The Longest Road
Chapter 21: Echoes of doubt Part 6 - You shouldn't have done it
Previous ChapterNext ChapterFelix entered his apartment—a small, austere space that was more functional than cozy. The walls were a faded gray, and only a few family photos and potted plants added any semblance of life to the place. Still in his carpenter’s uniform, he carried a bag of groceries from the local store in one hand and another bag filled with books on various professions—mechanics, industrial design, engineering—in the other. He dropped them onto the table with a dull thud, the emotional weight of the books seemingly heavier than their physical presence.
With a tired sigh, he took off his uniform, folded it meticulously, and draped it over a nearby chair. He then turned toward the living room wall—his "idea board." It was covered in handwritten notes, chaotic diagrams, crude sketches, and a web of threads connecting seemingly unrelated concepts. It was a reflection of his mind: a labyrinth of possibilities, unfulfilled desires, and unresolved doubts.
He collapsed onto the old sofa, the only truly comfortable piece of furniture in the apartment, and glanced at the clock. It was late—nearly midnight. He was about to turn on the TV, more out of habit than genuine interest, when his phone buzzed on the table, breaking the silence.
He looked at the screen. It was his father. Felix hesitated for a moment before answering.
“Hello?” he said, his voice heavy with exhaustion.
“Felix,” his father began, using that tone he always employed when trying to sound encouraging. “I have good news. I talked to some people, pulled a few strings… and I got you an opportunity. You could work as a public relations assistant for the football team. You know which one—the one Anthony plays for.”
The announcement took Felix by surprise. He paused for a few seconds, processing what he had just heard.
“I’d be working alongside Anthony?” he asked, unsure if the idea excited or unsettled him.
“Exactly. It’s a great opportunity, son. You’d be close to him, learning about the environment. Something stable, you know?”
The initial excitement quickly gave way to uncertainty. He recalled the last conversation he’d had with Anthony weeks earlier, when his brother had confessed his doubts and frustrations about his career. A knot formed in Felix’s stomach, as though he were stepping into territory that was too personal.
“I don’t know, Dad. I need to think about it.”
“Think about it?” his father replied, with a touch of impatience. “Don’t overthink this. It’s a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity. You should take it, Felix. It’s what’s best for you.”
The conversation ended quickly after that. Felix hung up, set the phone aside, and leaned back on the sofa, staring at the ceiling as if searching for answers among the water stains. The idea board on the wall seemed to glare at him, silently judging his indecision.
Two weeks passed, and each day the uncertainty gnawed at him a little more. Should he accept the offer and work with his brother? Or should he keep searching for his own path, far from Anthony’s shadow? The indecision, his old companion, left him paralyzed. Night after night, he sat in front of his board, adding new ideas or erasing old ones, hoping the act might help him make up his mind.
But one evening, something shifted. He looked at the board one last time and felt drained—not just physically, but emotionally. The doubts that had haunted him for years seemed to scream at him from every note and sketch. He thought about the good times he’d shared with Anthony: playing in the backyard, sharing jokes, days when nothing felt more important than being together. That nostalgia, that warmth, finally gave him an answer.
He picked up his phone with determination, dialed the number, and waited.
“I’ll do it,” he said simply, his tone more relieved than enthusiastic. Then he hung up, stood up, and, in a symbolic gesture, tore several notes off the board. The weight of indecision was gone, at least for now.
That same afternoon, Felix decided to visit Anthony to share the news. He was radiant, more energized than he had felt in years. For once, he had a clear purpose—something he was genuinely excited about. He walked to his brother’s house, a smile on his face, imagining Anthony’s reaction when he learned they’d be working together.
When he arrived, he knocked several times but got no response. Frowning, he peered through the window and saw Anthony’s silhouette on the bed in his room. He had to be inside. Felix tried the doorknob, and to his surprise, it was unlocked. He entered cautiously, calling out.
“Anthony? It’s me, Felix. I’ve got great news!” he said enthusiastically as he made his way through the house.
He reached his brother’s room. Anthony was lying on the bed, seemingly asleep. Felix sat down beside him, still talking.
“You’re going to be so proud of me. I accepted the offer. We’ll be working together, just like the old days. Can you imagine? It’s going to be amazing.”
