Chapters Greatest Ninja in Equestria
Prologue
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During the Fourth Ninja War, the battle has been going on for days. Shinobi were dying left and right while trying to protect their friends and family from a dangerous enemy named Uchiha Madara. Madara was trying to use the ten-tails to destroy all of humanity, and even take over the world itself. For the five nations, they're attempting to bring world peace, and end the war. Knowing of the outcome of the future if they lose, but still putting their life on the line for the sake of all human beings to live together in peace, the heroes fought valiantly. As the war kept on going with both sides suffering heavy casualties, and trying to survive, there was one ninja who defied all odds against them. After both sides struggled and defeating the seemingly immortal Uchiha Madara everyone was at peace... except one boy that is fighting against his best friend, that wants revenge against the Leaf Village, Uchiha Sasuke.
Naruto stood there, glaring at Sasuke, and watching the arrogant, cold ninja do the same, before shouting, "Sasuke! I won't let you take over the world, or destroy the Leaf Village!" They both seemed semi-exhausted, but still had some fight in them left. Both of them breathed heavily, standing on opposite sides of an open field that was ravaged by the war. Kunai and shuriken littered the battlefield, thousands, from both sides. Corpses still remained, and they were ubiquitous, as well. Sasuke kicked one out of his way, apathetically, before responding. The body tumbled down the side of one hill, and angrily, Naruto fumed a short distance away as he watched Sasuke's complete disrespect towards the dead.
Sasuke stood there without moving as he stared down the container of the Nine-Tails, sneering in contempt and disgust, before shouting back,"What can you do, Naruto? You don't even have the power to stop me, so why should I listen to a kid like you?" the immortal man shouted calmly. He only rose his voice enough to get his point across, and no more than that. While Naruto angrily glared him down, he stared back, with an icy look in his eyes. No emotion.
"I don't give a fuck about how strong you are, but one thing is for sure, I ain't going to let you kill all of my friends over some stupid, petty revenge!" The hyperactive ninja stood a short distance in front of his once-best friend as he vowed to defend all that was sacred to him. Sasuke sucked his teeth before staring once again with complete apathy, and was silent for a moment, before retaliating both verbally and physically.
"Whatever you say dobe, but be prepared to die!" Sasuke shouted as he ran towards Naruto, ready to kill him with everything that was within his power.
Naruto did the same by running towards Sasuke with his all, and even using the full power of the Nine-Tails chakra. Both shinobi clashed together with all of their strength. They struggled against each other, both grappling for some sort of power of the other, no matter how miniscule. There were no metal weapons left- broken and rusted, kunai and shuriken were in the ground. All that was left was taijutsu, and ninjutsu. Even Sasuke's sword had a long time ago broke during the fight with Killer Bee and the Five Kages, and although they had all gotten away, and lived, it was clear that if Sasuke lived he would continue to attack until he managed to kill everyone. Naruto couldn't let all of his precious people be destroyed like that, not while he breathed, and stood.
The same went for Sasuke- he was completely devoted to his reasons to get revenge, as well. The hatred and anger within him was absolute, and any love or goodness within him was now long gone. Completely jaded, and possibly insane, he fought with all his strength, trying to kill his once best friend, and his old rival. The clash was amazing, and lesser ninja would've simply died from the crossfire of the battle as the two titans grappled and punched and kicked their way across the field. Already, the field was worse than it was, with fire burning everywhere, consuming the entire grassy plain as Sasuke repeatedly fired fire ninjutsu at Naruto, trying with all his heart to get his revenge.
Every time he saw the mark of the leaf on Naruto's forehead protector, all he saw was red, and the anger and hatred inside his heart grew, more and more. There was no love, or compassion, or kindness left within the black-haired warrior. That had died out a long time ago. Even as they fought, Naruto, after all this time, was still trying to get Sasuke on his side.
Sasuke jumped over Naruto, landing cleanly behind him before quickly striking out with one fist. Naruto moved to the side, his head only barely avoiding the punch, as he shouted at who he still believed was his best friend, trying to get him to come home.
"Why Sasuke? Why are you trying to get revenge on the Leaf Village? Isn't the Leaf Village your home, just like it's mine?" Naruto was trying to catch his breath while asking his best friend.
"Shut up, dobe." Sasuke said quietly as they continued fighting. Naruto attempted a kick, but Sasuke dodged it easily, the infamous red eyes of the Uchiha, and strange mark within them, glowed ominously as they furiously battled each other. Sasuke feigned a hit, and then jumped away, before making hand-seals at an extremely rapid pace, invisible to the untrained eye. He didn't even bother announcing the jutsu as he shot a large fireball at Naruto. Naruto jumped away, landing on the same spot that he had been standing on before when the battle started. "I'm doing this for my brother, and for my clan."
Naruto sighed softly to himself as he heard the familiar words coming from his best friend, but had no choice but to stop him. "I'm sorry Sasuke, I'm not going to let that happen. And I don't think your brother Itachi would want this." Sasuke's eyes widened, and then he shouted, in a horrible rage, all the calmness from the moments before gone, in an instant.
