn away, a tentative step already carrying him off.

“Oh, darling, don’t be absurd!” Rarity interjected with a dazzling smile as she stepped closer, slipping one foreleg through Metal’s. To her surprise, he flinched slightly at the contact, his muscles tensing as though he were suppressing the urge to withdraw. Undeterred, Rarity continued with cheerful insistence, “We’ve just enjoyed a wonderful spa day and sealed a promising business partnership. Surely, you won’t deny me the pleasure of treating you to dinner to celebrate?” She punctuated her appeal with a playful flutter of her lashes. “There’s a new Grand Galloping Gourmet I’ve been dying to try, and this feels like the perfect occasion.”

“G-Grand Galloping Gourmet?” Metal stammered, his ears pinning back. He truly did have one of the most expressive faces Rarity had ever seen, going from a deep blush to pale alarm in just moments. “Don’t they require jackets and ties for stallions?”

“Yes, they do,” Rarity admitted with a sympathetic nod. “But fear not—they keep a selection on-hoof to lend to patrons.” Her tone brightened as inspiration struck. “And if you’ll allow me to borrow some of your jewelry for the evening, it could serve as the perfect advertisement—a little something to pique the curiosity of potential customers ahead of your grand debut.” She gave his foreleg a gentle, reassuring squeeze, her eyes sparkling with playful appeal. “Now, darling, surely you wouldn’t leave a lady to dine alone, would you?”

Metal Tested hesitated for a few moments, his indecision plain. Then, with a soft sigh, his ears flicked back up as some color returned to his face. “Well… if you insist, Rarity,” he murmured, one corner of his mouth twitching shyly upward. “But these aren’t just loans—I want you to keep them.” His horn glowed as his saddlebag opened, and a selection of his jewelry floated out in a shimmering telekinetic aura. “Here—these bracelets and anklets are in Byzantrot weave,” he explained, fastening the delicate, rounded chains around her fetlocks and ankles with practiced care. “This necklace is Saddle Arabian three-in-one, with a Coltic Rosette pendant.” He lifted the next piece, the triangular cross-section of the chain perfectly complementing the intricate, flowerlike design of the flat pendant. “And this headdress is in Canterlot six-in-one.” The final piece centered on a large horn ring, with strips of flat-weave chainmail draping elegantly around her mane and across her scalp, creating the effect of a flexible, regal crown. As he worked, Metal’s enthusiasm for his craft was unmistakable, his voice brimming with pride. Stepping back to admire his handiwork, he nodded in satisfaction. “There. You look like a princess.”

“Oh, Metal, darling!” Rarity gasped, her cheeks tinged with a soft blush as she admired the exquisite pieces adorning her. She raised a forehoof to lightly touch the headdress, her eyes sparkling with delight. “These are absolutely stunning… I wish I had a mirror at this very moment to see the full effect. Are you quite certain you want to make these gifts?”

“If you don’t want to think of them as gifts, think of them as investments,” Metal said with one of his shy smiles, mirroring Rarity’s earlier reasoning for the spa treatment. “You’re right—if ponies see you wearing my work, they’re bound to want some for themselves.” His horn glowed softly as he floated out another piece, a necklace he quickly fastened around his own neck. Crafted in the round Byzantrot weave, it featured a longer strip of flat chainmail that hung down the front in the shape of a… “See? I even brought my own tie,” he added with a faint chuckle. “All they’ll need to lend me is a jacket.”

Rarity laughed delightedly as she clapped her hooves. “Metal Tested, you truly are full of surprises!” Stepping closer, she gently took his forehoof in hers, her smile radiating warmth. “I have no doubt this evening will be the perfect conclusion to a marvelous day.” With that, she began leading him down the street, her steps light and graceful.

Metal Tested let out a soft chuckle, his voice barely above a murmur. “And I’ll be with the most beautiful mare in Equestria,” he said, the sincerity in his tone making the words all the more heartfelt.

Rarity’s cheeks flushed faintly, and she dipped her head with a modest smile. “Oh, Metal, you’re far too kind,” she replied warmly. With that, the two resumed their stroll down the street, the evening air carrying a sense of quiet anticipation between them.

The Grand Galloping Gourmet wasn’t quite as formal and exclusive as its namesake gala, but it still cultivated a sophisticated, rarified atmosphere.The maître d’ supplied Metal Tested with a loaned jacket and whisked their saddlebags away to the cloakroom with practiced ease. A few minutes later, Rarity and Metal were seated at a cozy table near a window, the candlelight adding a warm glow to the restaurant’s serene ambiance.

