The Longest Road

by SpaceComet

Chapter 22: Echoes of doubt Part 7 - Decided

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"What did you do?" I asked, staring at Flashing in disbelief as I tried to shake off the dizziness still clouding my head after everything that had just happened.

"I... I don’t know," he stammered, his voice trembling. His eyes darted upward, focusing on his own horn. Gently, he touched it with a hoof, causing a final spark to flicker before the cracks along its surface began to mend slowly.

I shook my head, trying to regain clarity.

When my vision steadied, my gaze fell on something glinting a few meters away: the star. It was lying on the ground, seemingly unharmed. But I wasn’t the only one who had noticed. My eyes met Flashing’s, and we both stared at the star at the same time.

The air grew thick with tension. The star, the most important thing to me, now lay between us like a prize in some twisted game.

Without thinking, I bolted toward it, running as fast as my legs would carry me. But Flashing reacted too.

I pushed myself harder, straining every muscle. I was so close—I could feel it. Then Flashing’s horn lit up again.

BOOM!

A surge of green energy slammed into me, flinging me several meters backward. I landed hard near my sisters, who rushed to my side, their worry evident.

From where I lay, I could see Flashing standing over the star with a look of almost childlike wonder on his face.

Oh yeah! Fwoom!” he exclaimed, leaping in excitement. “That was incredible! Woohoo! I’ve never felt anything so… so… powerful. Is this what they call a magic surge? I love it!”

As my sisters helped me to my hooves, Flashing grabbed the one remaining saddlebag that had been blown away in the earlier explosion. With careful precision, he levitated the star and placed it inside the bag with a calculated gesture.

“This changes everything… for the better,” he said with a malicious grin as he adjusted the bag on his back.

We stood in silence. Pinkamena’s expression had hardened to something resembling Limestone’s usual demeanor, while Maud, though quiet, bore a look of distrust and barely restrained intensity.

Flashing began to pace in front of us, his demeanor smug and taunting.

“You know,” he began nonchalantly, though his tone grew colder with every word, “I’ve got a golden opportunity here. And no earth pony is going to ruin it. Don’t worry, I’ll make sure we reach the finish line… even if I have to drag all of you there myself.”

I felt my legs tremble—not just from the hit but from the sheer helplessness of the situation. I couldn’t risk fighting back, not after seeing what he could do. If I failed and he decided to hurt my sisters… I’d never forgive myself.

“Echo…” Pinkamena whispered, her voice a mix of worry and barely contained fury.

“I know,” I replied softly, my voice barely audible. As much as I hated to admit it, we had no other choice. If I resisted and he lashed out, I couldn’t protect them.

“Fine,” I said at last, my voice heavy with resignation. “We’ll do as you say.”

Flashing smirked with smug satisfaction. “That’s more like it. Stick with me, and we’ll make it to the finish line. Just don’t get in my way.”

I bit my tongue to keep from responding, and my sisters exchanged glances before falling in line beside me. Pinkamena looked like she was ready to explode, while Maud remained unnervingly composed, but both stood firm.

As we trudged behind Flashing, each step felt like a blow to my pride.

“This isn’t over,” I thought, gritting my teeth.

For now, though, I was stuck. I had no choice but to keep moving and wait for the right moment to turn things around.


Flashing led the way, the map hovering before him in his magical grasp. The rest of us followed in silence, resigned to his brisk pace. Though we didn’t want to, we had no choice but to comply.

My mind kept replaying what had just happened.

That magical explosion… I couldn’t wrap my head around it. I knew almost nothing about magic—not even the basics. But what I did know was that what had just occurred was wild, chaotic, and completely out of control.

The question lingered: Where had the explosion come from? Was it the star? Or was it Flashing?

If the star had something to do with it, it had never caused a magical outburst before. It had just floated harmlessly, without launching shockwaves or flinging ponies into trees. But if it was Flashing… Didn’t he mention something about a “magic surge”? Maybe his magical capabilities had suddenly increased.

I wished I had read a book about unicorns or magic before all this.

My thoughts were interrupted by Flashing’s authoritative voice.

“Hurry up!” he barked. “The next trial has to be about laughter. Let’s just hope what happened earlier doesn’t mess up my final score.”

There he was again, speaking as if he knew exactly how these trials worked from the beginning. Why did it matter so much to him? What made all this so special in his eyes?

For a moment, I considered the possibility that this was just some standardized test designed to measure physical and mental skills. But Flashing treated it as something far grander, as if he were playing for a prize only he understood.