"SHUT YOUR MOUTH, NARUTO! You don't know anything about me or Itachi, because you've been all alone from the start!" Sasuke again began making hand signs, but this time, it was his most deadly, and well-trained, jutsu. Once finished, he lowered his hand as he always had, and watched Naruto begin a familar jutsu of his own in response. Bright purple lightning quickly formed in the black-haired warrior's palm, crackling with ferocity as he stared at Naruto with hatred. He'd plunged this same technique through his friend's chest a long time ago, but it hadn't killed him.
He'd make sure it did, this time.
"Dammit, Sasuke! Why!? Why won't you listen to me?" Naruto pleaded, but seeing that his cries went unheeded, began to fight back by creating a clone and holding a hand out as he focused chakra. A bright blue, dense ball of energy formed in the blonde's hand as he stared down Sasuke, who was steadily approaching him with his Chidori ready. The clone poofed out of existence as the Rasengan finished.
The two shinobi rushed out at each other with killer intent, both knowing that they had to stop the other to reach their goal. Sasuke wanted to destroy the Leaf Village, and probably the world after that, too, because of the betrayal of Konoha. Naruto wanted to protect his village, and wanted peace, as well, but he mostly wanted Sasuke to come back. Still, even though he wanted Sasuke to come back, even Naruto knew that it wasn't going to happen anymore. Sasuke was too jaded, and clouded, by revenge and hatred and anger to think of anything else except his vengeance.
"Sasuke! I will stop you no matter what it takes if even I have to kill you!" Naruto shouted through gritting teeth while rushing towards his friend.
"HA!.......you won't be able to kill me. I am an Uchiha, an elite that is about you loser!" Sasuke shouted right back with a huge evil smirk thinking he could be Naruto.
This made Naruto pissed about Sasuke of what he just said feeling a disappointed into his friend wondering why he took this path instead being with him, and the others in the village. Since it's too late for his friend Naruto was determine to do anything to stop Sasuke, even he had to break a promise from Sakura. Knowing Sakura would hate him for this, and knowing he might die in this fight though he didn't care at all since this fight suppose to be saving his friends and the village as well. There had been things going through the toad sage's mind, but shook it off when he has a battle to finish and win it to protect everyone from his best friend.
Once the shinobi's came close to each other they pulled off random combo's to hit one another, but you would expect Naruto to do that though not with Sasuka since he has the sharingan. Naruto started pulling out punches from left to right aiming for Sasuke's head followed up with left to right kicks to his hips, legs, or chest. Pulling out these combo's Naruto put power and speed behind these blows wanting to inflict damage to his opponent, even he pulled a spinning round house kick in the air to take Sasuke's head off.
For Sasuke he was dodging some of the attacks Naruto made, but some got passed his defense which he struck back with the same moves coping Naruto to the point. Both of these shinobi's traded blow after blow not showing any exhaustion or backing down from the fight. It's amazing on how these two are determine to kill each other to reach their certain goal. They tried every trick in the book by faking each other out or throwing some kunai's as well. This fight was going on for hours on end without stopping, and not wanting to show the other his weakness in the fight.
"Hehehe........it feels just like how we did back then in out fight Sasuke." Naruto spoke with a smile on his face while enjoying the fight, but not letting the determination of killing his friend go.
"Humf..........does it matter dobe? It was back then than that I beat you, and it's going to be the same now as I beat you again loser." Sasuke spoke as well with a smile on his face while enjoying the fight too.
Both of these best friends pulled out different jutsu's to kill each other right there, but the other would dodge or block or counterattack it with their own jutsu's and technic's. Either of them showing a little tiredness behind the attacks as their chakra goes down from using it too much, but they still show no backing down even they don't care of over use chakra. As they stopped fighting while staring each other down they know that they have to finish it now knowing full well both of them will die with one last attack against each other.
"Ready to die dobe!?" Sasuke throw up some hand signs until his right hand was sticking out from his right side, but you could see a purple lightning erupting around his head plus there was a lot of bird chirping from it.
"Pffft as if.......I will stop you with this last attack Sasuke, believe it!" Naruto made a clone behind him as they started to build up chakra in his right hand. The rasengan started forming slowly as it spins rapidly on his hand, but once they were done you could see the jutsu is a littler bigger than it usually do when he used it back than.
Knowing this is their last attack they gonna pull off on each other, and knowing they will die from it too but still have determine and killer intent on each other. Them two stared down at each other through grinding their teeth together or other things without moving a muscle. They waited for the other to make a move or twitch, so they can strike right there but none of them were moving a muscle. You could see in the background a small leaf floated down towards earth slowly side to side. Once it slowly got closer to the ground, but it got closer and closer until it suddenly touch the ground making both shinobi's rushed each other full speed.
"CHIDORI!" Sasuke shouted while reaching forward to kill Naruto.
"RASENGAN!" Naruto shouted as well while reaching forward to stop Sasuke.
Both attacks collided like before making a huge explosion around them blowing the trees away, and other things that was in the area. Nothing could had survive from this explosion, but good thing there were nothing but trees and rocks around the explosion. The huge bright light dome was very big which it could be the size of a stadium, but it slowly started to go smaller for a few minutes. When the explosion was gone in the middle of a crater there were two bodies kneeling in front of each other with torn clothes, but mostly with a bloody body. The two shinobi's still stared down each other with half-opened eyes feeling themselves closely losing their lives right now. You could see why now that their attacks pierced each others chest, but directly where their heart is at.