But Anthony didn’t respond. Felix noticed something strange about the stillness of his body. His breathing—there was none. Felix’s smile began to fade.
“Anthony?” he asked, his voice trembling as he gently shook his brother’s shoulder.
The silence in the room grew deafening.
“Anthony?” he repeated, louder this time, but the echo of his voice was the only answer he received.
Felix froze, his hand still on his brother’s shoulder, unable to accept what his mind already knew. The moment he had dreamed of—working alongside Anthony—had shattered in an instant. The emotions that had filled him with hope that morning transformed into a devastating void.
And there, in that small room, Felix’s world broke apart.
"This is ridiculous," I muttered, letting out a defeated sigh as I tried to fashion a bandage out of long grass to wrap around a rabbit's paw.
"For once, we agree," Flashing replied dryly, as he wrapped another rabbit with a level of competence that seemed oddly practiced but utterly unenthusiastic.
"You're so kind to stop and help all my rabbits despite being in such a hurry," remarked a translucent green pony with a voice that hovered between fascinating and irritating.
I huffed in frustration. Helping injured rabbits wasn’t exactly on my list of thrilling adventures.
Truth be told, we didn’t have much of a choice. The map was clear: a rabbit icon marked our next stop. And since this was obviously part of the trial, how could I not be suspicious of something so blatantly... ridiculous? A ghostly pony surrounded by injured rabbits. Sure, because that happens every day.
I sighed, resigning myself to the task.
When we first encountered her, I’ll admit I was a little excited. A ghost! I thought. How thrilling! I’d always wanted to believe in ghosts. But that excitement deflated quickly when she mentioned needing help bandaging her rabbits. Not a cryptic message, no grand revelation. Just rabbits. Bandages.
“Is this serious?” I muttered under my breath as I stared at the rabbit with a resigned expression. Even it seemed tired of the situation.
Compared to our previous trials—a creepy cave with an echoing voice and a rock golem that nearly crushed us—this was… tame. Disappointing, even.
"We could just ignore them and move on," I thought aloud. But I knew that wasn’t an option. These trials were designed to test our decisions and values. Skipping it would mean automatic failure, so here we were, stuck in this absurd task. Then again, maybe I was missing the point of the trial by being too aware of its constructed nature.
By the time I reached my eighth rabbit, I noticed something peculiar: the animals here were… different. This rabbit in particular stared at me intently, as though it were assessing me. Its eyes narrowed, and for a moment, I felt judged.
I had to admit, it was oddly fascinating to see such expressive emotions in animals.
"What’s up, little guy?" I asked, leaning in slightly.
Suddenly, the rabbit leapt backward, its expression one of pure disdain.
"Well, that was rude," I muttered as the rabbit bolted toward the group.
Weren’t they supposed to be injured or something? Maybe these rabbits were part of the trial... No, stop thinking like that. I’m ruining the fun of this game.
Then I saw it. The rabbit, now seemingly healed, stood before the others, waving its tiny paws like a charismatic leader addressing a revolutionary assembly. Was it just my imagination, or was it pointing at me?
"This... is weird," I admitted, watching as the group of rabbits collectively furrowed their brows.
One even clapped its paws together in a gesture that was unmistakable.
"Oh no," I whispered.
"I think we should stop here and move on," I suggested, my eyes fixed on the growing turmoil among the rabbits.
“Leave it unfinished? This is a trial; we have to see it through,” Flashing argued, as stubborn as ever.
A flicker of light in the corner of my vision made me turn my head. One of the rabbits had procured a tiny torch. Part of me wanted to shout, "How adorable!" while the other could only wonder, "Where in Equestria did it get that?"
"Flashing, I don’t know how to explain it, but my instincts are telling me we should run. Now."
The lead rabbit ran its paw across its neck in a universally understood gesture.
"RUN!" I screamed, stepping back as the army of rabbits, now brandishing the torch with alarming intent, began advancing toward us.
And so, as an unexpected army of angry rabbits chased us, I learned a valuable lesson: never underestimate a rabbit with a torch.
