Dragon Ball Z The Equestria Saga

by PissOff

Chapter 8 - Confessions of Love (Redone)

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Confessions of Love

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Raian continued to stand on the balcony of Celestia's room, staring into the setting sun. He kept trying to think of what the prophecy meant by "Cover His Body in Red Fur".

"What does it mean!?" Raian said in irritation while smashing his fist onto the balcony's guard rail. Raian looked back up to the sky and watched the sun set and the sky become dark. He watched Luna do her work and she decorated the night sky with a full moon and plenty of shining stars. He turned away from the sky and walked back into Celestia's bedroom. He noticed that Twilight and her friends as well as Spike were no longer in the room.

"I guess they went with the princesses. Maybe I should go with them." Raian said to himself before walking out of Celestia's bedroom and heading for the throne room. As Raian walked, he came by a group of Royal Guards. Some were dressed in Celestia's armour while others were dressed in Luna's armour. The ponies dressed in Luna's armour really got Raian's attention. They all had bat wings instead of the normal pegasus wings.

One mare with light purple hair and a grey coat dressed in Luna's armour saw Raian and her yellow cat like eyes widened a bit, then went back to normal. She smiled at Raian and revealed two sharp canines in her mouth.

She turned back to the group of Royal Guards and whispered something to them that Raian couldn't hear.

"I've always wanted to try Saiyan blood, and since he is a one of a kind, I bet his blood will taste something special. I want you guys to help me pin him down so I can have a taste, okay?" whispered the mare. The other bat guards nodded while grinning and turned to Raian. She turned back to Raian and licked her lips before getting into a pouncing position. She remained in the position for a moment before using her wings to fly at Raian. She went faster than he anticipated but he still dodged her. She stopped herself with her wings and jumped at Raian again. He dodged her by using an After Image and appeared behind her. He grabbed her by the back of the neck and he held her up in front of him effortlessly.

"My blood is not for drinking." Raian told the mare sternly. He then turned and looked at the other bat guards. "And if you think that I'd let you feast on me you're sadly mistaken."

Raian then tossed the mare to the ground in front of the other bat guards and took his leave. As he walked, the bat guards, Celestia's guards and the mare that tried to suck his blood whispered to each other.

"Are you okay, Midnight Blossom?" asked one of Celestia's royal guards.

"Yeah, I'm okay. But I think I underestimated that Saiyan's abilities. Next time I think I better not hold back if I want a taste." the mare known as Midnight Blossom said back to her fellow guards. She got up from the floor and continued to watch Raian walk away. She licked her lips while slightly squinting her eyes before she turned around and went back to her post.

As Raian walked through the halls of the castle, he began to think about Luna. He thought that if her guards were some sort of vampire, maybe she could be too.

"I'll ask her when I see her." Raian thought to himself. He approached the throne room door and pushed it open just enough so he could peer through it without being seen. He saw Twilight, the Princesses and the others talking among each other. Raian positioned his ear up towards them so he could hear what they were saying better.

"So, what do you all think of Raian?" Princess Celestia's voice asked.

"I think he's a rather handsome young man. Brute or not, he could probably get any mare he wants with those looks." Rarity commented first.

"He's the first guy I've seen that can beat me in a strength contest. By a long shot too." Applejack said while thinking back to the fight at the Everfree Ruins.

"He's the first guy I've seen that can outrun me. Let alone outfly me." Rainbow said with a noticeable amount of jealousy in her tone.

"He's seems like a nice guy. I haven't spent too much time alone with him, but he seems really nice. Smart too. His strategies in battle are amazing." Twilight said as she remembered when Raian was with her in the Golden Oaks Library a few days ago.

"I have to agree. He gave me and Luna quite the challenge, even before he went Super Saiyan 3." Celestia said in agreement.

"I think Raian's just amazing! I mean, remember all of that food he could eat! He could probably beat me in a pie eating contest!" Pinkie said in her usual excitable manner. "What about you Fluttershy!?"

"Oh, um. W-Well." Fluttershy closed her eyes and tried to remember a time she was alone with Raian. "Oh, he's good with animals! He actually made Angel eat his greens!"

"It wasn't that hard, really." Raian said as he walked out from behind Celestia's throne.

