Riddle Dimensions

by The Pyro King

Chapter 1

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"Okay, what in Equestria is THAT?!", Sweetie Belle asked.

"Girls....I believe we have just discovered a whole new species! We're Creature finders!", Scootaloo pointed out.

"...Really? We will be famous!", Sweetie replied.

"An' then Diamond Tiara will have no reason ta mock us!", Apple Bloom added.

"Those two things are nice, but know what's the best? WE WILL BE FINALLY GETTING OUR CUTIE MARKS!!", she celebrated. This caused the two other fillies to join in the celebration.

"Shhhh....we don' want ta wake the creature up, it might flee or attack us.", Apple Bloom quietly pointed out. The two other school fillies nodded.

"So, how can we catch it?", Sweetie asked.

"We can toss a rope around him and push him.", Scootaloo suggested.

Apple Bloom didn't brought any ropes, though, she saw some vines on the 'fat' tree. She ran over there and catched the vine, and ran back. She started to gain momentum with the rope, and finally tossed it with high speed. Oddly enough, the end of the rope started to make loops around the sleeping creature, immobilizing him in case it wakes up. With all her might, she pushed the rope, slightly moving the bipedal thing until it literally fell out of the branch. And the creature still didn't woke up.

"...it's still sleeping? Wow, I thought it would wake up with the impact.", Sweetie commented.

"It seems this creature likes sleeping...remind me of this when we get back to the base.", Scootaloo replied.

"Ufm....a li'l helf herfe?", Apple Bloom asked. Sweetie and Scootaloo proceeded to push the creature from behind, easening the job for the farm filly.


Acessing...
Analyzing Map System
Analyzation Complete

Location: Limbo, The Void

"Hm? Where am I?", Phil asked as he slowly got up.

"YOU ARE AT LIMBO.", a voice answered.

"Huh? Who said that? And where is this 'Limbo'?", Phil asked again.

"I AM THE GUARD, RESPONSIBLE FOR KEEPING THE DIMENSION BARRIERS HEALTHY AND PROTECTED. ALSO TO PREVENT DIMENSION WARPING. LIMBO IS LOCATED AT THE VOID, THE SECTION THAT SEPERATES EACH DIMENSION. WHENEVER SOMEONE DIMENSION-WARPS, THEY BRIEFLY GET AT LIMBO, THOUGH, THEY STAY THERE FOR LESS THAN A SECOND BECAUSE THEY'RE AWAKE. YOU, ON THE OTHER HAND, ARE UNCONSIOUS, THEREFORE, YOU ARE STUCK IN LIMBO.", the voice answered.

"But I don't remember Smiley's project being a dimension warper. I know that on October 11th, she said that she would make a machine that reveals the inside organs. That, or she changed her mind.", Phil noted.

"NO, SHE DIDN'T CHANGED HER MIND. INSTEAD, A RATHER FAT KID ATE A PIECE OF HER MACHINE THAT ODDLY ENOUGH, WAS SHAPED LIKE A COOKIE.", a different voice called out.

"Oh, it was Chubb. I knew it. But hang on, your voice changed. Are you someone else?", he asked.

"I AM FATE, GUARD'S FRIEND.", the voice revealed itself.

"Uh, nice to meet you, Fate. You too, Guard.", Phil replied with a raised eyebrow. "But still, how can I leave Limbo?", he asked again.

"LIKE I SAID, YOU ARE IN LIMBO BECAUSE YOU ARE UNCONSIOUS. AS SOON AS YOU WAKE UP, YOU'LL LEAVE LIMBO AND HEAD ON TO THE DIMENSION YOU ARE IN RIGHT NOW. HOWEVER, IF YOU SUFFER SEVERE DAMAGE WHILE UNCONSIOUS, YOU MIGHT DIE, AND HEAD TO HEAVEN OR HELL., Guard answered.

"I'd prefer waking up, as I don't know if I will be either in Heaven or Hell.", Phil replied.

