The renegade (Alt title: the new recruit)

by shiroauska8

What to do

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Chapter 3 What to do

"What are you doing here Obsidian?" Miedo asked in anger. Obsidian just shivered in fear as he ran passed Miedo. As he ran and ran and ran, he crashed into a purple unicorn. As he got up he was surrounded by 5 more familiar faces. "Hey Changeling!" Shouted Rainbow. "What do you think you're doing to Twilight!" Just when she was about to sock him, Miedo pushed her aside. "Wait Rainbow." She said. "I don't think that he's here to fight."

"GET OUT OF MY WAY," he shouted. "Get out and save yourselves!" They were confused at what he was trying to say until they all heard a roar. "WHAT THE HEY WAS THAT?!" shouted Rainbow as they all turned their heads to see a giant creature with chains attached to its body. "Its a Rackni!" Miedo said. As the creature stepped forward everyone started screaming. "I never heard of any creature like that!" Twilight said.

"It's because," Miedo said."It's the last of its own race." Twilight looked at her with shock as Rainbow zoomed at her. "So how do we stop this thing?" cried Rainbow

"The weak spot is the tail," Miedo replied. "If you bite it hard enough, it will-"

"Maybe I can talk to it." Fluttershy interrupted. Miedo sighed. "I don't know Fluttershy, I don't think it's worth the risk."

"But-"

"No Fluttershy!" Miedo interrupted. "If you die, I won't forgive myself!" Fluttershy didn't know what to do but just nodded as Miedo turned back to Rainbow Dash. "As I was saying you have to bite the tail and it will flee." she said.

"Sounds easy enough." Rainbow said as she flew to the monster and created a tornado of multiple colors. The Rackni had a hard keeping balance as it almost fell on Rainbow to the ground. The monster then cried in pain as it squished its tail. "Ok, now that's not suppose to happen." Miedo said

"What do you expect to happen." Rainbow said. As they turn they see the monster trying to get up but it kept falling back. Fluttershy couldn't stand seeing an injured animal any longer. "We can't leave it in pain!" she cried. "We have to help it!" As she ran to the creature, its giant eye stared at her. "It's ok." She said as she flew on top. "No ones going to hurt you." The Rackni stared at her as she tried to lift it up to its feet. Apparently the creature was too heavy for her to lift. "Guys please help me here." No one responded nor Pegasi flew to its help. "Why do you people just stand there? Why won't you help this creature?" Rainbow was the first to fly over to help. Miedo shrugged but flew over there, after the two flew to help the rest of the Pegasi flew in to lift the Rackni. As the creature was lifted to its feet, the creature smiled and gave Fluttershy a lick. "Aren't you just adorable." she said as she flew and hugged it.

"Huh." Miedo said. "I guess I should owe her an apology."

"She isn't the element of kindness for nothing now is she." Rainbow smirked

"Eeyup." Miedo replied by copying Big Mac's voice "Now that that's out of the way." she walked up to Obsidian and grabbed him by the horn and yanked him to her face."You could explain what you're doing here." Obsidian shrugged. "Do I have a choice?"


Hey sorry for not uploading, it's just that I am running out of ideas. But now I'm back on track.

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