The Longest Road
Chapter 23: Echoes of doubt Part 8 - What always comes back
Previous ChapterNext Chapter"This is ridiculous," I thought as Flashing continued dragging us toward the next trial.
With every step, I felt more trapped—not just physically but mentally. If it were just me, I probably wouldn’t care as much about the danger. I could endure it, pretend it didn’t affect me. But this time, it wasn’t just my life at stake. My sisters were here, and I couldn’t let anything happen to them.
Pinkie. Just thinking about her intensified my anxiety. She’s... special. It’s something deeper. If something happens to her, if something changes her irreversibly... the impact could be devastating—not just for our family, but for all of Equestria.
And yet, I couldn’t shake the question: are we really in danger?
The last trial was anything but a "trial of laughter." But if I think about it, with or without me, this event was going to happen anyway. Maybe all of this is just a coincidence, an unexpected detour along the way. Maybe the next trials won’t be as dangerous. But there’s the problem: I can’t be sure.
And then there’s the matter of the explosion.
Who was responsible? The star or Flashing? Either way, the result is the same: Flashing has the star now. He has control. And as long as he has control, we’re at his mercy. For now, his goal aligns with ours: to get out of here alive. But I’m not fooled; when the moment comes to choose between us or his personal ambition, I know exactly what decision he’ll make.
Our supplies are also an issue. We’ve got no water, and the food vanished in that mess with the rabbits. Sure, we could eat grass and flowers from the ground, but with the forest getting more twisted, I’d like to avoid it. Every passing minute brings us closer to having nothing.
How did we end up here?
These were just trials for foals. Trials! When did everything go so wrong? Oh, right—it was with those damn rabbits.
I lowered my head, a pang of guilt cutting through me. It all started with that small incident.
All because of that kick.
I would’ve said I was building my own path, but I didn’t expect it to veer into a series of events that led to us getting kidnapped!
All I was trying to do was keep Pinkie on course, trying to maintain balance, ensuring she didn’t stray from what I believed was her path. And now... look at us. One small act, so insignificant at the time, triggered a chain of events that brought us here.
How is that even possible?
Something so minor… how did it cause all this? That’s when Flashing began losing his patience. That’s when everything started to fall apart. And now we’re stuck, following an arrogant unicorn who’s manipulating us as he pleases.
The memory of the magical shockwave made me shudder. That explosion, that uncontrollable force that threw us against the trees... all of it over an argument.
"All because of one damn decision," I thought bitterly.
My self-loathing grew with each step. Why does it always feel like one small choice has such disproportionate consequences? Why can’t life be simpler? Not even in this world—this colorful, cheerful world—can I escape the same existential crises that haunted me before I was reborn.
My eyes drifted forward to Flashing, walking with such firm, determined steps.
While I hesitated, like I had on the bridge, he moved forward without trouble. He didn’t seem to worry about the consequences, didn’t seem to overthink every possible outcome. He just acted.
"What’s wrong with my mind?" I thought, frustration and despair swirling inside me. "Always thinking about every possibility, every detail, trying to predict what will happen. And still, I fail. I always fail."
I’d tried to push these thoughts away for days, but they always came back, like deep roots refusing to let go.
My damn tree of decisions.
It’s like I’m trapped in a mental forest where every decision creates new branches, new paths, new possibilities. And instead of moving forward, I get lost among the branches, unable to choose. Meanwhile, Flashing, with all his arrogance, just cuts his way through the forest. He doesn’t hesitate. He doesn’t question.
"He’s just a kid," I thought bitterly, gritting my teeth. "A couple of years older than me in this life. And yet, he’s got it all figured out. He knows exactly what he wants, while I..."
I stomped the ground in frustration, the impulse escaping before I could stop it.
"I’m stuck," I told myself. "Even with this second chance, I’m still the same mess I’ve always been. I keep hesitating, keep losing myself in the possibilities, while someone like Flashing moves ahead, leaving me behind."
The scream of frustration in my mind barely stayed trapped in my throat.
"I can’t decide," I thought, lowering my gaze. "I can’t keep doing this."
Flashing continued ahead, his figure growing smaller with each step, like a shadow pulling farther away while I remained trapped in my own mental chains. And I hated him for it—just as much as I hated myself.
I took a clumsy step that nearly sent me tumbling to the ground.
Looking down, I saw the culprit: a root sticking out, twisted as if deliberately placed there to trip me up. With a sigh of frustration, I moved my hoof, straightening myself slowly.
I glanced up at Flashing, who kept striding forward with his usual air of superiority. His steps were firm, his posture rigid, as if he were immune to exhaustion or the oppressive atmosphere around us.