“So, Metal,” Rarity began, glancing up from her menu with a friendly smile, “why don’t you tell me a little more about yourself? Nothing that makes you uncomfortable, of course, but I’d love to get to know you better.”

Metal Tested hesitated, taking a small sip of his water. “Well… I moved around a lot growing up,” he said after a pause, his tone cautious, as though weighing each word. “My parents were in the Royal Guard—Border Division. We ended up being transferred every few years.”

“Oh, how marvelous!” Rarity exclaimed, her eyes lighting up. “Traveling the borderlands, meeting creatures from different cultures… it must have been fascinating!”

Metal’s smile was faint and fleeting, his gaze dipping to the table. “It was, at first,” he admitted, a sigh escaping him as he shook his head. “But the novelty wore off. Like I said earlier, I’ve never been good at making friends.”

Rarity’s brow furrowed slightly, but before she could respond, the waiter arrived to take their orders. Once their meals were chosen and the waiter departed, she turned back to Metal, her expression softening. “I must admit, darling, I don’t quite understand,” she said gently. “You’ve won me over easily enough.”

Metal Tested shook his head, his hoof absently tracing the rim of his water glass. “You’re being kind, Rarity,” he said, his voice tinged with quiet gratitude. “Generous, even. And, well… generosity is your Element of Harmony, isn’t it?” He chuckled lightly, though the sound lacked humor, and tapped his hoof against the table in thought. “But… there’s something wrong with me. With my mind.” His other hoof lifted, tapping against his temple.

Rarity tilted her head, her gaze steady but kind. “Whatever do you mean?” she asked, her tone laced with cautious compassion. She understood that such topics could be delicate and resolved not to press too hard.

Metal gave a small shrug, the motion almost resigned. “It’s hard to explain,” he began, his words slow and deliberate. “Most ponies seem to pick up on social cues naturally—body language, facial expressions, stuff like that. For me, it’s… harder.” He paused, gathering his thoughts. “Even making eye contact feels uncomfortable unless I know somepony really well. You’ve probably noticed I don’t look you in the eye very much.” He exhaled heavily, his shoulders slumping as though relieved to admit it aloud. “I’m better than I was as a foal, but I’ve had to learn a lot of these things. It doesn’t come naturally. Like, I can usually tell now if somepony’s being sarcastic, but reading feelings? I’m awful at it unless it’s really obvious.”

He paused, his gaze dropping to the table. “When I was a colt, it made me an easy target. Always the new foal, always the odd one out. The other kids figured out pretty quickly that I was easy to lie to… easy to fool. And the bullies?” He let out a bitter chuckle. “They had a field day.”

“Oh, my dear, that’s simply dreadful,” Rarity said softly, her voice filled with genuine sympathy.

Metal Tested nodded, his expression clouded with memory. “Always moving around, never staying in one place long enough to put down roots…” He paused, as though searching for the right words. “It wore me down. I got kicked in the flank so many times—metaphorically and literally—that I stopped trusting other ponies, even the ones I thought of as friends.” His voice caught briefly, and he took a quick sip of water before continuing. “Sew Sweet… she was different. She was the first pony I felt really saw me.” His gaze dropped, and he blinked rapidly, as if warding off an unwelcome memory. “It… it was wonderful. But also terrifying.”

Rarity nodded with understanding, her expression soft. “Yes, I know that feeling well. Opening up to another can feel so freeing, like standing under a vast and beautiful sky… until you notice a roc circling overhead.” The corner of her mouth twitched wryly. “Having been picked up by a roc before, I know what I’m talking about.”

Metal’s lips twitched into a faint smile at her metaphor. “Yeah… that’s exactly it.” He took a steadying breath, his hooves resting lightly on the edge of the table. “Meeting new ponies is still hard for me. That’s probably why I’m such a terrible salespony,” he admitted, his tone laced with self-deprecation. “Even under the best circumstances, I get nervous and shaky. And… well, I still have trust issues.”

He hesitated, his gaze drifting toward the window as if gathering courage. “To be honest, if I hadn’t read as much about you as I have, I probably wouldn’t have taken your offer. I would’ve assumed there was some catch.” He glanced back at her, his ears drooping slightly. “But after reading your Friendship Journal…” He shrugged, looking away again. “I know it’s silly, but it made me feel like I already knew you and your friends. It’s a big part of why I decided to come to Ponyville and try starting over.”