"Did I say the previous situation was ridiculous? Because this is infinitely more ridiculous!" I exclaimed, pressing my face against the wooden bars of the cage in this shallow cave.
"I’m going to be the first to ask—what in Tartarus is going on here?" Flashing yelled, casting an incredulous look around.
We all shrugged in a universal gesture of confusion.
I peered through the bars again. Outside, the lead rabbit had climbed onto a rock, gesticulating wildly to a cheering crowd of rabbits. It looked like it was giving a speech to mark a historic uprising. For Celestia’s sake, it seemed like it was declaring our sentence or something.
This is absurd. How is it possible that a bunch of rodents managed to imprison us? Well, sure, we could’ve handled a few, but when a wave of enraged rabbits swarms you, there’s not much you can do.
As I pondered, an idea crept into my mind: could this be part of the trial? Maybe they wanted us to try to escape, as a test of ingenuity or something similar. If that was the case, they were getting way too creative.
I turned my head to observe my cellmates. Maud sat calmly in a corner, as if nothing unusual had happened. Flashing was pounding the wall with his hoof, clearly irritated. Pinkamena, on the other hand, was looking around wide-eyed, still processing the fact that a group of rabbits had kidnapped us. Totally reasonable.
But the worst of it—the part that really made my blood boil—was that those rodents had taken our saddlebags. They were piled in the center of the camp, right under a large tree, like trophies.
And there, sitting atop the saddlebags, was my star.
I gritted my teeth and pressed my face against the bars, glaring at my star. It was more than just an object; it was a symbol, a promise... Well, not really, but let’s say it was.
“I’ll get it back, no matter what,” I muttered with determination, narrowing my eyes.
Alright, Echo, think. We don’t have our gear, we’re caged, and no magical rescue is coming. Time to improvise.
I turned toward the center of the cage and nodded to get the others’ attention. One by one, they gathered around me.
“Listen,” I began, trying to sound more confident than I felt. “We’re trapped and out of resources, but that doesn’t mean we can’t get out of here. We just need a plan.”
“A plan to deal with an army of rabbits?” Flashing asked, raising an eyebrow. “Really?”
“Exactly. Because if there’s one thing I’ve learned in this absurd trial, it’s that rabbits can be surprisingly terrifying,” I replied, casting a sidelong glance at the rabbit leader, who was now waving a small stick like a scepter.
“What do you suggest?” Maud asked, her tone as neutral as ever.
“Well, first we need to assess our options,” I said, stroking my chin dramatically. “We could try to break out by force, but considering Flashing’s been pounding the wall for a while and hasn’t made any progress, that doesn’t seem viable.”
“Thanks for pointing out the obvious,” Flashing muttered, frustrated.
“We could distract them,” I continued, ignoring his comment. “Though I’m not sure how effective that would be against an organized army of rabbits.”
“Maybe they just want carrots,” Pinkamena suggested innocently.
I paused, surprised.
“What?” I asked.
“Carrots. They’re rabbits. Maybe they’re upset because we didn’t give them carrots,” she explained, shrugging.
For a moment, I considered her idea. It was simple. Maybe too simple. But in this crazy world, who knows?
“You’re saying we should… negotiate with them?” I asked, half incredulous, half amused.
“Why not?” Pinkamena replied. “After all, if the rabbits are smart enough to kidnap us, maybe they’re smart enough to strike a deal.”
“Negotiate with rabbits,” I repeated, letting the words hang in the air. Then, a wry smile crept onto my face. “You know, Pinkie, that’s... the most ridiculous idea I’ve heard today. And considering the circumstances, that says a lot. Let’s do it!”
“Are you serious?” Flashing asked, staring at me like I’d lost my mind.
“As serious as a pony can be when trapped by revolutionary rabbits,” I replied, stepping toward the bars.
Carefully, I raised a hoof and waved it to get the rabbit leader’s attention. His gaze locked with mine, and for a moment, the air felt charged with tension.
“Hey, you! The one on the rock. We want to negotiate,” I said, trying to sound confident.
The rabbit tilted his head, clearly intrigued. He made an elegant leap from the rock and slowly approached, flanked by two smaller rabbits who seemed to be his bodyguards.