I shook my head and sighed. There was no point in worrying about his motivations now. What concerned me more was our lack of supplies. We’d lost the water to the golem and sacrificed almost all of our food to the rabbits. If we didn’t finish soon, this could become a very real problem.

We finally arrived at a sign painted in bold red letters:

"To face what lies ahead, a laugh is your best option."

I frowned as I read it. If Flashing was right about this being the trial of laughter, the message seemed to fit perfectly. It probably meant facing fear with humor.

Before us, the landscape changed abruptly. The fantasy forest gave way to a darker, more sinister one. Twisted, dry trees lined the path, while thick gray clouds blanketed the sky, snuffing out any trace of light.

Without hesitation, Flashing strode forward, his steps firm and confident. He didn’t even glance back at us as he exclaimed, “Let’s go.”

As we ventured into the eerie forest, my mind kept spinning. After much deliberation, I decided to try talking to Flashing.

“So…” I began cautiously, choosing my words carefully, “what do you plan to do after all this? I mean, with everything that’s happened.”

Flashing scoffed dismissively, as if my question was beneath him.

“When this is over,” he finally said without looking at me, “when I get what I came for, I won’t have to worry about you anymore. I plan to leave this awful place as soon as possible. You won’t have to see my face, and I won’t have to see yours. Everyone wins.”

His cold tone sent a shiver down my spine, but he continued before I could respond.

“When this is done,” he added with a mocking smile, “you can go back to your ridiculous lemonade stand. That’s as high as an earth pony like you can aspire to.”

A flash of anger coursed through me, but I took a deep breath. I couldn’t let his provocations get to me—not now.

“Ridiculous?” I said calmly, though my voice trembled slightly. “And what about you? Is all this just to feel superior to everyone else?”

Flashing stopped and turned his head slightly, but not enough to look at me directly.

“No,” he replied, his tone dripping with disdain. “This is to prove what I already know. That I’m better than any of you.”

He turned his gaze forward again, and in a low murmur, more to himself than anyone else, I heard him say, “Just like her… They’ll all see.”

Her? Was he talking about me?

Something clicked in my mind.

“Do you think I’m a…?” Before I could finish, a brilliant blue flash zipped in front of us at incredible speed, interrupting my question.

The burst of air tousled my mane, and we all froze in place. Even Flashing seemed caught off guard, his posture stiff as he scanned the surroundings for the source of the disturbance.

“What was that?” I asked quietly, though I didn’t expect an answer.

The forest, already unnerving, now felt even more charged with tension. The blue flash vanished as quickly as it had appeared, but its presence lingered in the air.

“Whatever it is,” Flashing said coldly, adjusting the saddlebag on his back, “we won’t let it slow us down. Let’s keep moving.”

My sisters and I exchanged glances but said nothing.


All of us, except Flashing, trotted cautiously. Every step was taken with extreme care, our eyes constantly scanning the surroundings for any sign of movement.

The wind rustled the hanging branches, some so brittle they seemed ready to snap at any moment. The creaking of the wood was omnipresent, as if the forest itself were breathing, alive in some unsettling way.

Suddenly, a stronger gust of wind enveloped us. Dry leaves spiraled around us before gathering ahead of the group.

Within seconds, the breeze coalesced into a luminous figure glowing with an ethereal blue light. The shimmering lights flickered and fused until they formed something tangible—a spectral being with sharp claws and an aura that sent chills down my spine.

My sisters and I instinctively stepped back.

In stark contrast, Flashing remained rooted in place, smirking arrogantly as he let out a faint laugh.

“Cowards. Have you already forgotten that this is just a trial? It’s just an illusion meant to scare us. Nothing more.”

The specter, as if responding to Flashing’s implied challenge, raised one of its claws, ready to strike.

My mind told me he was probably right, that it was just another illusion, but my instincts refused to take the risk. Without thinking, I lunged at him, pushing him out of the way just as the claw descended. We both tumbled to the ground, barely avoiding the attack.

“What the hell are you doing?” Flashing growled, leaping to his hooves and shoving me roughly to the side.

“I just saved your life, idiot!” I snapped back, pointing to the tree behind us. Deep, perfectly aligned gouges made it clear that the attack was anything but an illusion.

Flashing turned his head, his angry expression quickly morphing into one of surprise.

The specter roared, raising its claws once more. This time, it wasn’t going to stop.

I leapt aside just in time, watching as the specter’s claws slashed through the ground, leaving a deep trench where I had stood only moments ago.