Rarity offered a gentle smile, reaching across the table to pat Metal’s hoof with her own. “Oh, Metal, it’s not silly at all,” she said warmly. “We poured so much of ourselves into that journal—our thoughts, our feelings, our lessons. Hearing that you absorbed those messages so deeply, especially after the challenges you’ve faced, means more than I can say. I daresay you’ve taken it to heart better than some of the more… excitable fanponies we encountered after its release.” Her eyes softened as she added, “I think it was very brave of you to come to a new place, despite everything. And knowing that I inspired even a little of that courage? That makes me proud.”

Metal Tested tensed ever so slightly at the initial contact, his gaze flickering to her hoof before gradually relaxing as her words washed over him. “Thank you,” he murmured, his voice quiet but genuine. A faint smile followed, bringing a touch of lightness to his expression. “I seem to be saying that a lot today.”

Rarity chuckled softly, withdrawing her hoof just as their waiter returned with their meals. The conversation paused while the uniformed pegasus set their plates down, the soft clink of tableware filling the air. Once the waiter departed, they began to enjoy their meals, the warm ambiance settling between them.

“I think you would have liked Sew Sweet,” Metal said after a moment, breaking the comfortable silence between bites of his roasted tofu and root vegetables. His voice carried a wistful fondness. “She was a designer too, though her focus was cosplay, not high fashion.”

Rarity’s eyebrows arched slightly, and she set her fork down with a measured, polite smile. “How… unique,” she said, her tone carrying both genuine curiosity and a hint of hesitation. “I can certainly appreciate the dedication required for cosplay. It may not have the enduring sophistication of haute couture, but the creativity behind it is quite impressive.” She leaned forward slightly, her curiosity taking the lead. “If you don’t mind my asking, how did you meet?”

Metal shrugged lightly, his gaze momentarily distant as he speared another bite of tofu. “We met at a LARP—live-action roleplay,” he explained, his voice warming with faint nostalgia. “It’s where ponies dress up in armor and costumes and pretend to be characters in a fictional setting. This one was for a game called ‘Nightmare Knights’,where creatures from our darkest myths secretly exist as a society hidden among us, influencing modern life.” He paused, a wistful smile touching his lips. “She was playing a siren—a type of singing seapony that feeds on negative emotions. I was a windigo.”

“A siren and a windigo?” Rarity tilted her head, her interest sharpening as a warm smile spread across her face. “What a delightfully dramatic pairing! I imagine the costumes must have been quite something.”

Metal chuckled softly, nodding. “Sew Sweet’s was. She wore this dress with a built-up fishtail and metallic-looking scales. I just threw on a white robe with streaming ribbons tied to my forelegs and ankles.” He grinned, his expression tinged with nostalgia. “I tripped over those ribbons more times than I like to remember.” He sighed and shook his head. “That trouble I talked about with reading social cues? She was flirting with me for over a year before I even noticed.”

Rarity’s laugh came softly, melodic as her eyes sparkled with amusement. “And yet she waited for you to notice her interest? My word, that mare must have had Celestia’s own patience.” She shook her head gently. “I do hope you’ve forgiven yourself, darling. Some ponies are subtle, and others… less so.”

Metal laughed lightly, his posture relaxing. “Yeah, she…she was great. I didn’t realize just how much until later.” His smile faltered, giving way to a distant look. “She had a way of reading ponies, you know? I guess she saw something in me worth waiting for.”

Rarity regarded him with a thoughtful look, her smile softening into something more earnest. “That’s a rare quality,” she said. “It sounds like she cared for you very deeply.”

Metal hesitated, then nodded. “Yeah. More than I ended up deserving,” he said quietly, his gaze lowering as though caught in a memory he couldn’t quite shake.

Sensing the downturn in her companion’s mood, Rarity tried to revive the conversation with a slight shift in topic. “Speaking of sirens,” she began, leaning in slightly, “according to Twilight, they’re quite real. She had to venture to another world-one Star Swirl the Bearded banished them to ages ago-when they began to regain their power there.”

Metal blinked, his eyebrows furrowing slightly as he searched her face. “You’re not serious,” he said, his tone carrying a note of amused skepticism.

“I’m very serious,” Rarity said with a knowing chuckle, her voice dropping as though sharing a delicious secret. “Apparently, this world is populated by strange creatures called ‘hoomuns,’ or something equally peculiar,” Rarity said, her eyes glinting with intrigue. “And, if you can believe it, we all have a kind of twin there.”

Metal’s incredulous look deepened. “Now I know you’re joking.”

Rarity laughed again, her tone light but earnest as she raised her right hoof as if swearing an oath. “Filly Guide’s honor, darling. It’s a fascinating place, from how Twilight describes it. Almost no magic as we understand it, but they’ve either developed an entirely different kind or found ingenious ways to compensate.”