“This is going to be interesting,” I muttered to my companions as the leader rabbit stopped in front of the bars, scrutinizing us with a defiant expression.
I straightened as much as I could, imagining I was wearing a tie I didn’t have, and with a dramatic gesture as if adjusting it, I began the negotiation.
“As I was saying, we want to negotiate. We can get you carrots in the future if you let us out of here and return our belongings. What do you think?”
The leader rabbit placed a paw on his chin, clearly considering the offer. For a moment, I thought we were making progress. I allowed myself a small smile, glanced at my companions, raised an eyebrow, and murmured confidently:
“I think it’s working. Pinkamena had a great idea.”
But then, the rabbit let out a loud screech and pointed a paw at me. His expression shifted dramatically from contemplative to… was that barely contained rage?
“It’s not working! Change of plan! Distraction, now!” I shouted in panic, but before I could take a step, an avalanche of rabbits descended on me.
“Dang it!” I thought as they tied me up with ropes and dragged me out of the cage.
“Why just me?” I lamented incredulously as they tied me to a tree in the center of the camp, right in front of all our confiscated saddlebags.
“Echo! Don’t worry! Your older sisters will save you!” Pinkamena called dramatically from behind the bars.
"Yeah, sure..." I muttered as I watched Maud and Pinkie start kicking the bars with their hind hooves. The contrast between Maud’s calm efficiency and Pinkie’s overflowing energy was almost comical.
I couldn’t help but feel oddly conflicted. Technically, they were my older sisters in this life, but deep down, I knew I had lived longer than either of them. "Better not think too much about this," I told myself, while the leader rabbit approached me, his face a portrait of pure fury.
With exaggerated and theatrical movements, the rabbit began giving me little taps on the hoof.
"Ouch," I said, more out of protocol than actual pain. "Could you explain what’s happening here? Because, frankly, this is bordering on the surreal."
The rabbit let out a few sharp squeaks before grabbing the stick from earlier and starting to draw on the ground.
First, he drew a figure that looked like an earth pony. I tilted my head, still not understanding.
"Is that me?" I asked, pointing at the drawing. The rabbit nodded with a deep frown.
Then, he drew a rabbit, clearly representing himself. Wow, I had to admit, he had artistic talent for a rodent.
Finally, he added a third drawing: the pony (me) kicking the rabbit (him).
"What? That’s ridiculous! Fake news. A blatant defamation!" I exclaimed dramatically, as if I were in a courtroom.
The rabbit crossed his front paws and stomped the ground repeatedly with a stern look.
I sighed. "Okay, let me think..." I murmured, while in the background, I could still hear Pinkie and Maud kicking the bars.
"Clearly, there’s been a misunderstanding here. You’ve got the wrong pony. I’ve never kicked a rabbit in my life... Well, in this life or the last." I stopped for a moment, observing the rabbit, who now seemed impatient.
Suddenly, a memory hit me like a falling rock.
"Wait... is it you? The camp rabbit? The one I tried to move away from Pinkie when it was distracting her from getting another Cutie Mark?"
The rabbit nodded triumphantly, as I sank into my realization.
"Great," I thought. How could such an insignificant action, a simple attempt to move a rabbit, lead to all this?
"Fine, I admit it," I finally said. "It was me. But really? This? Kidnapping four foals as revenge for a kick? It’s a bit... disproportionate, don’t you think?"
The rabbit shook his head and sighed—or at least, it seemed like a sigh.
"Alright, alright. If it’s not about revenge, what do you want then?" I asked, exhausted.
The rabbit looked at me with an expression that mixed disdain and curiosity. I knew I needed to handle this smartly. Resorting to force wasn’t an option, especially with my sisters watching.
I took a deep breath and lowered my head. "Look, I’m sorry. I truly am. It wasn’t something I did out of malice; it just... happened."
The rabbit seemed taken aback by my tone.
"See that pink pony over there trying to break the bars?" I gestured with my head toward Pinkie, who was still enthusiastically smashing the wood. "She’s my sister. And yeah, I know this might sound silly, but she’s special. She has a bright future ahead of her, one you probably can’t even imagine. And that day at camp, I was scared. Scared something might change for the worse."
The rabbit tilted his head, listening intently.