"WELL, AT FIRST, SINCE YOU ESCAPED SCHOOL, YOU WOULD GO TO HELL, BUT WHEN YOU SAVED THE WORLD AND LEARNED TO STAY IN SCHOOL, THE TABLES FLIPPED, AND YOU WOULD HEAD TO HEAVEN. YOUR FATE IS STILL SEALED TO HEAVEN, BUT IF YOU DO SOMETHING BAD, IT WILL TURN BACK TO HELL AGAIN.", Fate pointed out.

"Okay, then. I guess there's little I can do right now.", he commented.


Acessing...
Analyzing Map System
Analyzation Complete

Location: Ponyville, Equestria

After countless minutes of cruising the spooky forest, avoiding contact with other animals, fleeing from Timber Wolves seeking to devour three little pony meals and a special, unknown dessert, and finally having trouble bringing the creature upstairs to the treehouse, the three school fillies were completely exhausted.

"Well, we recieved our cutie marks, didn't we?", Scootaloo pointed out. The three fillies looked at their flanks.

Blanks.

"No...", Sweetie answered. The three let out a sigh.

"Maybe we still have to make anotations about him?", Sweetie suggested.

"Oh, right! I was almost forgetting!", Scootaloo replied as she got up and headed to the drawer. She started to toss a pile of items away, finally reaching a notepad and a pencil. "What I asked for you girls to remind me of?", she asked.

"That the creature likes sleeping.", Sweetie answered. Scootaloo nodded and proceeded to write down.

"Don't we have to give it a scientific name, like all scientists do?", Sweetie Belle asked.

"Oh, right! How we should name it?", Scootaloo asked.

"Since it seems to stand on only two legs, I think the first name should be Dual-feet.", Sweetie suggested.

"Right...duu-al-feet. And the second name?", Scootaloo asked again.

"Uh, girls? This creature seems awfully familiar...", Apple Bloom broke in.

"How so?", the two other fillies asked.

"I remember when mah sister readed those stories when I was younger. One of the stories featured a bipedal creatured that looked exactly like 'im. Except the middle fur.", she answered. "The creature's upper fur was orange an' didn't covered all the way 'till the hooves. It went just 'till the elbows. The lower fur was the same. His feet was black instead of brown. An' he had fur on the top of the head. Oh, an' he had a mouth.", she described.

"Well, this one doesn't haves a mouth, so it's still a different species.", Scootaloo countered.

"Scoot, I personally think that this creature is the same of the one in the story that Apple Bloom saw.", Sweetie pointed out.

"Ugh. Well, there goes our cutie marks.", Scootaloo commented.

"Hey, that don' prevents us from keeping this human!", Apple Bloom replied to cheer Scootaloo up.

"A what?", Sweetie and Scootaloo asked in unison.

"That's how they were called in the book.", Apple Bloom explained.

"Oh.", the two replied.

"So, how exactly should we know anything about 'im?", Apple Bloom asked.

"We should get the books in Twilight's library, of course!", Scootaloo answered. The three inhaled deeply, and...

"TO TWILIGHT'S LIBRARY!!"

And they all trotted rapidly to the tree-house(hurr durr) that houses books(HURR DURR). Little did they know that the noise was awakening the human.


"Hey, why I'm feeling so dizzy?", Phil asked.

"IT MEANS YOU ARE WAKING UP. WE HOPE YOU FIND YOUR WAY BACK TO YOUR DIMENSION SOON. OH, AND DON'T HEAD TO THE FOREST IN THIS DIMENSION, EVEN IF IT SEEMS COMPLETELY NORMAL TO YOU.", Guard answered.

"Okay. I'll keep that in mind.", he continued.


Phil slowly opened his eyes, and was met with a wooden roof. He tried getting up, but found out his arms were immobilized. By vines.

"Vines? Whoever tied me up must've been lacking materials and used a makeshift weapon.", Phil commented as he used his legs' might to pull himself up.


End of Chapter 1

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