"Hahaha,,,,,,,I.......I guess I finally beat you Sasuke." Naruto said softly throw wheezing, but having a smile on as well.
"You dobe........hehehe.......I guess you did........but......I got you too." Sasuke said softly as well with a smile on his face too.
"Oh well.......I'm glad I get to fight.........you one last.......time bro." a huge smile was showing on Naruto's face.
"It seems so.......I'm glad as well.......it was fun while it lasted." Sasuke put his other hand behind Naruto's head, and pulling him towards himself which made their forehead touch.
Smiling widely again while staring at his best friend Naruto did the same with Sasuke by putting his hand behind his head as well "Well......this is our last time........seeing each other then........I'll miss you bro." Naruto couldn't help but let tears run down his face.
"Same here dobe........same here." Sasuke said softly as he feels tears running down his cheek too though feeling darkness getting closer to him.
As the two shiniobi's said their goodbyes to each other they stayed like that without falling onto each other or falling sideways onto the ground. They just kept their bodies there leaning their heads against each other with their small smiles on their faces. Upon this the two already had passed away from this position showing how much they really care for each other deeply, even they didn't show it back then when they were together fighting in mission and other such with their friends like Sakura, Kakashi, Guy, Rock Lee, Ten Ten, Hinata, Ino, Shikimaru, Choji, Kiba, Shino, Sai, Iruka, Gaara, Neji, Tsunadi, Jiraiya, and Yamamoto. This is their last goodbye to all of their friends, and will watch over them with huge smiles on their faces as well knowing there's no going back now. The two best shinobi's fought well with their own last breath until the end came upon them, and they will be remembered by everyone good or bad.
Mean while in Equestria there were two ponies that has been married for four years since then they were trying to make a baby, but couldn't which was sad for the married couple. Their names are Night Rider and Light Rider. Night Rider is a unicorn stallion with a dark blue coat with a black man and tail. Though his tail is long, but almost touching the ground while his mane is long as well. Which it would be hanging from the side of his head, even his cutie mark a shooting star with a telescope plus his eyes are red too. Light Rider is a pegasus mare with white color coat which her mane and tail color are blonde look, and her eyes are the color emerald green. Her mane and tail style are just like Fluttershy's, but her mane is covering her right eye. She's half as tall than Night Rider like up to his chin you could say, but the thing about her cutie mark is three flowers together.
One day they went to the hospital to talk with the doctor wondering why Light Rider couldn't bare a foal of their own. So the doctor did some scans on the wife trying to figure out why himself until he found some results which made him feel sorry for the couple. When he finished looking at the results he told them the reason why she couldn't bare a foal is that she's not even fertile. It was her dream to have a foal with her husband, but that dream was demolished right there from hearing those words. This made Night Rider hug his wife for comfort knowing she's really sad by the sudden news. After the emotions going through Light she couldn't believe that she couldn't bare a foal of her own.
As the couple went home Light had her head down while sniffing from her crying earlier as her husband was next to her keeping himself close to her with body contact. Night looked up at the sky with a worried look on his face watching the night sky though praying to Celestia hoping for a miracle that his wife could get pregnant one day, and bare their own foal.
"Let's just get home hun, so you can get your rest. I know it's hard to believe this, but I swear to you one day there would be a miracle for you to bare a foal." he said to her softly with a huge smile on his face showing how much he cares, and showing how much he really wanted a foal with her.
"I know dear............I'll believe in you and hope one day i could bare a foal for you. Since it was our dream to have a family of our own hehehe, and I do thank you for that my love." she kisses him on the lips showing she understand what he's saying. Surprised by the kiss from his wife he returns the kiss ten-fold while holding onto her with loving and caring in his heart.
Author's Note
I have to give thanks to my friend helping me make up this story, but I want to thank for my editor who helped me with this while I was struggling to make this story as perfect as possible.
Editor: Shriohige
Greatest Ninja in Equestria
Chapter 1: A New Beginning
Chapter 1: A New Beginning
Limbo
Naruto floated in a room that has nothing but white around the place. There was nothing there but himself which kind of creped him out a little. It confused him a little thinking this place must be heaven which was wrong on his part. Since he thought he was in heaven, he wondered where his friends and family was. Until he heard footsteps coming from behind him, and they were getting closer and closer to him. Without thinking at the moment he spun around in a fighting stance waiting for something to come and attack him at the spot.
Just at that moment when he looked where the footsteps are coming from, made him very speechless. His mouth was wide open as well his eyes too, but you could see blood rushing through his cheeks. Plus blood was leaking out from his nose slowly. What took his breath away was a woman standing in front of him. She looked like a woman that any man could die for from seeing her in person. Naruto could very well feel how much power was flowing from her body, and it did kind of scare him a bit. She could have struck him right then and there with just a snap of her finger.
