The Longest Road
Chapter 5: between school and destiny
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"Wake up, everyone!" boomed a deep voice from outside the room.
After a couple of knocks, the door creaked open just enough to let a helmet and a head peek through—it was my father, Igneous.
"Breakfast will be ready shortly. Get up and prepare to join us at the table," he said before ringing the bell again for emphasis and leaving the room.
I pushed the blanket off my face and sat up halfway. This was the daily routine of a rock farmer: waking up before dawn to start the day full of energy.
Wiping the drool from my cheek with a hoof, I tossed the rest of the blanket aside and hopped off the bed with more flair than necessary, landing squarely on my hooves. Stretching out, I shook off the morning grogginess.
Opening my eyes, I took a look around the room. To my left was Pinkamena, who, like me, was just dragging herself out of bed with a sleepy yawn. On the other side was Marble, calmly tidying up her bed as always.
And then there was me, smack dab in the middle and facing the door straight on.
It's been a few years since that chaotic first birthday. Now, at six years old, I can move around freely and speak without stressing too much about acting like a "normal colt." My family still finds some of my habits odd—especially the pros-and-cons board plastered next to my bed. But they chalk it up to harmless eccentricity, occasionally commenting on it like it's an amusing curiosity.
A few years ago, I was moved into a shared room with my sisters, Pinkamena and Marble. The division was immediate: each of us claimed a side of the room, leaving the area near the door as neutral territory.
While they haven’t made many changes to their areas—save for adding a few oddly-shaped rocks we’ve stumbled across—my half is a controlled chaos. It’s filled with books, notes, and diagrams of interconnected ideas. Even a couple of moderately heavy stones I use for training. My sisters are quiet and calm, which contrasts sharply with my late-night study sessions, where I mumble to myself while scribbling notes or practicing. On those nights, I usually end up with a pillow thrown at my head, followed by a grumpy, “Can you shut up?!” Fair enough, honestly.
Once I was fully awake, I bolted out of the room, galloping down the hall toward a door. I tried the handle—it didn’t budge.
"Occupied," came a monotone voice from the other side.
“Maud…” I muttered, narrowing my eyes in a silent challenge. She was always the first to wake up and never failed to beat me to the bathroom.
Wasting no time, I raced to the basement. With a quick maneuver—and a slight slip on the steps—I reached the bottom and lunged for the second bathroom door. Another failed attempt.
“Occupied… better luck next time, slowpoke!” called a smug voice from the other side.
“LIMESTOOOOONE!” I yelled. Limestone, surprisingly, had woken up earlier than usual and beaten me to the second bathroom—a rare occurrence.
Resigned, I slumped next to the door to wait. Moments later, Pinkamena showed up, apparently with the same plan as me.
After breakfast—devoured in record time—I took the dishes, washed them, and headed back to my room to grab my saddlebags. Then I dashed to the front door.
“Hurry up! Dad, you promised we’d leave early!” I called, practically vibrating with energy.
“I was hoping to finish my breakfast first, but…” He looked me in the eyes briefly before grabbing another cooked carrot and taking a quick bite. “I suppose my breakfast can wait,” he said, standing up and grabbing his hat from the coat rack.
I’ve been reading every book on geology, minerals, and crystals I could find in the house, fascinated by some of their curiosities. Did you know basalt stones, rich in iron, can warm your skin? Or that quartz has such a strong structure it can withstand intense pressure without breaking?
Noticing my interest, my parents have taken me to the small town library several times. It’s not the vast labyrinth of books you might imagine, but it’s enough. They always try to get me to join the storytime sessions with other colts and fillies, though I usually sneak off to more "important" sections, like Equestrian history and geography.
Nowadays, it’s mostly just Maud and me who visit the library occasionally. But today is special. This weekend, a new selection of books is arriving. After much begging, I managed to get my parents to agree to take me so I could borrow them.
This is a big deal. I don’t have much in-depth knowledge about the world yet, and the bits I remember from the show aren’t exactly rich in detail.
For now, the research I've gathered confirms that this world is, as I remembered, called Equestria. Another fact is that Princess Celestia rules from Canterlot. Thanks to a geography book, I've also learned about other places of interest like Ponyville, Manehattan, Cloudsdale, and Griffonstone.
The name that caught me off guard, though, was Ponyville. Seriously, who decided that was a good name?
From the few scattered paragraphs I've managed to find in books, I know that magic exists. Unfortunately, I haven’t been able to dig deeper into the subject because Rockville—apparently located in western Equestria—is a town entirely populated by earth ponies. That means there’s little to no information about magic available here.