"What I was trying to do was protect her. It was an impulsive decision; I didn’t think it through, and you ended up in the middle. I’m really, truly sorry."
The rabbit stared at me for a long moment. The fury on his face seemed to soften.
"So, what do you say? Can we put this behind us and resolve it like civilized creatures? I promise never to kick a rabbit again, intentionally or accidentally."
The rabbit let out a small squeak and looked at his companions. After a brief pause, he made a gesture with his paw, and several rabbits approached to untie me.
"Is that a yes?" I asked cautiously.
The rabbit nodded, and for the first time, I thought I saw a small smile on his face.
Crack.
A loud crunching sound echoed. Apparently, Pinkie and Maud had managed to break the bars.
Without missing a beat, both jumped on me, rubbing their cheeks against mine as if making sure I was still in one piece.
Pinkie sobbed dramatically. "Don’t worry, little brother. Your big sister is here to protect you."
Maud, though less effusive, stood firmly next to Pinkie. Her expressionless eyes fixed on the rabbits, her mere presence delivering a clear message: Don’t even think about trying this again.
"Relax! We’ve already resolved everything!" I said hurriedly, raising my hooves to calm the situation. "We promised not to kick any more rabbits, and they’ll let us go peacefully."
For a moment, it seemed like my words had worked. The tension began to dissipate… until a rabbit went flying through the air as if launched from a cannon.
We all turned toward the source of the chaos. There was Flashing, grinning with pure enthusiasm, kicking and headbutting any rabbit that dared approach.
"Spoke too soon," I muttered, closing my eyes in resignation.
The leader rabbit, regaining his composure, made a sharp gesture with his paw, and his minions obeyed instantly. A wave of furious rabbits charged at us.
“Run!” I yelled, already in motion before finishing the sentence.
The chase began immediately, the rabbits hot on our heels.
“It was Flashing! Chase him, not us!” I shouted, but my plea fell on deaf ears. The rabbits didn’t seem interested in distinguishing between guilty and innocent.
A small rabbit appeared out of nowhere and launched itself at my ear, biting with surprising ferocity.
“Ouch! Get off!” I cried, shaking my head until the tiny attacker went flying into a nearby bush.
These rabbits were anything but angels.
We kept running, weaving between trees and jumping over roots. We were about to leave the horde behind when a terrifying thought crossed my mind: our stuff was still back at the camp.
I skidded to a stop.
“Echo, keep running!” Flashing ordered, looking back at me in desperation.
“I can’t! My stuff is there! My star!” I shouted, turning around and running back in the opposite direction.
“Don’t be an idiot! It’s too dangerous!”
But his words were lost to the wind. I couldn’t leave it behind. It was more than just an object.
Back at the camp, the rabbits were reorganizing after their failed pursuit. I hid behind a bush, carefully observing the scene.
My saddlebags and my star were still there, right where they had left them, under a tree at the center of the camp. But between me and them stood a dozen rabbits.
“Alright, Echo. Think,” I murmured to myself. “This is just an obstacle course. You just have to dodge the rabbits, get to the tree, grab your stuff, and get out before they catch you. Easy, right?”
I took a deep breath and crept out of my hiding spot, moving quickly and staying low to avoid being seen.
The first group of rabbits didn’t notice as I sneaked past them. In the second stretch, I had to leap over a log, landing right behind a distracted rabbit.
Finally, I was just a few meters from the tree. I sprinted toward the saddlebags, dodging a rabbit that tried to block me with a clumsy jump.
“Got it!” I exclaimed, reaching my belongings. I slipped the collar with the star back around my neck and grabbed one of the saddlebags before the rabbits noticed me.
The leader rabbit let out an enraged squeal, and the entire horde charged toward me.
“No, no, no, no, no!” I yelled, frantically digging through the saddlebag for something useful. My hooves fumbled with a jar of jam, followed by a package of cookies.
Without thinking, I hurled the provisions into the air, shouting, “Take this as a peace offering!”
The rabbits froze. It was as if gravity itself had shifted their attention. They swarmed the food with such frenzy that they completely forgot their anger toward me.
These rabbits, they look like angels but are really little devils. I hope I don’t run into another one in the future.
