Beaten in the Twilight

by Total Hound

First published

You are a Pegasus with an amazing gift born into a horrible family that enjoys torturing other ponies for money and you're sick of it. One night, during a show you make a mistake that will change your life forever. After going against his wishes, your father kicks you out. Forcing you to take a train to a small, quiet town by the name of Ponyville. Here, you hide out from the national guard (you're from a really bad family) and accidentally fall in love with a certain lavender unicorn mare. Little do you know how close she is to the princess.

Attention: This a non-canon fic to the show, characters may not act normal but I will try my best to make them do so. Also, the main reason for writing this is to practice what you call second-person writing, so if you could give me some tips on how to write in second-person that would be great thanks. I would appreciate it if someone could come up with some cover art as I am a horrible drawer and artist in general. If you want to do my cover art, here are the descriptions:
1.it must be based off the current cover art
...and that's about it.

this is my first fic. critisism is welcomed with open arms. just don't be to harsh.