The Goddess stood there with a silver-white kimono which the top part was kept on the side of her shoulders. It did make her look very sexy at the moment and very seductive too. A white sash was around her waist, though it was hanging a bit on her left side. The bottom part of the kimono was open slightly, which showed off her sexy smooth leg. Her face looked breath taking that make any woman jealous of her. The Kyuubi holder couldn’t help but to stare at her face some more, especially how her eyes was glowing white. Her hair was silvery smooth that doesn’t need to be combed at all. Her body was breath taking as well. She had an hourglass body with EE-cup breasts, wide hips, and a firm round backside. Naruto didn’t even know he held his breath for so long by staring at a lady that looks like a goddess to him.
The lady giggled softly which brought him out from his stupor look “I can see that you’re enjoying the way I look, but now is not the time Uzumaki Naruto.” She spoke softly. “I have been waiting to meet you for a very long time. I bet you are wondering who I am?” which was his respond by nodding. “I am known as Kami.”
“Wow” was the only response was made from him, but shook his head a bit to clear his thoughts. Though he bowed to her to show his respect, but was waved off from it.
“I will have none of that here, and I’m tired of formalities, which I know you do too hehehe. But anyway, there are some people that are here waiting to meet you.”
Right when she spoke of that Naruto spun around quickly, because he felt somebody right behind him. Naruto couldn’t help but to stare with tears leaking out from his eyes. What stood in front of him were his parents, Namikaze Minato and Namikaze-Uzumaki Kushina. He couldn’t believe to see both of his parents in front of him. This moment made him smile widely with happiness and mostly love.
“O-Okass-san…..T-Tou-san!” the young ninja stuttered.
“Yes sweat-heart, Okass-san is here!” Kushina said.
Minato smirked at this “Heh yes it is us Naruto.”
Naruto sprinted over to his parents, and went to him mother first. He gave her a tight hug thinking that she’ll disappear if he let go of her. He felt her hugged him right back with both of them crying into each other’s arms. Plus he felt someone behind him and gave him and his mother a lovingly hug too. This moment made Naruto so happy that he couldn’t be happier than he is right now of being in a hug with his family, especially his parents that made him.
The Kyuubi holder kept on crying loudly without a care knowing his parents are right there to comfort him. Kushina rubbed his hair softly while making ‘shh’ sounds in his ear, trying to calm him down “It’s okay Naruto, Okass-san’s here. My baby-boy it’s okay.” Cooed the red-head mother.
Minato smiled widely into the family hug, happily thinking how the family is back together this very moment. On the sidelines Kami had tears running down her cheeks from seeing such a happy family came together in such a long time from being away from each other. She knew it was very sad to see Naruto to live without his parents and lived on without any care and love in his life, but she couldn’t do anything about it since it was set in play which was made by her.
She knew the world ain’t all black and white, but it is a dangerous world out there for no one that is unprepared for it. Especially, how Naruto had to go through all the hardships in his world and trying to protect his precious people. He knew there were still some people who think he’s the demon-fox, but oh well; they can think all they won’t. He couldn’t care less what they think or say about him, as long his precious people are safe from danger, then he has no problem with anything else.
Anyway as Kami stood there to watch the family have some time together she couldn’t help but to think what she has in store for him. Nothing too harsh for him, but a very good life to let him learn about happiness and love since he never got a chance to learn throughout his life. She knew this idea was going to a positive in his life too. She could feel the joy in herself of thinking of such a plan for the ‘Child of Prophecy’.
As the family had their time together, Kami felt sorry for to break it up, but she needed to hurry the process up “Ahem!” the Namikaze’s looked at her “Sorry for to break up this family reunion, but I believe it’s time for Young Naruto gets ready to leave.”
“Huh?” a confused look on Naruto’s face “Where am I going Kami?”
Giggling to herself with giddiness she waved her hand which a screen somehow appeared out of nowhere. As the screen cleared it showed a castle with trees, birds, and other lively creatures roaming around the place. It looked very beautiful and very peaceful indeed. From the looks of such beauty, they could tell that this place had never been in a war before.
Kami cleared her throat “This place is called Equestria. It is a magical world with mythical creatures that roam this planet. These creatures are called Ponies, Dragons, Gryphon’s, Diamond Dogs, Changelings, and other unknown creatures.”
The Creator of Life could tell by the looks of their faces which made her giggle some more, but tried to control herself from losing it. Their looks were a gaping fish look, and it was very priceless to see on them anyway. After controlling her giggles, she waited for them to wipe the look off their faces, which it didn’t take that long.
“Wow….” Was the only word that came out of the Namikaze’s mouths.
“Shocking isn’t it? Anyway……this is the place you are going Naruto, because this place is about to go into darkness. Whatever that darkness maybe Naruto, it will cause so much despair to these wonderful creatures that don’t know what’s happening under their noses. I know for a fact you can vanquish this evil, just like you did with the two Uchiha’s.” explained the Creator of Life.
“Once you go into this world Naruto, you’ll be reincarnated into an Alicorn. The reason why you’re going to be reincarnated as an Alicorn is because the magic that you are going to be using and especially the chakra. That’s why you have to be an Alicorn for to hold this much power inside you or else if you were born as a Unicorn, then your body might explode from holding so much power.”
Naruto sighed softly to himself while nodding his head “I understand.”
“Good” Kami said “Well……get ready to be sent there, but you can say goodbye to your parents before you leave.” Said Maelstorm nodded and turned to his parents to say goodbye.