Taking advantage of the distraction, I ran back toward my companions, panting and grinning triumphantly.
“What were you thinking? I told you to keep running! You risked everything by going back and exposing yourself again!” Flashing paced back and forth, clearly indignant, looking like he was about to explode.
“Relax,” I replied, raising a hoof and pointing it at him, trying to sound as calm as possible. “I went back mainly for my star.”
Flashing looked at me as if I had just said the most absurd thing in the world.
“Your stupid collar again?” he barked, exasperated. “You risked all these trials for that! I’m pretty sure we all have to reach the finish line. What will they think of me if I show up with an incomplete team?”
“Whoa, whoa, calm down,” I said in a relaxed tone, though his outburst was beginning to irritate me. “It’s not that big of a deal. First, I already told you my collar is special. Second, everything was under control until you decided to bulldoze through the rabbits like you were the star of an action book. So technically, this is your fault.”
“My fault? MY FAULT!?” he shouted, stepping so close I could almost feel his breath. “The leader rabbit clearly had something against you, so this is all on you.”
“Well… yes, but I would’ve resolved it—” I tried to explain, but Flashing interrupted me again, even louder.
“*Exactly! It was your fault. Because of you, the kindness test got interrupted. Now I’m not even sure if it’ll count or not!” He spun around, kicking a nearby rock in frustration.
“Kindness test? What are you talking about?” I asked, frowning.
Flashing froze. His ears twitched slightly backward.
“Did you just say ‘kindness test’?” I pressed, stepping closer to him. “What exactly are you talking about?”
For a moment, he hesitated. Then, suddenly, he let out a bitter laugh.
“Ha, ha, ha! You’re unbelievably naive!” he said with disdain. “What does it matter now? You ruined everything, so why not just spill it all?”
I stared at him, a mix of disbelief and curiosity swirling inside me. What in the world was he talking about?
“You really haven’t figured it out yet?” Flashing continued, pacing back and forth like an unhinged teacher lecturing a clueless class. “The cave, the golem… all these trials. The first was loyalty. The second, generosity. And this last one was kindness. Everything was going perfectly. I was advancing as one of the chosen ones. But then you came along and RUINED IT!”
“What are you talking about?” was all I could manage to say.
Flashing marched up to me, jabbing me with his hoof at every word.
“You ruined everything from the start! You made me look ridiculous in the race.” Jab. “You took forever to get through the cave!” Jab. “You nearly stalled us with the golem!” Jab. “And because of you, the trial with those stupid rabbits was interrupted.” Final jab.
I stumbled to the ground.
Great. At first, he was just a bit weird and egotistical—a little pretentious, sure, For me, it's okay to say some pretentious things from time to time. But now? Now, this guy was acting like a complete jerk.
Ordinarily, I would’ve shoved him right back. But… he’s just a colt, what, eight years old? Ten at most? Kids can be jerks sometimes. And technically, I’m an adult, which means punching a kid is probably not a great look—morally speaking.
Before I could react, Pinkamena and Maud stepped in between Flashing and me, standing firm like an unyielding wall of stone. Their expressions, as different as day and night, carried a single, unmistakable message: Don’t even think about touching him again.
Flashing hesitated for a moment, startled, but his angry expression quickly returned.
“I’ve had enough of you,” he muttered with disdain before raising his voice. “Of all the participants, I had to be paired with you lot. Weak, little earth ponies! It could’ve been pegasi or unicorns, but no! I got stuck with you. And the worst of all is Echo—he’s the most useless of the bunch.”
Something stirred in Pinkie.
“Take it back,” she said, lowering her head slightly, but her voice was tight with anger.
“What?” Flashing replied, confused.
“Take it back!” she repeated, louder this time.
“It’s fine, Pinkamena. It doesn’t bother me,” I said, trying to calm her down.
“No way,” Flashing said with a bitter laugh. “It’s the truth. He’s a useless waste of space who ruins everything.”
“TAKE IT BACK!”
“SHUT UP!” Flashing screamed, shoving Pinkie to the ground with enough force to make her skid slightly.
For a moment, the world fell completely silent.
Maud rushed to help Pinkie up, while I scrambled to my hooves.
