Arch-Angel

by Fire Angel
This is a HiE/Pony in human world story. It will switch back and forth, so try to keep track. This is my first fic, so please help out! Sequel coming soon!

What would happen if Celestia knew about other worlds? And what if she wasn't the only one? This world is attacked by a well know pony and they try to figure out what the hell she is doing here.

Update: since people dont seem to like th
is story, ive decided to cancel it. however, will be making a new story, so help me out. tell me what the fuck I'm doing wrong!
New story: I've finally decided what my next story will be. It should be posted in a couple of days maybe more. Please only leave helpful comments about how I could make the story better. So, with that said, I'll see you in a few days!
BTW: thanks Lines n stuff

Teen
Cancelled
Adventure
Alternate Universe
Human
Sad
Gore
Romance
 
QPNPO

47989 words: Estimated about 4 hours to read

2 Chapters:

  1. Arch-Angle 2012-12-15 20:02:56 UTC
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  2. Arch-Demon 2012-12-16 00:07:42 UTC
    30759