“Oh my baby boy, I am so proud of you.” Kushina kissed Naruto’s cheeks and hugged him tightly “Once you get there, I want you to have a happy life there; especially I want you to meet a girl so you can make me some grand-babies. I don’t care if they are from a different species, they are still my grand-babies and I want to spoil them hehehe.”
“Ha! Just like what your mother said Naruto. I am very proud of you of being our son, and most of all I am very proud of you for accepting this second chance you’re getting. Once you get there, I want you to train hard and get strong to protect your precious peo….er….ponies I mean. But, anyway take care of yourself son, and do the right thing.” Minato spoke softly.
Naruto smirked at this with a nod “You know I will tou-san, I’ll make both of you proud. I’ll train hard and get strong to protect my precious ponies, BELIEVE IT!”
Naruto smirked at this with a nod “You know I will tou-san, I’ll make both of you proud. I’ll train hard and get strong to protect my precious ponies, BELIEVE IT!”
Kami and his parents laughed at his antics “Are you ready Naruto?”
“Yes! I am ready.” Naruto answered
“Good!” Kami said.
Naruto waited for a bit and everything went black. At first this scared him a little thinking he went blind, but quickly shook that out of his mind as he remembered what Kami said to him which he waited. Suddenly he felt himself being pushed out of something that felt really wet around him. He took a deep breath with fresh air hitting him full on and tried to say something, but his words only came out like he was crying.
“Congratulations! Mr and Mrs Rider, You have a healthy colt.” Said a voice that he didn’t recognized.
Ponyville Hospital
“Congratulations! Mr and Mrs Rider, You have a healthy colt.” Said the doctor.
“Oh my Celestia! I have a baby foal; we have a baby foal Night!” Light said happily with tears running down her cheeks.
“Yes my love, we have our own very first foal.” Night agreed with his beautiful wife.
Flashback
It had been eleven months since then, which was a miracle for the happy family. They were devastated that they couldn’t have a foal together, but that didn’t break their will of trying to conceive one still. On one day they tried one last time before they just give up hope of even trying to conceive foal. And, two weeks later Light Rider was in her bathroom checking to see if she’s pregnant. When she check the little stick machine in front of her, she gaped at it with tears running down her cheeks.
These tears weren’t tears of sadness and despair; they were the tears of joy and happiness. Light squealed and cried out loud in happiness of having her wishes come true. Downstairs Night heard his wife thinking she was in trouble, so he sprint upstairs towards the bathroom she’s in hoping she was okay.
“Light! What’s going on my love? Why are you crying?” he asked softly to his lovely wife.
“My love…….our wish came true! I’m so very happy right now, a-and I do-don’t know what t-to d-do.” She cried happily into his chest.
Night didn’t know what was going on with his mare, but he held her in his chest to comfort her. He then saw something on the floor that caught his eye, and when he picked it up he figured it out right away. Knowing what the thing he is holding in his hoof, and he believed his wife was crying because they couldn’t conceive a foal again. This made him very said, but he checked the little small machine thing. Upon reading it he thought he would see a minus sign, but what came before his very own eyes wasn’t a minus sign, it was a plus sign which made him speechless. Quickly recovering from such a shock he hugged his wife happily of having their wish coming true, and they will not regret it one bit.
Flashback End
Night and Light Rider smiled happily together as they see their baby colt in a blue bundle being carried by their doctor who was handing them their foal carefully. Once the foal was safely tucked in the mother’s arm, they stared at him with pride, joy, and happiness in their eyes. The baby foal opened his eyes slowly and carefully without trying to blind himself from the light around him. When he opened them, he saw to large ponies in front of him, but he stared at them for a bit before squealing happily with joy.
Both of the parents laughed at this from seeing their own son squealing with joy just from seeing their face “Oh Night, he’s so beautiful.” Light Rider spoke to her husband softly.
“Yes he is my love, yes he is. So what are we going to name him?” Asked the husband.
There was a small pause from Light “We’ll name him Naruto, Naruto Rider.”
Night Rider smirked at this “Oho! Maelstorm Rider huh? That sounds very fitting to our foal hon.”
The wife nodded her head with agreeing her husband, but what caught her eye made her gasp at her son “He’s……….he-he’s a-a-a-a…..”
“What dear!? He’s a what?” asked the dark blue stallion.
“Naruto……..he’s a-a-a-a Alicorn!” Light finally said it out loud which made the doctors and nurses gasps in shock, especially her own husband.
Greatest Ninja in Equestria
Chapter 2: Meeting the Elements of Harmony
Twenty-one years had passed since Naruto was born, but through those years of his life. Naruto started doing some training at the age of five in a small forest that looked very creepy to others, but not to Naruto since he saw creepier things in his past life. He wanted to see get some training in early and wanting to test himself of both his Chakra and Magic powers. Even he has a young Alicorn body, but his very mind-set is a war veteran. Anyway, since then Naruto grew stronger and kept on getting stronger as the years went by when he got older. He kept his chakra a secret from his parents of feeling that they might think it was ‘Dark Magic’.