“They’re real!” I shouted, panic dripping from my voice. And in my mind, I added, “They’re so damn real!”

Flashing, finally grasping the danger, turned to us. “Run!” he commanded, taking the lead as the specter roared behind us, pursuing with renewed fury.


We ran as fast as our legs would carry us. My heart pounded wildly, each breath a painful reminder of the threat looming just behind us.

“What the hell is this?! Real specters in a test for foals? They’re insane!” I thought, my growing resentment aimed at whoever orchestrated these trials.

The path we followed twisted and turned between gnarled trees. But just as I thought things couldn’t get worse, Flashing came to a sudden stop, causing all of us to crash into him in a chaotic pile.

“Why did you stop?!” I shouted, recovering from the collision.

He didn’t need to answer. Standing before us was a new nightmare: a headless pony, blue flames dancing where its skull should have been. Its mere presence made the air feel heavy, each step it took resonating like thunder.

“Not that way!” I yelled as we turned and bolted in a new direction, away from the fiery specter.

But there was no reprieve. As we ran, other figures began to emerge from the forest. Pony skeletons, their movements stiff and their hollow eyes glowing with an unnatural light, rose from the ground itself, joining the chase.

“This is a far cry from bandaging adorable little bunnies!” I shouted, trying to inject some humor into a situation that absolutely didn’t deserve it.


In the chaos, Maud stumbled over a root jutting from the ground, falling hard to her side.

“Maud!” I yelled, skidding to a stop. Pinkamena turned too, rushing to help our older sister to her hooves.

The clawed specter was already upon them. My mind blanked with panic.

Without thinking, I sprinted toward them, throwing myself forward to shove them both out of the way just as the specter’s claw came down. We tumbled through a pile of dry leaves but were unharmed.

“Thank you, Echo!” Pinkamena said, her voice trembling but steady. Maud simply nodded, her impassive expression unchanged, though her eyes betrayed a flicker of gratitude.

“Don’t stop! Run!” I shouted, helping them to their hooves as the sounds of the specters and skeletons grew louder around us.

We kept running but soon found ourselves facing another obstacle.

Ahead of us stood a rickety suspension bridge stretching across a deep ravine. Behind us, the headless pony led the horde, the sound of its hooves echoing ever closer.

“We have to cross!” I yelled, but my legs froze. The bridge looked so fragile that one wrong step might be the end of us.

Flashing, however, didn’t hesitate for a moment. He dashed onto the bridge and turned to glare at us.

“Hurry up, you useless lot! What are you waiting for? Move!”

I knew he was right, but my legs remained locked. What if the bridge collapsed? What if I didn’t make it across in time?

“Echo, come on!” Pinkamena’s voice cut through my hesitation.

Taking a deep breath, I stepped onto the bridge. It creaked under my weight but held. One by one, we crossed, the specters gathering at the edge of the ravine, their unearthly cries filling the air.

When we finally reached the other side, the bridge gave way, collapsing into the abyss with a resounding crash.

We stood there, panting, watching as the specters stared at us from the opposite edge, unable to follow.

As usual, Flashing showed neither relief nor gratitude.

“That was pathetic,” he said, adjusting the saddlebag on his back. “Next time, don’t expect me to wait for you.”

I glared at him, my anger boiling beneath the surface, but I said nothing.


Flashing brushed the dust from his coat with sharp, impatient movements, his expression a mix of irritation and urgency.

“Let’s hope this counts as ‘passing’ the trial,” he muttered irritably before turning toward the path. “Let’s keep moving.”

Echo stared at him in disbelief, my mind struggling to process what I had just heard.

“You can't be serious,” he exclaimed, stepping forward. “Those things weren't holograms or illusions! They almost killed us! And you just want to keep going like nothing happened?”

Flashing stopped and slowly turned, his eyes glinting with a cold, calculated intensity.

“There’s no going back,” he said firmly, as if it were the most logical conclusion in the world.

“And it’s clear we can’t keep going forward!” Echo shot back, feeling anger begin to boil over.

He placed a hoof against his forehead, trying to steady himself, before continuing: “Those things were real, Flashing. And if that was the trial of laughter—something that was anything but funny—who knows what’s waiting for us in the next ones? I’m not willing to risk it!”

“Oh, really? And what’s your brilliant plan?” Flashing sneered, his tone dripping with sarcasm. “Should we jump off the cliff and magically fly back to the start?”

