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Beaten in the Twilight

by Total Hound
you're a pegasus born into a horrible family that enjoys torturing ponies for money and you hate it

You are a Pegasus with an amazing gift born into a horrible family that enjoys torturing other ponies for money and you're sick of it. One night, during a show you make a mistake that will change your life forever. After going against his wishes, your father kicks you out. Forcing you to take a train to a small, quiet town by the name of Ponyville. Here, you hide out from the national guard (you're from a really bad family) and accidentally fall in love with a certain lavender unicorn mare. Little do you know how close she is to the princess.

Attention: This a non-canon fic to the show, characters may not act normal but I will try my best to make them do so. Also, the main reason for writing this is to practice what you call second-person writing, so if you could give me some tips on how to write in second-person that would be great thanks. I would appreciate it if someone could come up with some cover art as I am a horrible drawer and artist in general. If you want to do my cover art, here are the descriptions:
1.it must be based off the current cover art
...and that's about it.

this is my first fic. critisism is welcomed with open arms. just don't be to harsh.

Teen
Incomplete
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Sad
Romance
 
TO

6528 words: Estimated 33 minutes to read

3 Chapters:

  1. Nightmares 2012-11-29 02:33:12 UTC
    1460
  2. Lunch 2012-12-08 04:01:09 UTC
    2665
  3. Recollection 2013-01-02 04:31:11 UTC
    2403