Big Macintosh's best day ever
The tragic demise
Previous ChapterNext ChapterFrantically as Big Mac tried to catch up it was no use. The little mare had told everyone in the house what was happening."Ah saw Big mac doin's somethin' nasty." she exclaimed as the fresh semen dripped of of her face. Applejack finally noticed the semen running down her horrified face. Applejack tried to defend her older brother by saying "Boys need privacy they have ragin' hormones that need to be taken care of." "Big Mac was just taking care of business" Suddenly Big Mac entered the to hear the words from Applebloom. "But with anothar COLT." Suddenly the room got quite and before Big Mac could make an exit Applejack bolted to the door and glared at her once idol of an older brother."Ah HOPE ah didn't har mah ownly siser say she saw you with another COLT!!" Big Mac didn't say a word but stared into his sisters once happy eyes which had been turned red with fire.
Suddenly his once happy sister said. "You have haven't you." Finally noticing the semen all over him. "Who is the stallion that made you a COLTCUDDLER!!" "Well who is he huh!" "Answer ME!!" softly almost like a friend they know named Fluttershy he answered."Caramel" Then the whole house exploded with loud voices. "Caramel!" "The Caramel that is are family friend, that CARAMEL?!!" at that point Granny Smith Had woken up and heard everything. "What in tarnation are you doing to this family Macintosh.?" Granny Smith said. "You are the LAST purebred Apple family stallion, and you want to throw all of it away for a COLT!" Granny Smith then told Applejack to find Caramel and bring him back to talk. Caramel had finally gotten cleaned up mostly until applejack burst through the barn doors breaking one of the hinges.The barn door mirrored the anger that with every passing minute got worse and more harmful.
Applejack gritted through her teeth trying not to harm the stallion they called a family friend saying. "Granny Smith Wants to see you immediately." Meanwhile Granny Smith was beating Macintosh With her cane and yelling at him saying "Why do you hurt this family so." "You are a STALLION and you are supposed to MARRY A MARE." Macintosh winced from the pain of that hard wood cane beating his head left and right as Applebloom tried to stop her. Finally Applejack had brought in Caramel who looked content and determined to stand up to anyone not knowing what he was getting himself into. Macintosh got a break from the cane and was able to talk. "Ah love Caramel Granny Smith ah really do!!" Macintosh said in the same booming voice he used when talking seriously to his little sisters. Caramel beamed at the words that came out of his stallions mouth hoping he would say more.
Granny Smith turned around faster than Rainbowdash a pony they also knew, using her cane like a baseball bat did one last swing saying. "How dare you say that blasphemy in this house." The force was so strong, yet surprising at the same time, had Macintosh sprawling to the floor, which was not an easy task, Knocking the stallion out cold. Granny Smith continued to yell at Caramel making the small stallion cry but she didn't care for all she was concerned about Caramel wasn't welcome anymore. Meanwhile Applejack and Applebloom tried to wake Macintosh but to no avail. Granny smith had finally run off Caramel from the property making sure he was no longer welcome.
Macintosh woke up finally hearing a beep in the background. looking up he could only see a white ceiling with bright lights. Finally becoming more conscious he saw one little filly next to his bed with a pink bow. "Everypony look Macintosh is wakin' up." The pink bowed pony exclaimed. "Who is Macintosh?!" said the large stallion looking around the ponies around him. Applebloom without thinking said "Silly your Macintosh!!" "NURSE!!" Applejack yelled at the top of her lungs. "Whats wrong?!!" the Nurse pony shouted. "Our brother can't remember who he is." The nurse said ." I have looked him over and his concussion is what is causing his memory loss." "He doesn't remember anything, but I believe he will regain his memory back as long as he is around his usual family and friends." Suddenly Macintosh said something that they thought was perfect yet not appropriate at the same time. "Hey there ya wan't to have a fun time with a stallion like me?!" at the same time slapping her ass with his hoof and winking at her trying to court the beautiful mare.
Finally when everypony got towards the house ready to have a long talk. They entered the house and Granny Smith was in the kitchen cooking when all of a sudden she spun around and started to shout. "Your lucky all ah did was put you in the hospital for a head injury..." Applejack quickly interjected saying. "That there is Granny Smith your grandmother who loves you dearly and would not ever do anythin' to harm her family unless they did somethin' stupid right Granny Smith.
"Child What are you .... Ohhh now ah get it." Granny Smith said while her eyes got wide as it dawned on her. "How long will he be like this." "Days, months, years, when?" Applejack shrugged and said "The nurse said they can't tell but to keep family members and friends around him until he can remember everything." Then Granny Smith exclaimed "Not everything" Macintosh walked in quietly as everypony were talking. "Does that include Caramel Granny Smith?!" Applebloom said. Then they heard the boom of his voice "Who's Caramel? ... Oh that's right he must be one of mah best friends."
All of a sudden they all looked at Macintosh and said "NO!!" Granny Smith Exclaimed "He is somepony you should avoid he is a bad pony and a very influence none the less." Macintosh looked puzzled at all the responses. Macintosh said as a response "Ok but let me take mah medicine before we continue to talk, so my headache can go away." Granny Smith looked at Applejack and Applebloom knowing that the three of them were thinking the same thing. Hoping that Macintosh didn't remember anything about what him and caramel did.
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