The renegade (Alt title: the new recruit)

Chapter 2 the new second-in-command

4 days later

  Obsidian sat quietly and bid his time until he saw a guard walked p to his cell. "You're coming with me." The guard said.

"Like I have a choice." Obsidian said as he followed the guard. When they were outside of Canterlots castle he became confused. "Get out of here." The guard said as he was walking back inside. Obsidian was glad to be free, but the question struck him. Should he go back to Chrysalis, Or should he...he Didn't know the second option but he had to return to Chrysalis. So he flew from Canterlot to the hive.

Hive

  As he returned to the thrown he saw his Queen, her expression wasn't welcoming. "This one simple task and yet you failed that." The Queen hissed

"But my Queen-"

"I had enough of your excuses for 3 years." She interrupted. " Im tearing you down from second-in-command."

"But-"

"you've done enough." She interrupted again.

Obsidian said nothing but left the throne room.

  As he patrolled the hall ways (He was demoted to just a soldier) he heard talking coming from the throne room. "My Queen," said a voice. "why have you replaced Obsidian over me?"

"Because." The queen said. "Unlike you Overturn, he has failed me over 3 years now. Ever since he was the new recruit, he would always jeopardizes a task I give him with his team. And I was a fool for being covinced to make him second in command by that treacherous sister of his." Her new second-in-command was shocked at what he heard, but he couldn't talk back to her Queen. "So since you replaced me, what will you do with him?"

The Queen smiled "I will send him on your grunt battalion to overrun a hydras hive and create a base there. Even if it means to sacrifice my loyal soldiers, or my useless one."

Overturn just laughed. "Oh Chrysalis you and your ways to get what you want."

As they both laughed, they stopped when they heard a slow clop sound. Obsidian filled with rage and hate charged at the queen. "WHY YOU!" He shouted as he tried to slash at her. She avoided his attack as he slashed her stone carved chair. "What are you doing?!" Chyrsalis shouted.

"Obsidian stop this at once!" Overturn shouted which he ended up getting slashed by his energy wave. "I need to get out of here." He thought as he left the throne room. Chrysalis looked up at her lieutenant "What should we do Chrysalis." He asked. Chrysalis just smiled. "Release the Rackni" Her lieutenant nodded and looked back at his men

The forest.

Obsidian kept running, running, and running until he ran out of breath. "Why?" He thought. "Why would the Queen do this to me?" He didn't care, right now he kept on running. As he kept on running he felt a rumble on the ground. He looked back to see a giant creature chasing him. "Great." he thought. "They sended out their super weapon to hunt me down." As he continued down the path and outside the forest, he saw a bright town that was familiar to him. But he ignored it and continued down the path. As he ran through the town he crashed into someone. And that someone was familiar to him. "OBSIDIAN!"

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I tried and I know its kinda cheesy.