“Wow…” Metal Tested shook his head in wonder. “It sounds like something from a bad ‘Nightmare Knights’ fanfiction. I hope I get the chance to ask her about it sometime.”

“I’m sure she’d love to share her adventures there,” Rarity nodded encouragingly. “I’ll make sure to introduce you when the time is right.”

Their conversation was interrupted by a family of three earth ponies approaching their table. “Rarity, so good to see you!” said the stallion, who had a light tan coat, a dark-brown mane and tail and a cutie mark consisting of three money bags. “Enjoying the restaurant? My latest investment!”

“Good evening, Mr. Rich!” Rarity smiled up at the stallion. “Metal, this is Filthy Rich, the owner of Barnyard Bargains and several other businesses in town.” Motioning to the mare and filly in turn, she continued, “This is his wife Spoiled Rich, and their daughter, Diamond Tiara.” Mother and daughter had similar pink coats, but Spoiled Rich had a somewhat lighter-purple mane and tail than Rarity, with a cutie mark of milk being poured out of a glass. Diamond Tiara’s mane and tail were lavender with a white stripe and she wore her namesake on her head as well as having it for a cutie mark, with the slenderness of early adolescence. “Rich family, this is Metal Tested, my latest fashion discovery.”

“Um…hello,” Metal mumbled. Rarity noticed that he seemed paler and more tense than a moment before, edging away from the Rich family on his seat. He seemed almost…frightened. Could this be a manifestation of the social anxiety he had spoken of?

“Please, just Rich,” Filthy Rich said with a relaxed businesspony’s smile, offering his hoof. “If our Rarity has taken notice of you, colt, I’m sure you’ll be somepony to watch out for.” He glanced down at Metal Tested’s chainmail tie. “That’s a very interesting tie you’re wearing.”

“Thanks,” Metal Tested said softly, giving Filthy Rich’s hoof a quick shake, then looking down at his plate. “I made it myself.”

“I do hope you won’t take Metal’s demeanor amiss,” Rarity interjected smoothly. “He’s new to Ponyville and can be somewhat shy.”

“Oh, that’s quite alright,” Filthy Rich nodded. “Actually, Rarity, we came over because Diamond Tiara wanted to ask you something.”

The little filly stepped forward with a smile; from the corner of her eye, Rarity noticed Metal Tested seeming to grow even more tense as Diamond Tiara approached. “That’s some really neat jewelry you’re wearing, Ms. Rarity!” she said with all the enthusiasm of a fashion-conscious fourteen-year-old spotting a cute new accessory. “Where did you get it?”

Rarity chuckled, offering a gracious smile. “Well, darling, my jewelry tonight was actually horn-made by Metal Tested, just like his tie,” she explained, extending a forehoof so Diamond Tiara could take a closer look at one of her bracelets. “I plan to feature his work in the Carousel Boutique as soon as we design and set up a proper display.”

“Cool!” Diamond Tiara grinned, leaning closer to examine the intricate details of the bracelet. “I’ll definitely come see it once it’s ready!”

Rarity chuckled again, nodding warmly. “You do that, dear. I’m sure Metal and I will both look forward to seeing you there.” Out of the corner of her eye, she noticed Metal Tested twitch slightly at her statement, though he remained silent.

The group lingered a few minutes longer, exchanging polite small talk while Metal Tested quietly picked at his meal. When the Rich family finally departed, Metal glanced after them, his posture tense, then turned back to Rarity. “Do you work with Mr. Rich often?” he asked, his voice soft.

Rarity shook her head with a light chuckle. “Oh, no, darling, we’re in completely different markets. Barnyard Bargains focuses on affordable goods for everypony’s general needs, whereas I specialize in haute couture.” She tilted her head slightly, her expression turning concerned as she nibbled a leaf of lettuce. “Are you alright, Metal? You seem a bit… uneasy.”

Metal shifted uncomfortably in his seat, his gaze fixed on the table. “I… don’t do well around foals,” he admitted, his voice quieter than before. “It’s… more than my normal problems.” He hesitated, then shook his head as though trying to dismiss his thoughts. “It’s hard to explain.” He glanced up briefly, meeting Rarity’s gaze for the barest moment. “You have a little sister, don’t you?”

Rarity nodded, her frown deepening in concern. “Yes, Sweetie Belle,” she said softly, raising a brow. “Metal, dear, is something the matter?”

Metal Tested sighed heavily, his gaze shifting away. “Rarity, I… I really appreciate your offer, but after thinking about it, I don’t think it’ll work out,” he said, his tone subdued. He picked up his napkin and dabbed at his mouth, avoiding her eyes. “I’m sorry for wasting your time. Thank you for the spa treatment and dinner.” With that, he rose abruptly, his head bowed, and walked swiftly toward the exit.