The only books I’ve been able to read are on geology, carpentry, the occasional text about plants and mosses, Rockville’s history, and some outdated geography books.
Still, I’m holding onto hope that this new batch of books will bring some fresh information.
“Caves, Rocks, and Mosses?! Third Edition?!” I exclaimed, staring at the hefty book in my hooves with a mix of shock and confusion.
“Along with a collection of new books from geologists and rock researchers, freshly arrived this morning,” the librarian explained. She was a gray mare with a faint yellow undertone, a neatly tied white mane, and a pair of half-moon glasses perched on her nose. “What do you think, Echorellian? Taking them or leaving them?”
Rocks. It’s always rocks. “...I’ll take them,” I finally replied, nudging the miniature cart I’d brought along to carry the books.
After a slow walk back with my head hanging low and a resigned groan, we arrived at the farm just as the sun rose, bathing the vast rocky fields in warm light.
Besides studying, I’ve started working on the family rock farm like my sisters, extracting and collecting different types of stones. We’re still young, so we’re usually assigned smaller, lighter rocks. But every now and then, I find ways to work with the bigger ones.
The workdays are intense—long hours under the sun, carrying rocks—but the effort feels worthwhile. Seeing my contribution help the family is rewarding enough to make the exhaustion worth it.
We reached the door, where my mother and Maud greeted us.
After a quick hello, Maud spoke up. “Did you get any books for me?” she asked in her usual monotone voice. Over the years, I’ve learned to recognize the subtle hints of enthusiasm in her tone.
“Oh, you bet I did! A whole cartload of them!” I replied, gesturing to the cart behind me. “But you’ll have to wait for Caves, Rocks, and Mosses. The last edition left me too curious to skip this one,” I added, clutching the book in my hooves.
She nodded and calmly wheeled the cart off to her room.
After years where the only entertainment available was books—and those books were mostly about rocks and minerals—you learn to find excitement in them. So, after finishing this book, I’ll work my way through the rest of the cart. Same old routine.
It’s strange, though. I mean, they’re just rocks. Yet, in the absence of literally everything else, even I’ve grown fond of them. It's like a love-hate relationship.
With a sigh and the book still in my hooves, I headed to my room.
Once inside, I closed the door behind me and walked to the foot of my bed. The walls were covered in papers, notes, diagrams, and sketches, all connected by red strings. Together, they formed a massive decision tree.
Unfortunately, my hard work in figuring out what to do with my life still hasn’t paid off. The answer remains a mystery. My decision tree—now a literal, physical tree—just keeps growing. But like before, all its branches lead to the same place. Every single thread connects to a blank spot on the wall, the same empty space where all my options hit a dead end.
I placed the book on the bedside table next to my bed, saving it for later. Then, I lay down, staring at the ceiling. Even up there, notes and ideas were taped, including lists of hobbies I’d considered exploring.
For now, though, today was a rest day on the farm. I could take the weekend to think and read before my first day of school next week.
Still, what irritates me most is the lack of information about magic in the library—or anywhere in Rockville, for that matter. I tried branching out from the topic by exploring anything remotely related to runes or enchantments. Keeping in mind that this town literally has the word “rock” in its name, but surprisingly there is absolutely nothing on the topic.
Magic itself is an entire branch of possibilities, but without access to it, countless doors remain closed to me. All I have at my hooves are geology books. At this rate, I’m more likely to earn a Rocktorate before I find a book that’s different..
With one last sigh, I grabbed Caves, Rocks, and Mosses: Third Edition and opened it.
Two months have passed since I started elementary school. The school itself is a modest wooden shack with a rusted bell perched on the roof. To the side, there’s a simple playground where the equipment is either corroded or made from stacks of piled rocks. It has only a few classrooms, and though the age difference between my older sisters and us is not vast, it’s enough to place them in a different room from ours.
“Can you lend me yesterday’s notes, Echo?” Pinkamena, seated beside me, asked. Without bothering to reply, I simply nodded, took out my notebook, and handed it over.
“Thanks! You’re the best!” she reply.
I sighed quietly and slumped onto my desk.
A curious fact about this new life of mine is that, since Pinkie and I are the same age, it was inevitable that we’d end up in the same classroom. Not only that—we’ve been together since nursery and foal kindergarten.
I know I shouldn’t get too involved with one of the main characters, but when fate positions you as her twin from the very beginning, what can you do? It’s like I was coerced into being by her side.
Now, somehow, we have become an inseparable family unit. No wonder, after all it seems like we are always together.
