Rainbow Dash takes Applejack on a ride with her. Since Rainbow is so caught in the moment from doing her routine, Applejack falls off but Rainbow doesn't notice. She then decides to make a loyal, courageous decision to trade her life for the revival of her friend.

Update:

Thanks for the C&C guys, this is my first upload so I kinda expected this much harsh criticism. Not that it is a bad thing, it actually helps when it comes to when I might write another story. The description is a bit shallow but the idea is that RD was caught in the moment, and when AJ fell she didn't notice. I'll do some revising and change it to where she falls and possibly RD cant get to her in time? Perhaps that will work.

P.S.

You don't have to apologize for giving heavy C&C! It's what makes a writer better. I do appreciate any input.


I plan on getting better and providing you all with more well written stories.