character bio (crimson gaze)

I am doing this bio to give a little info on the character that is crimson gaze

name: Crimson Gaze
age: 30
D.O.B: January 3rd 1983
P.O.B: Lower Trottingham
weight: 135lbs
height: 3ft7
eye colour: red
hair colour: black with red streaks
coat colour: darker red
Description:

Crimson gaze is a retired bounty hunter who is best known as the pony who killed queen chrysalis and in the process forced the changeling army to vanish into history. When he was ten years old Crimson's mother and father were killed by bandits while this was happening he was staying in Manehattan with his auntie when he returned he was met by burned down houses and dead bodies after this experience he trained in the martial arts and became a remorseless killer during the process of this training he lost all emotions he has never experienced joy,love,happiness,fear or any other emotion since that fateful day he has since retired to the small town of ponyville to finally relax and live out his retirement in piece while he retired young he was quoted as saying life is to short therefore I'm making sure that I can quit bounty hunting at a young age and not be in my mid fifties and unable to walk.