His mother and father gave him a home tutor of controlling his magic. This helped him on the long run for himself knowing he has two sets of powers he could control just in case if he runs out from one source. By the age of fifteen, Naruto grew taller than his mother, but was the same height as his father. What freaked his parents out the most were his eyes changed from ocean-sky blue eyes into a purple-silver like color with six rings around the pupil.
Flashback
This happened five years ago when Naruto was the age of ten years old. He was trying to test out a new jutsu he made up in wanting to know how destructive it could be or how it could help him out to protect his precious ponies. He miscalculated in putting chakra into this one certain jutsu which backfired on him, so his own chakra overloads his body to a certain point that some chakra entered his eyes. Screaming out in pain while using his hoofs to hold onto his eyes and trying to hold out the burning pain. The pain stopped for several minutes, with a slight groaning sound escaping his mouth. The young alicorn took his time to assess the problem at hoof, but he didn’t let it bother him that much.
Standing up slowly with shaking legs of his, he slowly walked over a small puddle near his training ground to take a look. Once he looked at the puddle he gasped in surprise of seeing his eyes changed. He could believe he had the eyes of the ‘Sage of the Six Paths’. He remembered fighting against Nagato in his past life and seeing how he used the ‘Rinnegan’. Having such eyes at his disposal he knew that things were going to be very interesting in the future.
Throughout the day of finding out he has the rinnegan, Naruto took this time to figure out how to use the same powers he saw Nagato used. He learned how to use the power of the eyes very quickly like he had it throughout his whole life. The only thing that made him very disappointed was he’s still trying to figure out how to turn them off. He tried to stop the chakra flow through his eyes, but that did not work for him. So, he just let it be and knowing his parents was going to find out soon than later about this.
When the day slowly came to an end, he went home to find his parents in the kitchen with his mom cooking dinner for them and his dad sitting there just reading the newspaper. When he suddenly walked in through the front door they saw how dirty and bruised he has became, even his mother was about to fuse over him of wanting to know what happened to him. But, what stopped her were his eyes when she stared into them. This made her froze in one spot thinking how his eyes made him look very terrifying, even his own father had the same look as his mother.
“Na-Naruto?...........i-is that y-you?” Light asked with a slight stuttering.
Naruto gave out a small sigh knowing this will be the headache of his life “Yes mother, it is me.” He answered her.
“What happened to your eyes?” she asked again without taking her eyes off of him.
Another sigh escaped his own lips as he stared at both of his parents “I might as well tell the both of you what has been going on. But, this little secret must be kept between me and the both of you.” Both Night and Light understood that this was very important to him, so giving a small nod of their own they listened to the story from the start of his past life through now while leaving out all the gore and death.
Flashback End
Since then his parents kept his secret and they had gotten closer than before. They knew he was going to change the world, but not expecting their own son to be this strong. At the age he is now they believed he was in the same power strength with Princess Celestia or even stronger than her. But wanted to wait and see what’s going to happen. Naruto knew how strong he is since throughout his life training non-stop, and knowing he could be stronger than Celestia herself.
Since then his parents kept his secret and they had gotten closer than before. They knew he was going to change the world, but not expecting their own son to be this strong. At the age he is now they believed he was in the same power strength with Princess Celestia or even stronger than her. But wanted to wait and see what’s going to happen. Naruto knew how strong he is since throughout his life training non-stop, and knowing he could be stronger than Celestia herself.
Though they could tell how strong their son is by looking how well built he is and especially how tall he is to them. They had to look up to him if they wanted to talk to him up close which made them very proud they felt for him. Even Night Rider was more proud than he had been before, but had a little sour taste of seeing his son way taller than him. They believe he’s taller than Celestia herself too. This would be very interesting to them once they see it themselves, but they going to have to wait.
Everfree Forest
In the forest we find Naruto just strolling through a walk way. It forest was pitch black that no pony cannot see unless they have a light in front of them. As the young powerful alicorn strolled through Everfree Forest, he could hear growling noises all around him, but they didn’t do anything since they could feel the power rolling off of him. One timber-wolf tried, but was unlucky as it was turned into ashes right away. This made the other timber-wolves whimper in fear and fright in seeing their pack-mate turned to ash.
“For your own good, you better take off or else….” He flared his power around him and some killing-intent as well.
Without thinking twice the timber-wolves took off with their tails between their legs. This made Naruto chuckle to himself saying how easy it was to scare off predators like that. As he was walking through the forest, he felt something that seemed wrong to him. He could feel evil or darkness floating in the forest. It was like the same type of darkness that his former friend Uchiha Sasuke had, but it didn’t have the killer-intent. Curious about where this darkness was coming from, he followed it carefully while making sure nothing pops out to attack him.
“Hmm…..this is very interesting. It feels very evil, but no intent to kill anything. ” He thought to himself while following the path.
Of course to Naruto, he could handle anything that comes at him. He faced people that had godlike powers or a wanna be god. As he thought about it, he could consider himself as a god with the powers he have at his disposal and defeating someone like Uchiha Madara. Letting his senses lead him towards the dark power, he could hear some yelling and screaming as well, but wasn’t sure where it was coming from until he found an old ruin castle. Upon looking at the old castle, he figured it could have been the ‘Alicorn Sisters Castle’.