“What?” Rarity blinked, caught off guard by his sudden reversal. “Metal Tested, wait!” she called, pushing back her chair and quickly trotting after him. She reached him just as he returned the borrowed jacket and slung his battered saddlebags over his back.

“Metal!” she called again, and he stopped just outside the restaurant doors. Rarity hurried to his side and gently rested a hoof on his shoulder, her voice soft but firm. “Metal, darling, please, tell me what’s wrong,” she urged, her tone filled with earnest compassion. “Whatever the problem, I’m sure we can work through it together.”

Metal Tested shook his head, his gaze still fixed on the ground. “I’d really rather not talk about it,” he murmured, his voice subdued. “Especially not in public. I just… I don’t think it’ll work.” He hesitated before glancing back at her, a small, sad smile tugging at the corner of his mouth. “I still want you to keep the jewelry, though. You really do look like a princess.”

Rarity frowned, her concern deepening, but after a moment, she straightened and shook her head firmly. Rising onto her hind legs, she crossed her forehooves, fixing him with an arch look. “No, I won’t,” she declared with quiet determination. “I won’t pry into the reasons for your discomfort if you don’t wish to share them, Metal Tested. But if you’re going to back out of our arrangement, then you’ll need every piece of jewelry you can sell.”

Her horn glowed as the headdress floated from her mane, suspended in the soft light of her magic. She hesitated when she saw the stricken look on Metal’s face, and her own expression softened with regret, her tone softening. “These gifts are exquisite, Metal, truly, and all the more so because you made them yourself.” As she spoke, she unfastened the necklace, bracelets and anklets one by one, floating them toward Metal. “But accepting them would take food from your mouth, and I simply can’t allow that.”

Metal’s eyes darted between Rarity and the floating jewelry, his inner conflict plainly visible. He swallowed hard, his shoulders slumping as he sighed. “I…” He trailed off, visibly struggling to find the words. After a long pause, he took a deep breath and glanced away. “If I… if I do this,” he said hesitantly, his voice almost a whisper, “could you promise… to always be there when Sweetie Belle—or any foals—are around? I just… I don’t want to be alone with them.”

Rarity’s face broke out in a lovely smile.“Oh, Metal Tested, of course!” she said, her voice light but earnest. She rested her hooves gently on his shoulders, resisting the urge to pull him into a hug. “If that’s what you need to feel comfortable, we’ll make it work, I promise. You’ll never have to be alone with foals in the shop.”

Metal Tested nodded nervously, a small smile flickering across his lips. “Thank you,” he said, then glanced at the jewelry still floating in the air. “So…does that mean you’ll keep my gifts?”

Rarity chuckled, letting the jewelry float back to their proper places about her body. “If we are going to be working together after all, I suppose it wouldn't be ladylike of me to refuse,” she smiled. “Thank you very much.”

A polite cough from behind Rarity interrupted the two unicorns, drawing their attention to the maître d’, who stood with a slip of paper grasped elegantly in his fetlock. “Madame, you appear to have forgotten your saddlebags,” he said in a polished, faintly snooty tone that spoke of one accustomed to high-class standards and perpetually, quietly disappointed by the world’s failure to meet them. “There is also the matter of the check.”

Both Rarity and Metal Tested blushed, chuckling nervously as they realized their oversight. In their rush, they had nearly walked out without paying. “Yes, of course, my good stallion,” Rarity said smoothly, recovering with practiced grace. “Please forgive me; I’ll attend to it momentarily.” She turned to Metal Tested, her smile warm and encouraging. “Metal, I’ll expect to see you at the Carousel Boutique tomorrow morning, bright and early—shall we say eight o’clock? We have much to accomplish.”

Metal Tested nodded, his sigh almost imperceptible. “I’ll see you then, Rarity,” he said, his voice edged with a quiet tension. “And… thanks. For everything.”

“You’re very welcome,” Rarity replied, her smile brightening. “Now, if you’ll excuse me…” With a polite nod, she turned to follow the maître d’ back into the restaurant.

Metal Tested watched her retreating form, a flicker of longing shadowing his expression before he sighed, his gaze dropping to the cobblestones. After a moment, he turned and began walking back toward the Trotting Trough Inn, where his rented room awaited him.


Author's Note

As a chainmail artist in real life, all of the weaves I name in this chapter are real, just with ponyfied names. If you're into chainmail armor or jewelry, see if you can guess each one!

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