"What the!? How did you get there?" Rainbow asked as she looked from the throne room door and back to Raian. Raian then proceeded to use the Instant Transmission and he disappeared for a few moments. When he reappeared, he had a cupcake in his hand.

"Hey! I made one of those cupcakes just today!" Pinkie said while pointing a finger at the cupcake in Raian's hand. He then shoved the whole thing into his mouth, chewed it a few times, then swallowed.

"Mm. Good cupcake." Raian said as he licked the frosting off of his fingers.

"Oh yeah. You can teleport." Rainbow reminded herself.

"How are you enjoying the new bodies?" Raian asked while folding his arms.

"I like it. I feel like I could do a lot more things in this body than I could in the other." Twilight said while taking a small look at herself.

"Well that's good. I prefer having hands rather than hooves. Makes it easier to fight." Raian said out of his Saiyan instinct.

"So barbaric. Why do you enjoy fighting so much anyway!?" Rarity asked out of her instinct. As Raian explained why he enjoys fighting so much, Luna turned to her sister and started talking with her.

"Um, Tia?" Luna said a tad nervously.

"Hm?" Celestia opened her eyes and looked at her sister with a raised eyebrow.

"How do I get Raian to like me?" Luna whispered to her sister.

"Just do what I do. Teasing always gets the boys' attention." Celestia said before looking ove at Raian. She saw him staring at Luna's butt and grinned a bit.

"Now's your chance, Luna." Celestia said while maintaining her smile. Luna turned her head around and saw Raian staring at her tush. She blushed slightly but it quickly faded and she looked at Raian's face with a sultry look.

"See something you like?" Luna said flirtatiously while she shook her butt in a teasing manner. Raian's eyes then redirected back to Luna's.

"Uh..." Raian stuttered while looking down at Luna's hooves. Before he could think of an excuse, Luna used her tail and wrapped it around his neck which made him lift his head up. Luna then used the tip of her tail and wiped it across Raian's chin playfully.

"Its disrespectful to stare at a princesses tush like that. I think I should give you a little punishment." Luna said seductively. Luna's horn lit up with magic and she teleported herself and Raian to a different part of the castle, leaving Celestia, the Elements, and Spike in the throne room.

"What's Luna going to do to him, Princess?" Twilight asked worriedly.

"Don't worry, Twilight. I'm sure Luna won't be too harsh with Raian's punishment." Celestia said with a slight smirk.


Raian and Luna appeared in Luna's bedroom and landed on top of Luna's bed. Luna landed on top of Raian and sat on his crotch to keep him down. Her lustful expression turned into one of nervousness and she got a dark red blush on her face.

"Oh my, I'm so sorry! I don't don't know what came over me! At first I was nervous and now I'm about to have my way with you!" Luna said in a panicked voice and she continued to ramble on. Raian simply stared back at Luna and began to realize just how beautiful she really was. Her beautiful blue eyes, her astral like mane, and seemingly perfect body.

"I really am clueless aren't I?" Raian thought to himself while Luna continued her rambling, but Raian didn't really seem to pay much attention to it. He slowly brought a hand to her face and caressed her left cheek in a loving manner. Luna stopped her rambling at Raian's touch and looked at his charcoal eyes. She let Raian caress her cheek and she eventually leaned into it a little. Raian then brought his other hand up to Luna's other cheek and held her head gently.

Luna and Raian stared into each others eyes for a few brief moments before Luna brought her head down to Raian's and began nuzzling his nose with her muzzle. As Luna did this, Raian took his hands and moved them to Luna's hips and held them gently, but firmly at the same time. Luna nuzzled him a little before bringing her head back to look into his eyes again. They looked into each others eyes just a little longer before Luna brought her head down again and pressed her lips against his. Raian was a caught off guard by it, but he refused to break the kiss.

Luna slowly brought her tongue out of her mouth and licked Raian's lips gently, signaling him to open his mouth. Raian slowly opened his mouth and let Luna's tongue slip inside. She explored Raian's mouth with her tongue very slowly which made him shut his eyes. He gripped Luna's hips a little tighter which made Luna sigh quietly.

Raian then began to use his tongue and he wrestled it with Luna's playfully. Raian then stuck his tongue in Luna's mouth and swirled it around slowly. What he tasted was pretty sweet. Raian pulled away from the kiss while licking his lips. He looked Luna in the eyes and gave her another soft kiss before laying his head down on the bed. Luna then laid her body down on top of him and wrapped her arms around his neck and snuggled her muzzle into said neck.