“How much farther until the next trial?” I asked, my spirits already scraping the bottom of the barrel.
Flashing didn’t bother to stop. He looked up at the sky, pensive, as if calculating invisible distances in his head.
“We should be close,” he finally said. “The map shows an icon of a mirror. Based on the information I’ve gathered, this is the Trial of Honesty. Whatever we face will be subtle, barely noticeable, but it’ll dig into our secrets. Stay alert for anything unusual. Face it quickly, and we can move on to the trial that truly matters: Magic.”
I sighed, glancing around.
The forest remained unnerving, its gnarled trees and oppressive atmosphere pressing down on us. Yet there was something less threatening here than in the Trial of Laughter. Somehow, this place felt closer to the forest I knew back in Rockville, though denser and eerily alive.
A wave of nostalgia hit me for the settings of the earlier trials—those fictitious, illusory landscapes filled with vibrant colors and tangible magic. They may have been fake, but they had a comforting quality.
Now, everything felt more real… and far more dangerous.
“Everything is more complicated than it needs to be,” I thought bitterly. “It never goes the way I expect. That’s why I’m always thinking, but I never get it right.”
I took another step forward, only to be stopped again. I glanced down and saw another root tangled around my back hoof, as if the forest itself were trying to hold me in place.
With some effort, I freed myself and kept moving, though I couldn’t shake the feeling that these roots weren’t natural.
Ahead, Flashing had slowed his pace.
“What’s the matter? Is the relentless pace finally getting to you?” I joked, trying to lighten the mood.
He simply stomped the ground hard and took a few more steps.
“It’s the ground,” he replied, clearly annoyed. “It’s soft, like there’s something beneath it. Keep walking.”
I raised an eyebrow, skeptical. I looked at the ground where he stepped, but it seemed perfectly solid and firm to me. I shook my head, dismissing the comment. Maybe his heavy stomps were weakening the soil.
As we pressed on, the roots seemed to multiply around me. With every step, a new one rose to tangle around my hooves. It was becoming harder and harder to move freely, and I found myself constantly stopping to free myself.
“Are we close yet?” Pinkie asked, her tone reflecting the weariness we were all starting to feel.
Flashing pulled the map from his satchel with his magic.
“We should be here already,” he said, stomping the ground again. A puff of dirt rose from the impact. “Damn soft ground.” Without another word, he continued forward.
Pinkamena and Maud exchanged glances but said nothing.
The group arrived at a small clearing in the forest, where the air felt charged with something invisible yet tangible, as if the very surroundings were feeding off their presence. The atmosphere shifted abruptly. The trees grew darker and taller, their twisted branches reaching toward them like eager claws.
Flashing was the first to enter, his haughty posture and unshakable stride unbothered by the subtle warnings around him. The ground beneath his hooves sank slightly, as if he were walking on unstable terrain. He grumbled impatiently but pressed on.
For Maud and Pinkamena, the change in the environment was barely noticeable. They walked with their usual calm, as if the forest couldn’t touch them.
But for Echo, the experience was entirely different.
Every step he took was a battle. The roots beneath him writhed and twisted, snaking around his hooves with an unsettling intent. He struggled to free himself, yanking one hoof free only to find another caught moments later.
“Echo, wait!” Pinkie called, turning back to him with clear concern. “What’s happening?”
“I don’t know!” Echo replied, frustration evident as he fought against the relentless roots.
The group stopped, their eyes fixed on him.
“This isn’t normal,” Maud remarked, her tone flat but carrying a subtle edge of alertness.
Flashing, irritated by the delay, turned toward them with an impatient glare. “Stop wasting time! This is just another part of the trial. It’s not real.”
“It doesn’t feel like an illusion!” Echo shouted, freeing one hoof only to have two more ensnared in the process.
Around him, the forest seemed to shift. The trees twisted further with each passing second, their grotesque forms casting shadows that moved as if alive. The roots below surged and grew wildly, wrapping around him with chaotic energy.
Every step Echo tried to take became more of a struggle.
"Echo, hold still for a moment," Maud said calmly as she approached. With precise movements, she began helping him free his hooves, ignoring the oppressive atmosphere surrounding them.
"We can't stop here!" Flashing exclaimed, snorting in exasperation. "The Trial of Honesty won't complete itself."
"Enough, Flashing!" Pinkamena shouted, her voice resonating with an unusual intensity. Her eyes burned with a mixture of anger and determination. "Can't you see something is happening here?"
Flashing rolled his eyes in annoyance but said nothing.
