A trip to a foreign land filled with... Ponies.
The night it all started
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Chapter 1: The night it all started.
It was near midnight and I had just gotten out of the club. I was hired to be the DJ there for the night I gladly accepted knowing that I could show off some of my skills. When I got to my car I started the engine and began to drive down the road. Just as I hit the main road it began to storm. “Great… just great… Thanks for the heads up weather channel!” I said as the rain began to cover my windshields. I continued to drive down the street when a flash of lighting appeared and I saw a figure pop out of nowhere and disappeared just as fast as it appeared. I swerved off the road a bit and took a moment to think about what had just happened. ‘Ok… So it begins raining randomly with no heads up from the weather station, Then there’s lightning that brings a random figure into existence and it runs off… This is going to be a long night.’ I started up my car and tried to get back on the road but the car wouldn’t move. I kept trying and trying to get it to move but nothing happened. Then out of nowhere another lightning strikes and hits a tree. After that the tree fell on the car and hit me. I managed to get out but I was badly hurt. I heard someone’s voice yelling out to me. “Hello! Are you alright down there?” I tried to see who it was but I couldn’t tell my vision was to blurry. From what I could see it was someone who was hunched over. I tried to make my way over there but I blacked out before I could make it there. The last thing I saw was a purple horse asking me if I was alright.
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‘Guh… Where am I?’ Was the first thought in my head.
I tried to open my eyes but was quickly blinded by a bright light.
“What do you think it is?” Said a soft voice.
“ I don’t know exactly. But what I’m wondering is if it’s a he or she.” Said a second voice this one a bit familiar.
“ I don’t know twi but maybe we should find out.” Said a third voice this one a bit more sporty.
‘Twi? Where have I heard that name before…’
“Good idea Rainbow.”
‘Rainbow? I know I’ve heard that name somewhere.’
“Well let’s get it’s clothes off and check!” Said a more civilized voice.
‘Oh hells no. If they put one hand anywhere near me I’m making a dash for it.’
“Alright.” Said the voice labeled twi as she leaned in to pull off my pants.
The second she touched my leg I jumped out and screamed. “NO! YOU WILL NOT TAKE OFF MY CLOTHES!” Sadly I hit my head on something and blacked out again.
Last thing I heard was six screams of surprise all at the same time.
“What is that thing twi? And why does it care so much for those dreadful clothes?” Said the civilized voice.
“I’m not entirely sure what it is but I think it was just trying to protect itself.” Said twi.
“Make’s sence if you ask me.” Said Rainbow.
“Maybe we should just let it rest for a bit and ask it some questions.” Said the soft voice.
“That’s a good idea Fluttershy. Alright let’s do wait in the waiting room for a bit and check up on it later.” Said twilight.
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I was dreaming. I was dreaming of running. Running from what? I couldn’t tell… It just looked like a black shadowy figure that didn’t stop chasing me. It had an evil grin on it the entire time. The dream just went on like that until I tripped over a rock. That’s when I woke up in a slight panick.
“Look! It’s awake!” Said a voice filled with enthusiasm.
‘That voice was too familiar.’
“Pinkie calm down!” Said the voice of twi.
“Oops. Sorry!” Said the voice now labeled Pinkie.
‘Alright this was all too familiar… All these names and voices… It sounds just like the characters from Friendship is Magic.’ I opened my eyes and blinked a bit so they would adjust. When they did what I saw nearly made faint again. Standing in front of me were 6 ponies.
‘Ponies… That declares it. I have officially lost all my sanity. And I am in a mental hospital.’
“Hi! My name is Twilight Sparkle! And these are my friends, Fluttershy, Applejack, Rarity, Rainbow Dash, and Pinkie Pie.”
‘No.Fucking.Way.’
“Hello?” Asked twilight.
I was in a state of pure shock. I couldn’t move or do anything.
“HELLO!?”
“Wah. Where am I? How did I get here and why are there talking horse’s standing in front of me!?”
“You are in the Ponyville medical centre. I brought you here because you where very badly wounded. And we are ponies not horse’s.” Said Twilight.
‘Wait… Ponyville hospital… Twilight sparkle… Ponies… Mother of god. This can’t be real. I’m actually here. In the land of Friendship is Magic… This is gonna be a very VERY long day…’
“Now that you have asked your questions I have a few for you.” Said Twilight.
“Uhh… Alright. I suppose that’s fair.” I said wondering what possible questions she could have.”
“Alright my first question is what exactly are you?”
“I’m a Human. A life form from the planet Earth. I guess you could say I’m a bit like you being the fact that I’m the main sentient species on earth.”
“Hmm. Interesting…”
I kept answering her questions for what felt like hours. When finally her final question came.
“That’s really interesting. I do have one question left to ask.” She said as she began to blush a bit.
“Alright go ahead and ask.” I said with just a hint of doubt in my mind.
“Are you a Male or Female?” She asked her face getting redder.
“I’m a Male of course!” I said which seemed to calm her a little but she was still blushing.
“Alright. Oh! I never asked your name?” Twilight asked
“Right. My name is Tim James. But you can call me TJ.” I said.
“Alright nice to meet you TJ! I’ll just let you rest for a while.” Said twilight as she walked out the door.
‘Alright. I can tell this is going to end up being one hell of an adventure.’
Alright that’s the end of the chapter! Hope you enjoyed it and please give it a like if you would like me to continue! Also leave a comment with any tips you have so I can get better at this.
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