"I didn't think you liked me." Luna whispered.

"I didn't think you liked me." Raian said back. Luna looked back at Raian and gave him a kiss on the cheek before smiling warmly. Raian leaned into the kiss before breaking it. Luna looked at Raian with a simple question in her mind.

"Did you have any marefriends before this?" Luna asked.

"No. You would be my first if that's what you want." Raian told Luna truthfully.

"You mean it?" Luna asked with excitement building up inside of her.

"Yeah." Raian stated simply. Luna wrapped her hands back around Raian's neck and she gave him a tight hug.

"Oh, thank you so much!" Luna said before she started smothering Raian's face with kisses. As Luna continued to kiss Raian, there was a knock at the door followed by a familiar voice.

"Luna? Are you in there?" Celestia's voice said from the other side of the door.

"Yes, big sister. I'm okay." Luna said with a mixture of nervousness and panic in her voice. Celestia seemed to read Luna's emotions through her voice and she opened the door and walked in to see Luna laying on top of Raian. Celestia smiled her motherly smile and looked at Luna.

"See? All you had to do was try." Celestia said which made Luna blush slightly.

"I didn't expect him to be so willing to me, though." Luna said while looking back at Raian.

"Raian. I do believe I have something to tell you as well." Celestia said walking up beside the bed and sitting down on it next to Raian's head. "I have a crush on you too."

Celestia's words made both Raian and Luna surprised.

"Y-You... like me too?" Raian stuttered. Celestia merely nodded.

"But Tia! Raian's my coltfriend!" Luna yelled while getting onto her knees. Her legs rested on both sides of Raian's body and her crotch was a few inches away from his.

"I know Luna. But-"

"But Raian chose me, and I won't let you take him from me!" Luna interrupted while leaning forward a bit. Celestia got a little angry and unknowingly put one leg over Raian's head and stood on her knees. Her legs locked Raian's head in place and her crotch rested a little above Raian's face which made him blush a dark red.

"You were the one that was too nervous to even ask him in the first place! You wouldn't even be here right now if it wasn't for me!" Celestia yelled back. As Celestia and Luna continued to argue, Raian was trying to move out from under the princesses. Raian tried to move his head a little but Celestia brought her legs closer together, locking his head further into place. Raian then tried to move his midsection but was laid back down when Celestia and Luna both put their hands on his chest and pushed him back down onto the bed. Raian stopped trying to escape and listened back into Celestia and Luna's arguing. He was beginning to get a little annoyed and before Celestia and Luna could finish their sentences, Raian yelled at them.

"Girls!" Raian yelled which made Celestia and Luna stop arguing and look down at Raian. Celestia blushed a bit when she saw where Raian's head was and she quickly got off of him and sat next to Luna. Raian sat up and looked both princesses in the eyes.

"Can't you two just share me?" Raian asked. "I mean, it can't be that hard to be the boyfriend of two girls, right?"

Celestia and Luna let Raian's question sink in a bit before looking at each other.

"Well, I guess we could share you." Celestia said while continuing to ponder on the subject.

"If you can beat us in a fight then you should be able to handle us as your marefriends." Luna added.

"It shouldn't be too hard. This is my first time having a girlfriend but I think I can handle it." Raian said while while using a hand to scratch his head. Raian then took a look outside the window and saw that the sun was about to set.

"Well, its getting a little late. I think I'll go to my room now." Raian got up off the bed and was about to walk out the door but was stopped by Celestia grabbing the back of his shirts and pulling him back onto the bed.

"Can't you sleep with us?" Celestia said in an almost pleading manner.

"Uh..." Before Raian could even form a sentence Celestia pressed her lips against Raian's and kissed him passionately. Celestia broke the kiss and saw that Raian was blushing considerably. She gently, yet forcibly pushed Raian back down onto the bed and got on her hands and knees and looked down at him with an innocent smile.

"Come on, Raian. Just one night?" Celestia said in a more pleading tone while she gave him pleading eyes which actually made her look really cute.

"I... I don't know." Raian said nervously.

"Come on, Raian. Please?" Luna said while giving Raian her set of pleading eyes. The looks both princesses were giving him seemed to be too much for him to handle and he sighed in defeat.