Meanwhile, the roots continued to grow, rising higher and thicker as if trying to swallow Echo whole.
With combined effort, Echo and Maud managed to tear him free from the roots that bound him, ripping them away as they resisted with unnatural vigor. Echo collapsed onto the ground, breathing heavily, his chest heaving with exhaustion.
For a brief moment, there was calm.
A moment that lasted far too short.
The Pie siblings instinctively stepped back, their eyes scanning the chaotic scene around them. The roots rose from every direction: bursting from the ground, snaking through the bushes, and hanging like serpents from the twisted branches above. The chaos seemed to multiply, enclosing them in a living labyrinth of wood.
"This isn't good," Echo muttered, his voice barely audible before feeling a root coil tightly around his foreleg.
With unexpected force, the root yanked him forward. Echo dug his hind hooves into the ground, resisting with all his might, but it was as though the forest itself refused to let him go.
Maud and Pinkie reacted in unison. Determined, they both lunged toward Echo, pulling on him as the root fought to drag him further away. Finally, with a final, desperate pull, they tore him free, sending all three tumbling to the ground in a mess of hooves and dirt.
"Flashing! We need to get out of here!" Echo shouted, turning toward where the unicorn had been.
But what he saw froze him in place. Flashing was being partially swallowed by the ground, his lower body sinking into what looked like quicksand.
With a growl, Flashing dug his forehooves into what remained of solid ground, straining to pull himself free. His face was smeared with dirt, but his expression remained one of absolute stubbornness.
"This is nothing for me," he said dismissively, standing up and surveying the chaotic landscape of roots and twisted trees. For the first time, his confidence faltered slightly.
Without waiting further, everyone started running.
The roots sprawled in every direction—some long and thin, others thick and sturdy—blocking their path as if the forest were intent on stopping them at all costs. Every step was a struggle as they dodged, stumbled, or tore through roots that tried to ensnare them.
"Come on, what are you waiting for? The exit must be close!" Flashing shouted from the front. His voice carried urgency as he took the lead, moving with determination... until his sprint came to an abrupt halt.
Flashing crashed headlong into a massive root that had risen in his path. The impact sent him stumbling backward, and he fell to the ground. His satchel flew off his back, landing with a heavy thud.
From the satchel, the star slipped out, its gleaming light catching everyone’s attention.
Echo's gaze locked onto it, but before he could move, he felt a violent tug on his hind hoof. A thick root had coiled around him, yanking him backward with relentless force.
"Echo!" Maud and Pinkie cried out in unison, their voices laced with panic.
Without hesitation, they rushed to him. Pinkie grabbed one of his forelegs, while Maud gripped the other, pulling with all their might as the roots tightened around him.
"I won’t let go!" Pinkie shouted, her voice fierce and determined. Her eyes shone with resolve, even as a root lashed across her cheek, leaving a red mark. Despite the pain, she refused to loosen her grip.
But the roots were unyielding. They multiplied and coiled tighter around Echo, dragging him farther away. Maud and Pinkie pulled with every ounce of strength they had, but it was futile.
"I can’t get free!" Echo yelled, his voice tinged with despair as the roots encased him up to his waist.
Finally, the roots won. With a final, powerful pull, they dragged Echo several meters away from his sisters.
"Echo!" they cried out again, chasing after him in desperation.
The roots, responding to their movement, began wrapping around Echo even faster. Within moments, they formed a tight sphere—a cocoon of twisting wood that encased him completely.
From inside, Echo caught one last glimpse through the gaps in the roots. He saw the desperate faces of his sisters, their outstretched hooves reaching for him, trying to pull him back.
"ECHOOOO!" Maud and Pinkie’s anguished cry echoed through the forest.
The last image Echo saw was his sisters sprinting toward him, their desperation etched into every step. Then, the roots closed in fully, plunging him into suffocating darkness.
The cocoon remained still, as if the forest had claimed it for itself.
Void.
All around me was an overwhelming, endless void of darkness. No ground beneath my hooves, no horizon, no light. Just an all-consuming silence that seemed to devour everything. I floated—or at least I thought I did. There was no point of reference, no anchor to tell me if I was moving or not.
"Hello?!" I shouted, my voice echoing into the emptiness, returning to me in a mocking reverberation. "Is anyone there? Anyone at all?!"
The echo faded, leaving behind the same oppressive silence.
"Arrgh," I growled, bringing my hooves to my head in frustration.
This wasn't part of the plan. None of this was. I just wanted to get through the day and move on. But, as always, nothing ever went as I expected. No matter how much I thought things through, analyzed, or prepared, something always spiraled out of control.