“No, of course not!” Echo shot back, his frustration bubbling over. “But we could look for an alternate route, move away from the main path. Maybe we can go around this place and get to town without dealing with these insane trials.”

Flashing scoffed, his contempt plain as day.

“That’s ridiculous. I know what needs to be done, so you’d better shut up and follow my lead.”

Echo clenched his eyes shut, letting out an internal groan that, despite his best efforts, escaped as an irritated chirp.

“Here we go again,” he muttered, opening his eyes to glare at Flashing. “Then enlighten us, oh great leader. If you knew this was the trial of laughter, why didn’t you warn us earlier? And what are the next trials, oh wise Flashing?”

For a moment, Flashing seemed ready to fire off another sharp retort, but instead, he hesitated. His expression shifted slightly, and with a more contemplative tone, he muttered:

“There weren’t supposed to be skeletons or headless ponies… just phantoms. Something’s wrong.”

Flashing’s words hung in the air, and Echo, along with his sisters, stared at him with visible confusion.

“What do you mean, ‘something’s wrong’?” Pinkamena asked, stepping closer.

Flashing rolled his eyes in annoyance. “It doesn’t matter. What matters is getting through the next trials: Honesty and Magic.”

Echo frowned, feeling a mix of frustration and curiosity swirl within him. Finally, he took a deep breath and spoke, his tone more measured.

“Could you stop for a moment and tell us everything? Look, Flashing, we’ve been running and facing these trials with you, but we still don’t know why this is so important to you. For us, it’s just academic and physical tests—nonsense. Maybe they have some educational or psychological purpose, but it’s not that big of a deal. Why is this so monumental to you?”

For the first time since this ordeal began, Flashing went completely still. His normally smug face darkened, and his jaw tightened.

“It’s not nonsense,” he murmured, his voice barely audible.

Flashing’s horn began to glow faintly, and the tension in the air grew palpable.

“You’d better learn to shut up for once,” he growled, his tone escalating to a shout that made Echo and his sisters take a step back.

Echo closed his eyes for a moment, exhaling before looking at him directly.

“Alright,” he said calmly. “Why don’t you explain it, then? If this is so important, tell us why.”

Flashing stared at him for a few seconds before extinguishing his magic. His expression shifted to something more calculated, as if weighing how much he should reveal.

“You want to know why it’s important?” he began, his voice quieter but laced with intensity. “Fine, I’ll tell you. Do you even have a clue how the world works, Echo? Of course not. You’re an earth pony. You don’t understand how things are in the higher circles.”

Echo narrowed his eyes but didn’t interrupt.

“In the upper class—politicians, wealthy merchants, nobles—information is power. Everyone is looking for any edge to climb the social ladder. And a while back, rumors about these trials started spreading.”

His eyes narrowed as he continued.

“These trials aren’t just about evaluating basic skills or setting educational standards. No. These trials bear Princess Celestia’s seal. And if she’s involved, it’s something far more significant than anyone can imagine.”

Flashing took a step closer, his tone turning colder.

“It’s rumored that these trials are being monitored directly by Princess Celestia herself. About a year ago, her personal student, Sunset Shimmer, vanished without a trace. No one knows what happened to her. And now, these trials have appeared all across Equestria. Don’t you see? They’re searching for her next protégé. A chance among thousands. And I won’t let you—or anything else—take it from me.”

A heavy silence fell over the group as Flashing’s words echoed in the air. The tension was palpable, as if the forest itself was holding its breath.

Flashing continued, his tone now quieter but brimming with a chilling confidence.

"Do you want to know why so many pegasi and unicorns appeared here, in this forgotten corner of Equestria?" Flashing began, taking another step forward. "It’s because, like me, they knew something you didn’t. Sure, they could have competed in their hometowns, in places full of resources and balanced competitions. But…" He let out a harsh laugh, "Rockville is different. This place, this insignificant town in Western Equestria, is entirely made up of earth ponies. Farmers. Completely ignorant about magic. A place where standing out is as easy as crushing the residents beneath our hooves. And with that, guaranteeing our victory in Celestia's eyes."

His smile widened, as if recalling something particularly satisfying.

"I’ll admit," he continued, "I didn’t expect other colts to have the same idea. But frankly, they were failures. They came unprepared, not understanding what was at stake. Why? Because they didn’t have the information I had. They were convinced by their parents. I, on the other hoof..."

He paused, raising his head with pride as his horn glimmered faintly.