"Okay. Fine. But just this once."

"Yay!" Luna said in excitement. She then looked out the window and saw that it was tome to raise the moon and the stars. As she did, Raian was taking off all of his clothes except for his boxers with Celestia watching him do so. He folded his gi and set it near the bed along with his boots and he hopped back onto the bed and got under the blankets. Celestia did the same and she laid down on Raian's right side and she wrapped her arms around his muscular midsection.

Luna had just finished bringing up the night and she turned back to her bed and got into the blankets as well and laid down on Raian's left side and wrapped her arms around Raian's neck. Celestia and Luna stared at Raian, who had his eyes closed and they both gave a him a sustained kiss on the cheek before resting their head next to his and sighing contently.

Raian opened his eyes and looked at Celestia and Luna and saw that they were already asleep. Raian then grabbed both princesses at their lower backs and gently pulled them a little closer to himself before shutting his eyes again and he himself drifting off to sleep.


Raian woke up at around five in the next morning and let out a quiet yawn so he wouldn't wake the princesses. He looked down at said princesses and saw that they were still asleep next to him. Raian got an idea and he smirked a evilly as he brought his hands down to the princesses rumps and gave their butts a good spank. Both princesses eyes shot open and they looked at Raian with wide, yet sleepy eyes.

"Raian." Luna said sleepily while picking up her upper body and getting into a sitting position. She looked down at Raian who was smiling a half smile at her. Luna eventually smiled back and she leaned down and gave Raian a kiss next to his lips. She paused for a moment then continued to give Raian more kisses.

As this went on, Celestia remembered how Raian was staring at Luna's butt and she got an idea. A rather perverted idea.

"Luna? Did you end up punishing Raian yesterday?" Celestia asked slyly.

"No. Why?" Luna asked back.

"Staring at a princesses tush is disrespectful. I think me and Luna need to punish you... personally." Celestia said while getting on her hands and knees and staring down at Raian lustfully.

"W-What are you gonna do?" Raian asked. Celestia didn't respond. Instead she held Raian's arms and legs down with her magic and proceeded to sit on Raian's face. Raian struggled a bit but soon realized that escaping wasn't an option. When Celestia fully sat on Raian, his entire face was covered by Celestia's tush. His breathing was troubled, but he still managed to get enough air to breath.

"Tia. Don't you think this is a bit harsh?" Luna asked worriedly.

"Not at all. In fact, I think he's enjoying it." Celestia said while running a hand across Raian's body. "You're going to get a turn once I'm done."

Luna blushed a bit and stared at Raian who was still squirming a little under Celestia's butt.

"Okay." Luna whispered back.


Twilight and the Elements of Harmony were sleeping inside of one of the guest rooms of the castle. Three were sleeping on the bed while the other three were sleeping on the floor. Spike on the other hand was sleeping in a corner of the room. The sun began to rise and shine through the windows which woke everypony up. Twilight sat up and looked herself over and saw that she and her friends were still in their anthro forms. Twilight slowly got up from the bed and ended up bumping into Rarity who was sleeping next to her with her hand in between her legs. Rarity stirred a little and opened her eyes and looked at Twilight.

"Good morning, darling. How did you sleep?" Rarity asked before realizing where her hand was. She quickly took her hand out from between her legs and moved it to her stomach. Twilight didn't seem to notice Rarity's embarrassment.

"I slept fine. How about you?" Twilight asked.

"Oh, I slept wonderfully! I had a dream that I was making love to Blue Blood! Oh, it was wonderful" Rarity said while remembering her dream from last night. Twilight quietly got off the bed and headed to the bathroom. She shut the door behind her and locked it before looking at the bra and panties that were on her body and she tried to figure out how to take them off.

"I think the princess told me to do it like this?" Twilight said as she reached down and pulled off her panties, then her bra. After they were off, she set them on the bathroom counter and got into the shower. She used her hands to turn on the faucets and she let the hot water hit her body. After soaking in the running water for a bit, she grabbed the soap with her hands and washed her body with said hands. She got to her breasts and it was just now that she figured out how sensitive they were. She massaged them for a while before moving to the rest of her body.

Once she was done, she washed all of the soap off of her body and grabbed the shampoo. She put some in her hand and rubbed it in her hair. She scrubbed her scalp for several minutes before washing out the shampoo with water. She ran a hand through her hair and it felt cleaner than when she did it with magic.