"Why?" I murmured, anger and sadness swirling inside me. "Why does everything bad happen so easily, while the good feels impossible to reach?"
I looked around, searching for something—anything. But there was only me, floating in a sea of uncertainty and darkness.
My thoughts drifted to my sisters. The last image I had of them, running toward me in desperation, was burned into my mind.
"Are they okay?" I wondered, my heart tightening. "I wish I could scream at them to forget about me and run, to take care of themselves. But… I don’t even know if they can hear me here."
The weight of uncertainty was crushing. I didn’t know what was happening outside this place, or even if this was supposed to happen. Just like I didn’t know what caused the explosion, what the star represented, or why I was in this world in the first place.
My mind screamed for answers, but I had none. I just wanted to scream.
And then, something interrupted the void.
"I want to be a… a teacher."
My eyes snapped open, blinking in confusion. The voice echoed faintly, like a whisper in the darkness.
"Hello?" I called out, my heartbeat quickening. "Who’s there? I need help over here!"
"I could teach the next generation! Maybe they’d even call me professor… it sounds funny."
"What are you talking about?" I asked, a mix of confusion and desperation creeping into my voice.
"But… teachers don’t earn much, do they? And What if I have to deal with difficult parents…?"
A chill ran down my spine. That voice… it was familiar.
Then, from another direction, the same voice spoke again.
"I want to be a musician. Tour the world!"
I stood frozen, listening as it continued.
"But… what if no one gives me a chance? What if I end up playing on street corners for spare change?"
The discomfort turned to horror as I recognized the voice.
It was mine.
"That’s… my voice?" I whispered, my mind struggling to process what was happening.
The voice echoed again, this time from yet another direction.
"Then I’ll be a doctor. They make a lot of money, and the job is secure. But… if I fail a surgery, I could get sued. I could lose everything."
Suddenly, my voice began to multiply. Scientist, mechanic, builder, carpenter, animator, veterinarian. Every option, every possibility, every path I had ever considered reverberated around me with growing intensity.
The words overlapped, clashing and repeating the pros and cons of each decision, forming a deafening cacophony that filled the void.
"Shut up!" I shouted, my voice drowning in the noise. "Stop it! JUST STOP!"
The voices didn’t relent. They were too many, an unstoppable torrent of my own thoughts and insecurities.
"Leave me alone," I screamed, my voice breaking. "Please, just stop!"
Finally, I gathered all the air I could muster and screamed with all my might:
"STOOOOP!"
The echo of my scream reverberated through the void, and as if it had heard me, the voices ceased.
Tranquility returned, but it was no comfort. It only made room for something else.
In front of me, a mist began to form, swirling slowly until it shaped itself into the figure of a pony. A silhouette my size emerged, gradually becoming more defined.
It was me.
"That’s me," I murmured, incredulous.
I lifted a hoof, and the figure mirrored me instantly, like a reflection. But its face was different… unsettling.
Then it spoke.
"I’m pathetic."
The statement struck me like a hammer.
"What?" I whispered, unable to look away.
"You gave it your all," it continued, its voice cold and cutting, "but you couldn’t stand against the unicorns and pegasi. Despite having a second chance, despite remembering your past life, you lost to a bunch of children. How humiliating."
"Stop joking!" I yelled, my voice trembling. "My sisters need me. Let me out!"
"Out?" The figure tilted its head mockingly. "For what? To keep being a burden? A few simple rabbits defeated you. Because of you, your family was put in danger, nearly buried alive."
"That doesn’t matter now!" I shouted, stepping forward. "It all worked out in the end. Just let me go!"
"It would’ve been better if you’d forgotten everything," it went on, its voice gaining strength. "At least then, we wouldn’t be trapped in this curse of overthinking every decision, every possibility, never moving forward."
My hooves trembled. I didn’t want to admit it, but those words struck something deep within me.
The figure took a step closer, its foggy eyes gleaming.
"I can feel it," it said. "Out of everyone here, you’re the worst. The most chaotic, the weakest. And you brought us here. You created all of this, Echo. Or should I say… Felix?"
The sound of my old name sent a chill through my blood.
"We’ve always been like this, Felix, always," the shadowy figure that resembled me stated. "But do you want to know where it all went wrong?"
I recoiled, already knowing where this was going. "No… don’t you dare."
"Come on. Don’t you want to see Anthony one more time?" it teased, as everything around me began to shift and change.
Celestia soared above the forest, her majestic wings slicing through the air with precision as she traced the path taken by the chosen participants. Her gaze was fixed on the terrain below, scanning every detail for signs of progress or obstacles faced by the test takers.