“What did you just do...?” My voice came out low and controlled, but the fire inside me was blazing.
It was one thing to shove me, to yell, to blame me for everything. But laying a hoof on Pinkie—one of my sisters—that crossed every possible line.
I lifted my gaze to Flashing, my eyes sharp as daggers. If looks could kill, Flashing would’ve been six feet under already.
My thoughts raced uncontrollably. Morality, ethics, self-restraint—they all began to fade. After all, I was a colt too, wasn’t I? And if one colt hit another, that was… normal.
A malicious smile spread across my face as I stepped closer.
“Alright, Flashing,” I said, my tone anything but conciliatory. “Let’s see if you can handle someone as ‘useless’ as me.”
I wasn’t planning on holding back this time.
Suddenly, Echo dashed forward with all his might, leaping into the air for a final push, and swung his hoof straight at Flashing’s face.
But nothing happened.
Echo’s hoof stopped mere inches from its target, as if it had hit an invisible barrier. Flashing didn’t even flinch—not a blink, not a twitch.
“What?!” Echo exclaimed, eyes wide as he tried to process what had just happened.
Flashing barely moved, casually pushing Echo’s hoof aside like it was nothing more than a feather.
And then he smiled. It wasn’t the smug grin he’d worn earlier; this one was different. It was terrifying, malicious—a smile that seemed to make the air around him heavier.
Echo frantically looked around, searching for any clue, any hint of how his opponent had stopped him. Then, he saw it: small flashes of light emanating from Flashing’s messy mane.
“You’re…” Echo murmured, his voice filled with disbelief.
For the first time, Flashing brushed his mane aside, revealing a white horn protruding from his forehead.
“A unicorn… yes,” Flashing said, his voice calm but chilling.
“I’m surprised, Echo. I didn’t think you’d have the guts to try something so pathetic.”
Echo tried to pull his hoof back, but it wouldn’t budge. A bright green aura held it firmly in place.
“You know,” Flashing continued with a sigh of disdain, “it’s almost funny how incompetent earth ponies are. They can’t fly, they can’t use magic—they have nothing special. They’re just...” He paused, his face twisting into a look of pure contempt. “Earthbound.”
“Dirty, disgusting creatures that have to use their hooves to hold a simple object. Or worse, their mouths. How revolting.”
Echo struggled against the magic holding him, but the pressure only grew stronger. Now the green aura enveloped his entire body, immobilizing him from head to hoof.
“Pegasi are incredible fliers,” Flashing continued, stepping closer to Echo with deliberate menace, “capable of bending the weather to their will. And unicorns... we’re the great sorcerers, the ones who move the sun and the moon. But you…”
He leaned in until his face was mere inches from Echo’s, his gaze dripping with contempt.
“You’re only good for working the land. That’s your natural place. Rock farmers… because that’s all you can aspire to. You simply don’t have what it takes.”
“Enough, Flashing!” Maud’s voice was calm yet unyielding, each word carrying the weight of stone.
Flashing ignored her completely. His eyes were now locked on Echo’s collar, particularly the star pendant that hung from it.
“You don’t deserve precious things,” Flashing said cruelly. “You’re nothing. Just stepping stones for others to climb higher. You’re just pawns.”
With a flash of his horn, he lifted Echo off the ground, spinning him in the air like a rag doll before stopping him abruptly.
“So much trouble over such a stupid, worthless trinket,” Flashing sneered, raising a hoof toward the star.
“Don’t you dare!” Echo shouted, his voice full of rage and desperation.
“I will,” Flashing replied coldly, his smile as sharp as a knife.
Slowly, Flashing grabbed the collar with his hoof and yanked the star free with a decisive pull.
Grave mistake.
At that moment, his horn began to glow with an intense, erratic light, catching even Flashing off guard. Sparks of uncontrolled magic erupted from his horn like wild fireworks.
“What...?” Flashing murmured, his tone wavering between disbelief and fear.
Echo screamed in pain as Flashing’s magic surged, tightening around his body as if trying to crush him.
“ARGGGHHHH!”
With great effort, Echo cracked open an eye and saw Flashing’s expression shift. His smug smile vanished, replaced by confusion and growing terror.