So here we are. I can only hope my role in Pinkie Pie’s life is confined to this phase in Rockville and doesn’t ripple into her future when she eventually moves to Ponyville. After all, I’m just her brother—at most, a side character. With a little luck, I’ll be an insignificant part of her story, nothing that alters the course of history.
So, I shouldn’t worry, right? I can live my own life without concerns—or so I think.
Suddenly, the bell rings, and the door swings open to reveal an older stallion with a stern look and a perpetually furrowed brow. It’s our teacher, Clover Dust. He greets the class, wastes no time, strides to his desk, and starts marking attendance.
I glance around indifferently, taking in the classroom’s creaky, aged atmosphere: dark wooden walls, worn desks engraved with years of doodles, and a large chalkboard at the front, smudged with remnants of past lessons. The other foals are already in their places.
My seat is right in the middle of the room. To my right sits Pinkie, and to my left is Marble, who often remains silent, occasionally murmuring a soft “hmmph-hmm.”
I know my demeanor can come off as gloomy or even apathetic, but honestly, it’s justified. I’ve been here for a while, and being an adult in a foal’s body makes all this feel absurdly easy.
After going through the hell of picking things up with your hoof or mouth, of course.
Once the teacher finishes roll call, he sets the sheet aside, picks up a piece of chalk, and starts filling the board with simple words and numbers. The class officially begins, and we’re assigned basic reading and writing exercises. I watch the other foals concentrating, laboring over their strokes as if each letter were a monumental challenge. For me, it’s child’s play; after all, I’ve already done this once before.
I could pretend to “learn” alongside them, blending in as an average student. I could feign clumsiness or ignorance, hide behind a façade to avoid drawing attention. But I choose not to.
I’ve decided that my presence shouldn’t disrupt the course of this world—or at least not in a way that causes problems. Right now, as long as I don’t meddle too much with the other protagonists (though it’s already too late to worry about my interactions with Pinkie), I should be fine. So instead of playing dumb, I opt to display my skills—but with moderation. After all, I’m not about to reveal anything about my past life or mention that I was once a strange bipedal creature called a “human.”
Maybe standing out and taking initiative isn’t such a bad thing. If others see me as a quick learner, it might open more doors for me in the future. And more importantly, I’ve resolved not to live in hiding or act like a background character. I didn’t come here to blend into the crowd or to observe from the shadows.
As I calmly scribble the letters, Teacher Clover Dust approaches, reviewing our progress. He pauses, examining my work with a subtle expression of surprise, then glances at Pinkamena’s.
“Good work, Pinkamena,” the teacher says in an encouraging tone. Then his eyes land on me, and his expression shifts to a mix of surprise and approval.
“Echo, it seems you have a knack for this,” he remarks, inclining his head slightly. “It’s clear you’re a dedicated foal. Keep it up, and you’ll achieve great things.”
I nod with a small smile. The teacher really has no idea what I’m capable of. I’m not going to pull calculations out of thin air, but I’m confident I can breeze through any assignment they throw at me. A faint, mischievous grin begins to form on my face. It feels like cheating, and I absolutely love it.
Another day, another class that passes without a hitch.
I’m in the middle of lessons right now. Sure, school is important, but when the subjects are general ones like reading, writing, language, math, and the like, they’re so easy for me that they no longer demand my full attention. I usually jot down quick notes just so my parents can see I’m "taking notes" and won’t worry. Once that’s done, I zone out a bit and start sketching in my notebook.
It’s not that I dislike these topics; it’s just that, having gone through all this in another life, it feels almost automatic. Even so, I occasionally glance around and see my classmates struggling to grasp what feels like basic concepts to me. I’ve noticed that math, in particular, is a challenge for Pinkamena. Lately, she’s been asking for my help after class, which has naturally increased the amount of time we spend together.
However, there are days when class covers topics that truly grab my attention, like history or unique concepts specific to this world. On those days, I grab the charcoal stick we use as pencils and take detailed notes, eager to absorb every word.
Today is one of those days. Teacher Clover walks in wearing a particular expression, a faint smile he reserves for lessons that excite the foals. He announces that today we’ll be discussing one of the most important aspects of any young pony’s life: Cutie Marks.
The mention of the topic immediately piques my interest. A mix of curiosity and a peculiar kind of nervousness stirs in me as I watch my classmates light up with fascination. It’s not just the information itself, but the reminder of how much importance this world places on self-discovery.