She reached the first checkpoint: the location where the initial trial was supposed to take place. Here, an illusory mountain was meant to mark the entrance to a cave, the stage for a crucial test of the participants’ will. But as Celestia descended and landed on the ground, she found an empty clearing. The mountain was gone.
Intrigued, she stepped forward.
Near the center of the clearing lay a long, gleaming crystal, placed carefully as if someone had deliberately left it there. Celestia examined it closely, her curiosity piqued.
A faint smile crossed her lips as she recalled the initial reports. One of the participants had particularly excelled in this trial.
"It seems," Celestia thought, leaning down toward the crystal, "someone figured out the mountain was just an illusion. They must have taken it, thinking it was a key piece, only to realize later it wasn’t meant to be moved."
With a gentle motion of her hoof, she nudged the crystal aside, ensuring it wouldn’t hinder anyone coming through later.
Raising her gaze, she unfurled her wings and ascended once more, resuming her flight.
Not long after, Celestia arrived at the second checkpoint. This was supposed to be the site of the Generosity trial, where a calm and patient golem asked participants to sacrifice something of personal value as part of the challenge. However, what she found was a completely different scene.
The golem was far from the serene creature that was meant to embody Generosity. Instead, it moved frantically, ripping trees from the ground with violent motions and piling them into a chaotic mound like hoarded trophies. Every action radiated greed and loss of control.
Celestia landed on the ground and furrowed her brow.
Even the golem’s form had changed. Once smooth and rounded, its edges were now jagged and sharp, exuding danger. Its movements, once deliberate and composed, were erratic as if something had corrupted it from within.
"This shouldn’t be happening," Celestia murmured, her horn glowing with a golden light that illuminated the area.
With a single beam of magic, she shattered the golem. It crumbled into a shower of glittering fragments, dissipating along with the illusory environment around it. What remained was the true landscape of Rockville’s forest: ordinary trees, a carpet of dry leaves, and the crisp air of an undisturbed woodland.
Celestia cautiously approached the spot where the golem had stood. Among the remains of the illusion, she found another crystal, similar to the one she had seen in the first trial. But this one was different.
The crystal radiated wild energy, with glowing cracks pulsing as if it was about to explode. Celestia examined it carefully, her eyes narrowing as she tried to decipher what had gone wrong.
With a delicate touch of her horn, she sent a magical wave into the crystal, dissipating the overload of energy. The cracks dimmed one by one, leaving the crystal gray and inert, as ordinary as a piece of stone.
Celestia held the crystal in her hooves for a moment, her expression grave.
"Something is interfering with the trials," she murmured to herself. "This isn’t a simple malfunction. It’s an overload."
Her concern deepened. She stowed the crystal and spread her wings once more, taking flight with a renewed sense of urgency.
"The foals are in danger," she thought as she picked up speed. "I must reach them before it’s too late."
The forest below her grew darker and more twisted with every passing moment. The feeling of unease mounted with each meter she covered. What had begun as a carefully designed series of tests to evaluate the character and virtues of young ponies was now transforming into something unpredictable and potentially deadly.
Celestia flew faster, determined to uncover the source of this corruption before it could cause further harm.
Author's Note
As the group makes their way to the next trial, Echo’s past doubts begin to resurface. Although he had tried to suppress them after the camp, the recent events have rekindled the uncertainty he thought he had buried.
The Trial of Honesty, like the Trial of Laughter, has been dangerously amplified due to the earlier explosion. This time, both Echo and Flashing are affected, but the anomaly soon centers on its most vulnerable target: Echo.
Wild roots begin to grow uncontrollably, wrapping around Echo and trapping him inside a cocoon made of his own doubts and existential crises.
Inside, Echo finds himself floating in a dark void, surrounded by echoes of every choice he’s ever made—or failed to make. Every possibility, every path, reverberates around him, intensifying his feelings of inadequacy.
His shadow materializes, taunting him with his perceived failures and regrets.
Meanwhile, Celestia races toward the group, moving through the earlier trials. She discovers that one trial had been accidentally deactivated by Echo, while the next one has been dangerously overloaded due to the explosion’s chaotic magic.
Fun Facts:
- The roots in the Trial of Honesty reflect Echo’s internal “tree of decisions,” a symbol of his overanalyzing nature. For Flashing, the entity traps him in the earth—a representation of his fear of being stuck at the bottom despite his aspirations to reach the top. Ultimately, the trial focuses on Echo, as his internal struggles are the most consuming.
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