His purple-silver like rinnegan gazed upon the old castle with a neutral expression on his face, but knowing there might be something there that could entertain him. Keeping his gaze upon the castle he spotted some flashing lights on the other side of the castle, so without wasting any time he flew towards the flashing lights. As he got closer he heard muffling sounds through a window in front of him, as curious as he maybe. Naruto floated near the window to take a closer look, but what made him surprised were eight ponies in the room.
Two unicorn’s, two pegasi’s, two earth, and two alicorn ponies sitting in a circle talking to each other. This made Naruto feel very confused by this, because earlier he felt dark magic floating to this one spot. But, there wasn’t anything there that could hold so much dark magic like that. Sighing to himself thinking he might get some action which did not happen, so he turned around to get ready to fly off until a loud roar sound came. Looking where it was coming from he saw a huge purple like bear that can be see through with floating stars all over its body.
The huge bear was destroying the forest while one its way towards the castle where he and the other ponies are at. Blood was pumping through his body as he could feel it wanting for some action right now, and he wasn’t going to deny it either. He wants to get some action himself and he’s going to get it either way. Smirking widely as his eyes glowed brightly in the night showing some power behind it. Without a second thought coming to mind, Naruto quickly flew towards the huge bear with speed as he pumped his wings with hard strokes. While this was happening the bear saw Naruto flying towards itself, and with a loud roar it swung its right paw downward to smack Naruto out of the air.
The rinnegan wielding alicorn took the hit head on which made him crash into the ground with the bears paw on top of him. The bear thought it had won, but thought wrong as its paw flew in the air. Looking down at the ground and seeing the alicorn standing still in a crater like it was nothing ticked the bear itself. Naruto couldn’t help but to smirk at the huge beast in knowing he’s going to get a major workout from this.
“Alright! You wanna play rough?..........then, we’ll play rough.” After finishing speaking to the bear, Naruto put both of his hoofs together and thinking the hand-seals in his mind.
“Katon: Haisekishō (Fire Release: Ash Pile Burning)” opening his mouth a big smoke pile of black ash floating towards the bear which surrounded the bear in no time.
Once this happened Naruto clicked his teeth together in making a spark that lit up the floating ashes. When he did that the floating ashes exploded in a chain-reaction of flames which burning the bear that was roaring out in pain. This did not stop the bear as it jumped out from the burning fire and aiming a swipe at Naruto. The young alicorn dodged the swipe with ease and dodging the other swipe as well.
Flipping through the air while dodging the paw swipes from the bear, Naruto put both of his hoofs together “Katon: Endan (Fire Release: Flame Bullet)” opened his mouth as bullets of fire shot towards the bear.
The flame bullets made contact with the huge creature with such power behind the attack. The purple bear roared out in pain again, but not wanting to back down. The bear reared back on its hind-legs while a white light shines in its mouth. Shooting its head forward at Naruto, it shot out a white beam type of magic from its mouth. Naruto saw this with little panic showing on his face, but by looking at him you could see he looked emotionless. (Sorry guys, I wasn’t sure if the Ursa Major had this type of power, so I just made it up along the way as I write this story.)
Hoofs together like last time “Doton: Doryūheki! (Earth Release: Earth-Style Wall)” yelling out loud a huge wall of earth shot out of the ground to block the beam attack.
From a different point of view, you could see eight ponies were standing from the entrance of the old ruin castle watching the battle unfold in front of them. They were at awe from seeing such power rating off from the male alicorn and the bear. The two alicorns known as Princess Celestia and Princess Luna couldn’t help but to shudder from the battle with fear, awe, and……lust?
When the beam made contact with the earth wall, it made a huge explosion that could destroy a whole town. This put fear into the ponies that saw the power behind that attack which made both Princesses narrow their eyes. They didn’t expect from the bear to release such amount of magic in that one attack. They knew that they needed to be careful in the near future if they faced one themselves again.
Celesita put up a magic barrier in making sure the shockwave of the blast didn’t take one of her precious ponies away. The wave of the blast made contact with the barrier which left a huge crack on it, and from seeing this Celestia eyes were wide at the sight. Usually when she puts up barriers without even trying they don’t even budge with magic reserves she has. So, knowing right now that with a huge crack on her barrier like this, she needed to put more magic into it.
This made Celestia think that this battle was on a whole other level, but she knew her sister Luna and herself can handle. Though not counting her favorite student Twilight Sparkle and her amazing friends to fight in such battle like these being in front of them, but she will prevent it from happening to her little ponies. As she watches the fight with her sister and the other ponies, she was planning to find out who is this male alicorn. Living for thousands of years you would know there was another alicorn around, especially one that is a male.
“Sister?” Luna leaned over to whisper to Celestia “What should we do? Do we help the stallion or do we wait and see?”
Celestia gave a thought while watching explosions were happening from left to right in the everfree forest which was caused by two titans “Let’s wait and see what happens, but if the stallion needs help then we will help him.” She answered softly.
Naruto was throwing random jutsu’s at the beast without giving away his true power. He knew he was being watch by the ponies in the old ruin castle, but he could care less than facing this huge bear. All that matters to him was to beat this creature into submission, and to do that he needs to use one of his power attacks. He used the ‘Shunshin no Jutsu (Body Flicker Technique)’ to appear in front of the purple bear. Once he appeared in front of the bear where the face area is at, Naruto stuck his right hoof out while staring in the eyes of the beast.