My thoughts drift. The concept of Cutie Marks has always intrigued me, even before I arrived here, but now it carries an entirely new weight. What kind of Cutie Mark could someone like me—a soul who’s already lived a life—possibly receive? Could it somehow reflect my past, or would it be something completely unexpected?
The teacher moves around the room with a sparkle in his eyes, clearly thrilled to explain today’s topic. He draws a pony silhouette on the chalkboard, adding the outline of a shining star on its flank—a generic Cutie Mark he uses to illustrate the concept.
“Cutie Marks,” he begins, her tone warm, “are much more than just a symbol. They appear when a pony discovers their true talent or purpose in life. It’s a very special and unique moment for each of you, and every Cutie Mark represents something one-of-a-kind.”
One of the foals raises a hoof, curious. “When do they show up, sir? How will we know what our talent is?”
“Ah, excellent question, Starry!” the teacher replies enthusiastically. “There’s no set time. It could happen tomorrow, next year, or even later. It all depends on when each of you finds something you truly love or excel at.”
Pinkamena looks particularly focused, her eyes filled with wonder as she watches the chalkboard. I’m intrigued too, though my questions go a bit deeper. I raise my hoof, and Teacher Clover nods for me to speak.
“Do Cutie Marks have any connection to magic? I mean, is there some sort of... magical force that makes them appear?” I ask, carefully choosing my words. The teacher pauses for a moment, thinking.
“That’s an interesting question, Echo,” he finally says. “Not all ponies wield magic in the traditional sense, but the magic of Cutie Marks is something special. It’s not like unicorn spells or the nature-manipulating abilities of pegasi. You could say it’s an internal magic, one that’s directly tied to each pony’s heart and soul.”
Pinkamena tentatively raises her hoof, clearly intrigued but a little uncertain. “So... does that mean a Cutie Mark only shows up when you do something you really like?”
The teacher nods enthusiastically. “Exactly, Pinkamena. Sometimes you discover something you’re passionate about without even realizing it, and then—bam!” He makes a dramatic motion with his hooves, as if casting invisible magic. “That’s when your Cutie Mark appears.”
Another foal, frowning slightly, seems confused. “But... how do we know we won’t get the wrong Cutie Mark?”
Clover shaking his head. “There are no mistakes with Cutie Marks, Dusty. When you discover your true purpose, your Cutie Mark appears, and it’s always the right one. The timing may differ for everypony, but it always reflects who you truly are.”
I raise my hoof again, intrigued. "So… does a Cutie Mark reveal something about our destiny or who we’ll become in the future?" I ask, trying to grasp if there’s a deeper or predestined connection.
"Good observation, Echo." Clover Dust seems impressed by the question. "A Cutie Mark can reflect aspects of the future, but not in an exact way. For instance, it might indicate the kind of talent you’ll have, but how you choose to use that talent is up to you. The Cutie Mark is merely a reflection of a pony’s potential; it’s your choices that define how you use it."
Another colt raises his hoof, curiosity lighting up his face. "Can a Cutie Mark ever be… unexpected? Something that doesn’t really match what you want to do?"
Clover Dust nods "That’s right! Sometimes, a Cutie Mark appears in surprising moments. You might think you have one purpose and then discover something deeper about yourself."
A contemplative silence falls over the room. Some of the foals are lost in thought, likely imagining what their future Cutie Marks might reveal about them. Meanwhile, I’m still mulling over the implications and possibilities.
"What happens if someone never finds their purpose?" a colt near the front asks, his voice tinged with worry.
Clover Dust offers a warm, reassuring smile. "Everyone has a purpose, though some find it faster than others. It’s part of each pony’s journey. There’s no need to rush—just keep experiencing life and moving forward."
The bell rings, signaling the end of class. The foals chatter excitedly as they file out, some speculating wildly about the Cutie Marks they might get someday. Pinkamena seems particularly animated, her eyes sparkling as she imagines her own future mark.
As the others leave, my thoughts linger on what Clover Dust said. Cutie Marks aren’t just symbols of talent—they’re a guide, a reminder of who you are or who you could become. I reflect on what that means, especially for someone like me, who still has no idea what path to take in this world.
It’s… fascinating, really. If a Cutie Mark somehow reflects your destiny, it could be an invaluable resource for making decisions and avoiding wrong turns. Not like my past life, where those kinds of signs were hard to spot, and life often felt aimless. Here, at least, there’s something to give you a foundation to build upon. Still, the question remains: what is it? What talent or purpose does this life hold for me?
My thoughts are interrupted when Pinkamena bounces over, her excitement practically radiating.