"Each test in each town is different so, I obtained the information myself. Every detail. Every clue. I knew the answers to the written exam, so I did what was necessary: I memorized them, adapted them, used them. I practiced the obstacle course dozens of times, perfecting every jump and every movement. All while keeping my horn hidden, ensuring no one knew about my advantage. I even made sure my opponents... stumbled at just the right moment. Because no matter how fast you are, you can’t win if you can’t stay on your hooves."

Echo stared at him, his mind racing as he tried to comprehend the magnitude of what he was hearing.

"In the team phase," Flashing continued, "it was almost comical to watch how the other colts—especially the pegasi and unicorns—abandoned their chances to team up with their own kind. Tribalism in its purest form. Of course, that left me with only one option... to join you."

"Why didn’t you join the unicorns, then?" Pinkamena asked, her voice as sharp as a knife.

Echo, keeping his eyes on Flashing, answered before he could. "For the same reason you all came to Rockville. If he stood out as the best among us, he’d have a better chance of catching Celestia’s attention. It was a strategy, wasn’t it?"

Flashing let out a mocking laugh, placing a hoof against his chest. "Oh, so you’re not completely useless, Echo! Congratulations, one point for you."

Echo narrowed his eyes, ignoring the sarcasm. "And during the last team trial—the capture the flag challenge. When you stole the unicorn team’s flag."

Flashing smirked maliciously, his eyes gleaming with cruel satisfaction.

"Of course," he replied. "I faced three overconfident unicorns. And you know why? Because they were absolutely certain they were up against a simple earth pony. They didn’t bother using all their magic. They didn’t take me seriously. It was as easy as slipping between them and taking what was mine."

The group stood in silence, processing his words. But Flashing wasn’t finished. He stepped forward again, his eyes now fixed on Echo.

"Do you understand now? This isn’t just a series of trials to assess skills. This is my ticket. My chance to leave this forgotten hole and ascend to where I belong. I’ve worked harder than anyone. I’ve made decisions others wouldn’t dare to make. And I won’t let a bunch of useless earth ponies ruin what I’ve earned."

"Earned?" Echo’s voice was filled with frustration. "Is that how you see it? Cheating, lying, manipulating... and you think that makes you worthy of something greater?"

"Worthy?" Flashing leaned in closer, his face inches away. "Worthiness doesn’t matter when you’re at the top. Only the results matter. And I’m the only one here who understands that."

Flashing turned his gaze back to the path ahead, grabbing the map with his magic.

"Life is about making decisions," he declared, glancing at the rest of them out of the corner of his eye, his horn glowing faintly. "And I’m the most determined to achieve what I want."

Without another word, he continued forward, forcing the Pie siblings to follow.


moments ago:

In Rockville’s central plaza, a buzz of murmurs filled the air. A crowd of unicorns and pegasi, both adults and colts, gathered under the afternoon sun. Their expressions mixed concern and embarrassment, their forced smiles failing to hide their nervous glances. Nearby, a pile of hats and clothing—evidently discarded—stood like an improvised monument to their failed deception.

At the front, a wooden podium adorned with purple fabrics and golden ribbons stood at the center of the plaza. On it stood Princess Celestia herself, her imposing white figure radiating calm despite the evident tension on her face. With her wings folded and her horn faintly glowing, she massaged her forehead with her eyes closed, as if trying to contain growing frustration.

She finally opened her eyes and gazed at the crowd with a seriousness that silenced the murmurs instantly.

"Let me make this clear," she said in a firm voice that resonated like soft thunder in the air. "Did you move to Rockville, a remote village, solely to have your children participate in the trials taking place here? Did you do so intending to give them an advantage over others by pretending to be earth ponies?"

The silence that followed was heavy, so thick it could have been cut with a knife. The unicorns and pegasi exchanged nervous glances, while the original inhabitants of Rockville, gathered at the edges of the plaza, watched in disbelief.

"According to reports," Celestia continued, "we know exactly who you are and when you arrived. Therefore, I ask that you return to your true homes." She paused, her stern gaze sweeping across the crowd. "Now."

Her final words were not shouted, but they carried an authority that left no room for argument. The crowd of outsiders began dispersing immediately, retreating quickly and leaving behind the pile of hats and clothing.

Celestia exhaled deeply, stepping down from the podium with innate grace. Beside her, Kibitz, her faithful assistant, waited with an expression that was a mixture of concern and professionalism.

"I want security doubled," Celestia ordered as she approached him. "Check every possible leak of information and ensure the data collected from these trials is thoroughly analyzed. We cannot allow the results to be compromised by these irregularities."