Flashing’s horn sputtered violently, the glow escalating to a blinding intensity. That same brightness was directed towards the star which began to shine even more intensely.
“Stop it!” Maud yelled, but it was too late.
BOOOOM

The magical explosion rocked the entire area. A wild wave of energy rippled outward, throwing everyone against the trees. The forest erupted in blinding flashes, the air heavy with static electricity.
As the dust began to settle, Echo lay on the ground, gasping for breath. His body was numb, his thoughts clouded. A few feet away, his star pendant flickered weakly.
Flashing, meanwhile, was slumped against a tree. His horn was cracked, faint green light seeping from the fractures like an exposed nerve.
“What... was that?” Echo rasped, barely able to speak.
Maud and Pinkie quickly rushed to him, helping him sit up. Pinkie, tears streaming down her face, pulled Echo into a tight hug.
Echo’s gaze locked onto Flashing.
“What did you do?” he asked, his voice trembling with a mix of anger and disbelief.
Author's Note
In the Past:
Felix once had a significant opportunity to work alongside his brother, Anthony. However, his lingering doubts and overthinking caused him to delay making a decision. When Felix finally decided to accept, he rushed to share the good news with Anthony, only to be met with a devastating truth: Anthony was no longer with them.
In the Present:
Echo and his group are in the midst of the third trial, which involves bandaging forest rabbits as part of a whimsical but challenging task. However, the trial takes an unexpected turn when a particularly defiant rabbit convinces the others to kidnap the group.
Bound and imprisoned, Echo discovers that the ringleader is the same rabbit he had kicked back at the camp. Guilt-ridden, he reflects on how small actions can snowball into significant consequences. Sincerely apologizing to the rabbits, Echo manages to resolve the situation and earns their forgiveness—until Flashing Blow to push his way through the rabbits, further enraging them. The group narrowly escapes, but Echo realizes his star-shaped gem is missing. Ignoring Flashing’s warnings, Echo risks everything to retrieve it.
Their actions escalate the situation, prompting Flashing Blow to push his way through the rabbits, further enraging them. The group narrowly escapes, but Echo realizes his star-shaped gem is missing. Ignoring Flashing’s warnings, Echo risks everything to retrieve it.
Reunited with the gem, Echo becomes the target of Flashing’s frustration. The unicorn finally drops his facade, revealing his true arrogant and manipulative nature. As tensions rise, Pinkie defends her little brother, only for Flashing to shove her to the ground.
The sight of his sister hurt ignites a fierce anger in Echo. But before he can act, Flashing reveals another secret: he is, in fact, a unicorn.
Using his magic, Flashing snatches the star from Echo’s neck, causing it to release a chaotic surge of untamed, wild magic. The explosion leaves the group stunned and marks the beginning of greater turmoil.
Fun Facts:
- Finding the perfect theme for Flashing Blow as a villain was challenging, I hope the track I chose is suitable.
- The rabbit who bites Echo’s ear is, in fact, a young Angel Bunny, already living up to his infamous reputation as a troublemaker.
- This chapter sets the foundation for Echo’s special bond with Maud and Pinkie, showing their fiercely protective sides.
- While not originally intended to address the tribal disparities, the story highlights Echo’s struggles as an Earth pony and the challenges he faces. This serves to emphasize his uphill journey toward overcoming biological limitations.
- The title of this chapter refers to two characters, Echo with what she did with the rabbit and somehow linked everything that happened and Flashing who didn't have to do what he did.
Notes:
- Flashing Blow was designed as the antithesis of Echo. Where Echo is indecisive, Flashing is determined and arrogant, exploiting his privileges as a unicorn. His superiority complex highlights the contrast between pony tribes and underscores Echo’s long and arduous path to the top.
- Flashing Blow, Initially envisioned as a stereotypical school bully, Flashing evolved into a more complex antagonist, I had doubts that a child could have that personality but I remembered someone: Cozy Glow.
- The next chapter will see Celestia addressing the events in Rockville, as well as revealing the reasons behind the actions of the unicorns and pegasi, and the true purpose of the tests, as well as revealing Flashing's hidden motives.
Thanks for reading!
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