"Echo, what do you think your Cutie Mark will be?" she asks in a curious tone. "I hope mine is amazing, like a cluster of shiny rocks! Can you imagine? What if it’s something extraordinary like that?"
I suppress a chuckle at her current speculation, knowing full well what her Cutie Mark will be—and it’s nothing like what she’s imagining right now. But as for her question, I realize I don’t actually have an answer.
"I have no idea, Pinkie," I reply honestly, glancing out the window as my thoughts swirl back to the same question. "I guess it could be anything, but… I don’t even know where to start. It’d be helpful to have a Cutie Mark pointing me in the right direction, but… honestly, I don’t know if there’s anything I truly want to be."
Pinkamena nods thoughtfully.
"But I think it’s time to head home," I add, ending the conversation for now, though my mind continues to churn over it all. She nods again, and we join Marble to head for the exit, where Limestone and Maud are waiting to walk us home.
This whole Cutie Mark thing… it’s fascinating. Ponies in this world are so fortunate to have something that reveals their unique talent, something that gives them direction and purpose. To most, it might seem like just a symbol, but it marks each pony’s destiny and potential.
I think about Twilight Sparkle and her Cutie Mark—that six-pointed star representing magic itself. It’s as if she was always destined to become the icon of the Element of Magic. But did her Cutie Mark reflect her inclination toward magic, or did it somehow guide her toward that destiny?
Either way, Twilight was lucky to receive such a clear and powerful Cutie Mark. Magic became her special talent and her path, but it was also her constant effort, daily dedication, and love for learning that made her the skilled mage she is. And it’s undeniable that her Cutie Mark was an unmistakable sign of her potential.
I feel a small pang of envy; Pinkie, Twilight, and the rest of the main characters already have their paths laid out. I know what their Cutie Marks will be, and they’ll be incredible.
And here I am, without the faintest clue what I might end up with. In my mind, I’ve constructed a sort of map, branching into different paths and decisions—each life route, each possible talent—all leading to the same destination: a blank space, an empty square waiting to be filled. What does it mean when even in my own thoughts, I can’t see a clear goal? Does it mean I don’t truly have a purpose here?
Even so, this talk about Cutie Marks has sparked a small glimmer of hope. Perhaps if I can discover mine, I’ll have a solid foundation to start making decisions, to truly explore who I want to be in this world. Up until now, I’ve been passive, waiting for the answers to come to me, but maybe it’s time to change that.
I’m determined to find out what my Cutie Mark is and, with it, my purpose. I don’t have to sit around waiting for destiny to find me. Maybe, if I take the initiative and actively search, I’ll uncover it on my own.
Author's Note
[Author's Notes for the Audience]
A significant time skip has occurred since the last chapter, and Echo is now six years old.
We get a glimpse of Echo’s interactions with his family, which will be developed further in future chapters.
We see how things have progressed, including the fact that Echo has gained considerable knowledge about geology and other subjects over this time. However, his decision-making tree has grown even more complex, and he still struggles to choose a definitive path.
This is the first time we see Echo in school, where he becomes genuinely interested in the topic of Cutie Marks, seeing them as a potential opportunity to guide his path forward. (It was clear that in a story about the challenge of finding one’s destiny, the topic of Cutie Marks had to come up eventually.)
Fun Facts:
- Initial Concept: When drafting the story, Echo originally had no knowledge of the My Little Pony show. However, since his ultimate goal is reaching the very top, he needed at least a basic understanding that achieving such a goal is possible (albeit extremely difficult) to set it as his future objective. While characters like Cadance exist, living in Rockville—a place abandoned by the whims of fate—means Echo wouldn’t have easy access to that kind of information.
- Knowledge of the Program: There was some debate over whether Echo should know everything about the program or just what was necessary for the plot. If the former, she would constantly worry about ensuring events went as they should, fearing that her presence as an anomaly could cause a future catastrophe. With the latter option, there was a risk of making her knowledge feel too convenient. The final conclusion? Echo will have a broad, general knowledge of events but nothing detailed in depth and the gaps will have to be filled by deduction or logic, he will be careful but will not be limited by this.
- Merging Chapters: This chapter was originally split into two, but I decided to combine them into one longer chapter. This adjustment was made to accelerate the plot, laying the groundwork for future developments and the beginning of the next arc where Echo sets his sights on becoming an alicorn.
(I apologize for Echo not reaching that point yet, but I wanted to establish the foundations to justify his decision and take the time to explore this moment of uncertainty about which path Echo should take.)
Thanks for reading!
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