“Shinra Tensei! (Almighty Push)” Naruto shouted while putting more chakra into the attack.
This attack made the bear fly backwards twenty yards away from the area that he and the other ponies are at. Landing on the ground without a sound, Naruto sighed softly to himself knowing this attack knocked out the beast. He didn’t have to check himself, because he could feel it passed out on the ground away from him. Looking around and seeing the destruction that the bear and himself put through this forest made him whistle at the sight. He didn’t expect the fight to go that far, but he did underestimate the bear.
Using one of the Earth Release jutsu’s, Naruto fixed the area where there was destruction at to make nothing had ever happened, and this made the ponies behind him gasps in surprised by this even surprising the Princesses ho talented this stallion is. Giving out another sigh and looking around the forest to see if there was anything else he needed to fix still, but finding none he turned around to look straight at the main six and the two princesses. The mares were shocked at seeing how big this alicorn up close.
Seeing how tall he is compare to Princess Celestia, and Celestia herself could tell that this stallion was taller than herself. His body gave off muscles all over his body like some athlectic sports training, but not as huge like a body builder. His orange coat gave off like silky substance that belongs on some bed sheets. His wings were large for his size, especially how his horn looks very sharp. The cutie mark looked like a dark red swirl (Uzumaki Clan Symbol). His mane and tail were bright yellow, but was flowing like fire. Then, what caught them off guard were his eyes, the purple-silver like with six rings around the pupil. They didn’t expect this type of eyes to be on a pony, especially this one male Alicorn.
“I see that all of you saw that right?” his deep voiced echoed through the night of the forest and it caused the mares to blush madly, especially the pink pony looked like a tomato.
Celestia strode forward to meet halfway from the stallion in front of her while clearing her throat “Ahem!.......why yes, we have seen what you did to that Ursa Major.”
“Ursa Major?.....damn I thought it was a Ursa Minor, but I guess I thought wrong.” He chuckled softly while rubbing the back of his head with a hoof looking sheepishly.
A lavender pony appeared through magic in front of Naruto with an outrage expression on her face “Ursa Minor!? How could you think that was an Ursa Minor? There is no way an Ursa Minor could be that big unless it was an Ursa Major.” Yelled the lavender mare with a vein bulging out from her forehead.
“Pfffffttttt……..I have faced monsters bigger than that Ursa Major.” Naruto kept on chuckling as he smirked from watching the expression the mare in front of him was giving.
The sounds of giggling was heard which made Naruto looked up to see who giggled, and finding out it was Princess Celestia herself “Twilight my faithful student, you should just calm down okay?” Celestia nuzzled the lavender pony named Twilight with affection.
“Fine!” Twilight sighed as she nuzzled back.
“Anyway……..what is your name my good stallion? And forgive me for being so rude, but…….How in the fuck are you an Alicorn?” swore the sun princess. This action had different facial expression from the ponies around her like horror, shock, and amusement.
“First question, my name is Naruto Ri-“ he was interrupted by the cyan pony with rainbow mane and tail.
“Fishcake Rider!? Hahahahahaha” the rainbow mare laughed out loud along with the pink pony mare, but was cut off with the power Naruto was giving off on her which made her gasps for air.
“Anyway!” stopping the flow of power on her “My name is Naruto Rider, and it means Maelstorm!” gritting his teeth a little to himself when he saw same mare about to laugh.
“As for me being an Alicorn, let’s say I was born as one, but………I’ll tell you later on once we have a private conversation.” Naruto stared into Celestia’s eyes without blinking and showing any emotions at the moment which made her flinch a little.
“Okay, I can understand that so………” the sun princess thought for a bit, but gave a small gasp of forgetting something.
“Sorry! What are my manners hehehe. My name is Princess Celestia, co-ruler of Equestria and this is….” Pointing to the blue alicorn mare.
“Is my sister Princess Luna, co-ruler of Equestria as well. So, for these other six ponies behind me are…..” Pointing the lavender mare.
“Is Twilight Sparkle, my faithful student, next over here…..” Pointing to another mare with a white coat and purple mane and tail.
“Is Rarity, then…..” Pointing to the orange coat mare.
“Is Applejack, then…..” Pointing to the cyan mare with the rainbow mane and tail.
“Is Rainbow Dash, then…..” Pointing to the pink pony with a cotton candy like mane and tail.
“Is Pinkie Pie, and last but not least….” Pointing to the shy yellow coated mare that was hiding behind Applejack.
“Is Fluttershy, and they are the wielders of the Elements of Harmony.” She finished speaking to Naruto.
As Celestia introduce to each pony around her, they gave off their signature moves of being named off. By nodding their head, puffing out their chest, waving their hoof, saluting with their hat, and flipping their mane to the side trying to look cute. A small chuckle was heard from Naruto, but wasn’t loud enough for him to make it sound rude. Though he had to give out a smile of his own, but the smile caused all the mares to blush furiously of seeing how handsome his smile was.
“It’s very nice to meet everypony, and I hope we can get along in the near future.” Said the male alicorn.