"At once, Your Highness," Kibitz responded, diligently jotting down her orders on his scroll.

Celestia massaged her temple again, her expression darkening. "This entire issue has taken more time than expected. I haven't been able to oversee the chosen participants for the next phase, and now, I can't fully trust the results. I need to know what has been happening while I was occupied here."

Kibitz handed a sealed scroll to a royal guard, who took it with his wings and, after a quick salute, galloped off to carry out the order.

"You will have the reports soon, my princess," Kibitz said, adjusting his glasses. "However, there is something of extreme importance you must know."

Celestia raised an eyebrow, alert. "What is it?"

Kibitz took a deep breath before speaking. "Everything was going well, especially with one participant who stood out from the first stage. But during the third trial, the Trial of Kindness, something happened. The trial was interrupted halfway through, leaving the result inconclusive."

Celestia frowned. "What do you mean 'interrupted'? Were they unable to complete it?"

"It wasn’t by choice," Kibitz explained. "They were interrupted by an external force, which caused us to lose sight of them entirely. They’ve been off our radar ever since."

Celestia’s gaze hardened. "That’s troubling news… they could be in danger."

Before she could continue, a distant boom echoed through the air.

A powerful wave of magical energy swept through the plaza, accompanied by a gust of wind that made the ground tremble. Celestia reacted instantly, creating a protective bubble that enveloped the nearby ponies, dissipating most of the force.

As quickly as it came, the energy subsided, leaving an eerie silence behind.

"Guards," Celestia commanded firmly, "make sure everyone is okay. This might have only been a ripple, but I want immediate confirmation."

As the guards began to mobilize, Celestia turned to Kibitz, her face marked with concern.

"That magical energy came from the forest," she said quietly, almost to herself. "Rockville is known for its scarcity of magic. We even had to import magical crystals to conduct these trials. This is not normal."

Suddenly, something clicked in her mind.

"The forest…" she whispered. "The location of the trials."

Without wasting another moment, she spread her wings and rose a few meters into the air. Her voice echoed like a divine command:

"Ensure order is maintained and everyone’s safety is secured. I will return shortly."

Without waiting for a response, Celestia soared toward the forest, her silhouette stark against the sky.

"My little ponies," she murmured to herself as she sped up, the wind whipping through her ethereal mane. "They may be in grave danger."


Author's Note

After the explosion, everything happened so suddenly and blindingly that Echo is left uncertain about its cause—whether it was due to the Star or Flashing's magic.

The group proceeds to the Trial of Laughter, though it is anything but amusing. The earlier explosion altered the trial’s intended illusions, transforming them into tangible specters that posed real threats. They narrowly escape by crossing a bridge, which collapses the moment they reach the other side.

Tensions run high as Echo and Flashing argue. During the heated exchange, Flashing reveals the true purpose of the trials: Celestia is searching for her next personal protégé following the departure of her previous one.

Flashing also unveils why so many foals from other tribes infiltrated Rockville—a town traditionally populated solely by earth ponies. They did so to stand out among other participants, encouraged or even forced by parents, merchants, politicians, and nobles with their own ambitions. Flashing, however, is the exception; it was entirely his idea. Unlike the others, he meticulously prepared for the trials, gathering every piece of information he could to gain an advantage.

With the bridge destroyed, the group has no choice but to press forward, despite growing unease about the escalating danger of the upcoming trials.

Meanwhile, when the explosion occurred, Celestia was occupied dealing with nobles who had infiltrated Rockville for their personal gain. The magical shockwave diverted her attention, and she immediately set out for the forest, heading toward the foals at the center of the explosion’s origin.


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Notes:

I’ve ensured the ambiguity surrounding the explosion serves the narrative. This keeps the tension alive while emphasizing Echo’s limited understanding of magic. Besides being convenient for future narrative.

About the matter of earth ponies and their magic, it's complicated, yes? There were not many magical cases seen with terrestrials beyond super strength, but they may be isolated cases such as the ability to speak with animals, and those who had the strength were farm workers and it would make sense for them to be strong. Furthermore, with Tirek absorbing the magic of the earth ponies, we can say that magic itself is a source of life, and, therefore, everyone has it. In this case of this story, Yes, they have a physical increase, but nothing remarkable enough to build a house just because, without training. I like to think that what makes earth ponies special is their determination.

Don't overthink it, I'm just trying to do my best to make everything fit together for a better story. I'm doing what I can.

Thanks for reading!

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