If you dislike my story, could you please tell me why? So that way I can improve my story and make it better so you can enjoy it.
It seemed like a normal day to Koharu,Rin,Sora and Pup. Well, as normal as it could be. Because when you have a silly vampire, a crazy vampire, an animal turned human and a human. It's never really normal.
That was, until they ended up in a new strange place, in new foreign bodies, and not a clue what too do. Oh, and did i forget to mention a person who just won't stay dead? This is what, the 4th time they came back?

Yuri(GL, girlXgirl)
I OWN BLOOD HEART (this is a crossover between Blood Heart and MLP)