"I think these hands might come in handy." Twilight said before she turned the shower off and hopped out. She grabbed a towel off the rack and dried herself off before putting her bra and panties back on.

"I don't know why the princess told me to have these on, but I guess I better do what she says." Twilight said before walking out of the bathroom. When she got into the bedroom, she saw that the rest of her friends except for Spike were awake and talking to each other.

"What do you think, Applejack? Do you think Raian could train me to become a Wonderbolt?" Rainbow Dash asked the farm pony.

"I don't know, sugarcube. I've never really seen Raian fly at his fastest but I bet it would make even them Wonderbolts look like a sloth on a Monday morning." Applejack replied in full honesty. While those four were talking, Pinkie Pie was poking a finger at Spike who was still asleep.

"Spiiike. Spiiiiike." Pinkie said in a high whisper. Spike grabbed his tail and turned away from Pinkie Pie while muttering something.

"I don't wanna clean the library today, Twilight." Spike muttered. Pinkie Pie giggled a little bit before she started poking at Spike again.

"Pinkie, leave Spike alone!" Twilight yelled in a high whisper.

"Aw, but he's so cute when he talks in his sleep!" Pinkie answered without turning around. Twilight looked at Spike for a second before she grabbed Pinkie by the arm and pulled her away from Spike.

"I said no! He's just a baby dragon and its even worse now that Raian's been training him!" Twilight said while looking at Spike one more time.

"Okay, Twilight! Whatever you say!" Pinkie said while jumping away from Twilight and onto the bed. "Weeeee! This bed is bouncy!"

"Pinkie, enough! I'm trying to think!" Rarity demanded. Pinkie somehow stopped in midair and looked at Rarity with a smile on her face.

"Okie dokie lokie!" Pinkie then landed softly on the bed and sat down next to Fluttershy. A few moments later, there was a knock at the door followed by a familiar masculine voice.

"Girls? You in there?" Raian's voice said from the other side of the door.

"Yes, Raian! You can come in!" Twilight hollered to Raian.

"Well, I guess talking to them for a little bit won't hurt." Raian said to himself before walking inside of the bedroom.

"Dog Pile!" Raian heard Pinkie Pie scream before she tackled him to the floor. "Come on, girls! Dog Pile!"

"Pinkie! Get off!" Raian yelled but he was muffled since his face happened to be shoved into Pinkie's double D sized breasts. Raian was about to lift Pinkie Pie off of him but more weight was added when Rainbow Dash and Applejack hopped on him too. The only ones that didn't jump on top of him was Rarity, Twilight and Fluttershy.

"Hey! Get off of him now!" Rarity said before using her magic to levitate Pinkie, Applejack and Rainbow Dash off of him. She threw them onto the bed and ran over to Raian.

"Darling, are you alright!?" Rarity asked worriedly. Raian sat up and looked at Rarity with one eye closed.

"I'm fine. But I almost got suffocated by Pinkie's massive breasts." Raian said while looking at Pinkie with an unamused expression.

"Oops, sorry!" Pinkie said apologetically.

"Anyway, how are you all doing?" Raian asked while turning back to Rarity.

"We're doing good. These bodies are much more useful than I thought they would be." Twilight said for all of them.

"Well, that's good." Raian said. "What about Spike?"

"Oh, he's just sleeping." Twilight answered while pointing at the corner of the room where Spike was sleeping. Raian got up from the floor and picked Spike up by his head and held him in front of him. He shook Spike a little which woke him up.

"Wha-! What's going on!?" Spike said in a panicked voice. He stopped freaking out when he saw Raian looking back at him with a chill out face.

"Oh, hey Raian. What's up?" Spike said while rubbing his eye tiredly.

"Nothing. I just wanted to see you freak out again." Raian said before setting Spike down on his feet. Spike gave Raian an unamused looked before laying back down in the corner and drifting off to sleep.

"Well, now that I did that, I'm going to the dining hall to get something to eat." Raian said before walking out of the door of the guest room.


As Raian walked towards the dining hall, he began to fell a familiar power level creeping up on him from behind. He turned around and saw the bat pony, Midnight Blossom along with seven other bat ponies standing there, staring at him with glowing yellow eyes.

