This Title Sucks

by Ghostdad7

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This place is called the Slave world where, as the name suggests, there are slaves. However though this dimension is under the rule of Tyrant Celestia and her sister Luna. They chose to keep slaves to make their lives easier in that world. The slaves though are not ponies they are actually humans.

This is the story of a 15 year old boy who grew up too fast and got into trouble too many times. His name is John his last name is unknown. He has long brown hair and his eyes are two different colors. The left one is a light blue while the right one is a murky green. He has scars all over his body from misbehaving and all of them gotten for taunting Warden Shining Armor. His clothes ( if you could call them that) were brown rags bloodied from all the lashes he got for messing up. His job was to work in the mines getting out gems that the ponies could use. Tyrant Celestia only intervened in the slaves business when she was giving them the death sentence if they did not work. Other than that there was the Elements of Pain. They go in this order; torture, maim, kill, sadistic, cripple, and break. The bearers names are in the same order as the Elements of Pain; Twilight Sparkle, Fluttershy, Applejack, Pinkie Pie, Rainbow Dash, and Rarity. They are second to none, other than the princesses themselves, in cruelty.

Now back to the boy named John. This is his plan for escape, a bad plan, but a plan none the less. Now back to the present.

"Imbeciles get that runt before he escapes!" the normally regal and proud voice screeched. "If he gets away I will personally send you to the moon!"

A boy named John ran through the hallway hoping to escape the royal guards.
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John ran through the halls avoiding guards like he would when he was taking some, nonexistent, breaks. Ducking into rooms he never heard of, he just kept running and running. Whenever he would run into a guard he could not get past he would knock the guard out by attacking the neck or the temple.

'Shit shit shit SHIT!' John thought while he was running, 'That was a bad plan a very very bad plan.' He ran into the last room at the end of the hallway that he managed to go into. On the other side... Nothing. Absolutely NOTHING. It was just a room with a large circle in the center. He sighed and murmured to himself "Well I won't die without a fight they can sure as hell believe that."

There was pounding at the door "Open up and all we will give you are 1,000 lashes and that would be considered merciful with what you done" came a gruff voice. Not exactly deep but gruff no other way to describe it.

"Oh Yeah well not by the hair of my chinny chin chin." John shouted.

"We really didn't want to do, this especially since they're really angry now. Well it's out of my hoofs. Girls! Go crazy!"

It was then that John realized who he was talking about. "SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT!! NOW I'M FUCKING SCREWED!!!" On the other side of that door was the Elements of Pain ramming into the door trying to get it opened. With each pound John stepped backward. When the door finally gave way he stepped into the circles center.

A flash of bright light went off and when the Element of Pain looked they saw that John wasn't there only a hat was in the human's place. When they looked at the hat they saw a note. It read 'HA good luck trying to find him cause you won't find him here

Signed Discord"

(Meanwhile in another Dimension)

"So Twilight what was it that Celestia told us to come see," Rainbow Dash, Element of Loyalty, asked.

"Well I don't know exactly but from the letter I got it must be pretty urgent." Twilight Sparkle, Element of Magic, replied.

(Can't do Applejack's accent so I'm not going to try) "Well it must be pretty important since she pretty much told us to drop everything." Applejack, Element of Honesty said.

"Oh my I hope it's not Philomeena getting sick." said the Element of Kindness, Fluttershy.

"Well I doubt that she would call us to take care of the phoenix. Remember what happened last time?" Rarity, Element of Generosity said.

"Oh maybe Celestia gonna give us a surprise party for imprisoning Discord back into stone." Pinkie Pie, Element of Laughter said smiling.

"Well we're here so we can ask her about it." Twilight stated when they got in front of the palace. They walked into the thrown room and gave a bow to both of the princesses. Celestia gave a little laugh and said "Twilight remember there is no need for formalities."

"Then why did you call us here?" Twilight asked getting murmurs of agreement from here friends.

"Well while looking around the castle while you were looking for the elements (If you don't know when this is then you can't call yourself a brony) in the maze Discord made I noticed a strong source of magic coming from one of the rooms in the palace. It was the same as Discord's magic" This was meet with a collective gasp from the six. "and we need to destroy it so he cannot return from the chaos it is generating." This time it was met with agreement from the six.

They followed the princesses down the hallways through some rooms and found where the strong magic source was coming from. Just as they opened the doors there was a bright flash followed by a stream of swearing. When all eight of them looked they saw a prime-ape like creature that was clothed in ratty brown rags. When Rarity saw she gasped at the clothes earning her the attention of the creature. As soon as the creature saw them it let one word out "FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU-"

End of Chapter One

A/N So yeah this is a new story my other one is on hiatus indefinitely until I can figure out where to go from there and a shout out to sweeper276 for reading AND commenting on my last story. I have no idea where this came from but I believe that someone else came up with the idea that humans were slaves to pony overlords if someone can tell me I will change this a bit so most credit will go to him/her.

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