"If its a taste of my blood you want, then I'm afraid you're going to have to earn it." Raian challenged. Midnight Blossom let out a yell before she flew at Raian at her full speed. Raian used the Instant Transmission to warp outside of the castle before the bat pony got to him. Midnight Blossom looked around for Raian while growling and she saw him looking at her through one of the castle windows. He held his middle finger up to her and flew off to the field where he fought Celestia and Luna. Midnight Blossom looked at her fellow bat guards and motioned them to follow her.

Raian on the other hand landed on the grassy field and waited patiently for Midnight to show up. It didn't take her very long since he saw eight black dots coming at him from the distance.

"Alright, I'll show you what I've got." Raian said while stretching out his arms and getting into a ready position. He waited for Midnight Blossom and her fellow guards to come close before he started fighting. Midnight and the guards surrounded Raian while he merely smirked at them. Midnight Blossom stared at Raian's eyes, watching for any subtle movements. Raian twitched his finger purposely which made Midnight and her guards fly at him all at once. They all attempted to strike him with their hooves but failed when Raian ducked under all of them and blew them away with a ki shock wave attack.

They all flew back and rolled across the ground a little ways before coming to a stop and looking back at Raian. They all saw him with his hands behind his head in a taunting manner.

"What's wrong? Is that all you got?" Raian asked teasingly. Midnight growled in anger and flew at Raian again. She tried to tackle him but failed when Raian dropped onto his back and used his feet to kick Midnight upwards. He jumped off his hands and flew above Midnight and knocked her back down to the ground with a double hammer fist. She crashed into two of her fellow guards hard enough to knock both of them out. The other five guards charged Raian at once and threw a hoof at him. He used his Wild Sense and warped behind them and countered by blasting all of them with a weak ki wave. The five bat guards all fell to the ground unconscious, leaving a rather disappointed Raian in the air.

"Oh, come on now that wasn't even fun." Raian said while looking at the eight guards below. He descended back down to the ground and used the Instant Transmission again, warping himself and the eight bat ponies with him.

Raian appeared in the hospital wing and he set each bat pony on a hospital bed before taking his leave. The nurse that was in the room stared at the eight guards before her before looking at Raian and stopping him with a hoof.

"What happened to them?" The nurse asked before she took her hoof off of Raian's shirt.

"They tried to suck my blood so I knocked them out." Raian explained before leaving the hospital wing and heading to the dining hall to go get some breakfast and to meet back up with the princesses.

"My gosh, he knocked out some of Princess Luna's best guards with no trouble at all!" The nurse said before she went to get some doctors to come patch up the guards.

Raian finally got to the dining hall and he found Princess Celestia and Princess Luna back in their pony forms, sitting at the table meant for royalty. Celestia saw Raian and smiled at him with her motherly smile. When Raian sat down at the table Celestia leaned over and began to whisper in his ear.

"Did you enjoy your punishment?" Celestia asked teasingly. Raian blushed a bit and scooted his chair away from Celestia a bit which made her laugh.

"I take that as a no." Celestia continued. "Oh, and Raian. I want to inform you about the winter which will be coming soon."

"Winter? There isn't some sort of special celebration is there?" Raian asked.

"Other than Hearths Warming Eve and wrapping up the winter itself, no." Celestia answered.

"Okay, but what do you mean by wrapping up winter?" Raian asked curiously.

"Its when all the ponies work together to clean up all of the snow and ice and things of the like. But since you're here, it shouldn't take very long to do so." Celestia explained.

"Alright, so when is this day?" Raian asked.

"The day after Hearths Warming." Celestia told him.

"Okay, at least I know about it now. Hey, why did you two change your forms?" Raian asked.

"So we can eat what we eat properly." Celestia explained.

"Oh." Raian said simply. "Hey, when are we going to rematch?"

Celestia and Luna looked at Raian and began to laugh which confused him.

"What?" Raian asked Celestia and Luna continued their laughing.

"That's what we like about you, Raian." Luna said playfully.

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Celestia and Luna have admitted their love for Raian. It also seems Rarity has a bit of a crush on him too. How many more mares have a crush and our hero? Will he be able to handle Winter Wrap Up day without destroying Ponyville in the process? Will he even be able to handle a relationship? Find out in the next exciting episode of Dragon Ball Z!

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